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+"Great buildup.
Fantastic sync.
Excellent pacing."
- "Chorus is hella confusing.
Lacks coherence."

This was really awesome to watch. The buildup in the verses and the bridge were excellent, very clear story, concept easily seen. The sync and pacing were both pretty great but once the chorus hits, it starts to lose coherence and everything doesn't really make sense anymore and it's just lots of flashy fast scenes. Especially the first chorus, I had no idea what you were trying to even show, second chorus I'm speculating something along the lines of their manga doing well but it's very unclear since it's a lot of scenes of them shouting "YEAAAAAAAAAAAH" on the phone or something instead of focusing on the manga element.
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+ Interesting take on the song
+ Good story telling in the beginning
+ Decent syncing
- Refrains are messy, with a lot of random scene choices
- The video doesn't seem to really go anywhere
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The strong part of this video is the beginning, I actually felt something there. Unfortuneatly no matter how dynamic you can animate the moving of a fountain pen, the video could not keep up to the corus.
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+Nice Concept
+Unexpected Source Combo
+ Really Nice build up
-Rough Chorus Sections/lip flap
-SO MANY PHONE SCENES. D: It’s like they’re starting a phone company, not drawing manga.
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+ Different source combo
+ Good emotional build up in the beginning
+ Decent pacing
- Chorus gets really random
- Loses all focus by the second half and has no resolution
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