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+Fitting Source Combo
+ Some Nice Scene Selection
+ You didn’t drop :D
-Abrupt beginning/Ending
- Feels rushed
I can tell with this video that you didn’t have much time to edit it and that makes me sad face because it had a ton of potential. I hope that when you do get free time you go back and fix this up because it could be really good. :3
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+ Atmosphere
+ Some good internal sync here and there
+ You didn't drop
- lacks effort
- Pacing is too slow
- Fade in/fade out beginning/ending

Okay, the derpy lip sync made me giggle. But seriously, it just looks like you either ran out of time on this one or just weren't feeling the song. The video feels too slow for the song, and the sync is lacking.
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Too Slow - Sonic The Hedgehog 2014
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+ "Dramatic part had nice impact.
Decent flow.
Relatively easy to understand story."
- "Video starts and ends awkwardly.
Pacing too slow at times."

I think this had a lot of potential that wasn't explored, I'm guessing likely to to do with either lack of time or motivation. It's not bad per se, but there's just so many things that I would have fixed in this that it almost feels like it's a beta that's just unfinished. The general story is easy but it wasn't brought out very well, to me the scene selection felt a bit weak. The pacing felt very slow at times and couldn't keep up with the song and there were areas where the missed sync just really hit. The slower dramatic parts were fairly well edited though, so nice work on that!
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This really is a case of not having enough time. It's got great atmosphere and some excellent scene selection but the sync just really isn't there. The moments after Kamina dies with Simon just down in the dumps and wanders around are well used since it gives our hero a pit to claw himself out of. The lip sync was awkward and unnecessary, and the video didn't really have a beginning or an end but it works pretty well concept wise. For me, it was cool to see you challenged with a song that you've never really worked with before so good on you. :)
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