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TimestampGroup 1: Landon/Juve/Natacha's Chapter PredictionGive feedback to Group 1's chapter.Group 2: Fortune and Cheyenne's PredictionGive feedback to Group 2's chapter.Group 3: Brandi and KimberlyGroup 4: Kristen/OliviaGroup 5: Taylor and ZachGroup 6: Seth/MeghanGroup 7: Sarah/BlairGroup 8: Tiffany and JillianGroup 9: Magen/MaryGive feedback to Group 3's chapter.Give feedback to Group 4's chapter.Give feedback to Group 5's chapter.Give feedback to Group 6's chapter.Give feedback to Group 7's chapter.Give feedback to Group 8's chapter.Give feedback to Group 9's chapter.Select the group who wrote your favorite continuation of the story. Group 10 : Haley/BrittanyGive feedback to Group 10's chapter.Group 11: Jalisa/NicoleGive feedback for Group 11's chapter.
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2/23/2012 13:01:055I like the story, and our ideas.
And I think we are covering a lot of what we wanted to, and it could have been a chapter cause it gives you information and makes it exiting at the same time. And the way we stopped the chapter makes you want to read the next one i think, which was our whole idea.		5I really like the story and their ideas.
And again i like the way they makes you want to read more, by stopping in the middle of an action.
3431343I get kinda lost in the beginning? I can't really find out where we are at in the story, but there are some good points in their story, but I think its a little short maybe? It feels like its only happening over a short time period like a couple of minutes?I like their story, and the ideas, but they maybe gives a little to much of the story in the chapter ? Like it's not bad at all, but it gives you so much new information that there is not to much left for the other chapters.
And I cant really see how we suddenly sees the story from Ben's side? It gives you a little to much information maybe, cause I want to know what happened to him, but this way it kinda just "finish" him. 		I like the way it starts and the way their story ends, but the part in between seems a little short ? I don't really know how to explain it, its like stocked at the same point almost?
But still a good story, maybe just a little to few informations in this chapter. 		Very very short chapter !! Way to short.
And definitely not enough information.		Very short chapter too, but I like the information they are giving in it. They are telling a story that i didn't know I wanted information about, but now after i have read it, I really like it. But still a little short and we are staying in the same place a little to long if you know what i mean.Very long paper :P
Good story, very good start, and good information. I like the way we hear what he's thinking, like we do in the book.
I think it's really good writing the way its so close to the way the book is written.
The ending could have been a little more exciting, but still not to bad.
I like the way they are writing the comic parts up, and the way the are changing the story about Ben, cause i don't think anyone have thought about that, and the ending I want to know more!
A little packed maybe and not enough information in the document. 		Group 2: Fortune and Cheyenne3Good story, a little long maybe? Kinda stay in the same place for a long time, but still pretty good. I like the feelings there is described.
And then the end is a little fast compared to the rest of the chapter.
I like the ending though, just a little different from the rest. Kinda doesn't fit in. 		3Good story, good start, good information but not enough, good ending.
A little more different information would be really good, except for that good story.
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2/23/2012 13:02:102the writing didnt really sound like how the book is4i wanted to read more but it stopped, i thought it was great1341254it doesnt sound like the storyi would read more, kind of interestingit was really goodnot enough information at allgood story so far but not quite enough informationi thought this sounded exactly like the book did and i would love to finish this storyvery interesting i really liked itGroup 8: Tiffany/Julian3sounded kind of like the book, it was a pretty interesting4great story would love to read more
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2/23/2012 13:08:374I liked the story, i think it was interesting and i love their new glade word.4Good story, interesting but felt like they didn't use the dialog like they did in the book.3452453I liked the story but i thought they could put more into it to make it more interesting and made it a little longer.It was good, didn't see anything that needed to be changed.I like everything but the start of the story, i just think they should start it off another way.I think more could of been added, really didn't give enough information to make it interesting.Really liked it, but thought it could of been longer.Everything about this story was great, really made me want to read more. They used great dialog and really had my interest.Good, but still think they could of made it longer and more interesting.Group 8: Tiffany/Julian5I liked the story it was good.5Liked the story, we put a lot of effort into this and i think we did a great job, loved it!
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2/23/2012 13:09:253I feel like they could have possibly used more dialogue because in the actually book, there isn't so much narrating, but other than that, it was pretty good.4Overall, I liked their story, and I liked the ending with Gally turning into a Griever.2434443I didn't seem like their story started from where we left off in the book. I also feel like they could have had more dialogue from another person besides Thomas because he was talking most of the time. And I also didn't see where they had the two new Glade words...I don't think there was anything wrong with their story, I actually think it was pretty good.Their story was okay, but it wasn't very interesting to me...Their story was good, but I think they could have had more dialogue.I like their story and I also liked their two new Glade words.I really liked their story, but I feel like it could have been a little shorter.I liked it, but I think they could have had more dialogue.Group 11: Jalisa/Nicole4I liked their story overall, I didn't really have any problems with it.4I really liked ours overall, and I think we did good.
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2/23/2012 13:10:512Half of the paper is from Ben's point of view. It didn't really pick up where the story left off. I would have added more from Thomas' perspective and added more dialogue. 4I thought it was really good, the scene depicted the book well and was totally different from what I expected it to be. But I thought Gally had already been through the changing before so I was confused on how he could again.4352534This was really different and I really liked how you had some of his memory come back. It also left me hanging and wanting to know more, just like the book.I liked how you incorporated the scene of Ben in the maze, but I would have put a lot more about Thomas in this scene and his thoughtsI really liked how you explained what happened to the girl. Having the interruption left me hanging with the girl and wanting to know more about the gladers. The race against time added suspense.I would have added more detail and and dialogue. I liked how you had Thomas’ thoughts, but you should have had him ask how they caused people to become deaf and blind without killing them. It was an interesting twist and neat idea, totally unexpected. I really liked your scene and how you actually had Thomas go talk to Ben. It made me wonder how Ben got out and how the girl knew Thomas was in danger. I would have added Thomas’ thoughts after Ben said he was coming for him, I would have been terrified and I wanted to know exactly what Thomas was feeling and thinking. After reading everyone else's I wish we didn't throw Ben into the maze because a lot of groups did that. We could have came up with a more creative way to ban Ben instead of something obvious. I did like how we added a dream because no other group had one.The twist of Alby being a bad guy was really unexpected since we all thought he was a trustworthy leader. I would have liked to know how Ben was able to attack the girl and she wake up from the coma. Did he have some supernatural thing about him after the changing or had she woken up before?Group 5: Taylor and Zach3The scene picked up from where the book left off very well. I like how you described the banning scene and all of Thomas’ thoughts. The cliffhanger was great because it made me wonder who of all the people wanted to see Thomas because it seemed like most of them didn’t really like him. 3I didn’t like how you made Alby and Newt willingly leave Chuck and Thomas with the girl. In the book they didn’t let anyone around her. I did like how you made Ben die, it made me wonder how was he dead when he was just locked up and who or what killed him. Also I wouldn’t have made the girl so hostile, I would have thought she would have been more scared or confused, calm even..like she has a secret.
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2/23/2012 13:11:123It was fast paced and not dry, but the writing style didn't quite match the authors. The lack of diverse words makes the chapter seem kind of repetitive.4Good story, good writing style, however it seemed a little off-road from the main story line that was being explored at the end of the previous chapter.2433352Didn't like this one very much, it was a bit hard to follow everything that was going on. Also seemed a bit too fast paced; taking some time to add a little more setting to the story would have been a good idea.Very well written, but seemed a bit hot-cold in terms of pace, using a consistent pace would have been better. Continued from the original and managed to incorporate the girl as well as the banishment.Writing was paced too fast. Taking some time to add more to the setting could have slowed the pace of action a bit and added to the setting and imagery of the scene. Followed along with the original established story line towards the beginning but towards the end seemed to kind of drift off into another.Well written, with a reasonable pace. Seemed a little more morbid than the original text and bit foreboding. Wasn't long enough and could have done with a bit more imagery.A bit on the short side and paced a little too fast for my taste. Written reasonably and followed on the coat tail of the authors style. However the story for this scene seemed a bit random and didn't quite follow where the chapter left off. How did ben manage to get out of the Slammer and why hadn't Thomas been informed of the girls waking.Very well written, follows the authors style also. Good vocabulary and good characterization. Seemed like it was actually part of the book.The difference in writing styles is noticeable between the two, but I liked the round-robin sort of thing they did. However, they didn't capture where the story left off right away, it seemed like a lapse in time had passed.Group 8: Tiffany/Julian3Well written, nice pacing and vocabulary. Lengthy and detailed. Seemed sort of passive in the way they told the scene though, and was kind of dry.3Could have done more with the dialogue to make it more clear who is speaking. Because of the frantic dialogue the story seemed way too fast paced for my taste and all over the place.
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2/23/2012 13:11:503Get someone who did not work with the group to proofread the story to make sure that it completely makes sense. I know we aren't grading for grammatical errors, but because of them, I was very confused. 4I thought it was a good story, but it jumped around a little bit. Kind of confused at what happened near the end with Galley and Thomas before Galley began convulsing. 3343453Good plot line, just moved a little too fast. What made Thomas remember everything about her? And wasn't she asleep when we last left off? I didn't really like how the story went from being narrated around Thomas to being narrated around Ben. It was kind of confusing. They also just kind of left off at the end, with not really a cliffhanger. It just ended. Good idea for the story line. I thought it was a good prediction. Great idea, I just feel that it could have been longer and explained a little bit more than it did. Even though it was short, I thought it had a very good plot to it and it was a great prediction. Very very good prediction. Quite long, but it made it feel like it was a real chapter from the book. I like how it was all in his head as a dream. I didn't understand why the paragraphs were numbered and I just didn't really understand what went on in their prediction. I was very confused. Group 1: Landon/Juve/Natcha4I thought our story idea was pretty good. The details helped make it easier to visualize. 3It was a good story plot, but I felt that it was very busy and kind of confusing towards the middle and the ending.
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2/23/2012 13:11:513The ending is really confusing and Chuck was asleep so how does he just appear saying huh? Sometimes the grammatical errors is what made the story confusing and not really know whats going on.4I could understand what was going on in the story very well, the only thing is misspelling of peoples names in the reading.4443453The story is told in the wrong perspective. It is not told in 1st person in the real book, but you made Thomas speak like he is telling the story.The story is easy to understand, but, in a paragraph you narrate the story to revolve around Ben where in the real story it is narrated around Thomas and shows things happening in his perspective. You also didn't have a cliff hanger, you just let the story end.I liked the story and how it described how the girl got sick. Overall it was pretty good. At the end you didn't need to add what will happen next.The story was too short and needed more information to make it more clearer.The story was short and needed a little more information, but overall it was a really good idea and good plot.It was a really good story and had very good use of words in it. It was easy to understand and even though a little long, it had a lot of detail in it to where you could visualize what was going on.The story is kind of confusing at the end, and a little short. It needs more detail, but your idea is good.Group 8: Tiffany/Julian5I liked our idea and it was clear to me what went on in the story. It had good detail and was easy to visualize what went on in the story.3The idea was good and i like how you made the storys subject around the girl mostly to figure out who she is, but it was kind of confusing in a way and i didnt fully understand what went on.
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2/23/2012 13:12:374The story was good though Ben's point of view was a little out of context I think that might be right. Since the book is only in Thomas' point of view.4I feel we should have elaborated a little more on the part about knowing the girl because it still seemed thrown in there just to cover the topic.4445453The parts about how long it took him to get there or the parts about Alby I feel should have been left out and have the end the same way with Alby like what? It would make the ending more cliffhangery.This story was really great though the point of views changing like they did without any warning was really confusing and seemed jumpy.over all it was a good story it seemed like it was missing something but I am not quite sure what.it did seem a little short but they were not supposed to wrote the rest of the book so that was okay. the way they described Ben's banishment was really well done.I think this was very well done and I now notice that I am using this to describe everyone but I can not help it they all seem that way. Umm the part about Ben was done very well it left you wondering how he got out and who is the girl and the ending was done well and it also sounded like the actual author wrote it.This was very well done, I enjoyed the dream. It seemed to show that there was more to the girl than just a girl and showed that he was somehow connected to her.The format was really confusing though the part they did was well thought out.Group 8: Tiffany/Julian4This was well done and the flow was nice4Well done
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2/23/2012 13:19:314I thought that it was a good story and it kept me interested for the most part. There were a few parts that confused me. 5I though it was very good and it kept me interested to whole time. The ending makes me want to keep reading.5342553I really like this story. I never would have thought of any of that and I think the whole thing was very creative. I really want to know more of what the girl knows after reading that.This story was alright. It didn't really grab my attention. I feel like it kind of jumps around and doesn't really flow together.The beginning of this story kind of bored me. But, when it gets to the part about the boys going to see the dead griever it really grabbed my attention. I really want to know what happens now.I found this story a little bit boring. Nothing really exciting happened and the ending wasn't a cliffhanger so it didn't make me want to keep reading.I thought that our story was very entertaining. It kept me interested and I just thought it was overall a good story. This was just an overall very good story. It had a good story line and a good cliffhanger. I really liked it. This story was okay. It kind of confused me. I am also wondering why it is numbered. Group 7: Sarah and Blair5I really liked this story. I felt like it gave good detail and it really kept me entertained. 2This story confused me for the most part. I didn't exactly understand what was going on while reading.
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2/23/2012 13:23:434It's a great story. Has a few punction's wrong and some grammar errors, should have maybe read it over again to check these things. Other than that its a really good story, keeps me interested.5It's really good I like the ending where Gally is eating slime and than hes turning into the Grevier.5532454I think its good because its something that you would have never had thought would happen. It gives you a whole different view point.I love it. I like the part where He trips over the greiver and turns out its not dead and chases after him and than Thomas, Alby, and Minho goes to find the dead greiver and its not there.I like how they described the girls health conditions, but after that i don't much understand much after it. I understand alittle bit but not alot.I didn't much understand the story. Bits of pieces of it but not a lot could have been more descriptive.I love the ending the most. Because you would'nt expect the girl to be healed up enough or have any energy at all to be there.I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT. Has a lot of good details of the scene and its...Just so awesome I wish or hope this would be the next part of the story.I think its interesting how Ben escapes from the maze and attacks the girl, and surprisingly Group 8: Tiffany/Julian4Needs more description of the scene and whats happen but other than that its good.4I like it. I love the part where the girl is screaming and she is freaking out, of course I would too if I woke up in a strange place and a stranger knew my name.
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2/23/2012 13:26:183The story was interesting, I like it. Although, they needed to use more dialogue like it's used in the story.4The beginning could be a little more exciting, but the end made me want to read more on what happened to Gally. They did a good job with vocabulary and dialogue.5334445I really like mine, although I'm the one who wrote it, it makes me want to read more and more on what happened!Their story was interesting, it could use a little more excitement at the end, but other than that I liked it!The story was good, but I kind of got confused.. Did they go see the girl or did they forget all about her and go straight to the maze? It's did leave me wanting more.I really liked this one, it was interesting and definitely kept me wondering!This story was good, it definitely left me wanting more.They need more dialogue, but other than that I like their story.Their's interested me a lot, they needed more dialogue, but it kept me wanting more.Group 1: Landon/Juve/Natcha3Their's was good, but I wish it would have been a little more interesting. I liked it though.5Their's was really good, a lot of dialogue, and definitely left me wanting more.
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2/23/2012 13:30:184I thought that the next chapter was very good but i think that they needed to do a little more something else with the girl and Thomas; other than that i thought the story was very good and very suspenseful as to what is going to happen next2Fortune and Cheyenne's confused me a little bit I didn't know really what was going on, it just jump around too much4434553I really liked theirs, they explained a lot that happened and how he might know the girl which was helpful. The only problem i had with it was that they didn't really start at where the last chapter ended if they would've done that than I think that it would have been amazing.I truly think that we did okay, I wish we would've have made the ending more suspenseful as to what is going to happen next.I thought that Zach's and Taylor's was creative and I liked what they put at the end for the music and stuff.I really liked theirs it was very descriptive as to what the banishment consisted of and I truly think if it would have been a little bit longer than it would have been fanstatic. They could have went into more detail as to what happened after Ben got into the maze or they could have told Ben the reason he was being banished and had reaction to that.I love theirs i thought that it was really well written and i really want to know what is going to happen; the cliff hanger was great! I loved theirs it was really good. It was okay, i got kind of confused thoughGroup 10: Haley/Brittany5I wouldn't change a thing to this story, it was great.3It was written pretty good and it was creative but there was parts to it that confused me
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2/23/2012 13:31:214A decent story, not the best but follows the categories the teacher needed, I do believe. 4The story had a continuous flow from the last chapter but i felt that it didn't keep me wondering as to what happens next. 3343443It was a pretty decent story. The way they make it seem as if the girl know everything that happens in the glade and the boys don't was an interesting idea.The continuation of the story led pretty good in this chapter. Although at the end of the chapter it wasn't much of a what happens next moment.It was a interesting story. It made good use of the new vocabulary and had a good ending, which actually let me to wonder what will happen next.It was a good and creative story. It had a good story line. I enjoyed it. It was a good story. I liked it. It had some parts that other stories didn't have.Though it was a shorter story than most of the others, it had a good story board.Group 1: Landon/Juve/Natcha4Amazing story :)3Pretty good, but the idea of Ben being dead at the end was at no surprise because we knew Ben was going to have to die anyways.
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2/23/2012 13:37:164I liked how they ended their prediction with the girl remembering Thomas but him not remembering her, it makes me wonder what will happen next.5I really enjoyed this prediction. 4434444I liked this prediction, but I think it would have been better if Thomas wouldn't have remembered so much and the girl told him more.I liked this prediction but I am curious as to why she was able to remember Thomas while in a coma but could not when she woke up???I think we should have been a little more clear during the part with the girl.I liked this prediction but wish that there had been a little more at the end to I really liked the cliff-hanger for this prediction, I wish they would have gone a little further with it so I know what will happenI liked it but since it was all a dream i am kinda confused as to what is going onI liked where they took this with the Alby thingGroup 2: Fortune and Cheyenne3I liked it but wish there would have been more of a cliff hanger3I didn't really understand exactly what was going on.
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2/23/2012 13:38:294This prediction had a good plot to it but it seemed to run on. There were some things in the story that simply could have been left out. But otherwise it had an intriguing story that makes me want to learn more!4This prediction is is well said in the sense of being told just like the actual book. It felt like I was reading the actual book. Although, it did seem to run on. The beginning was a little slow. But overall, I liked this plot!3334444I liked the plot to this story and especially loved the creativity of Thomas's flashback scene. It helped us to peak into who he really is. Although, I feel this story lacked supporting details and maybe should have had a little more to it. But overall, I liked the plot to this prediction.This plot was good but it seemed to run on. I got a little confused and it didn't really hook me from the start. But overall, it came together to make an interesting plot.I liked this plot, although it was very confusing to me. But overall, it had good twists & turns.I really liked this story because it really hooked me in. I kind-of liked the grimness of the outcome for Ben. That was very creative. But, it would have been nicer if it were a little longer and gave more detail.I think this story was nice, and I enjoyed reading it and coming up with it. I feel Blair & I did a good job on it. I feel we could have come up with more supporting detail though.This prediction was good with supporting detail. Although, it kind of dragged on & had a slow start it ended up to be really nice!This story really hooked me. It had a good overall plot. I do feel that it could have been a little longer with more supporting details. But in the end I really liked this prediction.Group 7: Sarah and Blair4I really liked this story! It was really good & hooked me in quickly! It was like I was reading the book!3s
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2/23/2012 13:39:295I loved what they did to create what happens in the next chapter. They made Ben the innocent person and the person to get attacked in this chapter by an griever. While Chuck an Thomas was together not knowing what was going. Thomas felt bad and then checked on the girl in the hospital and she wasn't wake when Thomas got there but woke up and asked him why was she there. It's really good it left me wanting to know more. 4I liked this chapter, cause it was very interesting with what happened it didn't catch my attention as much as the first one did but I still liked it had me going reading more it didn't bore me after all it was pretty good and interesting. 4453444I think this one is good but just was wondering while reading this one where was the girl and why was Thomas looking for her at the beginning? Overall I think this one is good and very different but its good the way ya'll pulled it of its a good next chapter. This chapter is a good one. It's really good that they are making the girl stand out in this chapter a lot, because I wanted to know more about the girl and they mentioned the girl a lot in this chapter. I really think this is a good next chapter of the story. I think it's great that they even gave the girl a name.I really like this one it's really good. I like how it starts off with the girl wanting to see Thomas. He thinks he knows her but cant remember how he knows her and isn't so sure. I like this it as my attention I would like to read more but it ended. After reading it it makes me ask myself questions that I would like to find out about what happens next in this chapter. I really liked this chapter it was good it leaves me wanting to know more.This chapter was okay I didn't like it that much but it was okay. It didn't catch my attention.lmbGroup 1: Landon/Juve/Natacha4o4p
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2/27/2012 12:43:073A lot of grammar mistakes, but the plot was good.4Your writing almost mirrored the authors! Awesome job.3432444Ignoring Alby doesn't seem like something Thomas would do, but interesting play on the story.There was a lot of jumping around, it was a tad bit confusing.The ending, "creepy music" was pretty humorous. Nice job.Was this unfinished? I'm interested to see how this one would have turned out!Ben being crazy is a nice turn of events. I like it.We did pretty good, I am satisfied. I love rhetorical questions in books. Good usage of them.Group 10: Haley/Brittany5Sounds a lot like how the book turned out... right?3Nice way to work in more about the girl, but not give too much.
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2/27/2012 15:59:194I like how yall made a twist with the grievers and their mystery deaths.5Very creative, I would of never thought of slime and stuff like yall did.4443354I like how yall made thomas and the girl both remeber each other and how thomas remembered his age and stuff.I think we did a pretty good job.Very interesting especially the ending.It was interesting.Very good especially the ending part.Best one so far, very good job.Very good work, it was intersting and twisting.Group 8: Tiffany/Julian4Great job, very interesting.4Very creative and interesting.
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2/28/2012 13:02:303It is a little hard to follow, but the plot is interesting. I do not understand why the runners thought they saw a deer.5It sounds like the author actually wrote it. The characters' personalities and attitudes are maintained and the story is very descriptive.3454342It does not leave off at the point of the story where we stopped. It does not make a lot of sense but I love how part of his past is described; the Glade could be some sort of afterlife.I love how so much of the previous Glade vocabulary is used. This was a very impressive story. However, the author writes it from a third person limited perspective, so it should not have followed Ben into the maze and told what was going on. We should only know what Thomas knows.It flows wonderfully from where we left off. I love how a new creature was introduced. I always thought of Thomas as a hero, and the end of the story confirms this.It was creative to come up with what the Gladers did to Ben when they "banished" him. The hook at the opening sentence is very powerful. Also, I love the cliffhanger at the end. But it never says what happened to Ben... did he get banished and come back with wounds?I like how the story reveals that this is not the first time someone has been banished. But, it is hard to tell when Thomas is dreaming, or if it is reality. The cliffhanger at the end leaves me wanting more. It is not finished and the paragraphs are numbered?? I do not see Ben as a vicious attacker, so that was surprising. I also did not expect Alby to be a "bad guy". Group 2: Fortune and Cheyenne4I like how Chuck wakes up Thomas urgently at the end. The story does not have as much dialogue as the book does. 3Why is Thomas going to check on Ben? Also, Thomas would not let Chuck boss him around, which is what he is doing in this story.
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