Compelling story / scenario

Interesting / challenging or meaningful choices for reader/player.

Interactivity / surprise / expectation / suspense (worth getting to ending)

If characters, consistency and continuity (make sense)

If player/reader is "you", should be identifiable?

Proofread - few or no errors

Endings are all closed (or meaningful)

Visual design: pleasing, appropriate, legible.

The Bounty Hunter's Creed

The story was good so far. I like how it was based off of Star Wars.

I really liked it and I liked the side story with the ex if you leave to get coffee.

This was a very interesting and well done story! I really enjoyed playing this. There were a few typos (I found two on the first page) and trees was misspelled somewhere in it, but I don't remember exactly where. All in all, I think it was very well done and had a lot of beautiful imagery. I really liked that there was more than one ending, and it made me interested to find out if there were more (I reached two of them). I really found myself getting lost in this story (in a good way!!) and I think it's a fun world to play around in. I really liked that there were a lot of things you could personalize (i.e. the name change, if you want to be called sir/lady/lord/etc). It really made the story interesting to read, and I was able to put myself into the story, instead of feeling like I was playing/reading as someone else.

I really liked the story. I thought it was interesting and it was fun to read. I didn't notice a lot of typos or anything like that so that's great! Some endings need to be finished up but other than that I thought it was a compelling story and I wanted to keep clicking through it!

I really enjoyed this! I liked how many different options there were for your name based on your astrological sign and where you decided to be born! Some of the endings were confusing, but in the end I think it works together really well. Each choice you make will reflect on whether or not you will be deemed as good or evil. Very well done!

I thought it was a really good read and I was hooked from the beginning. - Kate

Not very many places to go, but the idea is great. The choices you make are real life situations, some variables could affect you more (make the test harder to pass if you drank the coffee, make the player to uncomfortable to go to lunch with Sarah if they failed the quiz, etc.) I like the whole start and concept of the story as well as the karamatic ending of getting hit by a car because you chose to keep the $20 bill you find. One story line was unfinished ("politely decline" to go have lunch with Sarah.) Id like to know how that story plays out. There is no about page option from the home screen.

Needs fleshed out a little more. Maybe more definite endings.

There were a couple typos (on the one section where it says you are close to your alignment ceremony, the second time says you again instead of your). I really liked this story, however I do wish there was a little bit more. The choices did seem like they influenced the story very well, but it seemed like they were very obviously pointing to 'good' or 'bad'. However, I really liked the idea of the rebellion (though I wish there were a few more details about that as well). All in all, I did enjoy reading this. I felt the ending was a bit abrupt, but I understand there were some time constraints to get this done in the allotted class time. All in all, it was very interesting, a good story, and something I did find myself getting immersed in.

I really liked the fantastical story line, and it was fun to choose your own name. I became sir Bro bro, and it was really funny.

I like how realistic it feels and how these sort of things can happen to anybody. It was humorous at times too and very captivating at times. Great job!

Very compelling and complex, it took a while to find the ending so it was like playing through a maze of information only to finally find the shocking conclusion that the Player Character new all along, though the player themselves are left in the dark.

This story is super cool. I like the amount of choice that's given to the player.

The Bounty Hunter's Creed

I thought the story was great! It was super thorough. One of my favorite parts was clicking through all the different weapons and learning more about them. I liked that because it gave me more visuals and I was able to picture the story a lot more. I also noticed that the different branches and endings are very different from each other which is also super interesting. You never know where you are going to end up. I think the story was very well thought out and I didn't notice any typos at all. There's just a couple endings that aren't closed yet but other than that great job!

There were so many different confusing choices but in the best possible way and I loved that it was funny and that there was a hidden choice that was the key to getting to the ending.