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Competitive audit
Goals: Compare competitor’s websites to understand the best way to layout website and what information to include
Compare the shopping and checkout experience of photography merchandise on photographer’s websites
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General informationUX
(rated: needs work, okay, good, or outstanding)
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First impressionsInteractionVisual designStorytellingShopping experience
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Competitor type
(direct or indirect)
Location(s)
Product offering
Price
($ - $$$$)
Website
(URL)
Business size
(small, medium, large)
Target audience Unique value proposition Desktop website experienceMobile website experienceFeaturesAccessibilityUser flow NavigationBrand identityWork samples presentation Explaining photographs or thought processBrand building via credentials, bio, and expertiseEfficiency of purchasing merchandise
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Mark Lilly Photography IndirectOnline, Bay Area based out of Oakland large-format wall murals and fine art
photography.
Unsure (Prices not listed on website)https://www.marklillyphotography.comMediumCorporate, retail, and commercial clients for murals. Cliental attending art exhibits, higher price point A scientist turned photographer, Mark uses his 20+ years in the meteorological field to predict the optimal weather conditions and extraordinary light that will produce powerful photographs.Header menu items don’t always resizeOKAY
Menu organized using hamburger menu but still includes all the menu options from desktop version
Images work in portrait and landscape mode to view photographs more clearly depending on orientation
Overall design is simple but slightly dated in appearance
Not all features are optimized for mobile, such as the logo auto re-sizing making the logo appear too small
GOOD
Excellent use of photo carousel on homepage. Illustrates samples of photographer’s work
All relevant sections have been categorized and sub-categorized to organize information
Social media links included conveniently at the top of the page
Website does not include shopping section or ability to purchase items
Not all typography choices are accessibleNEEDS WORK
The menu options at top of page give customers adequate options to start user journey on website
No clear indication of direction customer should take on website. User flow lacks directional cues
Process pain point— Customer may like photographer’s work but they are not given the opportunity to purchase items on the website
Financial pain point— No indication of pricing, may turn away potential customers who are unsure of whether this photographer’s work is in their price point
OKAY
Many navigation options given in top menu to give customers adequate choice of what they would like to view
Can navigate the site fairly easily from top menu
No cart or checkout button
Organization of navigation is confusing as there are many categories and subcategories. Naming of these categories could be clearer
OKAY
Branding matches aesthetic of website
Great use of photographic work as images on website
Typography used throughout needs work as it is inconsistent (mix of different font types, sizes, weight, etc.)
Logo on header is cut off on some pages
GOOD
Pictures on the homepage make good use of showing off work samples
Other photography examples all categories under subcategories in menu
Small description of photo and where it was taken captured under photos
Formatting of these pictures could be better implemented to elevate quality of the work
NEEDS WORK
No section dedicated to talking more about the photo, giving a thoughtful description, or any background information
OKAY
Dedicated “Bio” section that shows gives a quick synopsis of the photographer and his work
“Bio” section could be longer, or share some of his accomplishments
No credentials or work experience listed to highlight at what level he is in his career
With more information about his background, customers could feel more connected to him and his brand
NEEDS WORK
Not able to purchase photography merchandise on his website
Must reach out via email or social media to inquire about project and pricing.
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Richard Wong
Photography
DirectOnline, Bay AreaFine art landscaping and nature photography$$$$https://www.rwongphoto.comSmallThose who enjoy photography and have a higher disposable income, willing to buy high-quality photographs at a fairly high price pointFine art photography for homes, hospitals, and offices. Also sells prints. GOOD
Well organized layout of website
Dynamic visuals that illustrate high level photographer is at in his career
Sub-categories are organized using picture buttons as well as text
Serif and Sans serif fonts are both being used. Not consistent and disrupts cohesion of page
words are scattered GOOD
Search page with keyword search function
Cart and Checkout directly on website
Extensive gallery and work samples
Great use of storytelling for background on the photograph
Design of elements such as typography and buttons is lacking
Search functionGOOD
Menu items are labelled well, allowing customers to find right what they need from any page
Each gallery item incudes description, pricing information, as well as the ability to add items to your cart
Users can start on different points in the website and still efficiently get to the endpoint of the user flow
Design of product pages and cart needs improvement
GOOD
Good use of menu and keeping categories simple and easy to find
Search feature allows customers to find photographs through a keyword search
Mobile navigation should be condensed into a hamburger menu
OKAY
Consistent branding across platforms and with design choices
Better branding could make photographs stand out more

GOOD
Work samples presented throughout website
Deeply thought out images along with small paragraph description about the work. Gives insight into artist’s thought process
A more elevated web design would better showcase this photographer’s images in the best way
OUTSTANDING
Each photograph has small section describing more about the piece
Blog and details about the photographer’s adventure to getting the great photographs displayed in his gallery
“Bio” sectionBuilt-in cart and checkout
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Buhay PhotographyIndirectOnline, Bay Area based out of San FranciscoAll-around photography and videography $$https://www.buhayphotography.comMediumIndividuals looking for event photography, commercial/business. Good for average person as price points are in the low-mid range Able to offer modern cinematic style photographs and videos. Specialized in event photography but has experience with shooting many different types of photos including, landscape, astrophotography, concerts, real estate, etc. Prints available. Landing page conveys cinematic experienceOUTSTANDING
Optimized for mobile experience. Items adjusted to suit phone display and items re-size accordingly
Photos arranged to fit screen size
Use of hamburger menu to hide subcategories and keep menu looking organized
Some text on homepage isn’t aligned correctly. All other pages look fine
OUTSTANDING
Modern and clean design of website in combination with typography and photos that are aligned with branding
Compelling visuals throughout website act as portfolio of work
Good use of menu organization
Interaction from page to page feels fluid and goes with the expected user flow
GOOD
Photos include description underneath that screen readers could easily pick up
Color contrast meets accessibility guidelines
Search function would help to find items buried under all the subcategories
OKAY
Home page acts as starting point and includes all pertinent info and categories for finding page you need
Call-to-action to purchase items is not given under items that are being sold in specific “store” section.
Takes more clicks to get to appropriate page after finding product client wants to purchase
GOOD
Can easily find menu items through navigation at top of page
Long list of subcategories under “gallery”. Could use a different background color for the background of every second word to visually separate the long list of items
“Gallery” page should utilize picture buttons to help customers more easily find what they are looking for
OUTSTANDING
Eye-catching visuals establish photography brand’s style of photography across the website
Excellent placement of text and icons
Simple yet effective design of website that matches the logo appearance
Photographer artfully presents work samplesNEEDS WORK
One line description of photo
Only location and subject are described in caption below photo. Could be elaborated upon


NEEDS WORK
Many testimonials provided on website that help validate work quality
Portfolio of work is extensive and gives potential customers an idea of what they would get
No background given about the photographer and their experience
Shop section located at top
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Alexander Lull
Photography
Direct Online, Bay Area Landscape photography
and portraits
$https://www.lullphotography.comSmall Individuals who enjoy photography and are looking for wall art at affordable prices Fine art photography, wall art available on different frames, panels, and canvas. OKAY
Storefront presents well and is easily understood at a glance
Gallery photos designed in a creative way
Overall store and gallery page website aesthetic is modern and all parts are cohesive together
Home page is different from other pages in the typography, logo, styling, etc.
Appears that two separate sites have been merged together
User flow is messy as you can’t return to the original home page
OKAY
Better mobile layout on homepage than desktop
Menu items located in ideal location across bottom and are in most used thumb positions
Same issue as desktop, two sites merged together and can’t return to original homepage
GOOD
Shopping and cart option to checkout
Favoriting items— ability to like photos and come back to the ones you’ve previously liked
Product description page is thorough and well organized. Makes use of text and picture buttons to help customers easily find what they’re looking for
Doesn’t include about me page, or anything that lists more about the photographer
GOOD
Use of universal icons in top header for profile and cart
Modern, easy to read font
Color contrast of foreground and background items meets accessibility standards
The implementation of text descriptions under photos could help screen readers
Users have the inability to return to the homepage NEEDS WORK
Concise menu options
There are 2 different menu options provided because two websites have been merged together
Home button on store website doesn’t bring you back to original homepage
Two separate websites together GOOD
Gallery section gives great examples of the photographer’s work
High quality images displayed on website
Captioned descriptions underneath photos or more information on the product page would give more information to customers
NEEDS WORK
Blog allows customers to understand the photographer’s creative process
No text descriptions underneath photos
No information on the product page describing more about the photo’s background
NEEDS WORK
+ About page gives general synopsis of photographer
No credentials, work history, achievements or alike are listed
About page is only accessible from starting home page and can’t be returned to once off the original landing page
Does not provide information about expertise or testimonials
Design of shopping section matches branding
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Dave Gordon: Traveling
Photography
DirectOnline, Bay Area based out of San Francisco Photography from traveling: nature and landscape photography$$https://www.travelingphotographs.comSmallIndividuals looking for good quality home decor Landscape photography that can be printed on canvas or paper. Can also be purchased on Etsy, giving customers ease of knowing it is a secure website for making purchases GOOD
Simple yet effective website and storefront
Best of works included as samples on website
Excellent visuals accompanied by text descriptions of how the photos were taken
Not enough color contrast between text in forefront and background image
OUTSTANDING
Great use of gallery to organize content on mobile while allowing to view individual images in fullscreen
Use of hamburger menu to simplify menu
Sticky menu used when scrolling down page
Links to social mediacolor contrast between text and background image on homepageGOOD
Excellent user flow as one can start an action from any page and easily access other pages without returning to the homepage
Few steps to complete user actions
Purchasing items takes you off platform, which takes longer and more steps to complete user action of purchasing
OUTSTANDING
Menu items are clearly labelled and well named to suit the action users are looking for
Sticky menu allows one to navigate easily from page to page without scrolling back to the top
OUTSTANDING
Consistent branding across platforms and with design choices
Branding colors kept to a minimum to not distract from colorful photography being showcased
All typography is kept the same throughout the website through sizing and weight of titles and body
GOOD
“Photography” section has work samples and is sub-categorized to make finding photos easier
Grid view of work keeps items organized
Descriptions underneath every photo give insight into the photograph and how it was taken
Thumbnails of work should be larger
Could include separate page for work samples to illustrate a “best of” works in a more traditional portfolio format
Hover text descriptionsOKAY
About section gives a great overview of photographer and how they came to become a photographer
No section providing credentials or past projects
Website missing testimonials or information on expertise that would influence customers to choose to buy their work
Product page and checkout are taken off platform
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