ELA 8 Narrative Rubric for Goobric Student Revised
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Narrative Focus RL.1, W.3a, W3bCharacters (2+) w/ personality traits
Specific setting
Conflict
* Describe the characters look like.
* Make sure you explain the name of the volcano or city.
* The volcano must start erupting on the 1st page.

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Organization W.3b, 3.2 dTransitions between ideas
No “and then” or "so"
Events are in order and they make sense
Ending ties up all loose ends & Resolution
*Add 4 transition words
* You must almost die a couple of times.
* The climax must be huge. You cannot just be safe. Who saves you?
* Conversation after you live or die.
* Do you ever return to the place again?
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Elaboration of Narrative RI.6, RH.6, RST.6Many accurate facts from the sources incorporated into the story through:
description of setting and events
details of setting and events
dialogue between characters
Add facts like this:
*Volcanoes erupt when pressure builds up under the earth.
* A dormant volcano has not erupted in many years
* Eruptions can be lava flows, hot ash, or rocks.
* Volcanoes can knock down entire forests
* Volcanoes like Mauna Loa can be 13,677 feet above sea level
* Earthquakes happen with volcano eruptions.
* A tsunami is a large ocean wave caused by underground earthquake
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Language and Vocabulary L.3aA lot of descriptive words, details, dialogue
See, hear, touch, taste, feel words.
*Describe the colors you see.
*What noise does the eruption make?
*The air is full of ashes. What does it taste like?
* How afraid are you?

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Conventions L.2a-b0-5 Spelling, punctuation, capitalization errors.First read your essay out loud 5 times. Each time you read aloud, make at least one change. Then use Grammarly to fix your critical errors and minimize your advances errors.
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