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ISHCMC Collaborative Student Editing Services
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Need someone to edit your work? Want practice editing other people's work? This is the place to be!
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Purpose: To use collaborative, online tools to seek, receive, and provide feedback on writing, based on one of the 6+1 Traits of Writing. Improvements will be made during the revise/edit stage of the writing process, resulting in an improved version of the piece before publishing.
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I an in the revise/edit stage of the writing process, and I want feedback to improve my writingI want to provide feedback
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Author (name and class)Link to my writing (saved in Google Docs, anyone at ISHCMC can comment)I would like feedback about... (Choose one or more: Ideas, Organisation, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions, and/or presentation)Date I would like feedback by, if possible:I will give you suggestions to edit your writing! (Write your name and class here, then click on their link and begin giving suggestions)
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By Example ADr. Green's Great EscapeWord choice and sentence fluencyMarch 20, 2021Cindy Kaardal, 4C
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