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Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used hanging indent errors, Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed.

Average high school writing

Taylor and Francis. 2019. = not the author; Citation numbering error

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources), Citation numbering error

Used credible, academic sources., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Not all sources were credible, academic sources., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year., Encyclopedia are not allowed as sources. NEVER use them for college nor me.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed., Date missing

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List., Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Cited References-Error: improperly used first names of authors., Author missing., BMJ info missing - multiple authors.

Average high school writing

Some errors in References.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., NO - if the source was used more than once the citation number was NOT properly repeated.., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., You need to see me so you don't make these mistakes on the final paper.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Not CSE

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period.

Used credible, academic sources.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed., Missing container

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used hanging indent errors, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors.

Containers should be capitalized.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Missing container, 2. 8. Nature Climate Change, A Milestone Year? Nature Climate. 2015: 6-1; 1. =????

" there are many people, like the sensational Greta Thunberg," - tone is wrong for science paper.
Cite authors, not publishers/containers.

#4 does not match the EU = ERRORS

MANY, many errors

Yes - used 10 citations or more, No. - the paper did NOT properly use superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, YOu did not introduce any of your sources.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed., You need to see me so you don't make these mistakes on the final paper.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Error - superscript not in consecutive order., Multiple source references/citations cannot be direct quotes because two or more sources cannot say the exact same quote. It must be an agreement on an issue that your have summarized.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year., Encyclopedia are NOT allowed in my class for use in an essay., Authors/Titles missing #1, 2

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Author missing., Titles missing

Average high school writing

Error - " regulatory factor 6 (IRF6) gene2,4. " #4 should be #3

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., NO - if the source was used more than once the citation number was NOT properly repeated.., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References List - Did NOT properly use [Internet] and [cited date] and Available from... for internet sources., Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited REferences - improper punctuation of author, Incomplete essay., Missing container

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it.

Not all sources were credible, academic sources., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Missing container

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., NO - if the source was used more than once the citation number was NOT properly repeated.., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Author missing.

Average high school writing

You forgot to provide authors' names for several.

CSE format errors.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used hanging indent errors, Cited References List - incomplete reference, Author missing.

Average high school writing

#1 needs author.
DO NOT abbreviate containers.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Not all sources were credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year., Encyclopedia are NEVER allowed - do not use in college nor in my class.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors.

good overall. You neglected a few issues in your References.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., YOu needed more citations. You must provide proper citation of ALL borrowed information, e.g. second and third paragraphs.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used hanging indent errors, Error - Cited REferences - improper punctuation of author

good CSE formatting except for the names

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources), double period error; also misplaced period.

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Missing container, Missing authors

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Missing container, Author missing.

Average high school writing

Some CSE formatting errors

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources), Multiple source references/citations cannot be direct quotes because two or more sources cannot say the exact same quote. It must be an agreement on an issue that your have summarized.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed., NO "and" in authors.

Average high school writing

Your multiple source citations do not make sense. Two sources cannot have the same quote (unless one of them plagiarized). And how do two sources agree on a work that was conducted on a specific study? So with the exception of 11,12, the other multiple sources citations need clarification.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors.

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors, Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Missing container

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources), Spacing issues. YOu need to space between superscript and the next sentence.

Used credible, academic sources., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., Cited References List - incomplete reference, Author missing.

Average high school writing

Your periodicals require authors. = Format ERROR

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources), CSE errors.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors.

Average high school writing

ERROR: "...prospect of a chilling effect on gene editing." Another case - citation required for quote.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Cited References-Error: improperly used first names of authors., Error - Cited REferences - improper punctuation of author, Author missing.

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year., did not meet minimum sources

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Average high school writing

Missing a source and 2 citations.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed.

Average high school writing

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources), Incomplete essay.

Not all sources were credible, academic sources., NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year., Encyclopedia are not allowed in my class. Don't use them in college, either.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: improperly used first names of authors., Incomplete essay., Missing container, author missing. title missing.

Average high school writing

Encyclopedia are NOT allowed in my class for use in an essay.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Error - Cited REferences - improper punctuation of author

Very good formatting. Watch punctuation of author's names.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Missing container, Author missing.

Average high school writing

The author of your Consensus Study is the Food and Nutrition Board

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited REferences - improper punctuation of author

Average high school writing

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors.

Average high school writing

Citing a novel in a science essay is not appropriate.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used hanging indent errors, Cited References List - incomplete reference, Missing container

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., don't forget the period: burning of coal...” 2 .

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Author missing., Nice inclusion of discussion ntoes.

Average high school writing

Your source #1 needs an author = United Nations Climate Change. So does #5 and #8.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Cited References-Error: improperly used first names of authors., Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed.

Average high school writing

CSE format errors in Cited References.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Cited References-Error: improperly used first names of authors.

Something happened to sources 4,5,6 in the Cited References.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used hanging indent errors, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Missing container

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Good use of discussion endnote. MOST of your containers are misplaced.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., Author missing., Margin errors.

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Good overall CSE formatting.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used hanging indent errors, Author missing.

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When the author and the publisher are the same, they must be listed in BOTH places in the References.

Yes - used 10 citations or more

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed.

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Professors Liu and Wu from the Department of Cardiology and the National Institute on Drug Abuse both discovered that steroids provide an advantage because it is a man-made testosterone, which helps build muscle and it increases the amount of energy a person has1,2. = not worded well. "both" is misleading. = Reword.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors.

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Titles are not capitalized properly.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed.

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See CSE formatting for Reference = many errors

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used hanging indent errors, Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed., Error - Cited REferences - improper punctuation of author, Containers, dates, titles misplaced.

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Improper CSE formatting in Cited References.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., overall well done.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited REferences - improper punctuation of author

ERROR: in the past decades²,³. = the comma should be superscripted.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Multiple source references/citations cannot be direct quotes because two or more sources cannot say the exact same quote. It must be an agreement on an issue that your have summarized.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing - adequate., Quotations are not smoothly transitioned.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed., Missing container

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Be careful: "having to measure blood pressure," - that should be blood sugar

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Missing container

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What is this? = and absorb their energy” (5)3. = DO NOT quote another author's citations.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., NO - if the source was used more than once the citation number was NOT properly repeated.., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources), When you repeat a source, you repeat the number in CSE format.

Used credible, academic sources.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed., Missing container

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Yes - used 10 citations or more, No. - the paper did NOT properly use superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Not all sources were credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors, plural of medium is media

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Missing container

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ERROR = "In the novel Irresistible: The Rise of Addictive Technology " - this is a non-fiction book. Novels are fiction.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Missing container

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Good overall, a few details in error.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources), Spacing issues. YOu need to space between superscript and the next sentence.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used hanging indent errors, Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., Cited References List - incomplete reference, Error - Cited REferences - improper punctuation of author, Missing container, Author missing., Do not abbreviate the container.

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Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited REferences - improper punctuation of author, Missing container

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The text of you essay is fine. Most of your errors are in your Cited References.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Missing container, Author missing., Authorless sources are not allowed. = youtube source & UN

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Error = you have #8 in your References but NOT ion your paper.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Cited References-Error: improperly used first names of authors., Error - Cited REferences - improper punctuation of author, Missing container, See CSE fromatr - many errors.

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ERROR: that occurs during cell division”1,1 - if it's the same source, just a single citation is adequate.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors, Punctuation errors such as: of Zurich, explains overtime bacteria have evolved through

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used hanging indent errors, Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Author missing., YOu are missing several authors.

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Author error: Health | Background Briefings | Antibiotics |

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., NO - if the source was used more than once the citation number was NOT properly repeated.., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing Error - poor grammar

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Cited References-Error: improperly used first names of authors., Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed., Missing container, Author missing.

Missing information. Authors not introduced. EXAMPLE #1 - you neglected the author and did not introduce. Redo ALL if you want a boost.

This is NOT an author/date system. = major error.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources), Spacing issues. YOu need to space between superscript and the next sentence.

Used credible, academic sources., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Missing container

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YOu have no containers in your References. = ERROR

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Excellent work. Good formatting.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors, Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed., Error - Cited REferences - improper punctuation of author, Author missing., Nasa is the author for reference #1.

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Most of your references were NOT punctuated correctly.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors.

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Reference #4 = errors in Capitalization. also #7,

Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Spacing issues. YOu need to space between superscript and the next sentence.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors, Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources), Nicely done.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited REferences - improper punctuation of author, Missing container

Reference #2 = missing container.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Not all sources were credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year., YOu first source is wrong.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Inaccurate REferences. For example: #1 - the URL is not correct.

I do not understand what you mean: "Cancer is arguably the most known medical issue that has not been granted a stable solution. " = unclear.
VERY POOR = "Amy Loriaux relays that, “The oldest recorded case we have was discovered in Egypt from 3000 BC.”1 This refers to a 1.7 million-year-old corpse discovered in South Africa who had cancer in their toe. "???? This does not make sense.

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources), Incomplete essay., End quotation marks go before the superscript and the period.

Not all sources were credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year., Incomplete essay.

The paper did NOT explain a scientific concept.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, The one reference you had was NOT in CSE.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Citation numbering error, Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

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desired effect on the genome2,4. = Your # 4 should be #3.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Minimal or no errors in the Cited References List.

Writing error = "There is a third side to this coin though." = poor metaphor.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: improperly used first names of authors., Error - Cited REferences - improper punctuation of author, Missing container

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Poor CSE formatting - please look at the websites and sample paper.

Missing URLs

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed.

Good CSE Formatting. Good essay.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used hanging indent errors, Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., I do not like abbreviation of journal titles; perhaps next year you can, but this year - DO NOT.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross), Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed., Author missing., Harvard Health Publishing = author; could also be publisher.

ERROR = to scientific findings” (c2019)6. Do not have two different spacing schemes in your paper.

No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used hanging indent errors, Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed., Missing container, Author missing.

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Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., NO- at least 3 of the 5 sources were NOT dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

The Cited References was properly named. Could also use Reference List., Missing container, Author missing.

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Reference 1 missing author. Reference 2 missing container.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing - adequate., parts not worded well, for instance the your statisitcal reports.

The paper explained a scientific concept.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents.

I don't understand: " rheumatoid arthritis as an autoimmune disease that affects around 1% of the population worldwide1. " - how is this common yet affects only 1%? = ERROR.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., No. - the paper did NOT properly use superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Spacing issues. YOu need to space between superscript and the next sentence.

Used credible, academic sources.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used hanging indent errors, Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited REferences - improper punctuation of author, Missing container, Author missing., No "and" for authors.

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NOT CSE = carbon dioxide emissions a year. (3)

Poor CSE format

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Good Punctuation: You correctly placed the period ending the sentence AFTER the superscripted numbers and you did not superscript the period., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Capitalize authors and containers.

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Late - but I did not penalize.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

The Cited References was NOT properly named., Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used hanging indent errors, YOu do not need the state.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it.

Used credible, academic sources., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used regular indents., Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors.

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No - there are not 10 citations in the paper, No. - the paper did NOT properly use superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., NO - if the source was used more than once the citation number was NOT properly repeated.., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Error - superscript not in consecutive order., NO - none of your sources included any multiple sources (at least 2 sources), Multiple source references/citations cannot be direct quotes because two or more sources cannot say the exact same quote. It must be an agreement on an issue that your have summarized., anabolic effects”1 2. = either this is 1,2 which does not make sense because how can two different sources be authoring the same quote. OR this is reference #12 but since you previously only have #1, you missed all the numbers in between. Either way = ERROR.

Used credible, academic sources., NO - the paper did NOT use at least one science book., Incomplete essay.

Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors

The paper explained a scientific concept.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Incomplete essay., Missing container, Why aren't your References numbered to correspond with your in-text unmerals?

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REaLLY? - "Doping can be defined as the consumption of any substance to improve one’s performance." = so if I have a headache and take an aspirin or tylenol so that I can better grade you essay, I am doping. With this definition, aren't most people doping? Taking a vitamin C can be doping because I'm fighting a cold.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources)

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., Yes - the paper cited at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - incomplete reference, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Error - Cited References - Dates improperly placed., Missing container

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See CSE format. many mistyakes.

Yes - used 10 citations or more, Yes - the paper PROPERLY used superscript or bracketed numbers to refer to sources., Yes - if the source was used more than once the citation number was properly repeated., Citation numbering error, Punctuation error: The period ending the sentence goes AFTER the superscripted numbers (the superscript is part of the sentence - not outside of it., Yes - at least one of your citations contained multiple sources (at least 2 sources), Commas as well as periods must also be after the superscipt numeral.

Used credible, academic sources., Yes - the paper used at least one science book., NO - the paper did NOT cite at least two science journals., Yes - at least 3 of the 5 sources were dated this year.

minimal or no writing errors., Writing - adequate.

The paper explained a scientific concept., The paper adopted a proper, academic voice., The science topic was clearly conveyed.

Cited References List - IMPROPERLY used hanging indent errors, Cited References-Error: Punctuation/Capitalization Errors., Author missing., Most os your sources are missing the author. NO authorless sources allowed. YOu must have publication dates as well as access dates.

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Error: “Clustered Regularly Interspaced Short Palindromic Repeats” 1, 6 and - the #6 should be #2 because it is the second unique source.