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Her eyes followed them up the side of wall to the ceiling
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The little Rahi reptile ran as fast as its legs could carry it
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“Together, you and I will –”
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Sidorak slapped the Toa Hordika on the back, almost knocking him off his feet. “Good. Now then –”
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“If I had not gotten that creature off of you –”
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6Prologue
I guess writing this won’t help the Matoran any, so why do I keep wasting my time with this?
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76Dekar had a plan
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Ehlek dragged Carapar down into the depths
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The five Toa enjoyed a brief
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The Toa of Ice's heart froze
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What if we can't find the Mask of Life in time?
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Under stone markers of truce
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7Prologue
The battle was over by nightfall
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The Toa Nuva followed Tanma
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Elsewhere, Vican was about to have a meeting
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Mazeka walked into an inn
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The disruption and destruction of the field was complete
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Kopaka was not happy to hear about Garrdus' disappearance
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leaning on her aqua ax for support
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She planted an aqua ax into the stone floor
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raising her blue-handled aqua ax in salute
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The Toa of Stone whirled his proto-piton
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439 (comic)
Yes, they were. Check out page [##], panel 3
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a single slip, the slightest distraction, and it would mean Matau’s life.”
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The flames consumed the creature, reducing it foul-smelling ash
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a new signal was sent through the steel like strands
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two places about 1.5 bios apart
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Iruini did a back flip from a standing start
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where the massive lizard like Rahi or the flying insect
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Barriers of ice, stone, and earth kept barring their way,
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With a howl of rage, he unleashed a stone spinner at Kahgarak.
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risked all to vanquish our sworn enemy, Makuta.
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so that they formed a circle in the sandpit.” We succeeded.
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“When they’re written for a creature that has not been since the time before time?”
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The Toa Hordika of Fire raised a blazer claw, the implied threat was obvious to all.
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A sound came up from above
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and readied his fire great swords
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dislodge her would bring the chute braced down on his head
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Nidhiki spent his time wandering the hall of the Coliseum,
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You just woke up every Toa for kios around
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The he nodded vigorously.
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The whole building shook as it might come down on top of them.
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Well, I’ll find a place where they need a Toa, and aren’t too particular about that kind
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552Tentacles text
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“Help me…,” he said.
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I remember my lessons well, Shadowed One, especially the painful ones.
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Have his quarters and usual hiding places searched, then teach him the error of his ways.
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The master of shadows had exiled it from Metru Nui, where the Toa Metru first encountered it some time later.
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5Epilogue
Dweller quickened his pace.
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It had opened up and someone… some thing… had come out of it.
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They’re To – whatever it is they are.
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"Reidak slipped and fell 800 feet, smashed into the ice ring headfirst, and all it did was make him irritable"
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“You overdid,” said Avak.
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find out why they had come to this Mata Nui – forsaken hunk of rock.
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Garan’s best friend, Balta, got close enough to steal one of the virus launchers and bring it back to the others.
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Visitors, coming from the north. Six Matoran.
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The emerald-armored leader of the Piraka looked from one of his team to the other,
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“Go and find a place to hide, the figure said.
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A dozen of Karzahni’s Matoran closed in then, stripping the party of their tools, supplies, and even the Kanohi Suletu they had found.
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It would take most of your life span to relate all that I have experienced
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“Those who prefer to sit around all day unmoving as a stone… eventually become one.
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“You again,” said the Piraka “I owe you some pain, Toa.”
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“Somehow I doubt that its Toa-proof,” said Tahu.
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“Whining little creeps always running to a Toa or a Turaga whenever anything goes wrong – that’s what Matoran are.
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I expect that from Reidak, but you, Thok
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Nothing could make them pan with that knowledge – except cowardice.”
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“For good or ill, we’re Toa, Axonn
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“You Toa are always so good with words, when its actions that matter.”
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discover that his body had been convened to billions
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Fires had spread out of control in Ta Metru.
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That last made Thok look a second time
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I’ll take breathing over that, any time.
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prophecies about the great cataclysm
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“Easy,” Norik said gently, “Easy.”
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“Calm down,” Norik said, “You’re safe now. What happened?”
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Rumor has it that she had used her powers to make him “see” her point of view, but neither of them could afford to admit it.
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“It’s not exactly a remedy for your pain, ”Norik said, "But I think
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but he was having trouble maneuvering when hit by Norik’s slowness Rhotuka.
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Abandon the skiff, however, and he abandons any hope they have of escaping.
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the boat was several kios out
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the passages the Piraka had slid down, entrances to which were on the ceiling high above.
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Those smiles might have been erased had they known that something else besides the mask – something powerful, evil, and quite mad was waiting for them beyond the gateway.
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“It’s our own fault,” said Toa Jaller
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“Maybe not like we do, but… Use your Mask of Telepathy.
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Axonn raised his weapon once more and threw it into the whole,
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the only worthwhile thing this barren wasteland has-- they might object
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Sort of a Toa of Silence now, isn't he? Dead silence.
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"Mata Nui who was our protector, your world"
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The Matoran could remain “secure” inside their air bubble protected shelters
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Now today’s safe hour was over. The hunters were back, and one of them was hunting the Matorans’ vehicle.
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“And now this mask,” said Pridak, slowly. “I don’t know what it is, or why it is so important, but it is a new element.
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actually, a 300-foot-long problem.
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Toa within a 3000 Kio radius
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because some kook with an ax says we should.
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Pohatu Nuva said, in mask to mask with Onua Nuva.
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I’ll light up my sword – if it burns hot enough, they’ll stay lit underwater.
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Jaller’s burning sword
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