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Which project are you providing feedback on?What do you like best about the design that you chose?Provide suggestions or ideas to the artists on what they could do to improve this project.Please select ALL comments that apply to the graphic novel you are working on.Provide suggestions on how the group could improve their piece in regards to the elements of Graphic NovelsProvide general feedback on each of the following categories [The message of the PSA is clear and effective]Provide general feedback on each of the following categories [The content is appropriate for teenagers, teachers, and administrators]Provide general feedback on each of the following categories [The photos are effective in supporting the message]Provide general feedback on each of the following categories [The story progresses in a manner that is clear to the audience]Alignment - Everything on the page should be placed with a purpose, never randomly.Proximity - Things that belong together should be close togetherProvide suggestions to the artists so they can improve the alignment and proximity in their project.Repitition - elements of design should repeat so that the page feels connected and uniform.What is the first thing that you notice when you look at the page?Are the pictures and words easy to see or does everything blend together?Constructive FeedbackFinal CommentsQuestions or comments for Mr. Levin
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1The message I guess.Have some sort of speech in it.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designspeechAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableNeeds ImprovementAll elements on the page are aligned There is no clear order to the design and proximity.speechThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistentThe bright colors.
Bight colors.Pretty much put what is happening in the bubbles.Good Job.
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1the pictures look cool and the edit is goodneed bubblesThe page is organized clearly, Panels need frames/borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designneed the borders and bublesVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongSome of the elements on the page are alignedItems are organized appropriatelyit looks goodThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistentthe picturesEverything is easy to see and read.it needs to be finishedit is AWESOME!!
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1The thing I like about it is that the effects produce a feeling of what's happening. It shows a melancholic mood and how disoriented someone could feel. They could write the message in their picture and even provide a solution to the problem. The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page togetherIt's ok the way it is. AccepatableVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongSome of the elements on the page are alignedSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.Put the solution image in the middle. I first notice the colors of it and the effects. Everything is easy to see and read.Try adding a solution to the issue that you're trying to solve. This image is shows the issue and how it can affect one's mind when they're doing it. I actually think it's very creative and goes towards the issue.
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1that it is clearadd some bubbles and wordsThe page is organized clearly, The page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels have frames or borders, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, Clear Gutters hold the page together, The page has no gutters., Caption/Speech bubbles need improvements, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the design, they need speech buublesIt needs to be more creative.Not Enough Information to Tell YetVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongSome of the elements on the page are alignedSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.try to have all the boxes anilignedThe frames around each panel are consistentThe first thing i see is the black box.it is kind of hard to read ithave more background effectOne of my final coment is that they need to add more thought bubbles, but on the other hand the pictures are clear.
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1the bright colorsyou have no frames in your picturesThe page is organized clearly, Panels need frames/borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designwork on your pictures some more Needs ImprovementAccepatableNeeds ImprovementNot Enough Information to Tell YetAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelynothing their goodThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarthe bright colors
everythings easy to see but has no speech bubblesnothingput frames on your pictures and add speech bubble
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1Its good , showing a good message.noneThe page is organized clearly, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsnoneAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Some items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.noneThe frames around each panel are consistentconEverything is easy to see and read.nonenoennone
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2how the whole thing worked out the little story it was goodmake a background or somethingThe page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizeddesighnsAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableVery StrongAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyidkThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.con in contrastits not easy to readmore designs I have no further comments
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2NothingYou need framesThe page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels need frames/borders, The page has no gutters., Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsIt would really help if you added captions.Needs ImprovementAccepatableNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyI have no suggestions.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarBold letters.Everything is easy to see and read.NoneNoneNone
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2I LIKE THE PICTURE. and how it looks make the text bigger and clear to see
The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsjust needs better text that is biggerNot Enough Information to Tell YetNot Enough Information to Tell YetNot Enough Information to Tell YetNot Enough Information to Tell YetAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelythe text!!!! The effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look differentthe picturestext is hard to see...
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2There pictures are niceBe more clear on pictures because they are hard to see.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementschange the color of the textAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyThe text can be better.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarThe picturesEverything is easy to see and read.Make the texts pop out more.It pretty good, but needs a little more work
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2The imagination i used.They can use more color or better information.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedAdding more pictures and information.AccepatableAccepatableVery StrongAccepatableSome of the elements on the page are alignedThere is no clear order to the design and proximity.To put the words in the correct order.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, The frames around each panel are slightly different but there are still strong similarities., Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.The word "contrast".Everything is easy to see and read.To add more contrast.I like those works but they just need a little bit of more imagination and all will be great.Nope.
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2I like how the pictures are very clear to understand. Make the pictures more noticeable. The page is organized clearly, The page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels have frames or borders, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, Panels need frames/borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, The page has no gutters., Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organized, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvements, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designNothing really, the pictures are well done separated. Very StrongVery StrongAccepatableAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelynothing. The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarthe colors that are yellow and blue. Everything is easy to see and read.none. It looks great. nope.
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2its very simple to follow through could of taken pictures from different angles The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organized, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsif they can take pictures from driftnet angles they the story can be made more clearly.AccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableSome of the elements on the page are alignedThere is no clear order to the design and proximity.using the rule of thirds The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions appear randomly chosen and vary too much.its taken in the same spot and its also blue Everything is easy to see and read.useing some different colors looks like it needs a bit more so it can be finished not yet
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2they did their boxes diffident colors.needs awesome backround. the pics should be a little closer The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, The page has no gutters.make guttersAccepatableVery StrongAccepatableAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelynarrate would be awesome
The effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look different, The frames around each panel are slightly different but there are still strong similarities., Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.the graffiti on 4 and 1.dfgmake letters visibleh
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3The short comic was a bit funny.You can improve this project by providing the message in a more clear procedure. The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedEverything from your graphic novel is well organized.Needs ImprovementNeeds ImprovementNot Enough Information to Tell YetAccepatableSome of the elements on the page are alignedSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.The last 2 panels should be more closer to be aligned with the other panels. The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.The first thing I noticed when I saw this graphic novel was the background. Does it relate to what message you're trying to send?Everything is easy to see and read.You could have a clear background.This graphic novel is great, the only problem is that I don't know the message.
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3I believe this project is entertaining to view and it will catch the attention of people with the comments it has. The layout of the picture are good and organized.I think you should change the way the characters express themselves without using course words.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsEverything is good.Needs ImprovementAccepatableVery StrongAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyEverything is good.The frames around each panel are consistent, The frames around each panel are slightly different but there are still strong similarities., Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.The difference of colors on the background and the graphic panel.Everything is easy to see and read.Nothing.I just liked your project because it was funny and I think everyone is going to like it if you fix a little more.
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3Right now i dont like anything about this project because its not perfect.Well i think that you should make your characters a little bigger and make that they look clear beacuse i cant see them that well. I think that you should change the quotes that each chacater is saying because this is not appropriate for young teens or adults. Your bascially saying that if they fight you want them to fight again so they can solve their problem but thats not right. I dont even know what your project about so make it clear and people might understand it.The page seems crowded or disorganized, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementschange the characters and make them biggerNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementThere is no clear order to the design and proximity.lthe characters look to far awaymake the your quotes more resonableread my comments and youll understand
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3that it seemed like a funny story. make the characters look more clearly.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedproper grammarAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyeverything is lined up so it is ok.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.that it was not people in it, it was toys.Everything is easy to see and read.use different effects for each photos.it was a funny.none.
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4i like the person used the little kid in their picture.be more creative.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, Panels need frames/borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, The page has no gutters., Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organized, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvements, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designtry to make it into a more graphical order.AccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyadd more color.Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions appear randomly chosen and vary too much.its very interesting.Everything is easy to see and read.add more color next time.no comment.no
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4its creativeits goodThe page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedits goodAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyits organized The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similareffects are goodEverything is easy to see and read.its all clear to seeits a good project.
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44 – We need healthier lunch food

CUTE BABY... NICE PICTURES
TEAR IS SPELLED T-E-A-R NOT TAREThe page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organized
4 – We need healthier lunch food

ITS GREAT JUST FIX THE SPELLING ERROR AND LEAVE LESS BLANK AREAS....
AccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableThe elements on the page are not aligned, but I think it works well the way they have it.Items are organized appropriatelyI LIKE THE WAY THIS PROJECT IS SET UP.
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The frames around each panel are consistentTHE PICTURES WITH THE BORDERSEverything is easy to see and read.N/ATHIS IS A NICE PROJECT ! :)WHY IS THIS FEEDBACK SURVEY SO LONG
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4Need better food for the school and not just food they fined out of no where move the image were it is readable and now where the text and image goes to The page seems crowded or disorganized, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsnone AccepatableNeeds ImprovementVery StrongAccepatableThe elements on the page are not alignedSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.move image to be readable The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions appear randomly chosen and vary too much.foodseems smooched together repetion need improvmants image arrangement ????
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5you had use almost all the elements you were suppose to useI think you should change the conversion The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedYou have everything above :D Needs ImprovementVery StrongNot Enough Information to Tell YetNot Enough Information to Tell YetAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyIts all good The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, The frames around each panel are slightly different but there are still strong similarities.The bubbles i cant really read it Make something that explain what is your project about with different type of style I overall it it :D
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5how the pictures lookadd some background The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, Panels need frames/bordersadd some colorVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriately.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar.Everything is easy to see and read....
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5It looks like they're close friends and they're happy.Have more motion, and make the pictures bigger.The page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsThey need to add a frame.Needs ImprovementAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableSome of the elements on the page are alignedItems are organized appropriatelyThey can add more speech bubbles.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.The speech bubbles, since they're blue.Since its not zoomed in it is hard to see.Make the images a little bit more different.You guys look friendly!
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5that you look happy. You need to improve your pictures. The page is organized clearly, Panels need frames/borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsNeed more speech bubblesVery StrongAccepatableNeeds ImprovementAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyYou should add more words to it. Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.Their facesEverything is easy to see and read.Add more pictures. Good job.
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5I chose number 5 because it is a good message.one thing is to explain why both girls are standing on the bench at the end. that is a bit confusing.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvementsIt would catch more attention if they used color for the borders. White is okay but the color would also make it look more artsy.AccepatableVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelymore slides?The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarthe neatness of it all.Everything is easy to see and read.make it lighter.nothing more. that's it :3 no
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6everithingnoThe page is organized clearlynoAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelynoThe frames around each panel are consistentnonogood jobno
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6everythingwell, I think the work did is pretty good and idk.... you did wellPanels have frames or bordersidkVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongSome of the elements on the page are alignedItems are organized appropriatelyidkThe effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look differentidkEverything is easy to see and read.naw good job!naw
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6I ikked about this projet is that they add cool color cartoonish effects and the disign that they add to it. Add more dialogs
Add more people insde the project
The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvements, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designthey just need to add more captions...AccepatableVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongThe elements on the page are not aligned, but I think it works well the way they have it.Some items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective....The effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look different, The frames around each panel are consistent, The frames around each panel are slightly different but there are still strong similarities., Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.the first thing thet I noticed on the page was the color effects.Everything is easy to see and read.the suggestions that I have for this project is them to add more speciffic details and more people to the project to make it more stronger.the project was nice and cool., but there's just little things that needs to be added to....
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6the pictures are good.you need to a line itThe page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, The page has no gutters.it needs to have gutters and needs to be a linedVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongThe elements on the page are not alignedSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.it is goodThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistentthe bubbles Everything is easy to see and read.a line the pictures.everything looks really good :)
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6The pictures are good.The effects are different and it doesn't look good on the pictures.The page is organized clearly, Panels need frames/borders, The page has no gutters., different effects badMake all the pictures effects the same because it looks kind of ugly with different ones.AccepatableAccepatableNeeds ImprovementAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Some items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.make it look a little better.The effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look differentbright bordersnot reallynothing.Needs a little more work but it's not that bad.no I don't have any comments or questions.
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6That everyone should wash there hands.noneThe page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizednoneAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelynoneThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarconEverything is easy to see and read.nonenonenone
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7The design is easy to understand, clear , and gets the point across well.you could add more text. The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedthey did everything pretty good.Very StrongVery StrongVery StrongAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelythey aligned everything right.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistentThe middle text is the most noticeable.Everything is easy to see and read.the y could add more text.this is pretty well done.
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7I liked the topic of your graphic organizer. I'm not sure that you need any improvement.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedYour group did a great job with organizing your graphic novel. Very StrongVery StrongVery StrongAccepatableSome of the elements on the page are alignedItems are organized appropriatelyThere is only one panel that isn't aligned. The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.The first thing I noticed when I saw your graphic novel was the message, "Junk vs Healthy."Everything is easy to see and read.I don't have any suggestions, your project was well organized. I think this message is very powerful and everyone should take this under consideration.
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7its creativeadd a bit more captionsThe page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsadd more captionsAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyits all goodThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistentcolorEverything is easy to see and read.just to add more textits good just needs more text.
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7I like the you choose and the effects on the photos You should take more photos about your group instead of putting internet pictures The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsYou should include more internal speech.AccepatableVery StrongAccepatableNot Enough Information to Tell YetSome of the elements on the page are alignedItems are organized appropriatelyfix the boxes.The effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look different, The frames around each panel are consistent, The frames around each panel are slightly different but there are still strong similarities.the text Everything is easy to see and read.i think its good the way you have it now.:D it looks really nice girls im looking forward to see your final draft
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7Its a good Topicadd More to what the message is.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvements-AccepatableVery StrongVery StrongNeeds ImprovementAll elements on the page are aligned Some items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.Need to Put Some pictures closer togetherThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are slightly different but there are still strong similarities.just VS healthyno, it looks goodsince you wrote what is gonna happen if you eat junk food now write what is gonna happen if you eat healthy.
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8what i like about the design is that the panels are well organize just to add captions on the pictures and make the picture different color The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page togethershe needs to add captions to her graphic novel to understand whats going on . AccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelythe bottom boxes has a gutter in between the picture The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarthere all the same color instead of having it different of each box Everything is easy to see and read.no i like everything else except they need to add captions in the pictures too see whats going on
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8I like the layout of the pictures they are all the same size to the ones next to them and the effects are also very good :)the project is good it just needs the dialog and a caption fore the project The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designjust needs captions. Not Enough Information to Tell YetNot Enough Information to Tell YetNot Enough Information to Tell YetNot Enough Information to Tell YetAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelynothing its good.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistentthe pictures.Everything is easy to see and read.nothing is a good project it just needs to be finished.it is great just needs to finish
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8The actors are funny.Nothing.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, The page has no gutters.It needs to be organized.Needs ImprovementVery StrongAccepatableNeeds ImprovementSome of the elements on the page are alignedSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.Nothing.The frames around each panel are slightly different but there are still strong similarities.It looks kind of blurry.Everything is easy to see and read.Choose another contrast.The people look real happy.No questions.
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8The grahpic novel is very appropriate and looks mature. i think they need to add captions so it will be easier to interpret the message of this. The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvements, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designi strongly believe that it needs captions and use differnt images that will help reveal the message of the graphic novelNeeds ImprovementAccepatableNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyI dont have any suggestions. The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistentThere is repition colors for the background. no captionsthey need to use repition to help reveal the message betterI feel like it really does need captions and maybe change the images because it kind of doesnt make sense but maybe it is implying to stay successful in school but it is confusing. however the content is very appropriate. i dont have any questions.
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8I like that Carina is showing a lot of emotions with her face.i think that you should add text bubbles explaining each square. The page is organized clearly, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvements, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designtry to make it more understandable.Needs ImprovementVery StrongVery StrongNeeds ImprovementAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelytry to insert text bubbles.The effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look different, The frames around each panel are too different, they just appear random., Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions appear randomly chosen and vary too much.i notice CarinaEverything is easy to see and read.i have nothing to say.but all together its very strong and its a very great start.idchizzle
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8It's pretty nice but they need to put the bubbles and gutters with the text.The gutters are missing.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, The page has no gutters., Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designThey just need the gutters and bubbles.Very StrongAccepatableVery StrongAccepatableSome of the elements on the page are alignedItems are organized appropriatelyThey need the borders to improve their alignment.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarThe effects stand out.no textFinish with writing in the boxes so it can be understandable. The effects are neat and I like it but again needed the text to understand better :Dno comments.
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9I like that it shows the message of recycling and how detailed the project isThere are thought bubbles but nothing said so I want to know what they were trying to get at with that.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page togetherI think have the pictures in order because I cannot tell what is the beginning from the endVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.Just put them from beginning to end.The editing of the picturesJust make the pictures more clearJust as I stated before
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9they took picturesthey should add a theme and speech bubblesThe page is organized clearly, Panels need frames/borders, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designThey need to make it more appealing and organized.Not Enough Information to Tell YetAccepatableNot Enough Information to Tell YetNot Enough Information to Tell YetSome of the elements on the page are alignedThere is no clear order to the design and proximity.dont overlap photosThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarthe green recycle thingneeds to be clearerthe green recycle logo is hard to seei liked the themenop
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9I like that the photo spreads a message to others about recycling and how it benefits the environment. -Have more details in the photos
- Use more examples to prove the point or idea
- Put captions in the boxes
The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedMake the borders of the photo more detailed and precise.AccepatableAccepatableNeeds ImprovementAccepatableSome of the elements on the page are alignedSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.Align the pictures and information along were they are needed. Things that need to be together should be.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look different, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.I see all the projects that some of the other classes have been working on. Everything is easy to see and read.Make more details.NoneNone
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10it has some picturesThey should add more pictures and also include captions.The page is organized clearly, The page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels have frames or borders, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organized, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvements, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designadd a bit more creativity.Needs ImprovementNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementAll elements on the page are aligned Some items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.be more organizedThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarthe colorEverything is easy to see and read.its all good. complete it.
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10I really like the background because it makes the picture stand out. I like the photos that were taken and are clear and what is happening in each picture.There needs to be dialogue within the bubbles. The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designAll they need is dialogue within the bubbles and aligning the images in a row of three since there is only three.AccepatableVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongSome of the elements on the page are alignedThere is no clear order to the design and proximity.There should be a title or a hook.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.I notice the bright background.Everything is easy to see and read.You should making the images bigger.I like the background color.
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10That it's about anti-bullying They should complete it all the way!The page seems crowded or disorganized, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the design, not completeThey should put colors that match.Needs ImprovementAccepatableAccepatableNeeds ImprovementThe elements on the page are not alignedThere is no clear order to the design and proximity.They should try and making the whole comic organized!The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.The Background color is the first thing that i look at.Their ain't no wordsThey should try and not blend the colors.No comments.No questions for Mr. Levin
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10i like the way that it is set up.it would be better if you put more speech bubbles.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedi dont know really.Needs ImprovementAccepatableNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementSome of the elements on the page are alignedSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.i dont knowThe frames around each panel are consistent, The frames around each panel are slightly different but there are still strong similarities., Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.uhmm well the photos catch my eyes. ahathey dont have words or sentencesi dont know really.well your project has good set up.
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10THE GARDIENT BACK GROUNDADD MORE PICTURES AND CAPTIONS
Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designN/ANeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementSome of the elements on the page are alignedSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.ALLIGNED THE PICTURE IN THE SECOND COLLUM IT IS NOT THE SAME SIZE AS THE TOP LEFT ONE..The frames around each panel are consistentBACK GROUNDNO WORDSADD MOREMORE PICTURES AND CAPTIONS.
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10I like the colors they pretty cool!they could add more texts to it.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designthey just need to write texts.Needs ImprovementAccepatableNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementSome of the elements on the page are alignedSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.its on one place.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistentthe color orangeno wordsits good but just needs to be more comprehensive.The colors are tight!\
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11I liked that it was short. Have captions and more pictures in order to get the message across clearly.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, The page has no gutters., Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designAdd more pictures with more than one caption and not make the scene so dark it's hard to tell the message.Not Enough Information to Tell YetNeeds ImprovementNot Enough Information to Tell YetNeeds ImprovementThe elements on the page are not aligned, but I think it works well the way they have it.Items are organized appropriatelyThe alignment is good, just needs to be more spaced out for the text bubble since there's just two pictures.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarThe outline of the color its bright it catches the audience eye.
Everything is easy to see and read.If there is only going to be two pictures spread them out maybe one in the top and the other in the bottom and the caption in between them so they wont be so cramped up.I liked how it was simple and the outline of the box was a noticeable color.no
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11While I like that they used that student don't want to listen but it doesn't give to much information.They have to add more picture to understand what are they wanting to say because i dont understand them.Panels have frames or borders, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvements, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designThay have to add more caption or speech bubbles.Not Enough Information to Tell YetAccepatableAccepatableNot Enough Information to Tell YetSome of the elements on the page are alignedSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.add more pictures.The effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look different, The frames around each panel are consistent, The frames around each panel are slightly different but there are still strong similarities.The first thing that i notice is that they didn't put to many picture they put two and it doesn't give a message.just add more picture with the same fornt.I think they could do better.
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11The picture is showing him not caring c:Finish the story and explain what is going on the pictures.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedsay what is the main idea.Needs ImprovementNeeds ImprovementAccepatableNeeds ImprovementAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyto make sense.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.the different colors Everything is easy to see and read.nothing.It really good.nope
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11that it has a good lesson to teach.lighten the pictures up more.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedadd just a bit more text.AccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyjust have a little space in between the two pictures. The effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look different, The frames around each panel are consistentthe bubble with textEverything is easy to see and read.noneThe idea they had was good and the pictures they had went with it so it made sensenone
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11That it involves real life people that I know. Including myself. this person should add more speech in his characters and better colors just saying.The page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organized, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvements, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designthey could start off by following the Graphic novel example to see if they can come up with something similar to this. AccepatableVery StrongNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementSome of the elements on the page are alignedItems are organized appropriatelythe most important stuff should go first on top followed by all the others in alignment and proximity. The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, The frames around each panel are slightly different but there are still strong similarities., The frames around each panel are too different, they just appear random.the black with CONEverything is easy to see and read.make everything one exact color .Everything makes sense they just need a little bit more of improvements No sir on second though yes can you email me for the Ucla thing are u attending sir so that i can go on the 24th
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11I like best about the design is the first picture.Make the message clear and add more pictures.The page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, The page has no gutters., Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsThey can improve by adding gutters and making to speech bubble clear.Needs ImprovementAccepatableAccepatableNeeds ImprovementSome of the elements on the page are alignedThere is no clear order to the design and proximity.They can add more pictures and put the speech bubble on whoever is speaking.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions appear randomly chosen and vary too much.The blue frame around the pictures.Needs improvement,Keep going and make it more organized.Make the pictures more like the first because it looks cool.
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12That it shows how people could spread germs.To put another speech bubble.The page is organized clearly, Panels need frames/borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsPut frames.Very StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyuse more colors.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarA girl on a computer.Everything is easy to see and read.More speech bubbles.no.
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12This project got my attention because its sending us a message about germs and how we spread them easily. This picture is showing how we have germs on our hands and touch everything and then other people touch the things as well. To stop from spreading germs just wash your hands after everything you touch. Needed to add pictures of germs The page is organized clearlyadd words that talks about germs Very StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyadd more wordsThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarnothing no words add words just add more words
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12their picture is simple and its not too conplicated. Its also easy to tell what message that they're trying to get out. they could of put some more pictures and add a little bit of color. The page is organized clearly, The page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels have frames or borders, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedthey should make it look more like a comic.AccepatableVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongThe elements on the page are not aligned, but I think it works well the way they have it.Some items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.they should line up their pictures and add some more color in it.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistentTHE BORDERS ARE OKAY.Everything is easy to see and read.line up your borders and add some more colors and make it look more like a comic.good job on the project it needs a little improvment but at least you finished.
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12WHAT I LIKE THE MOST ABOUT THIS project, IS HOW THEY ARE TRYING TO SPRED THE WORD TO LOCKE STUDENT TO COVER THEIR NOSE EVRY TIME THEY sneeze. THIS IS VERY IMPORTANT BECAUSE WE DONT WANT TO GET SICK AND WE FIND THAT VERY NASTY FORM OTHER PEOPLE.THIS PROJECT WAS GOOD BUT THERE ARE MANY THINGS THAT THEY CAN IMPROVE. The page is organized clearlyMAKE IT MORE INTERESTING AccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriately.....VERY GOOD JOB I LOVE THIS IMAGES.
I DONT HAVE ANY QUESTIONS.
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12I like how i can strongly see the message of the graphic novel without the need to see the title first. I dont have suggestions since i completely understand what germs can do to one if spread. The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsI feel like they just need one or two captions for a bigger understanding. AccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableSome of the elements on the page are alignedItems are organized appropriatelyI dont have any suggestionsThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions appear randomly chosen and vary too much.they are in repitive backgrounds so they look well developed. Everything is easy to see and read.They have a great repitions so i dont any suggestionsThey did very well with making the message look revealing. However it lacked captions but still it looked great without it. I dont have any questions.
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12the play out of the sceneinclude dialogue and smile for cameraThe page is organized clearlyinclude dialogueVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongSome of the elements on the page are alignedItems are organized appropriatelyperfectThe frames around each panel are consistentthe qualityEverything is easy to see and read.include dialoguegood job
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12I like the images they made how they made the back ground look more alive, I think its a good deisgn they created It dont need no improvements I like it just the way it is The page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsOrganized the pictures in finish the Caption/speech bubblesVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongSome of the elements on the page are alignedthe one on the right is the oneAlways put the name of the company first then the adress The frames around each panel are slightly different but there are still strong similarities.It bold in con but it's letter are white and in trast its in regular black font and its the corecct wa.Everything is easy to see and read.I like it i think its very creativeYou guys are very talented in creative with these graphic pictures & novels keep up the good work in you can be one of the best graphic designer in the world, stay true to your work in practive alot
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12the way the story flows. its really well arranged. fix your pictures some are kinda stretched, picture 2. no frames The page is organized clearly, The page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels need frames/borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementswork on the pictures some more.AccepatableVery StrongAccepatableVery StrongSome of the elements on the page are alignedItems are organized appropriatelyalign all the pictures
The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions appear randomly chosen and vary too much.the speech bubble Everything is easy to see and read.have all the speech bubbles the same coloryou have no frames on the pictures
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12They have great pictures for what they are trying to say.Just to add text or some sort.The page is organized clearly, Panels need frames/borders, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementscreate boarders around the pictures.Very StrongVery StrongVery StrongNot Enough Information to Tell YetSome of the elements on the page are alignedItems are organized appropriatelyIt pretty good and spaced out enough.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarthe speech bubblesEverything is easy to see and read.Change the color of the text bubblesIt good, but needs very little improvment
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12the no spread germs and how people can catch it as wellMake sure that the pictures are aligned together and symmetric Panels need frames/borders, The page has no gutters., Caption/Speech bubbles need improvements, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designfinish and make the borders to the frames Needs ImprovementVery StrongVery StrongAccepatableThe elements on the page are not alignedSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.pictures need more explanation has none at the time pictures Everything is easy to see and read.eghrtherthrfinish the art
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13the background and surroundingsa better endingThe page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organized, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designmore better endingAccepatableVery StrongAccepatableAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyno commentThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design., Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions appear randomly chosen and vary too much.con in contrastEverything is easy to see and read.a better endingno comment
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13I like this design because it easily revealed the message of the graphic novel which was about bullying. It revealed that many people dont do anything about it. However there is a solution in this prroblem that was demonstrated from the person's workMaybe in each box the people from the back keep looking like they are leaving every time like if they dont wnat to interefere. The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedwhen the person trips the other person, the people from the back should look like they are running away to show that sometimes in reality people dont help out others. Very StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyThey need to add the alignment and proximity The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.they use the same colors. Everything is easy to see and read.I dont have any suggestions for this person because they used repition pretty well. I like this graphic novel because it wasnt complicated to find the message of it. It wasnt too colorful and their reptition was used well. they even had a solution to the message/problem. I dont have any questions.
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13It is creative and the message is clear.The solution is too fast and very unreal.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedIt just fineAccepatableVery StrongVery StrongAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyThe alignment is good.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.The 2 girls arguing.Everything is easy to see and read.I think that all of a sudden the story moved on fast and the ending and solution was kind of unrealistic because of how it was all of a sudden.It creative and everything matches.
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13I like the message of the comic it is a issue not looked at closely enough.I think that the way the character are positioned in the second box should be changed it seems a little odd that the character goes from so far away with no one in front of the lockers behind them to right next to the character being bullied tripping her with the characters from the first box behind her again in the third.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedThe speech bubbles are a little inconsistent. Very StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyI think the alignment is fine.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions appear randomly chosen and vary too much.The two main characters in the front are the first thing i noticed.Everything is easy to see and read.I think the only thing that needs to be changed it the use of the square talk bubble in the third box from the right.Over all I think the comic is very well put together and the message is very clear its a strong situation that is very often over looked.
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14i dont knowadd captionsCaptions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designadd captionNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementAccepatableNeeds ImprovementAll elements on the page are aligned Some items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.add textThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarpicturesEverything is easy to see and read..just add captions.
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14It is important to ask for help especially when you're trying to succeed in life. You can ask any question that you are troubled in.you can make some pictures smaller to be able to fit inside the area were it needs to go.You also have to adjust the pictures to where all photos can fit.The page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvements, pictures need to be taken in a different angle.They can improve by taking pictures of kids just leaving their trash without caring about there campus.Also they can add more people in their picture.Very StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongSome of the elements on the page are alignedSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.make sure that you put the picture in order and that they are aligned with the rest of the photos. They should also add more cartions about there message.The frames around each panel are consistentthe first thing that i noticed is that the kid walked in class such enthusiasm to learn , why wouldn't the teacher want to help a student who want to learn.it all blends together.they should add a little bit more photos to show that the student would want to learn, and to show that the student asked for help instead of remaining quite and failing. The photos are good because its showing you the that they want you to know its important. Still they show in the pictures are showig you t hat the student is successful. i didn't know on some of the questions to answer for what picture.
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14Well its ok i guess...To add dialogue and also make them fit too.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organized, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designNeed all like this picture on top.Needs ImprovementNot Enough Information to Tell YetNeeds ImprovementAccepatableThe elements on the page are not alignedItems are organized appropriatelyWell all they need to do is not make them squished to each other.The effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look different, The frames around each panel are too different, they just appear random.the "con" in trast"...catches my attention.Everything is easy to see and read., catches my attention...Make it have dialogue and the frames be together.meow and make it better..meow
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14the color.needs more pictures.The page seems crowded or disorganized, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvements, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designneeds more pictures.Needs ImprovementVery StrongNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementThe elements on the page are not alignedThere is no clear order to the design and proximity.align them better.The frames around each panel are too different, they just appear random.the guy in the middle.doesnt look done.need more images.good job.na bro bro.
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14it looks organized and it is really good related to the topic they are doing it on and more details to the pictures maybe by adding text or any effects and add more pictures or rearrange them so there wont be any blank spots The page is organized clearly, Panels need frames/bordersadd frames on the pictures Very StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongSome of the elements on the page are alignedSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.use something to keep them straight or even The effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look different, The frames around each panel are slightly different but there are still strong similarities.the con becaus eit is just standing out Everything is easy to see and read.its pretty good the pictures are good no
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15It has nice picturesMake it better. its pretty bad. you cant tell what order it goes in and its messy. Also there is no text so that is pretty lame. The page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels need frames/borders, The page has no gutters., Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the design, its badIt looks like you guys didn't even try on it and you just put the pictures there. Whats the, "So what?"Needs ImprovementNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementThe elements on the page are not alignedThere is no clear order to the design and proximity.Look at a good one and try to make yours like theirs.none of thoseThe white box on the bottom stands out.There are no words and the pictures are everywhere.Make it neat and add text so it doesn't look boring.The picture of the grass looks nice.
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15Nice pictures.Put some type of speech so you know what is happeing in the bubbles.The page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels need frames/borders, The page has no gutters., Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designMake borders and all the stuff that was necessary in the bubbles.Needs ImprovementNot Enough Information to Tell YetNeeds ImprovementNeeds ImprovementThe elements on the page are not alignedThere is no clear order to the design and proximity.Add some sort of design to it, it just looks like you rushed the project and put little thought or were unclear with what to do.The effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look different, The frames around each panel are consistentThe grass.Everything is easy to see and read.Nothing I think it is pretty decent.It looks like it could have a good message you just have to organize it and put some speech bubbles in it.
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15the best design i like the most was the pictures they can put a sign of recycling Panels need frames/bordersthey need some speech bubbles Very StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelythey don't need it they did a good jobThe effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look differentsomeone is recycling Everything is easy to see and read.put words on it good job and nice pictures no
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15i like that they whated to clean the schoolthey need to make the fotos with effects The page is organized clearlythey need to wprk together like that they would make better and finsh on timeAccepatableNeeds ImprovementAccepatableNeeds ImprovementThe elements on the page are not alignedItems are organized appropriatelyi dont have any comments for this becuse the have finshThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarthat they need to work more fastthey have no wited ii dont nave any sugestion just they need to finish i dont have any comment
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15I like best that it shows that one should pick up trash and not make a garbage out of the world.They should describe what they are doing not just visualize. The page is organized clearly, The page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels have frames or borders, but they need improvements, Panels need frames/borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvements, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designA suggestion that they should improve in there speech to imform others of what there purpose is about. Needs ImprovementAccepatableNot Enough Information to Tell YetVery StrongThe elements on the page are not alignedThere is no clear order to the design and proximity.To align the project they should put the picture in order from the begining to the end.they dont have any effectThe first thing I notice when I see the picture is the girl picking up the trash.I can see everything but theres nothing to read I suggest that they put some words so people can understand it better and easier.Everything is alright just needs alittle captions.N/A
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15I like that the main idea is about recycling and also that the pictures are very clear. I like how the pictures give you the idea right away even though there is no description yet.All that is needed is a description on each of the pictures and a little more detail but overall its an interesting topic.Panels need frames/borders, The page has no gutters., Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsPut interesting captions to add more deatail to the pictures.AccepatableVery StrongVery StrongNeeds ImprovementAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyBe creative.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarIt needs more details.needs detailsMake it InterestingInteresting pictures but not quite done.nope
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15I like how all the photos are bright and taken real well.Maybe the gutters should be even.The page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels need frames/borders, The page has no gutters., Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designThere should be a bright color to catch the viewer's attention.AccepatableAccepatableVery StrongAccepatableThe elements on the page are not alignedThere is no clear order to the design and proximity.There should be at least one word to tie the whole photo together.No repition just the backgroundThe trees and grass stand out to me.Everything is easy to see and read.There should be a title or hook and borders.I like that the photos were taken outside.
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15pictuersbe more specific on your subject The page is organized clearlyadd graphic novelNeeds ImprovementAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelynothingno effecstthe picture when she picking up the trashno wordsadd wordsadd words and effectsno
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15Um some pictures are ok.Try to crop some pictures so all of the photos can appear well.The page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels need frames/borders, The page has no gutters., Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designYou might want to try showing a clear theme.Not Enough Information to Tell YetAccepatableNot Enough Information to Tell YetNot Enough Information to Tell YetThe elements on the page are not alignedThere is no clear order to the design and proximity.Try to put the pictures in order, in the way they might have occurredThe effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look different, The frames around each panel are too different, they just appear random., there are no o speech or thought bubblesIt is not well organized.Try to take most of the pictures in the same placeSome pictures can be clear.
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15what I like best is that is looks like its about recyclingtry to give more information on what its aboutClear Gutters hold the page together, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designthey would need more speech bubbles to explain more what its about and it would need a bit more detailsNeeds ImprovementAccepatableNeeds ImprovementAccepatableThe elements on the page are not alignedThere is no clear order to the design and proximity.the pictures should all have something to do in commonThe effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look differentThe first thing i asked my self was if it was about recycling because its not really clearEverything is easy to see and read.they would need to add more contrastI think they did a really good job and the pictures are really nice.nope
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16That It shows how some people end up after doing drugs.Make the pictures bigger.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedMake their speech bubbles bigger.Very StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyTo make the images bigger.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarThe Drugs sign crossed out.Everything is easy to see and read.Use other colors.They did a good job on their project
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16That It shows how some people end up after doing drugs.Make the pictures bigger.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedMake their speech bubbles bigger.Very StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyTo make the images bigger.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarThe Drugs sign crossed out.Everything is easy to see and read.Use other colors.They did a good job on their project
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16i like how they did their project.try to add more slides to next time.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedthey dont need help.Very StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelythey dont need help.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, The frames around each panel are too different, they just appear random.they dont need help.Everything is easy to see and read.no commentno commentno comment
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16Its funny to how they were acting.No comment.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedNo comment.Very StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriatelyNo comment.The frames around each panel are slightly different but there are still strong similarities.The colorful pictures.Everything is easy to see and read.No comment.No comment.No comment.
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16What i like about this picture is how they layed out the picture and quotes.This message is clear alreadyThe page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedthis group could of added another picture to let people know how the drugs make people actVery StrongAccepatableVery StrongVery StrongAll elements on the page are aligned i cant really tellNothing their pictures are cool and funnyThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.That their talking about drugsEverything is easy to see and read.Nothingthis was funnynope
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16how they make the part that is after that they use the drugs.I think that in the message they can be more realistic. Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsthey have to line up the pictures.AccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableSome of the elements on the page are alignedSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.that they can erase a picture and combine with another.The frames around each panel are too different, they just appear random.that one of my friends was in the project.Everything is easy to see and read.anything.that this project show a really god message that maybe can change this community.no
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16They used words and terms kids now of days use. They also act out what could happen if a kid does the wrong drug.N/AThe page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organized, Captions/Speech bubbles are missing from the designThe project is almost perfect, they just need to equal out the gutters, make it a little more funny because if someone laugh at it they won't be able to forget it so it can save someone life.Very StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongAll elements on the page are aligned Some items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.N/AThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, The frames around each panel are slightly different but there are still strong similarities., Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.N/AEverything is easy to see and read.N/Agood job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!N/A
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16I like everything about the design I chose because it has a clear message and the pictures are really good.To improve this project they should try to edit the pictures they used.The page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organizedI think this group did a pretty good job in the elements of the Graphic noble.Very StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongSome of the elements on the page are alignedItems are organized appropriatelyThey should try to make the pictures have the same amount of space between them.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are consistent, Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions all use similar elements of design.The first thing that I looked at was the fourth picture because it had bright color letters.Everything is easy to see and read.They should revise their project again and try to ficx the small details. This group did a good job because the Graphic Noble has a clear message.
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16i like how you made your self looke dead but crack doesnt kill you. You should of say "Molly" or some other harmful drugYou could get the image a little bit closer than how you have them, they are to far to see. The page is organized clearly, The page seems crowded or disorganized, Panels have frames or borders, Panels need frames/borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Captions, Internal and External Speech use is clear and organized, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsthe color red look bad i thimk you shpuld ude a better coloe like kind of green.AccepatableVery StrongAccepatableVery StrongAll elements on the page are aligned Items are organized appropriately I thinks your PSA is perfect in this perspective.The effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similarThe pictures are too far away.words are too small.Your images and collages should have a different color kind of like green.i think that your only problem was that collages color and the words are too small.no.
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16don't use drugs
nunnThe page is organized clearly, Panels have frames or borders, Clear Gutters hold the page together, Caption/Speech bubbles need improvementsinstagramVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongVery StrongThe elements on the page are not alignedSome items, such as panels or speech bubbles should be moved to be more effective.nunThe effects on the photos are repeated so they all look similar, The frames around each panel are slightly different but there are still strong similarities., Speech bubbles, though bubbles, and captions appear randomly chosen and vary too much.black and whiteEverything is easy to see and read.nunnunnun
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16I like the caption bestMake images look betterThe page is organized clearlyMake clearer picsAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableAccepatableSome of the elements on the page are alignedItems are organized appropriatelyMake things evenThe effects on the photos are not repeated so they all look differentThe pics are blurryCould the pictures be any clearerThanks for this GREAT opportunity Mr. LevinI am tired and I have a headache
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