Name of presenter being evaluated
|Title of presentation||Delivery score||Content score|
Audience Awareness score
Commendation: These are aspects of the presentation you really liked! Record at least TWO.
Recommendations: These are aspects of the presentation you would like to see improved! Record ONE.
|10/20/2015 12:56:57||sydney schultheis|
Madeline, Brandon, Justin
Your presentation helped me realize what Mt.Denali is and some interesting facts. I really think it is cool how it was one of the tallest volcanoes.
I think that maybe you could have been more of more prepared for the whole thing, you can maybe write not a script but guidelines for speaking.
|10/20/2015 12:57:03||Alexia Francisco|
Madeline, Brandon, & Justin
I liked how you explained that president Obama named it back to Mt. Denali. I also like how you knew the plates off the top of your head.
I would like if you added more information instead of just waiting for the slide to change.
Justin, Madeline, Brandon
This presenation was helpful because they all listed down the websites they used to find information for their presentation.
They can improve on having an answer fro each slide.
|10/20/2015 12:59:22||Mathilda Zumwalt|
Madline, Brandon, and Justin
it sounded really interesting because I might want to vist it one day and the park that might be there.
I wish you had made nore eye contact
brandon,justin and madeline
I like how they made a model out of really cheap materials instead of spending $20.
|10/20/2015 12:59:35||Jakob Samson||Madeline||Mt. Denali||Rookie||Rookie||Novice|
I really like how they put all their people talking. They were fast
not looking on the screen
|10/20/2015 12:59:40||Ishita Patel|
Madeline, Brandon, Justin
We liked your model and how you explained to us most of the info.
The presentation could have benefited if you all were a little more confident. It would have made the presentation more enjoyable, and also would have helped us understand your information more.
|10/20/2015 13:06:55||kaden||brandon||mount donaily||Skillful||Rookie||Skillful||faster|
i like it but the bonderies need to be found
|10/20/2015 13:07:00||Juliana Redclift|
Miles R, Alexia, and Enya/Anh
Your presentation helped me realize that models don't always have to be made of clay.
I was cinfused when you started to talk faster, so I would suggest that you slow down if you are feeling nervous.
|10/20/2015 13:07:22||Jakob Samson||Enya, miles R, Alexia||Fernindina||Skillful||Skillful||Master|
They new what they were going to say. Also they did it in time.
Mentioning that it's made out of candy because people went crazy.
|10/20/2015 13:07:45||Jayden Freidt|
Enya, Alexia, and Miles R
I really like the audience awareness. I love their model.
I think they should talk slower.
|10/20/2015 13:08:03||Jewel Vijay|
Enya. Miles R., and Alexia
Your presentation helped me realize to know a lot about your place
You could e put some more interesting facts.
|10/20/2015 13:08:09||Jewel Vijay|
Enya. Miles R., and Alexia
Your presentation helped me realize to know a lot about your place
You could e put some more interesting facts.
Ishita, Tiffany, Catherine, Amelie
|Alexia, Enya, Miles R.||Fernandina Island||Skillful||Master||Skillful|
I liked how you answered questions without hesitation. We also liked how you clearly said everything.
You could have looked at the audience a little more.
|10/20/2015 13:08:38||Sienna Neff||Enya, Miles, and alexia||Ferinanda Island||Skillful||Skillful||Skillful|
I really liked the model
I liked the info
I think they should have stayed more with the slides,
|10/20/2015 13:12:00||kaden||miles r||fernindina island||Skillful||Skillful||Skillful||nice||good|
|10/20/2015 13:13:20||kaden||jayden||3 sisters||Master||Master||Skillful||like the facts||let jayden talk|
Sydney, Alexandra, and Jayden
|The three sisters||Skillful||Skillful||Skillful|
They spoke clearly and they didn't pause during sentences.
They are good and I didn't see anything that needed to be improved.
|10/20/2015 13:14:31||Miles Thompson|
Jayden Freidt, Alexandra Rozmarin, and Sydney Shultheis
Your presentation helped me realize more about The 3 Sisters. Your idea about The 3 Sisters sounded really interesting to me because there are 3 people although Jayden isn't a girl.
The presentation could have benefited from letting Jayden talk a little more, so your audience could easily understand Jayden.
|10/20/2015 13:14:41||Daniela Rios|
|The Three Sisters||Master||Master||Master|
Your reashearch helped me find out that the three sisters are not one whole volcano.And what was very intresting was that its a transform boundary.
I was confused because the timing was a bit off so i was like "um the slide just change and i have no idea what its about."
Tiffany, Ishita, Catherine, Amelie
Alexandra, Sydney, Jayden
I like how you guys included lots of information. I also like how you guys kept a calm and a good voice.
Maybe next time you guys could include everyone equally while the presentation
|10/20/2015 13:15:07||Kai oliva|
|The Three Sisters||Skillful||Skillful||Skillful|
I realized that you spoke clear and loud so the audience can hear you.
I did not like how you did not share your slides and time equally
|10/20/2015 13:15:39||Enya/Anh Do|
Alexandra Rozmarin Syn
|The Three Sisters||Skillful||Skillful||Skillful|
I really liked how you didn't hesitate, mumble, or say umm while presenting. I also thought it was interesting how the glaciers were able to erode the volcano.
I recommend you to use more eye contact as well as have ALL the presenters speak.
|10/20/2015 13:16:28||Nicole Jacobsen|
Alexandra, Jayden, and Sidney
|The Three Sisters||Master||Master||Skillful|
I loved Your slides and your model.
I loved the pressentation but I think you should have not had two simmimilar slides .
|10/20/2015 13:20:46||Justin||Sean||Mt. Chasta||Rookie||Skillful||Rookie|
Your work let me see what it is made of. It also lets me see how it was formed.
It would've been better if you stopped looking at the paper. And made more eye contact with the audience.
Sean, Riccardo, and Kaden
The model looks like the image. The images were good
The timing on the slides and speaking
Sean, Riccardo, and Kaden.
|Mt. Shasta||Master||Skillful||Master||I like your topic.|
I like to see you talk more about the land.
|10/20/2015 13:21:49||Jessica Stroud||Riccardo, Sean, Kaden||Mt Shasta||Skillful||Rookie||Rookie|
I wonder what other interesting facts you could've put in the slides.
You could of kept better time.
|10/20/2015 13:22:00||Miles Rivers||Sean, Riccardo, Kaden||Mr. Shasta||Rookie||Skillful||Rookie|
I like how you guys got to the point. I also liked how you went fast.
Maybe Sean could talk more.
|10/20/2015 13:22:15||Alexandra Rozmarin|
Riccardo, Sean, and Kaden
The key idea I am taking away from your presentation is that Mount Shasta is a really interesting volcano. I found that the volcano only erupted 800 years ago very interesting because that isn't a long time ago.
I recommend that you memorize a little bit more of the script.
|10/20/2015 13:22:16||Frank 6B||Riccardo, Sean, Kaden||Mt. Shasta||Skillful||Skillful||Master|
I like how the presentation had the citations of where they got their information.
I like the pictures that were used.
Try to have more eye conatct...
|10/20/2015 13:27:22||Sydney Schulteis||Ishita, Tiffany||Kilmanjaro||Skillful||Master||Skillful|
I loved how much information you got out you, I really learned a lot. I also love the legend you put in there that was really cool.
One thing that you could improve on is how talk you fast because at some points I could not understand.
|10/20/2015 13:28:51||Alexia Francisco||Ishita & Tiffany||Mt. Kiilimanjaro||Skillful||Master||Master|
I liked how you added in the legend. I also like how you described everything, you added a lot in that time.
I wish you had talked slower, especially in the legend part because it was difficult for me to understand you.
|10/20/2015 13:29:07||Brandon||Tiffany||mount kilimanjaro||Master||Master||Master|
The thing i liked was that Tiffany didn't look at the presentation.The thing i liked was that Ishita looked at the people and didn't take quiet she talked luoud
I think it will be better to tell us a little more information on the mountains.
|10/20/2015 13:30:38||Mathilda Zumwalt||Tiffany and Ishta||Mt. Kilimanjaro||Skillful||Skillful||Skillful|
Your story about how one of the volcano's stole the other one's cole was very interesting and I loved it!
Overall your Presatation was great and I loved it! There is no need to change it!
|10/20/2015 13:30:42||Sienna Neff||Tiffany,Ishita||Mt. Kibo||Skillful||Master||Skillful|
I loved the legend
I think they did great at presenting
I think they should have said the name more. I did not remember
|10/20/2015 13:31:59||Riccardo||Ishita and Tiffany||Kilimanjaro||Master||Master||Skillful|
I found the legend interesting because it explained a reason why the volcano is like that
|Every thing was good|
|10/20/2015 13:32:51||Jakob Samson||Ishita and Tiffany||Mt. Kilamanjaro||Skillful||Skillful||Rookie|
Were fast enough. Talked clearly.
|10/21/2015 10:17:44||Jakob Samson||Nichole and Sienna||Syberian||Skillful||Skillful||Skillful|
They did not look back at the slides. They were fast.
They did not make eye contact with anyone, she just looked down
|10/21/2015 10:18:20||sydney schultheis||Nicole, Sienna, Frank||The Siberian Traps||Master||Skillful||Skillful|
I loved the facts you used it was very interesting. Also your model is really cool, great job.
Next time maybe you can be a little more prepared and more energetic.
|10/21/2015 10:21:45||Brandon||Frank||Siberian Traps||Skillful||Master||Master|
I liked how the information was detailed and gave a lot of facts.
I wish the mountain could have more ice at the top
|10/21/2015 10:21:48||Jessica Stroud||Nicole, Frank, Sienna||Siberian Traps||Skillful||Master||Skillful|
How you explained everything helped me really understand what it is.
Overall, your work was outstanding. I liked how you were not nervous about the presentation.
|10/21/2015 10:22:15||Enya Do|
Sienna Neff, Nicole Jacobsen, Frank P.
|The Siberian Traps||Rookie||Master||Skillful|
I really liked how you explained lots of information about the topic informing everyone. I also liked how you made your model. It was creative and it looked very nice.
It would be better if you used eye contact. Instead, you just read off the paper.
|10/21/2015 10:22:15||Mathilda Zumwalt|
Nicole, Sienna And Frank
I found that how flat the top of your volcano was very interesting, But I wonder how it got that way.
II would have liked if you had told us how the top of your volcano got so flat!
Sennia, nicole and Frank
I like the topic that you choose to do this project.
I think if you can talk more about this topic.
|10/21/2015 10:23:14||Arjun Vyavaharkar|
Catherine Stauffer/Amelie Liamon
I liked that the presentation was precise. I also liked how the presenters were clear.
I think that the presenters shouldn't repeat themselves often. Otherwise, I understood.
|10/21/2015 10:23:35||Juliana Redclift||Amelie & Catherine||Mt. Fuji||Skillful||Master||Master|
Your presentation helped me realize how much interesting information there is on Mt. Fuji.
You might consider talking a little louder just so it is a little easier to hear you.
|10/21/2015 10:23:37||Miles Thompson||Amelie and Catherine||Mt. Fuji||Skillful||Skillful||Rookie|
Your presentation helped me realize more about Mt. Fuji. Your idea about Mt. Fuji sounded really interesting to me because Mt. Fuji was cool that it was in Japan
I was confused when you were saying listening with your eyes and ears.
|10/21/2015 10:23:39||Tiffany||Nicole, Sienna, Frank||Siberian Traps||Novice||Skillful||Skillful|
I liked how you guys spoke clearly, I also liked how you guys explained it very clearly.
Maybe you guys could look at the audience a bit more!
|10/21/2015 10:23:51||Sienna Neff||Catherine and Amelie||Mt. Fuji||Master||Skillful||Skillful|
I loved how they keep with the slides.
I reallly like how they had the legend.
I think they should have talked about there model.
|10/21/2015 10:23:55||Kai Oliva||Amelie L. Catherine S.||Mt.Fuji||Skillful||Master||Master|
I like how you showed how amazing the mountain can be
Mentioning, you guys nervously laughed through some of the parts of the presentation
|10/21/2015 10:24:46||Jewel Vijay||Amile and catiren||Mt. Fugi||Skillful||Rookie||Skillful|
I liked how there model was and how they put pictures that explained the tittle.
They could have put a little bit more detail in there model with a little bit more snow and a little more real life.
Frank, nicole and sienna
They almost never stopped looking at the croud, there model was good
that they could even out the people talking.
|10/21/2015 10:30:02||Nicole Jacobsen||Joesph||Iceland||Skillful||Skillful||Master|
I loved your presentation and your model. You did a great job!!!
I think that you should have had a little longer sentences.
I like the jifs and pictures, and good eye contact.
find out what the plates were
|10/21/2015 10:30:17||Frank||Catherine and Amelie||Mt.Fuji||Master||Skillful||Master|
The presentation had great images displayed
The facts were very detailed and had great explanations
I think this presentation can be improved if there could be more eye contact with the audience...
|10/21/2015 10:30:19||Riccardo||Amelie and catherenie||Mt. Fuji||Skillful||Master||Skillful|
Your presentation helped me relize that mount fuji is an enormous mountain and is a very beauifull tplace for people to go visit.
If you could look at the audience a little bit more.
|10/21/2015 10:30:39||Alexia Francisco||Joseph Nguyen||Iceland||Rookie||Rookie||Rookie|
I liked how you arrange your presentation. I also liked how you kept the words short and simple.
I wish that you didn't add the text on the presentation because you don't have enough time to read it, it would look better if you added more pictures.
|10/21/2015 10:30:45||Juliana Redclift||Joseph Nguyen||Iceland||Skillful||Rookie||Rookie|
Your work enabled me to see that Iceland is really cool!
I was confused when you talked a little quieter, so I would suggest that you try to talk clearer.
|10/21/2015 10:31:02||Miles Rivers||Amelie, Catherine||Mt. Fuji||Rookie||Master||Master|
I like how you didn't have to stop as much as the other presenters. I also like how you guys didn't need to answer any questions because it has a lot of information.
I kind of wish that you could of made eye contact with the audience.
Your presentation helped me see that over 150 volcanos formed Iceland! It also helped me see it it is the only place where you can stand in between 2 plates.
It would be better if you could speak up louder and if you could look at the audience more.
|10/21/2015 10:33:24||Ishita Patel||Amelie, Catherine||Mount Fuji||Rookie||Master||Skillful|
I liked how you spoke clearly through out the whole presentation. I also liked the amount of information and the type of information you provided
Try to look at the audience more and look at the notes less.
|10/21/2015 10:33:52||Jayden Freidt||Joseph||Iceland||Skillful||Skillful||Skillful|
I really liked the model. I loved the image you used to make your model.
I recommend that you speak up a little.
|10/21/2015 10:37:12||Jessica Stroud||Catherine and Amelie||Mt Fuji||Skillful||Rookie||Skillful|
Your idea to say that it is one of the main symbols of Japan was cool. I don't think anyone else thought of saying that.
I would improve you speed and timing. It was a little fast.
|10/21/2015 10:38:31||Arjun Vyavaharkar|
Jakob Samson, Kai Oliva, And Joshua Santos
The Cascade Mountains/Range
I liked that the presenters were firm. I also liked that the presenters shared most information.
I would recommend that they spend more time presenting more information.
|10/21/2015 10:40:00||Alexandra Rozmarin||Jacob, Joshua, and Kai||The Cascade Range||Rookie||Skillful||Master|
The fact that the cascade has so many volcanoes is very interesting. I really liked all the pictures you chose to represent the information you were saying.
I recommend that you practice the script with the presentation running. You were having a little trouble with that.
|10/21/2015 10:40:16||Ishita Patel||Jakob, Kai, Josh||Cascade mountains||Rookie||Master||Skillful|
I liked how you used gifs to explain the tectonic plate movements. I also liked how you provided all of the mandatory information, and also explained some of the things you said.
You could have tried to time your information so you wouldn't need to wait that much.
|10/21/2015 10:41:32||Jewel Vijay||Kia, jacob. jshua||Rookie||Skillful||Rookie|
I liked your model that you made
Could have spoke more louder.
|10/21/2015 10:42:00||Sydney Schultheis||Juliana, Mathilda||Tambora||Master||Skillful||Skillful|
I really liked your model it was very cool. Also you presentation was AWESOME, it was very interesting, nice puns.
Next time maybe you can tell more of basic information like where it is and stuff like that.
|10/21/2015 10:42:32||Joshua Santos||Joseph N.||Iceland||Rookie||Skillful||Rookie|
I really like e content that you presented. I also like the model that you showed us.
One thing that you can do better is the delivery on the presentation because on some parts, I couldn't understand it completely.
|10/21/2015 10:42:43||Enya Do|
Jakob Samson, Kai Olivia, Joshua Santos
The Cascade Mountains
I liked how your model was very nice and it looked like it was built carefully. I also liked how you didn't use any words and you only used pictures on your presentation.
I recommend that you don't wait for the slide to change and to be more prepared to read.
|10/21/2015 10:42:55||kaden||mathilda, juliana||tambora||Master||Skillful||Master||lots of facts|
thicker area for your model
|10/21/2015 10:43:12||Sienna Neff||Juliana and Mathilda||Mt. Timbora||Master||Master||Master|
I love there enturiasum
I love how they made it fun for us
I think they could have talked about there model.
|10/21/2015 10:43:17||Jakob Samson||Juliana and Matilda||Mt. Tambora||Master||Master||Master|
They were funny as well as telling the right info. They did not.look at the screen behind them/
I did not understand a lot because they talked fast so it was all rushed
|10/21/2015 10:43:40||Alexia Francisco|
Juliana Redcliff, Matilida Z.
I liked how you made it cheesy, it makes people laugh and keep interest. I also liked how it was very positive and enthusiastic.
I wish that you talked about your model.
|10/21/2015 10:43:40||Frank||Kai, Joshua, and Jakob|
The Cascade Mountains
The presentation had great images
Presenters held lots of info
having more eye contact with the audience
|10/21/2015 10:44:11||Amelie Laimon||Juliana and Mathilda||Mt. Tambora||Master||Master||Master|
I really liked the exitement in your presentation. I also enjoyed the facts and the way you phrased them.
I would like to see improved more eye contact. But overall I liked it a lot.
|10/21/2015 10:44:16||Riccardo||Julianna and Matiltha||Mt Tambora||Master||Skillful||Master|
I really liked your enthusiasum for the presentation and how you made it funny,informative and entertaining.
Maybe a little bit less cheesy lines
|10/21/2015 10:44:21||Daniela Rios||Kai,JAcob,Joshua||Cascade mountain||Skillful||Skillful||Skillful|
Your reashearch helped me understand the 6 forms in the cascade moutain.And I also learned that they are part of the ring of fire.
I was confused because it was not the right timing.
|10/22/2015 12:54:52||Juliana Redclift||Daniella & Jessica||Popocatepetl||Rookie||Master||Rookie|
Your presentation helped me realize that Popocatepetl had many, many eruptions.
The presentation could have benefited from you speaking louder, so your audience could more easily hear you.
|10/22/2015 12:55:53||Kai Oliva||Daniela . Jessica S.||Popocatepetl||Skillful||Skillful||Skillful|
I liked how you told us the story so everyone can here.
I also liked how you spoke in a loud and clear voice
Try to not like laugh or anything
Stare and the audience like a teacher
|10/22/2015 12:56:20||Jayden Freidt||Jessica and Daniela||Popocatepetl||Skillful||Skillful||Skillful|
I really liked the myth. I loved the images.
Maybe you could have gone slower.
|10/22/2015 12:56:36||Riccardo||Jessica and daniela||popocatepetl||Skillful||Master||Skillful|
I liked the legend even though it was sad!
|Nothing it was good.|
|10/22/2015 12:56:48||Madeline||Jessica and Danelia||Popocatelpetl||Rookie||Skillful||Skillful|
I liked the story that went with the presentation and I also liked how the slides transitions.
I would like to see them not read from notes and just face the audience.
|10/22/2015 12:57:00||Frank||Jessica and Daniela||Popocatepetl'||Master||Skillful||Skillful|
The myth that was told was very touching...
Kept the audience excited!!
Making your voice louder would make your presentation great!
|10/22/2015 12:57:36||Nicole Jacobsen||Miles Thompson||Mt.Pelee||Rookie||Skillful||Rookie|
I liked the model and the presentation.
I thought you should have been slower.
|10/22/2015 12:57:43||Ishita Patel|
Jessica Stroud, Daniela Rios
I liked how you answered the questions people asked you without hesitating or messing up. I also liked how you organized your information and kind of ordered it.
I think you could have made it better by looking at the audience.
|10/22/2015 12:57:57||Alexandra Rozmarin||Miles T.||Mt. Pelee||Rookie||Master||Master|
I liked that you definitely got all the information. Your slides were also very simple so I could read them easily.
I recommend that you practice your script a little bit more because you went a tad bit too fast.
|10/22/2015 12:57:58||Brandon||Miles T||Mt.Pelee||Skillful||Skillful||Master|
I liked the model and the way it looked with the green grass and the dark trees.
I wish you didn't have to go fast.
|10/22/2015 12:58:23||Kai Oliva||Miles T.||Mt Pele||Skillful||Master||Skillful|
I liked how you gave out info
Try to have fe-zazz and like make the crowd happy, fulfill others dreams
|10/22/2015 12:59:22||Riccardo||Miles T.||Mt. Pele||Rookie||Skillful||Master|
I liked how you got it over with and went fast.d
Next time make use of your time you had a lot of time after you finished.
|10/22/2015 12:59:36||Amelie Laimon||Miles Thompson||Mt. Pelee||Skillful||Rookie||Skillful|
I really liked how you explained a lot about your project. I also liked how your model looked. GREAT JOB!!!!
The presentation was great but maybe have more eye contact and talk a little slower.
|10/22/2015 13:02:20||Tiffany||Jewel Vijay||Nevada Del Ruiz||Rookie||Novice||Skillful|
I liked your model, it seems very one of a kind. I also liked how you listed the simple facts and info to your project.
I think that you could improve on looking more to the different parts of the audience, maybe speak out a bit more! Other than that, you did a good job!
|10/22/2015 13:02:25||Mathilda Zumwalt||Jessica and Daniela||Popocatepeti||Skillful||Skillful||Skillful|
I really like your legand that you told it was very interesting to me
I would have liked it if you didn't keep looking back at the slides and if you didn't talk so fast
|10/22/2015 13:02:33||Sydney Schultheis||Jewel||Nevado del Ruiz||Skillful||Master||Master|
I loved all the facts you had, saying what type of plate it was is very cool.Your pictures really helped me understand you volcano. Your model is SO cool!!!
Next time you can be a little louder and and more information other than that it was really good.
|10/22/2015 13:02:33||Ishita Patel||Jewel Vijay||Nevada Del Ruiz.||Skillful||Skillful||Skillful|
I liked how you spoke about most of the mandatory information. I also liked how you added a fun fact.
I think that you can improve on your volume and inflection.
|10/22/2015 13:02:34||Alexia Francisco||Miles Thompson||Mt. Pelee||Novice||Rookie||Skillful|
I liked how it was short and simple. I also enjoyed how you designed your pages, especially the last one.
I wish you slowed down when speaking, you had a lot of time left and it was difficult to understand you.
|10/22/2015 13:03:11||Miles Rivers||Jewel Vijay||Nevado Del Ruiz||Rookie||Skillful||Rookie|
I like how all of the slides are different colors. I also like how you were being really strong about the presenting.
I wish you could have been more loud and braver about the topic.
|10/22/2015 13:03:20||Jessica Stroud||Jewel Vijay||Nevado del Ruiz||Skillful||Skillful||Rookie|
I like your idea to make the model out of cardboard. It is quicker to make so you have more time to make the slides.
Perhaps you could speak up and be a little louder.