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Novel Scene List
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Mission Journey: Crystal and Flint Draft 5
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Plot: Complete construction of Journey and get to the summit meeting.Minor revisions
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Subplot: Love story between Justin and CrystalComplete Rewrite
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Scene #Chapter #POV CharacterCharacters in SceneBrief DescriptionLocationPurpose of sceneWhat does scene accomplishWord CountComments
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1ProNarratorDelta TeamHistory of how Humans arrived on Neophia.World BuildingTo explain to the reader some details about Neophia and show that the story is not taking place on Earth. Will show that humans and Neophians can have babies. Also need to show the huge influence Earth has on Neophia.595-Need to show Earth's influence on Neophia after the space port opened. Show how tech, plants, animals were imported from Earth and humans became ingrained in the culture.
-Neophian population was small less then a million people total
-Humans started to outnumber them within 20 years and that when the Aqueinan and Sertex started to work together and created the citizenship rules.
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21CrystalCrystal, Shinny shoes, StinerCrystal working on Sub fighterBuild siteCharacter DevelopmentShow the type of officer Crystal is. Need to show she is career focused (not interested in romance). Get the message that something has been changed with Journey project.1490-Can't tell Stiner what message it about.
-Rewrite heart dropped into chest moment
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31CrystalCrystal, Dewite, Reed, CraftMeeting at LAWON HQ to tell them that the build deadline for Journey has been moved forward so that Journey can attend the annual summit meeting and boost LAWON membershipLAWON HQPlotIntroduces first obstacle for Crystal to overcome with moving Journey's completion date up so that they can attend Summit Meeting. Also introduces political conflict of planet and Teria.1816-change the amount of time deadline has been pushed forward to nine months.
-Crystal needs to have a bigger reaction once Craft leaves, talk about how Rank would love a chance to destroy ship and embarrass LAWON
-Have Craft talk more about Teria trying to take over more land and moving troops
-Crystal makes a comment about how she will blow the budget and will have to hire every contractor in the country
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41CrystalCrystal, Stiner, Journey build teamCrystal delivers speech to team about new deadline.Build sitePlotCrystal delivers a motivational speech to her team and tells them of their new deadline. Several team leaders ask to work late. Shows dedication of Crystal's team and the respect they have for her as a leader.1023-Talk about why Crystal hates public speaking and being the center of attention with all the media and press she had to endure as a child after her parent's death.
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52DesiDesi, JustinJustin explains LAWON to Desi on the space shuttle to NeophiaSpace shuttleCharacter DevelopmentIntroduces Desi and Justin. Gives Desi's backstory on why she is coming to Neophia. Gives a high level overview of LAWON and Neophia.1466-Give some backstory on Justin's family.
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