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Editing NotesCharacterContextsecVocal SFXNarration/Dialogue
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Jas
Jashin-chan -- EriChi
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Jas228 words, 45 seconds of vocal SFX
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JasDo not let her smile fool you. She is a shit. This (literal) hellspawn and noted best friend of Literally Medusa spends every waking moment trying to manipulate others into feeding her selfishness, gluttony, arrogance... all of that. This works on most puny huuumans, but not a jaded edgelord like Yurine, whose more than happy to slam the business end of a chainsaw into her skull on the daily. She's immortal, so she just comes back the next morning. Jashin-chan keeps trying to kill Yurine herself anyway, so... yeah. It's not a one-way street at least. :V

Voice-wise, make her real squealy. She's a whiner! This should contrast with Yurine's stoic, almost sadistic outlook.
Middling in pitch.
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Jas(Japanese) voice sample where she gets 360 noscoped by a fucking party horn. It gets wacky.
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Yur
Yurine Hanazono -- Nami955
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Yur207 words, 10 seconds of vocal SFX
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YurA college student who dresses up in gothic clothes and wants to get rid of the dumbass demon (Jashin-chan) that she accidentally summoned. Killing Jashin through conventional means "works", but she always comes back each time. This leads to a cycle of Yurine subjecting Jashin to increasingly wacky and over-the-top "deaths".

Voice-wise, she has that sort of almost-monotone, kind of breathy(?) deal going on. She tends to be written as a sort of sarcastic "straight-man". Notably, bwing the "straight-man" to Jashin-chan up there is not a high bar. Make sure she still has slightly sadistic undertones in her voice. Probably middling in pitch, if slightly high?
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Yur(Japanese) voice sample wherein she aspires to be a dictator. Neither of these characters are particularly nice!
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YURthis is the "angiest" yurine gets in the script, but she shouldn't have much audible anger in her voice. remember thaJasin-chan... you ate my pudding without permission again... didn't you?
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JASshe's already whinng up a stormN-no!! It's NOT ME! It's PECOLA!! Now come on, pull the hose out! My boobs and belly will BURST if you don't!
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YURglaringAre you lying to me again? Good-for-nothing devils like you deserve to puff up even more.
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sustained hissJASa freaked-out yelp before profusely apologizingG-GAHH!! It's swelling so QUICKLY! Okay, okay!! I ate it, I'm sorry!
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air turns offYURalmost-sarcasmGee. I wouldn't have had to give you balloon tits if you just said that from the get-go.
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JASreliefYou're telling me... that was kinda close! Really thought I was gonna pop there!
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YURbluntly.By the way, Jashin-chan... you seem a bit erect.
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JASoffendedWhat's that supposed to mean?!
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comical zoom in on her nipples. it is revealed that they are, in fact, "erect"YURcontinued from last line. the punchline here is that "erect" is usually used to refer to a man's penis rather than a woman's nipplesIt would seem you have a... boob-boner, so to speak.
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JASher voice should be raised during multiple parts of thisWHAT!?! That's just a-- uhhh... physiological phenomenon!! There's nothing EXCITING about being THIS bloated!!
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pause with some sort of buildup sound, then a close-up of the MILK SPEWJASthis bit is a dick joke (but with boobs instead of dicks). she doesn't anticipate milk coming out of her breasts, then it catches her by surprise when it suddenly does. first AH should be sharp and sudden, then the subsequent ones should be orgasm-like. last one goes up and down in pitchAHH- ahh...! Ahh... AaahhHHhhh~!
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YURclinical, sarcasticGosh. You really are a slut, ejaculating your milk all over the place.
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YURinternal monologueIt's pretty erotic seeing it drip out like that. Even I'm kind of excited just by looking at it...
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knob creak creakYURshe maintains her cold, dry tone, but is visibly blushingCome on, swell up some more. I've gotta whack off tonight.
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JASthis joke never gets old :^)Oh screw YOU!! Gotta be kiddin' me- what kinda PERVERT masturbates to a BALLOON-!!
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YUR"rude, backtalking" should be read as a list of two items. specifically not "rude! backtalking-"Rude, backtalking girls burst in a heartbeat, okay?
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JASshe starts putting on dramaticsyEEEK!! They're still SWELLING!! My boobs, my belly... they're gonna EXPLOODE!!
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"bumps" up against the edge of the canvas.YURthis one is a riff on the literal resolution size of the imageHm? Oh, seems like the canvas isn't letting you get much bigger.
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JASunder breath, to self. at least a little relievedThank god... I was about to blow apart at the seams...!
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brief pause?JASpanting and nervious, clearly just bullshitting stuff up on the spot. "oh actually this was part of my plan all along!".haha... y-you fell for it! Yurine, I've been WAITING for this moment...! I'm gonna blow all the air back into your mouth, and blow you to BITS while I'm at it...!
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JAS3030-ish seconds of panicked breathing/huffing? mostly just for me to sprinkle here-and-there
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YURstill less-than-emotive, but should still come across as condescendingOh, Jashin-chan... you don't understand.
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comical scrolling soundYURYou know I can just make the canvas bigger, right?
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JASslight panic!Ohhh no no no!!! If you think I can get THAT big, I'll burst for-real!!
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YURslightly under-breath, to self

(important: she means this figuratively)		Not if my heart bursts first...
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JASThe hell are you on about?! Just pull the hose out! NOW!!
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YURcynical, upbeatSwell up for me, Jashin-chan!
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JASdisbelief!GAHH!! How are these fucking things still growing?!
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YURslight cooing. cut off by next lineThey're hideously large. Just like your hideous personality, your hideous face, your hideous-
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JAScontinued whining and flipping-out

("weird noises" along the lines of balloons creaking.)		No, I mean it!! There's a bunch of weird noises coming from my skin they sound like... like-
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YURsmug.Like balloons, right? Good. Scream like a balloon.
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JASraised voiceI'm not even inflating any bigger!!
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JAS1515 more seconds of misc "nnnhhh..."-type moans. again, mostly for sprinking
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conspicuous cloth rustling can be heard from the right speaker :^)YURshe's hardly a romantic, but this should still sound a bit seductiveSounds like we're both ready to burst.
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YURshe's giving herself some 👉🍑, you know? it shouldn't distract people from the about-to-pop balloon girl, though10(heavy, rapid breathing. 10 seconds?)
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JASnear-shoutingGYAAAAH!! I can feel the canvas agaaaaain...!
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YUR"huffy", should fit right inbetween some of the rapid-breathing masturbation noisesJust hold on a little longer...
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JASwhiny.I... CAaaAN'T!!!
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YURAaanh~!
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JASa shout that raises in intensity. probably 3-4 seconds total?aaaAAAAHH-!!
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JASGHK-!
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looong pause for tension, before dialogue resumes
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JASannoyed, offended. it is assumed she's immediately (physically) okay afterward. emotionally though? not so muchI can't believe you actually went and burst me. You can't just show all of... that nastiness to the viewers...!
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YURhuffing once more, satisfied with selfHaa... yeah, yeah. That's good for you, Jashin-chan. I don't think they should see how I am right now, either...
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