No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., incomplete essay

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., 2 sources

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., NO- at least 4 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., NO- at least 4 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

Works Cited: The reader should not have to look in the url to find the name of the website. Conclusion needs work. Mercury is not mentioned in the essay and thus has not been explained. Tie in the dying fish from the introduction.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, No. - the paper did NOT properly use superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., NO - if the source was used more than once the citation number was NOT properly repeated..

Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, list improperly named

The essay citations did not follow the CSE format.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

The introduction and conclusion need work. The introduction is about the ages in history and the conclusion is about how people can decrease their carbon footprint.

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., NO- at least 4 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

The term "black plague" in the conclusion should be explained in the introduction.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., NO- at least 4 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Used Last, First

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Not numbered

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year., 4 sources

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

E-cigs were introduced in the conclusion.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., NO- at least 4 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - ERROR - the entries were IMPROPERLY alphabetized

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, No. - the paper did NOT properly use superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., NO- at least 4 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

Conclusion should start and focus on antibiotics to fit this emphasis in the essay.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

Conclusion needs work.
The introduction: deaths involved this year has surpassed 5,000
The conclusion: It has only taken 23 people so far,

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., 3 sources

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Used Last, First

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, No. - the paper did NOT properly use superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

Error: 1-10 (no 8) in-text but only 5 sources listed
Error: Last, First in Cited References
Error: did not include publication information
The articles are print sources. EBSCOHost is a database
#3 in the list should include Newsweek Global. 8/15/2014, Vol. 163 Issue 6, p12-15.

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, No list title

Average high school writing

Use the author's name in source #5.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., NO- at least 4 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, No. - the paper did NOT properly use superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources.

Used credible, academic sources.

minimal or no writing errors.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

#6 & #8 are print sources. EbscoHost MASUltra is a database. Make sure the citations are complete.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

Citations #2-#8 are incomplete.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO- at least 4 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, 4 sources

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., NO- at least 4 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., .#.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., NO - if the source was used more than once the citation number was NOT properly repeated..

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Source repeated

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., NO- at least 4 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., list improperly named

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., NO- at least 4 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

Your citations are incomplete. EbscoHost is a database. #1 is a People magazine article. #2 is Time magazine article. Cite these as print sources.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

Cited References need work.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

A conclusion is needed that refers to the question in the introduction: Do Americans have Ebola under control?

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Not all sources were credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Used Last,First

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., NO - if the source was used more than once the citation number was NOT properly repeated..

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year., 4 sources

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

A conclusion is needed that emphasizes W. Africa. Cited references needs work.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Not all sources were credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, list improperly named

Average high school writing

Each item in the Cited References is incomplete.

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., 3 sources

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

The introduction: Ebola spreads throughout the body as fast as a wildfire would in the forest. The conclusion: What should the government do about ebola? The introduction needs to sound more like the rest of the essay.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

"Ebola has disrupted the nation’s peace and feel for security." It is not clear which nation you are referring to. This statement is true for West African nations.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

The conclusion needs to refer to the introduction. The Intro is about the world wide disease and animal hosts. The body is about quarantines, health care workers, and how the disease is spread. The conclusion is about protecting yourself.

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

A conclusion is needed that refers to Ebola trending in the media.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc)

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., #'s were repeated

Average high school writing

Thomas Duncon should be introduced.

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., NO- at least 4 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

The conclusion needs to refer back to the introduction and include scientists are currently trying to find a cure for this disease.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Yes - used 10 citations or more, No. - the paper did NOT properly use superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO- at least 4 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List. , check #3

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Used Last,First

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

Writing Error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Average high school writing

There has been a [war with a] disease named Ebola. Also use the war analogy in the conclusion.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 4 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List. , Cited References List - properly used [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.