Round 1 Group D Judging
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+ Great intro. Mood buildup. Decent pacing.
- Everything past the first verse was sorely lacking in sync/coherence/concept.
This had a lot of potential, the intro is especially well done in both terms of mood and story buildup. As soon as the first chorus hits though, everything sort of goes downhill. Scene selection didn't do any justice to your concept (especially since it was mostly swooshing through the air with angry faces, then maybe a couple of titans and then Mikasa having some sort of shocking revelation, wat?) Your idea from the intro basically went to waste as soon as the chorus hit.
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+ Good use of Titan's really motion-filled footage
+ Very high energy
+ Feels very empowering
+ Sync during refrains is hit or miss..but when it does hit, it's pretty awesome
- The video doesn't really go anywhere, and the ending very lackluster
- Lyrics could have been used more effectively. There's a fair amount of kind of random scene selection
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+During the choruses there was solid editing -- A pretty good action video overall -- looked great
- During the middle Verse the editing kind of lost place
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+ Fitting source
+ Mood/atmosphere
+ Scene selection
- Lacked focus
- Too much action; not enough character development
Overall: I really think Shingeki was a great choice of source for this song. You have some nice sync at times but I feel like any possible character development gets sidetracked by all the titan fighting. So yeah, if you focused a bit more on the story this video would be a lot more enjoyable.
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+ Great source combo
+ Nice mood
+ Pretty good sync
- Random buttswinging without a reason
I was excited when I saw this video started. Then the chorus was an explosion of random butt swining AoT stuff with no reason. This would make such an amazing origin story/character profile of Eren. Watching him train and work his way on to the battlefield, chasing his passions to do his best and save the ones he cares about. The editing itself isn't bad and the mood is spot on but when I think about what this video could be, it makes me sad.
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