sample-YA-reverse-outline-May2021.xlsx

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1	Chapter	Time	Place	Save the Cat Beat #	Scene A	Scene B	Scene C	Scene D	Beta feedback	Revision plan	Research
2	1	Nov	Honolulu	1 Opening Image	MC at wedding	post-wedding reception	fight with fiance
3	2	Nov	Honolulu	2 Theme Stated	inciting incident - change theme stated by X instead of Y				Reader A: theme unclear
4	3	Nov	Honolulu	3 Setup	opening scene	scene after first section break - need to rework dialogue and eliminate internal monologue	scene after second section break	final scene in chapter, after third section break
5	4	Nov	Honolulu	4 Catalyst					Reader B: MC has contradictory actions
6	5	Nov	Honolulu	5 Debate
7	6	Nov	Honolulu	5 Debate	opening scene with beginning frame	INSERT FLASHBACK: MC's memory of __ (rendered in-scene for __ pages)	final scene in chapter, end frame
8	7	Nov	Plane	5 Debate
9	8	Nov	Plane	5 Debate					Reader C: plot-light - needs more drama/tension
10	9	Nov	Boston	5 Debate
11	10	Nov	Boston	6 Break Into 2	ADD transitional chapter!
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13	11	Nov	Maine	8 Fun and Games
14	12	Dec	Maine	7 B Story	MOVE chapter to introduce B Story earlier!
15	13	Dec	Maine	8 Fun and Games
16	14	Dec	Maine	8 Fun and Games
17	15	Dec	Maine	8 Fun and Games
18	16	Dec	Maine	8 Fun and Games
19	17	Dec	Maine	8 Fun and Games
20	18	Dec	Ohio	9 Midpoint
21	19	Dec	Ohio	10 Bad Guys Close In
22	20	Dec	Ohio	10 Bad Guys Close In
23	21	Dec	Ohio	10 Bad Guys Close In
24	22	Dec	Ohio	10 Bad Guys Close In
25	23	Dec	Ohio	10 Bad Guys Close In
26	24	Dec	Maine	10 Bad Guys Close In
27	25	Dec	Maine	10 Bad Guys Close In
28	26	Jan	Maine	11 All Is Lost
29	27	Jan	Maine	12 Dark Night of the Soul
30	28	Feb	Maine	12 Dark Night of the Soul
31	29	Mar	Boston	13 Break Into 3
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33	30	Mar	Honolulu	14 Finale
34	31	Mar	Honolulu	14A Finale - Gather Team
35	32	Mar	Honolulu	14 Finale
36	33	Mar	Honolulu	14 Finale
37	34	Mar	Honolulu	14B Finale - Execute Plan
38	35	Apr	Maine	14C Finale - High Tower Surprise
39	36	June	Maine	14D Finale - Dig Deep Down
40	37	Aug	Sonoma	14E Finale - Execute New Plan
41	38	Dec	Hong Kong	15 Final Image
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