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1 | ISHCMC Collaborative Student Editing Services | ||||
2 | Need someone to edit your work? Want practice editing other people's work? This is the place to be! | ||||
3 | Purpose: To use collaborative, online tools to seek, receive, and provide feedback on writing, based on one of the 6+1 Traits of Writing. Improvements will be made during the revise/edit stage of the writing process, resulting in an improved version of the piece before publishing. | ||||
4 | I an in the revise/edit stage of the writing process, and I want feedback to improve my writing | I want to provide feedback | |||
5 | Author (name and class) | Link to my writing (saved in Google Docs, anyone at ISHCMC can comment) | I would like feedback about... (Choose one or more: Ideas, Organisation, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions, and/or presentation) | Date I would like feedback by, if possible: | I will give you suggestions to edit your writing! (Write your name and class here, then click on their link and begin giving suggestions) |
6 | By Example A | Dr. Green's Great Escape | Word choice and sentence fluency | March 20, 2021 | Cindy Kaardal, 4C |
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