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Who are you? Who are you giving feedback to? What is one element that you like in this Pin Draft that should BE KEPT - it could be a design element, the font size, the font, the colors - something that is GOOD that should REMAIN. What is one element (or more) of the pin that NEEDS REVISON / SHOULD BE REMOVED? What should be done to improve the design, the legibility at a small size - the Vermont-ness? Do your best to explain why so it makes sense to the designer - remember this is all going to be public feedback. Be proud of your input.
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CoutrayerBergeronI like the mountainsThe moutains should be green, vermont is the green mountain state,

the date should be a different color it blends into the background
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StevensonBergeronKeep the gradient because it looks niceI think the mountain should have some dark gray lines to make it more mountainy
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ZimmermanBergeronpick a color for wordingnothing needs to be removed
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WellsBergeronI really like the USA and how it colored like the American FlagI think it would be improved with more of a specific mountain shape such as MT mansfield or Camels hump. Right now it sorta looks like a random mountain rage... himilayans?
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SimpsonBergeroni like how the colors are very reminiscent of vermont the snow on the midle of the mountain looks kind of out of place
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LittleBergeronKeep the font and colormaybe the mountains because I could not tell if that was snow or more mountains
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StatnicBergeronThe mountain is good, keep it!!!make the year green too, blue on blue looks a bit odd. Add some more vermont details too, it looks kind of plain with just a mountain
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FiozzoBergeronI like how you used the Snow to make the Mountain look as if it gives it DimensionIts sort of hard to see the 2023-2024 wording, maybe make it a different color?
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CompanionBergeronI liked the clouds I think what needs to be revise the size could be bigger
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Ingadottir-MayBergeronI like the placement of the text in front of the mountain and the clouds in the backgroundCenter the mountain more so there isn't empty blue space at the bottom, don't have so many colors for the text
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Ballard-CharbonneauBergeronI like the colors on the "SkillsUSA" you should keep thatThe 2023-2024 looks out of place without a larger border like the other text
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MillerBergeronThe mountain element definently feels like something that should be on a VT pin, just the geometry is a little off, especially on the rightI think that everything should be moved down a little bit, theres a lot of empty space on the bottom
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ThurmanBergeroni like the mountains and the colors, the font feels clean it looks good :))) i wish you luck :))))i think the color of the "USA" could potentially be distracting to the main image, try keeping the words all the same color.
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BullardBergeronI think the background is nice the text might not be legible by the size and the color might blur it out a bit which will cause issues
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Costello-TerifayBergeroni like font color I think you should change the cloud to more round.
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MartinBergeronThe Mountains look good and the font on Vermont fit the vibe.Add some shading to the mountains or snow and add more images.
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UnderhillBergeroni like the lettering and mountains i would like to see more Vermont-ness
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Mabley-WardBergeronI like the design and how simplistic it is. The colors are difficult to see, the background should be a different color, the clouds and the snow should be different colors. The text seems a bit out of place, could there be text int the snow?
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ZimmermanBullardi like the housethe trees need to be changed
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Ballard-CharbonneauBullardI like the 3d elements on the houseI think the snow on the trees looks strange
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LittleBullardkeep the font the color and keep the tree designget rid of the cabin in the back due to the size of the pins and maybe get rid of like a tree or two
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WellsBullardI like the overall style of the pin with the log cabinA lot of muted colors, kinda hard to see the details. Lighter background would help it pop more ( sky and grass. should be snow since theyre sugaring )
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CoutrayerBullardI like the concept its pretty creativeThe colors dont pop out from eachother the trees and barn blend together
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CompanionBullardThe trees are really nice i think you should add clouds in the sky
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StatnicBullardI love the house and the trees, just the image gives very late fall vermont vibesDefinitely fill in the gaps between the branches, maybe make the grass just a wee bit lighter
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Ingadottir-MayBullardI like the composition with the trees, text, and house, it flows very well.Make the colors brighter/more prominent, everything is sort of blending into each other, especially the trees and the house.
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StevensonBullardKeep the chimney it adds to the buildingthe trees have white splotches that don't make sense
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ThurmanBullardthe shape is nice,and i like the idea the trees in front make it feel cluttered and a bit hard to look at, i dont think an inch by inch pin will be able to capture that detail
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FiozzoBullardI like the trees and how much detail they have, I can tell they are Mapel TreesMaybe add something to the ground in front of the house?
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SimpsonBullardi like the trees if thats snow on the trees there should be more looks kind of out of place
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Costello-TerifayBullardi like how simple it is.an out line can make it esear to see with the tree and maple house
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BullardBullardI really like the cabin and the sap collectors on the trees.I think you should add snow to the scene. I'm unsure what the shading is on the trees, it seems like they have leftovers of snow. The trees in the background could also be colored darker so they stand out more in the background.
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BergeronBullardI like the graphic of the cabin, it's done very well. I think this will fit a winter Vermont theme.I think there needs to be more colors in general and colors that represent Vermont.
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Mabley-WardBullardI like the organicness of the trees!What's the white on the trees, is it snow? My eyes go to the middle, maybe put some text there. The colors could be more vibrant. The house doesn't look like a sugarshack, but a house
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MillerBullardThe maple place is something that works really well for a VT pin, I like that you added tappers to the treesIf I was someone from another state, I don't think I would know what that was, just kinda looks like a brown building, try adding a maple leaf or a maple syrup jug sign on the front or side of the building
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UnderhillBullardi like the building1 thing i would improve on is add a little bit more to the trees
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StevensonCompanionI like the idea of a skierthe shoes have 2 different colors for their buckles
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ZimmermanCompanioni like the colorsnothing
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WellsCompanionI like the color choices as long as the idea of the pinThe shading is too dark on the jacket which makes it look like stripes instead of folds. Maybe a more muted, lighter color would appear better and more distinguishable
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CoutrayerCompanionI like the idea, and its very detailed, colors popThe folds are to much and i think they will look weird at small size
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Ballard-CharbonneauCompanionI like the shading on the torsoI think the shading is a little much on the legs
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LittleCompanionI like the rinkles it gives more charactermaybe the ski shoes a better color
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Costello-TerifayCompanioni like the color and the pose remove detail like the fold in the clothing
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ThurmanCompanionthis is really really good, and nice to look at, i love the detail of the shading maybe add just a small bit of shading to the shoes/gloves
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FiozzoCompanionI really like the texture, it has so much detail and I love thatI notice on the shoes the buckles are different colors, idk if that was a design choice but if its an error I would recommend fixing it
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MillerCompanionThe art work and style looks really good, and like the amount of detailBecause the detail is so good, I think that when its put on a pin, the details would become too small, and just end up looking muddled
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Ingadottir-MayCompanionI like the pose and design, it's very clear it is a skierCut back on some of the shading, especially on the upper left arm
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CompanionCompanionI love the folds in the clothes!Consider changing the color of the boots, it doens't look as cohesive as the rest of the design. Maybe add a different background so the skier pops more.
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StatnicCompanionthe detail is amazing, it's well madeas much as I love the detail, maybe focus on it a bit less
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SimpsonCompanioni like the texture on the shirt and pants the look to be two difrent colors
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BullardCompanioni like the detail on the clothes the detail will be ubsqued and not very visable do to the size the pin will be and that will cause issues becuase people wont be able to see all the work
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BergeronCompanionThis fits the Vermont theme for winter and skiing. I think the skier is very realistic and drawn well. Maybe add less folds in the clothing.
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MartinCompanionThe shading on the clothes is very well made. The detail on the shoes and linework is well done too.Add a distinct head and the other hand. Don't add anymore detail to this part of your pin probably, the final product might not show this much detail.
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UnderhillCompanioni like it i would add more Vermont ness /Vermont colors
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StevensonCostello-TerifayI like the hat on champlainI cant tell where the eye is. Whether its where the tear is coming from or the more eye shaped spiral behind it.
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ZimmermanCostello-Terifaythe dinosuarthe ice and tears
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StatnicCostello-TerifayI like the theme you're going with make the tear a bit smaller and maybe make the text a bit bigger and lower it on the body
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Ingadottir-MayCostello-TerifayI like the composition and the snowy theme. It's a unique take on ChampHave the text a little more centered on Champ's body
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LittleCostello-TerifayLike the cold aspect with the hat and icicle Maybe work on the nose
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Ballard-CharbonneauCostello-TerifayI like the hatI think one of the fins looks empty with the other one having the date
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WellsCostello-TerifayI like the overall shape of the pin, makes it easy to read as long as being a noticeable part of vermontThe snot bubble is kinda unnecessary imo and the spikes arent all the same
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CompanionCostello-TerifayI like that its winter themed I think you should add more detail do the dinosaur and make the 23-24 text bigger
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FiozzoCostello-TerifayI like how I can tell its Champ, I think he looks really cuteWhen I look to his face my eye draws to his nose, which is sort of too big and I mistaked it for his eye, so maybe move it a little and shrink it down
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ThurmanCostello-Terifayi think this is a really cute design and i enjoy how the colors look together theres just some parts im a little confused on like the tear drop (?)
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CoutrayerCostello-TerifayI like the concept, the colors are great, the font choice is clean and the text is visableNeeds a background, i dont like the snot bubble.
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MillerCostello-TerifayI like champ, theres a lot of things you could do with him, and I like that you gave him a beanieWhy is champ crying? And what is the black circle behind his eye? I just find the face kind of confusing, and I don't think that we should show champ crying on a pin
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BullardCostello-Terifayi like the shape and choice of character the text might be to small and hard to read were it is and for the size of the pin
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BergeronCostello-TerifayI like the theming. Champ fits the Vermont vibe. The colors fit Vermont.The text need to be bigger so that it is legible. Maybe make champ a more Vermont green.
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UnderhillCostello-Terifayi like the champi would like to see more Vermont ness
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MartinCostello-TerifayI like that fact that you chose champ for your design. I feel that it represents Vermont nicely. I also like the hat you added to him to represent winter.More shading to champ overall might help it have some depth and I would experiment with adding snow falling off champ.
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Mabley-WardCostello-TerifayI like how champ has emotion and the drips on champ. It looks very original!Why is champ sad? The text should be bigger. There should be more drips on champ. Have a different background color. Maybe have the lake in the background so it looks like champ is getting out of the water, so the drips make more sense
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SimpsonCostello-Terifayi like the amount of detail it looks like there is two eyes on one side m,aby delte the one on the top of the head
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ZimmermanIngadottir-Maythe colorsit looks good
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WellsIngadottir-MayI love the colors, very cuteThe linework is too thin and should be larger in order to view better when its 1''1''
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StevensonIngadottir-MayI live the variety of a flowery cow with a green colorThe skills USA text is a little too small
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BullardIngadottir-Mayi like the design and detail along with the color the year will be more blurred so it will be less legible
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LittleIngadottir-Maylike the leafs, flowers and the bell re work the grayish colors maybe
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MillerIngadottir-MayThe cow fits really well to the whole VT thing, and I really like the flower necklace you gave it.Not really anything I don't like or anything like that, but I guess the cow being green?
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FiozzoIngadottir-MayI really love the colors and can tell that its a cowThe pin say 24-25 which is the wrong period, and the Bell looks a bit wonky
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ThurmanIngadottir-Mayits super cute and i like the way you did the date i think SkillsUSA would be to small where its currently placed
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CoutrayerIngadottir-MayLove the colorsThe horn look to small and flat, and the eyes are to small
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CompanionIngadottir-MayI like the detail thats around the Vermont textmaybe give it a background
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Costello-TerifayIngadottir-MayI like the text for 24-25the text size for skillUSA could be bigger
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StatnicIngadottir-MayThe cow is absolutely adorable, I like how you made it express emotion Maybe find a way to make skills usa text bigger, and maybe more detail on the flowers and leaves(? i hope the orange ones are leaves)
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SimpsonIngadottir-Mayi like the colors that you chose i think the numbers are a bit to mushy
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Ballard-CharbonneauIngadottir-MayI like the colors I think the horns look a little off
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BergeronIngadottir-MayThis is done very well. I like the colors and the graphic. Cows tell me it's Vermont.Maybe choose colors that speak more to Vermont. The 24-25 is done very well but it may be hard to tell what it says as it has squiggles.
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Mabley-WardIngadottir-MayI like the flowers and the cow bellThe colors have an odd theme, add a different background. The flowers should have more variety, maybe turn the year into spots on the cow? Either stick to pastels or the extreme colors.
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MartinIngadottir-MayI really like the way the text is set up and represented.I would recommend potentially changing the font on the 24 - 25 portion of the pin as I couldn't really read or understand what it said and it might be less legible when it's small.
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UnderhillIngadottir-Mayi like the cow there is nothing i would like to see improve
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ZimmermanMabley-Wardi like the colorsthe cow um why is it there ?
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Ballard-CharbonneauMabley-WardI like the cowIt feels very cluttered
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LittleMabley-Wardlike the overlap with the cowmove the cow maybe over the state of Vermont
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WellsMabley-WardThe font is very cute and I like how its hidden behind the cowThe blue background is on the same spectrum as the vermont green so it may be hard to see. Maybe a lighter version of either would look better
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FiozzoMabley-WardI love the texture on the cow and how cute he looksThe text is all over the place and '23 - '24 are put up there twice
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Costello-TerifayMabley-Ward I like the cow head and stile its inthere too much to look at
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BullardMabley-Wardi like the color and detail put the Vermont in the front do to us needing to be able to see it
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ThurmanMabley-Wardi really like the cow i feel like theres a lot going on with the colors and the words being all over the place
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CoutrayerMabley-WardI like the cow it looks very cartoon and coolThe design has alot going on, the colors are to contrasting, the text is all over the place.

simplify it