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Last Name, First NameType the paragraph you wrote in the space below.The claim answers the “big question” The claim is a complete sentenceThe claim includes a “because” statement that introduces the evidenceThe evidence supports the claim The evidence is clearly introducedSources of the evidence are clearly cited The reasoning explains how the evidence supports the claimThe analysis is a novel idea and not a repetition of the evidenceTransitional phrase is used to introduce paragraphAppropriate capitalization and punctuation
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Campbell,Taye´ShaunFirst of all people with power are able to marginalize and exploit people with different identities because the Republicans try to put the Democratic people to the side and try to exploit them and take stuff from them so they can benefit from it. In document 3 the Spanish people turned the Native Americans people into slaves and take over their land. Document 3 was created in 1994 by Jerome R. Reich and it was a quote from a book called Colonial America. In Source 3 it said, ¨ in practice they were brought and sold, worked (literally) to death , and forced into virtual slavery. That quote supports why people with people are able to marginalize and exploit people with different identities because the Spanish people were taking over the Native Americans land and turning them into slaves.NoYesYesNoYesYesNoYesYesYes
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Escalante MatthewIn the first place, people can marginalize and exploit other people with different identities. In document 3, it shows that the Natives are being treated disrespectfully. The document was from a quote from a book titled, "Colonial America", and was written by Jerome R. Reich (1994). The document states,"....In practice they were bought and sold, worked (literally) to death and forced into virtual slavery. To summarize, people killed, and used native people to their advantage for themselves (Like Slavery), which is called exploiting, and they were treated inhumanely, which is also called marginalization. NoYesNoNoYesYesYesYesYesYes
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Hernandez, JavierTo begin with, people with power obviously have more advantages than people without power. So since they have more power they are able to make people forget about a certain group or person, also they able to control people are in need of things that the person with power has and are in hopes to get the things they need. The Spanish took advantage of the native americans by making them do things the Spanish had to do for themselves. This document is a quote from a book called "Colonial America, it was created by a guy called Jerome R. Reich on 1994. A quote that supports my claim is "Although the Spanish government always insisted that Native Americans were free citizens who must be treated humanely, in practice they were bought and sold, worked (literally) to death, and forced into virtual slavery," This shows how people with power are able to marginalize and exploit other people because the Spanish had freedom the native americans were forced into hard labor/slavery and took advantage of them because spaniards made them do their plantations and mining. The Native Americans were just hoping to get some freedom but sadly they never did.YesNoNoYesYesYesYesYesYesNo
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Johnson, NefertitiHow are people with power able to marginalize and exploit people with different identities? Well, people with power marginalize and exploit people with different identities by enslaving, opressing, and validating them. In the book "In Defense of the Indians", written by Bartolome De las Casas, People could travel without an compass or chart because the boats guided itself only by the trail of the dead Indians who had been thrown off the Spanish ships. For 11 years, over 2 million Indians have been killed and only about 2 thousand Indians were left and that number shrank and shrank day by day because the Indians commited suicide and killed their babies so the wouldn't be come slave. This document came from a book titled "In Defense of the Indians" written in 1521 by Bartolome De la Casas. In the document it says, "During these eleven years, more than 2 million souls have perished and only two thousand survivors are to be seen, and even this number is shrinking day by day as the survivors succumb to the rigours of a life of slavory", meaning that over 2 million people died and many kill themselves so they don't become slaves. That right there shows how people with power marginalized and exploit people with different identities, how would you feel to be in there shoes?YesYesNoNoYesYesNoYesNoYes
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Lopez Carrillo Dorlin LTo begin with how are people with power able to marginalize and exploit people with different Identities. Well people that have power can marginalize people as their slavery by making them do what they want. This document is a quote from a book little, It written in the year 1521 by bartolome de las casas. During these eleven years, more than two millions sold have perished and only two thousand survivors are to be seen, and even this number is shrinking day by day as the survivors succumb to the rigours of a life of slavery. My evidence support how are people with power are able to marginalize and exploit other people with different Identity. This explain Because It explain how people that have power can boss people as marginalize like making them as their slavery making them on the side ore make ore less important.YesYesNoYesNoNoYesNoYesNo
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Mendoza, HerlindaPeople with power are able to marginalized and exploit people with different identities because when people have power they have the ability to control events and the behavior of others. People with power can put others off to the side or make less important, they can also take fair advantage of someone for their own benefit. Native Americans worked for a Spanish overlord called an encomiendero, they worked part time as well as contributed to him a share of the crops they raised for themselves. This document is a letter, Jerome R. created it and was created in 1994. " Native Americans are being exploited by taking fair advantage on their labor. They where bought and sold, worked (literally) to death, and forced into virtual slavery. " This quote proves how people with power able to marginalized and exploit people with different identities because encomiendero had power over Native Americans that were free citizens and that were treated humanely in other words, as slaves.NoYesYesYesNoYesNoYesNoYes
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Mendoza, JuanaFirst of all what I think is that people can do alot of dirty things but. People with power they can exploit and marginalize people by killing them. People from other places did not need compasses to go to haiti because there is already a trail of dead Indians. There were only a little amount of survivors. I got this information is document 1. Document 1 is a quote from a book called In Defence of the Indians by Bartolome De Las Casas made in the year of 1521. In document 1 it says that " a boat could sail from the Bahamas to Haiti without a compass or a chart, guiding itself solely by the trail of the dead Indians who had been thrown from the Spanish ships". This evidence supports my answer because what this quote means is that the Spanish people would of tried to erase what they did so other people wouldn't know that they did horrible stuff there. But also it means that they have killed a lot of people to exploit them with the land.They got marginalized by being killed so no one would know them or just making them slaves.YesNoNoYesYesYesYesYesYesNo
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muhammad faharOne way a person with power is able to Marginalize someone with a different identity than them is by saying '' we are not going to help the homeless''. This is a example of marginalization because they are getting put to the side and their problems are getting put to the side. One way a person with power is able to Exploit someone with a different identity than them is by saying '' you have to work for free ''. This is an example of exploiting someone because it is an unfair advantage and it is only befitting one person and not the other. In document #3 it states that '' Although the spanish government always insisted that native Americans were free citizens who must be treated humanely, in practice they were bought and sold'' . This is a article created by Jerome R. Reich in the year of 1994. One sentence that supports my answer is the quote from the article saying ''they were bought and sold and worked to death and also forced into virtual slavery '' this supports my answer because a person with power was able to marginalize and exploit them because they had more power over them and more advantages. This evidence proves what i quoted because in order for someone to be exploited and marginalized they would have less advantages and less power than the other .YesYesYesNoYesNoNoYesYesYes
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Munassar AhmedFirst, People with Power are able to Marginalize and Exploit because the people with power are able to control events like how the Spanish leader controls the slaves and made them do whatever he told them to do. So the people with Power put the slaves off to the side because they were less important to him. For example the Spanish leader Perished over 2 million people and 2 thousand survivors. This document is about the Spanish leader that Perished about 2 million people and how he made them into slaves. This document came from a quote from a book titled In Defense of the Indians and it was written in 1521 by Bartolome De las Casas. One quote from the document that my paragraph is about is, " During these eleven years, more than two million souls have perished and only two thousand survivors are to be seen, and even this number is shrinking day by day as the survivors succumb to the rigours of a life of a slavery." The evidence that I quoted proves my evidence because the Spanish leader killed over 2 million people and the people can't do nothing about because he has more power over them so he just put them off to the side they were less important to them. YesYesYesNoYesYesNoYesYesYes
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Pablo, Omar Being with this people with power able to marginalize and exploit by forcing the people without power to become slaves. Document #3 talks about how Spanish people able to forced the Native American people to become slaves. The document is a quote from a book called Colonial America, written by Jerome R Reich (1994). One quote from document #3 says "in practice they were bought and sold, worked (literally) yo death, and forced into virtual slavery". this supports the big question because it shows how the Spanish people with power able to marginalized and exploit the Native American by forcing them to become slaves. and treat them unfairly. YesNoNoYesYesYesYesNoNoNo
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Rodriguez AngelThey are able to marginalize and exploit people with different identities because they are in a lower social class or will do the work for any thing because they can't get any other job because of the way they look or act.YesNoYesNoNoNoNoNoNoYes
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Sanderson, JaydaIn addition people are able to marginalize and exploit people with different identities because if you identify as a white male you are able to make any black or brown person feel like this just by dialing 911. Black and Brown people are constantly marginalized, theyŕe all ways in jail cells, homeless, killed, and on the streets. In one of the documents I analyzed about what happen when the Americas was ¨discovered¨, the Spanish marginalzed the Africans by giving them smallpox and just letting their dead bodies lay across the city. They took their homes, made them slaves and give up their food to feed the people invading their space. In the document it said ¨In April 1520 Spanish forces landed in what is now Veracruz, Mexico, unwittingly bringing along an African slave infected with smallpox.¨ This evidence from the document proves my point because, in that statement it says how they had and African slave, that is infected with smallpox. African didnt have this disease, the people who invaded them did, The Africans had no way of fighting it off because it was just exposed to them. This is how people with power are able to marginalize and exploit people with different identities.NoYesYesNoYesNoYesYesYesYes
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Smith,AlexusAs you can see, people with power are able to marginalize or exploit people because people with power can show up with guns and money and leave you with nothing.People with power can change your income to zero because they have the ability to control your life, job and money because of their social class and power. As it states in document 3 it talks about how people on boats went to America and saw Native American and then exploit their lands to gain more control and power over the other lands.This document was written by Jerome R Reich and was written in 1994.In document 3 it states ,''Once they took the Natives land the next thing to do is exploit there labor.''This means that people who were living on lands that had material that other people wanted would turned them into slaves and make them work for their benefit.YesYesYesNoYesNoNoYesYesYes
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Torres, MadiyahTo begin with people with power marginalize and exploit people with different identities by creating stereotypes about them, lie about their freedom, and or not get justice for harm done to them. Document #3 is a great example of people being exploited because the Spanish exploited the Native Americans by buying and selling them into slavery, claiming that the Native Americans were "free citizens", and were working the Native Americans like animals. This document is from a book, called Colonial America. This book was written by Jerome R. Reich, which was made in 1994. "Although the Spanish government always insisted that Native Americans were free citizens who must be treated humanely, in practice they were bought and sold, worked (literally) to death, and forced into virtual slavery." My evidence connects with my topic sentence because the Native Americans were mistreated by the Spanish.YesYesYesYesNoYesNoYesYesYes
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Valdes,CrystalThe people with power which in this case was the Spanish since they were able to turn them into slaves, were able to marginalize them in which the indians had to be put off to the side because of the diseases , they exploited them because they wanted to get wealthier and powerful. Many things can be used to support this can be used in the Document#1 were it says that they say "day by day as the survivors succumb to the rigours of a life of slavery- quote shows an example of power" Document# 2 supports the marginalization which is 50,000 to 300,000 people died so therefor to provide less deaths they had to be of to the side.The exploit part in Document#1 "to bring him large quantities of gold,this being the main object of the expedition". Document #1 was created by Bartolome De Las Casas, in 1521 quotes from a book, Document #2 is an article created by Heather Pringle in June 4th. "Once the conquest of the native americans had been completed, the next task was to exploit there labor" "Epidemics soon became a common consequence of contact" "This official was expected to Christianize....crops raised for themselves"The spanish were able to exploit them as it says in the quote and marginalize them with disease brought by the Spanish they were able to have control over them because they made them do things that they didn't wanted to do they controlled them. YesYesNoYesYesYesNoYesNoNo
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Vasquez MiguelPeople are able to with Power are able to Marginalize people with not so much Power because well they have more power than they do so people would follow the one with more Power so the person with all the Power will exploit it all on the people with less Power than him or her. " A boat could sail from the Bahamas to Haiti without a compass or chart, guiding itself solely by the trail of the dead Indians who had been thrown from the Spanish ship" this quote is an example of people using their Power and Exploiting it and the Spanish are marginalizing the Indians by doing this. This document is about the Spanish enslaving the Indians and how the Spanish use all of their Power to turn the Indians into slaves and how many of them were killed and this document was written by Bartolome De Las Casas and it was created in 1521. This quote proves how people are able to Marginalize others because the Spanish did this with Power without Power they wouldn't be able to do this and they Marginalized the Indians because they enslaved them and killed them and tortured them like if there lives were more important than others the Spanish put the Indians off to the side and didn't care what would happen to them so the Spanish Exploited all they had and did this to the Indians.NoYesYesNoNoYesYesYesNoYes
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Diaz Garcia, Evelyn First of all people with power are able to marginalize people with different identities by paying them less, treating them differently than other people with power, taking their jobs/homes away, etc. On the earlies 1503 Spanish people and Cortez exploited the Native Americans with a system called the Encomienda. This system made Native Americans work but they wouldn't pay them a lot. This document is a quote from a book that Jerome R Reich wrote in a book on 1994.On the quote it said that "The next task was to exploit their labor. For this purpose the Encomienda system was instituted in the West Indies as early as 1503".This quote proves my claim because it's telling us how Spanish people would use a system to exploit Native Americans and make them off to the side by making them work really hard but paying them less.This is also a good example to show how people with power would exploit those who don't have power.
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Smith,AlexusPeople are able to control people because they have more money and have the power to do anything they want to you.A person with this power are able to make your life,taxes and family hard to take care of.In the Document Christopher Columbus had power over people because of the resources the native did not have and gave them a illness.
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lorenzo rigobertoTo begin with in document 2, spanish people and cortez infected the aztec with smallpox and they had power over the aztec people because almost all aztec people were dying that how cortez killed and exploit them with his own benefit and have more power. the document is an article and created by heather pringle, it was created on june 4th 2015. One quote is " by mid october the virus was sweeping throughout city decipted above in images from the florentine codex, a document written by a 16th centuary spanish friar, killing nearly half of the population." cortex did not have much power but he was smart to leave blanckets and other stuffs to kill the aztec because half of the population died and take over the land.
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Munassar AhmedFirst, People with Power are able to Marginalize and Exploit because the people with power are able to control events like how the Spanish leader controls the slaves and made them do whatever he told them to do. So the people with Power put the slaves off to the side because they were less important to him. For example the Spanish leader Perished over 2 million people and 2 thousand survivors. This document is about the Spanish leader that Perished about 2 million people and how he made them into slaves. This document came from a quote from a book titled In Defense of the Indians and it was written in 1521 by Bartolome De las Casas. One quote from the document that my paragraph is about is, " During these eleven years, more than two million souls have perished and only two thousand survivors are to be seen, and even this number is shrinking day by day as the survivors succumb to the rigours of a life of a slavery." The evidence that I quoted proves my evidence because the Spanish leader killed over 2 million people and the people can't do nothing about because he has more power over them so he just put them off to the side they were less important to them.
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Wiley,MArquishaTo begin with, Power is the ability to control events and the behaviors of other people. In order to marginalize someone you has to have power. And second, Exploit means to take advantage of someone of your own benefit. People with power are able to marginalize and exploit people with different identities because they have more power and weapons and are able to control them.
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Smith,AlexusAs you can see, people with power are able to marginalize or exploit people because people with power can show up with guns and money and leave you with nothing.People with power can change your income to zero because they have the ability to control your life, job and money because of their social class and power. As it states in document 3 it talks about how people on boats went to America and saw Native American and then exploit their lands to gain more control and power over the other lands.This document was written by Jerome R Reich and was written in 1994.In document 3 it states ,''Once they took the Natives land the next thing to do is exploit there labor.''This means that people who were living on lands that had material that other people wanted would turned them into slaves and make them work for their benefit.
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Ramos,TanisTo begin with people with power are able to marginalized and exploit people with different identities because they can alot of have for someone who has less than them. In document three the Spanish were going to exploit the Native americans for their labor and they had to share the crops with the encomendero they the natives grew all for themselves. This document is a source from the internet, Jerome R Reich wrote it, and it was written in 1994. in document three, it states "This official was expected to to christianize and "civilize' them; they in turn were to work part time as well
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FranquiTo begin with people with power are able to marginalize and exploit people with diffrent identities because the people with power upper class.They can say anything and also make up stuff about lower classes then them and their identities.A long time ago the at christopher columbus first came to north america.He and his army exploited and marginalized indians because they were diffrent and he wanted their land.I got this from a source called "In Defense of the Indians" made by a priest called Bartolome De Las Casas in the year 1521."More than two million souls have perished and only two thousand survivors are to be seen,and even this number is shrinking day by day as the survivors succumb to the rigours of a life of slavery."This is evidence that my claim is right because.The indigenous people were either killed.Which most of them where.Or they would work as slaves.Like mining farming and doing anything that the people tell them to do.They could not do nothing because they didn't have power like the other people.People with power can exploit and marginalize people because they will alway have advantages.They care about their self people of their level and higher.When it comes to people lower to them. They don't care and say their useless and make stuff up about their identities that people like them will actually believe because listening to us is useless to them.
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