In hunger unto Food, and...

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9	Editing Notes	Character	Context	sec	Vocal SFX	Narration/Dialogue

10			(JP TITLE: "Tight-Fitting of the Breast") Written by Suitonacat, edited and nitpicked by Nametaken.
12			- When recording, pay attention to the Dialogue and Vocal SFX columns. - Your lines can be easily found by searching (CTRL + F) the first three letters of your character's name. Though, I would recommend reading the narration for further context. - Whenever voice references are given (typically for canon characters), you don't need to mimick them exactly. Mainly aim to capture their personality/"schtick".
13		Rit		Ritsuko Akagi -- Kristin Black
14		Rit	416 words, 82 seconds of vocal SFX
15		Rit	"She's more composed and... emotionally stable than Misato. She does a better job hiding the stress that comes with 'Hey Fight These Monsters Or Else EVERYONE DIES'. But this is a weight gain softcore porn script, anyway. Here she mostly just nags Misato about how much she's been overeating and overdrinking. Play her as a sort of comedic 'straight man' character. Her voice is a little bit lower than Misato's, but not to a massive degree." In the context of this story (previous script, audio), she's the one getting fat here! Compared to Misato, she has a constant, slight disgust toward both herself gaining weight and fatness in general (such as calling Misato a "damn blob" and "flabby-ass"). She won't be particularly happy with what happens in the latter half of this script, and that should be reflected in her general tone.
16		Rit	Voice reference. Also, you've done this character before.
17		May		Maya Ibuki -- Mako-Chii
18		May	77 words, 4 seconds of vocal SFX
19		May	Maya is Ritsuko's assistant and falls under a lot of the traits you'd sort of expect her to have: she's a little younger, much less composed, looks up to her superior, all of that stuff. End of Evangelion (spoilers I guess? this thing's been out for 25+ years) also implies there might be a little something more than just respect here, but it's left vague. This script plays that "is she gay?" aspect up for slight comedic value. She has a noticable attraction to the idea of Ritsuko growing chubby, and tries (poorly) to hide it. Voicewise, she's likely higher in pitch than both Misato and Ritsuko, but lower than Shinji's. She does, however, have a similar level of limp-wristedness to her that Shinji does (at least in this story, anyway).
20		May	For some reason only her JP voice is readily avalible on Youtube, but I'll take it.
21		Shi		Shinji Ikari -- EdenVA
22		Shi	25 words, 0 seconds of vocal SFX
23		Shi	"Wimpy wimpy wimpy. He has his moments, but he gets socially trodded on pretty easily by others. He shouldn't sound like a total emotional trainwreck, but he generally has an air of 'nerviousness' to him. High-ish pitched voice. Discernibly masculine despite the above." Shinji doesn't have much screentime here, but mostly serves the same role here as he did in the previous Misato story (audio), that being Misato's mostly-willing chef. He isn't actively trying to cook anything up for Ritsuko, but when Misato tells him to...
24		Shi	Voice reference. Also, you've done this character before.
25		Mis		Misato Katsuragi -- Aurora Nightigale
26		Mis	111 words, 23 seconds of vocal SFX
27		Mis	"Cool confident woman. I kid you not, her first appearence in the anime is her rolling up in sunglasses and basically telling Shinji 'get in bucko we're going Angel hunting'. She's uptight and professional at work (not in this story! LOL), but laidback and care-free elsewhere, almost detrimentally so. Middling pitched voice." This story takes place after the previous Misato-based story (audio). As such, she weighs something like 2 tons here. Make sure to do that same sort of husky-deep voice as you did near the end of that script, maybe even lean into it more if possible. "Hey, she doesn't look like that!" Suit had an edit on hand, and I'd be remiss not to include it. It is accurate to this story specifically. :^)
28		Mis	Voice reference. Also, your lines from the aforementioned previous script.
45	standard-ish lab ambience. I heckin love le science!!!!	MAY	curiosity, a little astonished!			Wait, So, Misato is just... stuck at that size?
46						...said Maya Ibuki, a technician who served under Doctor Ritsuko Akagi. She had FINALLY worked up the courage to ask why NERV's Operations Director had been absent for weeks on end.
47	coffee can sip before, chair crrk after first line	RIT	"blob" has an extra tinge of disgust. the thought of it makes her cringe and tense up			Yep. That damned blob of a woman. Stuck in her own house. She's got Shinji working around-the-clock to make her even bigger... <brief, 2-3 second cringing shudder...>. She's just indulging in it. Fatass...
48		MAY	that extra "how" is almost stutter-y. you can hear how she's starting to get excited at imagining someone so heavy			And... how... how much did you say she weighed...?
49		RIT	mildly condescending and dismissive			Pf. Good luck finding a scale that goes that high... even if you did, you'd have to roll her onto it.
50	Ritsuko takes a bit of a drag of her cigarette	MAY	"Mm" is brief little squeak, like she's holding herself back from exclaiming about how she'd love it			Mm... yeah, I couldn't imagine...
51		RIT	"MAGI" is said as one word, "MAG" as in magic and "I" as in eye. "MAG-EYE".			I believe the MAGI have enough processing power to calculate how big she is now... assuming you don't start gagging from having to grab her disgustingly-greasy rolls.
52						Ritsuko said, half-joking, half-not. Three of these "MAGI" supercomputers powered the entirety of NERV's headquarters, and she DISTINCTLY remembered having to hold her breath when she had last entered Misato's abode.
53		MAY	still flustered and even more stumbling over her words, mind preocupied			I-... uhm, of course. That s-sounds like a smart idea...
54	fabric-arm whoosh, metal clink as she takes out the sample	RIT	she pauses a few times here in order to put emphasis on certain words/phrases			I got these DNA samples from Misato's beer cans... which I had to nearly pry it out of her sausage-fingers. Even the discarded ones... but I'm going to take it in to be analyzed. Maybe we can find a way to get her drunk, flabby ass back in shape...
55		MAY	this will fade in near the end of ritsuko's line and be immediately proceeded by I NEED TO GO (below)	4	a rising "mmmMMMmmh...!", 4 seconds long
56	clicking of heels as Maya rushes off.	MAY	comically loud, butting into ritsuko's previous line			I NEED TO GO!
57	<pause for humorous effect>. no wacky SFX here. evangelion doesn't have those (mostly)
58		RIT	under-breath, confused as to why Maya is leaving. slight hint that she knows why, but never explicitly stated			Hm.
59		RIT	(canned coffee. it's a thing in Japan)	3	brief liquid slurp, 3 seconds
60	ritsuko returns to working. Siiiiiip, toss, clank in the trash.		"U C C" is spaced out, but it's really "UCC"			Ritsuko took one more sip of the can before tossing it into the trash. U C C canned coffee was ALWAYS her go-to work-beverage. She was SO used to it... that she hadn't noticed the recent label added to the back. Tiny, faint in color, entirely in katakana. If one could find it, they would realize the same label had materialized on Misato's beloved Yebisu beer...
61	fade transition. clock ticking? cricket chirp? something to indicate time passing
62						Blue light from half a dozen screens blared her face. The only lights in the room.
63		RIT		20	chewing, eating. this is used as ambience through the next passage of narration
64	Typing clacky noises while she eats					What had started as a brief analysis bloated into multiple all-nighters. Although her wallet remained plump from her binge of cheap vending-machine snacks, her trash bin was stuffed full of crunched-up cans and chewed-through plastic.
65		RIT		2	light belch. 1-2 seconds. vocalize this if needed, as I have plenty of SFX on hand
66						Work had consumed her, and she, too, had consumed in excess. Although Ritsuko hadn't yet noticed, the top of her skirt filled out to a pleasing, plump hill. Thickest JUST below her navel, occasionally squeezing between her thighs.
67	chair CRRrrk
68						...which wobbled gently as she walked.
69		RIT	eyes half-open, in the middle of THE GRIND. spoken quietly and tired-ly (as you could've guessed)			uugh... Tired again...
70		RIT		3	brief slurp, 3 seconds
71						Another sip of coffee, further sealing her fate.
72	fabric stretching
73						Ritsuko looked down, finally feeling how tight her clothes had gotten.
74		RIT	contemplating to self			Mmhh... I didn't eat that much... did I?
75						She gave her belly a grab. Out of all the results she had gotten from her research session, this was likely the worst one yet. Rather than a bloated, solid paunch... it was squeezable. Pliable. Fatty.
76		RIT		3	a despaired shudder, 3 seconds
77	pause for more squishing
78		RIT	"not letting myself get like misato" has a certain level of venom to it. not like "I HATE YOU" or anything, but more "shit I really don't want this to happen"			It's straight to the gym once this is all over... I am not letting myself get like Misato.
79	chair swivel					She went back to work, prodding over the data, running a third round of analysis on the computer.
80		RIT		3	brief slurp, 3 seconds
81						A splay of half-empty coffee cans sat at the right-hand of her desk. A side project that was ALSO worked on...
82	slurpy drinking and crunchy eating noises in the background here	RIT	these will both be used to fade out the scene	20	misc biting/crunchy-chewing, 10 seconds misc slurping, 10 seconds
83	SLOOOW fade transition
84	clack clack clack of heels walking into NERV HQ
85		MAY	cheery, hasn't yet noticed anything different about ritsuko yet...			Good morning Miss Akagi! I heard you pulled another all-nighter.
86		RIT	waking up. you are DEAD (figuratively)	5	slow, weary "mmmmhh...". 3-5 seconds?
87	cloth rustle. slow					Ritsuko raised her head from the desk.
88		RIT	eyes 3/4-shut. sigh is particularly long (2-3 seconds). almost thinking she has that sort of no-sleep rasp in her voice?			(sigh...) I did. Mostly by accident. These are really bad for my sleep schedule...
89						Rubbing the back of her neck, she vaguely held up a coffee-can and giving it a groggy peer. Her daze rendered her OBLIVIOUS to Maya's beet-red flushed face.
90		RIT	coughing and "urrp" (like a belch) are both vocal SFX, obviously. she's a little weary, and hesitant to admit that she's gained weight			Maya... (cough, cough...) (UUrrp...) ...w...we should test one of these coffee cans. Along with the Beer Misato has been drinking... if this is anything to go by, I'm worried they might have the same new "ingredient".
91						Ritsuko said whilst giving her love-handle a slight, but firm shake.
92		MAY	she noticed.			Uh... yeah(!), hahaa...
93						Staring headlong at Ritsuko's navel, Maya bit her thumb-nail just shy of cracking it in half. The flabby gut surrounding it spilled over her stretched waistband.
94	fabric stretching	RIT	she realizes her bra is tight and readjusts it	6	a couple mild "mmh..."s of discomfort. 6 seconds total?
95						Ritsuko gave the briefest glance downward at her hefty breasts, threatening to split her blue button-up in half. In an attempt to be subtle, one hand moved downward and kneaded the bulging flesh back in.
96	Ritsuko sipping coffee in the bg here	MAY	you can tell she's really tensed up			You said... Major Misato was completely, totally immobile...?
97		RIT				Yes, and I would much rather avoid her fate.
98	beep boop and typing as Ritsuko keys up the Magi	RIT		3	longing siiigh... 3 seconds total
99		MAY	high-strung			And you're saying... the same sort of stuff is in your coffee?
100		RIT			AHEM!	That's my... current line of thinking, yes. I'm hoping the Magi will have confirmation of it in a few hours.
101	siiiiip from Ritsuko again	MAY				Then... shouldn't you stop drinking them?
102	clattering of can as she tossed it aside	RIT	you are mid-sip when maya says the previous line. aim for that "a little bit almost came out my nose" type sound	4	almost spittake-y choke sound, then a clear-mouthed annoyed "nnnh...". this should be about 3-4 seconds total? pause between the two sounds
103		MAY	quiety, traily. you're embarrassed (in a cutesy funny way) for even bringing it up			Ehh...
104	fade transition once more. this is the final scene!
105		RIT	<SCENE: YOU ARE ENTERING MISATO'S APARTMENT IN A HUFF>
106	door slamming open	RIT	slightly deeper voice from here on out. she weighs more now! S should be held for a quarter to half second before the sharp "ATO". very slight, but noticable. also keep "misato"s pronunciation in mind- "mee-sah-toe" -> "mii SAHTO"			MISssATO!
107						Ritsuko rushed through the apartment door, her gut hanging and swinging around as her footsteps braked to a hard-stop.
108		RIT	she swipes her head to the side. where is miasto?			...Misato?
109		SHI	should be clear shinji was initially a little startled seeing ritsuko bust in the room! he quickly disarms upon seeing who it is, though			Heyyy again... Miss Akagiii... Misato's in the living room. Has been for a while... you know she can't exactly move... right?
110		RIT	stern			Yes... yes. Sorry if I scared you. I just need to speak with her- it's an immediate, urgent matter.
111		SHI	he doesn't quite understand, but he also figures "sure, why not"			Suuure...
112	clack clack of heels as she walks away. these should sound heavier than last time!
113	door clicking and swinging open. fat falls out. misato is occupying practically the entire room at this point
114		RIT		3	a sound of surprise-disgust. you open a door only for a large puddle of fat to come spilling out- Ritsuko isn't into this and thinks it's gross! 3 seconds?
115	breathy-death-hiss					The nose-piercing beer-stink still struck Ritsuko hard as ever. Not helped by the sight of aluminum cans littered across both Misato and the room... the two were nearly indistinguishable at this point. The cauldron inside Misato continually bubbled and gurgled away, its sound reverberating around all four walls.
116		MIS	<CONTEXT: YOU ARE FAT ENOUGH TO FILL NEARLY AN ENTIRE LIVING ROOM IN THE SAME FASHION AS A CUP OF WATER. HALF OF THAT WEIGHT IS FROM BEER ALONE- YOUR TONE OF VOICE SHOULD ALWAYS BE AT LEAST A LITTLE SLURRY HERE!>
117		MIS			all of your lines here are in this sort of deep voice- muffled by fat squishy cheeks. I'm sure you noticed the edit by suitcat! (guy who wrote the first draft of this script) do NOT pronounce it "rizz" btw please please please	Heyyy again... Ritszz! Come on in... grab some FOOD and some BOOOOOOOZEee...!
118		RIT		2	a quieter "eugh..." sound. somewhat comparable to the last, but still distinct
119						Ritsuko sneered, pushing back some of Misato in order to get within speaking distance.
120		RIT	still maintaining that little bit of formality. she contrasts with misato being: 1. a FAT slob 2. a fat SLOB she also gets interrupted at the end of the line			Major Katsuragi. Apologies again for our little spat with the beer cans, but after running some DNA analysis on them, I concluded that--
121		MIS	overly casual, almost slurring over yourself. she isn't taking this very seriously.			They're makin' me fat? Blubbery? (pffeheh...) soft and doughy? Hungrier than ever...?
122	pause for comedic effect
123		RIT	ritsuko forgot that misato doesn't really give a shit about losing weight			Well... yes... but- I primarily looked at how addicting they are. I don't think the old Misato would've let herself go this far after all, right?
124		MIS	light laughter/chuckling			(phff hff ffh...) ...you're gonna tell me about letting yourself go?
125						Misato stretched a flabby wing out, her extra-plus-sized index finger circling in the vague direction of Ritsuko's exposed belly. It was spilling out over her pants and tumbled down to her knees, much like Misato's had only a few months ago.

Editing Notes

Character

Context

sec

Vocal SFX

Narration/Dialogue

(JP TITLE: "Tight-Fitting of the Breast")

Written by Suitonacat, edited and nitpicked by Nametaken.

- When recording, pay attention to the Dialogue and Vocal SFX columns.

- Your lines can be easily found by searching (CTRL + F) the first three letters of your character's name. Though, I would recommend reading the narration for further context.

- Whenever voice references are given (typically for canon characters), you don't need to mimick them exactly. Mainly aim to capture their personality/"schtick".

Rit

Ritsuko Akagi -- Kristin Black

Rit

416 words, 82 seconds of vocal SFX

Rit

"She's more composed and... emotionally stable than Misato. She does a better job hiding the stress that comes with 'Hey Fight These Monsters Or Else EVERYONE DIES'. But this is a weight gain softcore porn script, anyway. Here she mostly just nags Misato about how much she's been overeating and overdrinking. Play her as a sort of comedic 'straight man' character. Her voice is a little bit lower than Misato's, but not to a massive degree."

In the context of this story (previous script, audio), she's the one getting fat here! Compared to Misato, she has a constant, slight disgust toward both herself gaining weight and fatness in general (such as calling Misato a "damn blob" and "flabby-ass"). She won't be particularly happy with what happens in the latter half of this script, and that should be reflected in her general tone.

Rit

Voice reference. Also, you've done this character before.

May

Maya Ibuki -- Mako-Chii

May

77 words, 4 seconds of vocal SFX

May

Maya is Ritsuko's assistant and falls under a lot of the traits you'd sort of expect her to have: she's a little younger, much less composed, looks up to her superior, all of that stuff. End of Evangelion (spoilers I guess? this thing's been out for 25+ years) also implies there might be a little something more than just respect here, but it's left vague. This script plays that "is she gay?" aspect up for slight comedic value. She has a noticable attraction to the idea of Ritsuko growing chubby, and tries (poorly) to hide it.

Voicewise, she's likely higher in pitch than both Misato and Ritsuko, but lower than Shinji's. She does, however, have a similar level of limp-wristedness to her that Shinji does (at least in this story, anyway).

May

For some reason only her JP voice is readily avalible on Youtube, but I'll take it.

Shi

Shinji Ikari -- EdenVA

Shi

25 words, 0 seconds of vocal SFX

Shi

"Wimpy wimpy wimpy. He has his moments, but he gets socially trodded on pretty easily by others. He shouldn't sound like a total emotional trainwreck, but he generally has an air of 'nerviousness' to him. High-ish pitched voice. Discernibly masculine despite the above."

Shinji doesn't have much screentime here, but mostly serves the same role here as he did in the previous Misato story (audio), that being Misato's mostly-willing chef. He isn't actively trying to cook anything up for Ritsuko, but when Misato tells him to...

Shi

Voice reference. Also, you've done this character before.

Mis

Misato Katsuragi -- Aurora Nightigale

Mis

111 words, 23 seconds of vocal SFX

Mis

"Cool confident woman. I kid you not, her first appearence in the anime is her rolling up in sunglasses and basically telling Shinji 'get in bucko we're going Angel hunting'. She's uptight and professional at work (not in this story! LOL), but laidback and care-free elsewhere, almost detrimentally so. Middling pitched voice."

This story takes place after the previous Misato-based story (audio). As such, she weighs something like 2 tons here. Make sure to do that same sort of husky-deep voice as you did near the end of that script, maybe even lean into it more if possible.

"Hey, she doesn't look like that!" Suit had an edit on hand, and I'd be remiss not to include it. It is accurate to this story specifically. :^)

Mis

Voice reference. Also, your lines from the aforementioned previous script.

standard-ish lab ambience. I heckin love le science!!!!

MAY

curiosity, a little astonished!

Wait, So, Misato is just... stuck at that size?

...said Maya Ibuki, a technician who served under Doctor Ritsuko Akagi. She had FINALLY worked up the courage to ask why NERV's Operations Director had been absent for weeks on end.

coffee can sip before, chair crrk after first line

RIT

"blob" has an extra tinge of disgust. the thought of it makes her cringe and tense up

Yep.

That damned blob of a woman. Stuck in her own house. She's got Shinji working around-the-clock to make her even bigger...

<brief, 2-3 second cringing shudder...>. She's just indulging in it. Fatass...

MAY

that extra "how" is almost stutter-y. you can hear how she's starting to get excited at imagining someone so heavy

And... how... how much did you say she weighed...?

RIT

mildly condescending and dismissive

Pf. Good luck finding a scale that goes that high... even if you did, you'd have to roll her onto it.

Ritsuko takes a bit of a drag of her cigarette

MAY

"Mm" is brief little squeak, like she's holding herself back from exclaiming about how she'd love it

Mm... yeah, I couldn't imagine...

RIT

"MAGI" is said as one word, "MAG" as in magic and "I" as in eye. "MAG-EYE".

I believe the MAGI have enough processing power to calculate how big she is now... assuming you don't start gagging from having to grab her disgustingly-greasy rolls.

Ritsuko said, half-joking, half-not. Three of these "MAGI" supercomputers powered the entirety of NERV's headquarters, and she DISTINCTLY remembered having to hold her breath when she had last entered Misato's abode.

MAY

still flustered and even more stumbling over her words, mind preocupied

I-... uhm, of course. That s-sounds like a smart idea...

fabric-arm whoosh, metal clink as she takes out the sample

RIT

she pauses a few times here in order to put emphasis on certain words/phrases

I got these DNA samples from Misato's beer cans... which I had to nearly pry it out of her sausage-fingers. Even the discarded ones... but I'm going to take it in to be analyzed. Maybe we can find a way to get her drunk, flabby ass back in shape...

MAY

this will fade in near the end of ritsuko's line and be immediately proceeded by I NEED TO GO (below)

a rising "mmmMMMmmh...!", 4 seconds long

clicking of heels as Maya rushes off.

MAY

comically loud, butting into ritsuko's previous line

I NEED TO GO!

<pause for humorous effect>. no wacky SFX here. evangelion doesn't have those (mostly)

RIT

under-breath, confused as to why Maya is leaving. slight hint that she knows why, but never explicitly stated

Hm.

RIT

(canned coffee. it's a thing in Japan)

brief liquid slurp, 3 seconds

ritsuko returns to working. Siiiiiip, toss, clank in the trash.

"U C C" is spaced out, but it's really "UCC"

Ritsuko took one more sip of the can before tossing it into the trash. U C C canned coffee was ALWAYS her go-to work-beverage.

She was SO used to it... that she hadn't noticed the recent label added to the back. Tiny, faint in color, entirely in katakana.

If one could find it, they would realize the same label had materialized on Misato's beloved Yebisu beer...

fade transition. clock ticking? cricket chirp? something to indicate time passing

Blue light from half a dozen screens blared her face. The only lights in the room.

RIT

chewing, eating. this is used as ambience through the next passage of narration

Typing clacky noises while she eats

What had started as a brief analysis bloated into multiple all-nighters. Although her wallet remained plump from her binge of cheap vending-machine snacks, her trash bin was stuffed full of crunched-up cans and chewed-through plastic.

RIT

light belch. 1-2 seconds. vocalize this if needed, as I have plenty of SFX on hand

Work had consumed her, and she, too, had consumed in excess. Although Ritsuko hadn't yet noticed, the top of her skirt filled out to a pleasing, plump hill. Thickest JUST below her navel, occasionally squeezing between her thighs.

chair CRRrrk

...which wobbled gently as she walked.

RIT

eyes half-open, in the middle of THE GRIND. spoken quietly and tired-ly (as you could've guessed)

uugh... Tired again...

RIT

brief slurp, 3 seconds

Another sip of coffee, further sealing her fate.

fabric stretching

Ritsuko looked down, finally feeling how tight her clothes had gotten.

RIT

contemplating to self

Mmhh... I didn't eat that much... did I?

She gave her belly a grab. Out of all the results she had gotten from her research session, this was likely the worst one yet.

Rather than a bloated, solid paunch... it was squeezable. Pliable. Fatty.

RIT

a despaired shudder, 3 seconds

pause for more squishing

RIT

"not letting myself get like misato" has a certain level of venom to it. not like "I HATE YOU" or anything, but more "shit I really don't want this to happen"

It's straight to the gym once this is all over... I am not letting myself get like Misato.

chair swivel

She went back to work, prodding over the data, running a third round of analysis on the computer.

RIT

brief slurp, 3 seconds

A splay of half-empty coffee cans sat at the right-hand of her desk. A side project that was ALSO worked on...

slurpy drinking and crunchy eating noises in the background here

RIT

these will both be used to fade out the scene

misc biting/crunchy-chewing, 10 seconds

misc slurping, 10 seconds

SLOOOW fade transition

clack clack clack of heels walking into NERV HQ

MAY

cheery, hasn't yet noticed anything different about ritsuko yet...

Good morning Miss Akagi! I heard you pulled another all-nighter.

RIT

waking up. you are DEAD (figuratively)

slow, weary "mmmmhh...". 3-5 seconds?

cloth rustle. slow

Ritsuko raised her head from the desk.

RIT

eyes 3/4-shut. sigh is particularly long (2-3 seconds). almost thinking she has that sort of no-sleep rasp in her voice?

(sigh...)

I did. Mostly by accident. These are really bad for my sleep schedule...

Rubbing the back of her neck, she vaguely held up a coffee-can and giving it a groggy peer. Her daze rendered her OBLIVIOUS to Maya's beet-red flushed face.

RIT

coughing and "urrp" (like a belch) are both vocal SFX, obviously. she's a little weary, and hesitant to admit that she's gained weight

Maya...

(cough, cough...) (UUrrp...)

...w...we should test one of these coffee cans. Along with the Beer Misato has been drinking... if this is anything to go by, I'm worried they might have the same new "ingredient".

Ritsuko said whilst giving her love-handle a slight, but firm shake.

MAY

she noticed.

Uh... yeah(!), hahaa...

Staring headlong at Ritsuko's navel, Maya bit her thumb-nail just shy of cracking it in half. The flabby gut surrounding it spilled over her stretched waistband.

fabric stretching

RIT

she realizes her bra is tight and readjusts it

a couple mild "mmh..."s of discomfort. 6 seconds total?

Ritsuko gave the briefest glance downward at her hefty breasts, threatening to split her blue button-up in half. In an attempt to be subtle, one hand moved downward and kneaded the bulging flesh back in.

Ritsuko sipping coffee in the bg here

MAY

you can tell she's really tensed up

You said... Major Misato was completely, totally immobile...?

RIT

Yes, and I would much rather avoid her fate.

beep boop and typing as Ritsuko keys up the Magi

RIT

longing siiigh... 3 seconds total

MAY

high-strung

And you're saying... the same sort of stuff is in your coffee?

100

RIT

AHEM!

That's my... current line of thinking, yes. I'm hoping the Magi will have confirmation of it in a few hours.

101

siiiiip from Ritsuko again

MAY

Then... shouldn't you stop drinking them?

102

clattering of can as she tossed it aside

RIT

you are mid-sip when maya says the previous line. aim for that "a little bit almost came out my nose" type sound

almost spittake-y choke sound, then a clear-mouthed annoyed "nnnh...". this should be about 3-4 seconds total? pause between the two sounds

103

MAY

quiety, traily. you're embarrassed (in a cutesy funny way) for even bringing it up

Ehh...

104

fade transition once more. this is the final scene!

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RIT

<SCENE: YOU ARE ENTERING MISATO'S APARTMENT IN A HUFF>

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door slamming open

RIT

slightly deeper voice from here on out. she weighs more now!

S should be held for a quarter to half second before the sharp "ATO". very slight, but noticable. also keep "misato"s pronunciation in mind- "mee-sah-toe" -> "mii SAHTO"

MISssATO!

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Ritsuko rushed through the apartment door, her gut hanging and swinging around as her footsteps braked to a hard-stop.

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RIT

she swipes her head to the side. where is miasto?

...Misato?

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SHI

should be clear shinji was initially a little startled seeing ritsuko bust in the room! he quickly disarms upon seeing who it is, though

Heyyy again... Miss Akagiii... Misato's in the living room. Has been for a while... you know she can't exactly move... right?

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RIT

stern

Yes... yes. Sorry if I scared you. I just need to speak with her- it's an immediate, urgent matter.

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SHI

he doesn't quite understand, but he also figures "sure, why not"

Suuure...

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clack clack of heels as she walks away. these should sound heavier than last time!

113

door clicking and swinging open. fat falls out. misato is occupying practically the entire room at this point

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RIT

a sound of surprise-disgust. you open a door only for a large puddle of fat to come spilling out- Ritsuko isn't into this and thinks it's gross! 3 seconds?

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breathy-death-hiss

The nose-piercing beer-stink still struck Ritsuko hard as ever. Not helped by the sight of aluminum cans littered across both Misato and the room... the two were nearly indistinguishable at this point. The cauldron inside Misato continually bubbled and gurgled away, its sound reverberating around all four walls.

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MIS

<CONTEXT: YOU ARE FAT ENOUGH TO FILL NEARLY AN ENTIRE LIVING ROOM IN THE SAME FASHION AS A CUP OF WATER. HALF OF THAT WEIGHT IS FROM BEER ALONE- YOUR TONE OF VOICE SHOULD ALWAYS BE AT LEAST A LITTLE SLURRY HERE!>

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MIS

all of your lines here are in this sort of deep voice- muffled by fat squishy cheeks. I'm sure you noticed the edit by suitcat! (guy who wrote the first draft of this script)

do NOT pronounce it "rizz" btw please please please

Heyyy again... Ritszz! Come on in... grab some FOOD and some BOOOOOOOZEee...!

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RIT

a quieter "eugh..." sound. somewhat comparable to the last, but still distinct

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Ritsuko sneered, pushing back some of Misato in order to get within speaking distance.

120

RIT

still maintaining that little bit of formality. she contrasts with misato being:

1. a FAT slob

2. a fat SLOB

she also gets interrupted at the end of the line

Major Katsuragi. Apologies again for our little spat with the beer cans, but after running some DNA analysis on them, I concluded that--

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MIS

overly casual, almost slurring over yourself. she isn't taking this very seriously.

They're makin' me fat? Blubbery? (pffeheh...) soft and doughy? Hungrier than ever...?

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pause for comedic effect

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RIT

ritsuko forgot that misato doesn't really give a shit about losing weight

Well... yes... but- I primarily looked at how addicting they are. I don't think the old Misato would've let herself go this far after all, right?

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MIS

light laughter/chuckling

(phff hff ffh...)

...you're gonna tell me about letting yourself go?

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Misato stretched a flabby wing out, her extra-plus-sized index finger circling in the vague direction of Ritsuko's exposed belly. It was spilling out over her pants and tumbled down to her knees, much like Misato's had only a few months ago.