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Typography GCD60104August 2023
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Feedback Sheet
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DO NOT DELETE THE COMMENTS IN REDDO NOT DELETE THE COMMENTS IN RED
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NameI.D.Task 1: ExercisesTask 2: Typographic Exploration & CommunicationTask 3: Type Design and CommunicationTask 4: Eportfolio (Final Ref. & Comp)Eportfolio LinkL/FEmail
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Faculty of Innovation & Tech. | B' Creative Media
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12345Week 5
General feedback: I came out 2 designs for this exercise. The first design is the one with 3 columns and justify text. The second design is more minimalist, with only 2 columns and left align. Both designs have good reading rhythm and cross alignment is fulfilled.
Specific feedback: First design, it is not advisable to have 3 column text body in A4 size. The use of justified text created 'rivers' which need to be avoided. The second design, which is more minimalist, overall is good with kerning and tracking. The ragging is smooth but there is one orphan found that need to be improved. Mr.Vinod commented second option is better. Less is more. good alignment and arrangement.

Week 4
General feedback: We were encouraged to read at least 2-3 books and document them in further reading section.
Specific feedback: Lectures commented my blog is overall good. The information is documented nicely with the correct sections, design progress with some of the screenshot, reflections and further reading. Mr. Vinod encouraged me to maintain this for the assignments in the future. For the gif animation, I can improve by showing the transformation from the original font then wiggling effect appears.

Week 3
Specific Feedback: The word slice is good with the idea of changeing the "I" to a knife. Mr.Vinod said the word "scream" looks good as it brings the meaning, it's acceptable although is slightly much distortion. The word punch is great with the force of a big "P" . Lastly, the "wave" can be better to create a stronger impact.

Week 2
General Feedback: Suffecient word exploration with the use of mind map. May choose better design to digitalise with suitable typeface.
Specific Feedback: The word 'scream' gives a scary and horror feeling which is good.

Week 1
General Feedback: Blog is set up nicely and the link provided is linked to Typography page. Blog sections divided properly.
Week 7
General Feedback:
It is important for us to familiarize the typeface we using, the line length, leading.
Specific feedack: Identify and focus one word that you wanted to express. The impact of word expression can be better. I did two designs and the second one is better but the word 'IMPACT' can adjust to improve the visual impact.

Week 6
General feedback:
Submission of Text Formatting must be in PDF and JPEG export (High Quality). Screen grabs will not be accepted.
Specific Feedback: The first sketches and attempt for the title can be better, the body text is good with line spacing and ragging. Besides, the leading text is okay but can consider using the same font with a different weight. The idea of applying Bauhaus design is cool, can further explore by tilting the angle.
Week 14
JPG for Task 1 (Ex2) not visible in final compilation

WeeK 13
General feedback:
Tips and instruction to prepare the final compilation and reflection, can refer seniors work as guide. This time we need to include sketch for Font design.
Specific feedback:
The sticker is relatively well done, keep it up.

Week 12 -TASK 3(B)
General Feedback:
The size, weight, space between the letterform depends on the type of letterform. Once the tracking is right, only move on to add other elements. The sticker needs to add a 7pt outline to protect the sticker design.
Specific feedback: The mooncake sticker looks better, kerning and letterspacing between the 'PP' and 'TI' need to be wider. The size of 'Min Autumn' is fine, the colour of the egg yolk version (reddish-orange) seems interesting, can be further explored.

Week 11 -TASK 3(A)
Good work! Tough character to produce, great effort for a first font. Very good exploration and progression! Keep it up!
General Feedback: Expression needs to be simple and impactful. We must develop critical thinking skill to analyse and explain our design. Train yourself to evaluate your designs.
Specific feedback: Mooncake and lantern design concept consider okay. Replacement of the Taylor logo in the letter T seem to be nice, however, the mooncake elements is too much, can be reduced. For lantern design, the Taylor logo as tassel can be smaller

Week 10
General feedback: Idea sketches, the process of generating font in Fontlab need to be documented in e-portfolio. Try not to watch tutorial and do it at the same times, this might cause missing of important steps.
Specific feedback: The font design is overall good to go, it shows a little of inconsistency but it may the part of the characteristic. For typography poster, the phrase 'obey me' will be better to put in the same line and slated toward the description.

Week 9

General feedback: Examine the font design by its readability, consistency and legibility. It is advised to start designing letter o, as the curve is is related to a and g. Prevent the loop heavier than the main part especially the 't'. Create the main fill, see the proportions.
Specific feedback: Good design exploration with references. The idea of using coffee to develop the design is good, may proceed with that. Letter 'b' needs to be closer to the stem and make sure the pattern of the font is having the same angle and direction. Letter 'e' can be further improved.

Week 8 -TASK 3(A)
Independent learning week and finalising task 2
Week 14
General feedback: Always check the link whether its correct and functional. Practice at least once a week during sembreak to revise the techniques and knowledge we have learned.
Specific feedback: Mr.Vinod decided to make (Task 1 Helveltica jpg post) compulsory, as sometimes students tend to move the pdf. Hence, I uploaded jpg format in my E-portfolio as well.

Week 13
Specific feedback: Your Task 3B is not complete. Now completed sir.

Week 11
Specific feedback: You did not label your taks 3A post correctl. Updated sir.

Week 9
Specific feedback: Your eportfolio post is not complete. Where's your Feedback, Reflection and Further Reading? Already updated sir.

Week 6
Specific feedback: Please arrange the content chronologically. The final submission must also consist of embedded pdf files, not just JPG. Also please ensure no screen grabs are submited as final submissions.Noted and done."
https://mrvinodsfake.blogspot.com/search/label/Typographynew-gmail@gmail.com
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Faculty of Innovation & Tech. | IT; TDS
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1ANG SIU BOON0345135Week 5
General feedback:
-Export Final PDF File > Export > Adobe PDF (Print)
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To export with Guides and Grids File > Export > Adobe PDF (Print) > Check 'Visible Guides and Grids'
-Also export JPEG for the one with Guides and Grids for safety measures

Week 4
General feedback:
-Analyze how to potray and describe the work. Add some contrast to show impact which attracts viewer's attention
-Evaluate our own ability

Week 3
General feedback:
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")" to increase brush size, "(" to decrease brush size
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"R" to rotate, "O" to flip
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command + shift + g to Ungroup
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Object > Clipping Mask > Mask or command + 7 to mask object

Specific feedback:
-Remove color from 'GLITCH', use other shades of gray instead
-Create 4 draft/idea for each work
-Insert another JPEG of final Draft above the PDF


Week 2
General feedback:
-We should ideate our type expression based on the 10 fonts that we were given during Week 1.
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Shift + ALT (Windows) / shift + option (Mac) to duplicate
- Select as shape to convert text into image
- Object > Compund Path > Make (Making multiple objects into one path)
- Pathfinder > Minus Front (Subtract front shape)
- DO NOT remove and amend any new changes. INSTEAD; duplicate and make changes to keep a copy of old works.
Week 6
General Feedback
-Focus one word in the headline to express. (Build)
-Do not express every single word for the headline.


Week 5
General Feedback
-Implement all knowledge from Task 1 into Task 2
-Not neccessary need to use same font type. (Same typeface, but can different style)
Specific Feedback
-Try playing around the Headline.
Week 14
Specific Feedback
-Picture edges are not clean and sharp

Week 13
General Feedback

-Do not use images in mind when placing texts.
-Create 2 version, one with and one without self portrait.
-Add a 8pt size text for the Text Name
Specific Feedback
-Try to place the text to provide more impact

Week 11
General Feedback
-Use A4 Poster
-Use the same point size for all the words.

Week 10
General Feedback
-Choose only either uppercase or lowercase letters only.
Specific Feedback
-The exclamation mark should get thinner going down to differentiate it from an inverted 'i'.
-The comma can be improved, add stop at the end instead of a point.
-Remove some excess anchor point for more smoother rounded shape.

Week 9
General Feedback

-Place letters side by size for better visualization
-Object > Path > Outline Stroke to convert strokes to shape
-Pathfinder > Unite to merge all shape into one shape
Specific Feedback
-Horizontal stroke of hashtag should be thinner
-Descender part of letter 'y' and 'g' should not protrude main body
-Size of comma should be doubled of period size

Week 7
General Feedback

-Lock the guides so that we do not accidentally move them.
-Use the pen tool to add additional stokes.
-Right Click > Join to merge strokes together
Specific Feedback
-Try making the letter 'k' wider to make it fit in well with other letters.
-Redo the '#' as the other letters do not have changes in body width.
W8 T1 Complete
Week 6
General Feedback
-Start designing our Task 2 Portfolio
-Can follow Task 1 and design

Week 5
General Feedback
-Polish blog with all relevant stuff required
-Start labeling all figures
Specific Feedback
-Highlight the word Final so that it is easy to spot

Week 4
General feedback:
-Keep all subheading to the 'LEFT'
- Add highlights to to attract readers attention.
Specific feedback
-Remove Task 2,3 from Task 1

Week 3
General feedback:

-Compile all sketches or researches into one so it is not too long and easier to read
-Update Reflection > Further Readings every time we read something, doesn't matter if it's the entire book or just a paragraph.
-Do not forget the line to seperate each sections.
-When embedding, do not forget to set the viewing access to public in our Google Drive.

Week 2
General feedback:

-We should document each progress of our task weekly so that we can obtain our feedback during each class.
-Everytime we insert an image/photos we should label it like "Figure x.x Label, Week x (dd/mm/yy)"
-Use shift + enter for force line break, enter for paragraph space
-Keep Figure numbering 0 for now, only edit it before submission date
https://andrewangdesign.blogspot.com/search/label/Typographyuseonlyforschoolstuff@gmail.com
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2CELESTE LOW LY-VEN0357452Week 4-6
No feedback, was absent.

Week 3
General Feedback
- Compile digital sketches into a single jpeg.
- Ungroup letters so all letters don't go missing.
- Convert brush to line (Brushes > Basic line > Stroke > Adjust weight (reduce) > Weight line tool, adjust.
- Glitch: Use rectangles and bring to front. Select both and apply clipping mask.
- Scream: Create blood droplet step by step:
1. Type > Create Outline > Direct Selection > Select the points > Drag down (extend) > Pull down to round it
2. Brush tool > Adjust size, and fidelity, Draw outside the letter, Adjust the shape, Duplicate to another side.
3. Object > Path > Outline stroke (Becomes a shape)
4. Brush lines must be on top of letter.
5. Pathfinder > Minus front
6. Anchor point tool, drag to adjust the sharp points.

Specific Feedback
Scream: Blood droplet needs more shape, explore with adding reflective surface.
Roll: Add lines to suggest movement.
Sleep: Don't italicise.
Glitch: Remove rectangle, don't use outlined font, explore using 2 different typefaces.

Week 2
General Feedback
- Use leading / line space through force line break [shift + enter] for personal information at the top instead of paragraph spacing.
- 'Brief' heading change to 'Instructions'.
- Combine all visual research in 1 image to save space.
- Figure label must add date. (Exp: Week 1, 29 Aug.)
- Label and describe the sketches.
- Plan sketches with the 10 fonts in mind.

Specific Feedback
Scream: 2nd idea is acceptable but execution needs work. Replicate the shape realistically by observing pictures of blood drips.
Glitch: All the sketches are acceptable.
Roll: 4th idea approved - 3 O enough, keep the size of O consistent, start from light colour on the left to black.
Melt: Bottom left works best.
Sleep: Eyes Sleep eyes close (Top right)
Vibrate: Needs work, but the one on the top right comes closest.
W11 T2 incomplete-no submission.
W8 T1 Complete
https://celestelow-designs.blogspot.com/search/label/Typographycelestelow.taylors@gmail.com
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3ESMA REZA BIN ZAIN AZRAI0339055Week 5:
General Feedback: Avoid tight leading and spacing to prevent darker areas in the texts. Add a caption to the image.
Specific Feedback: Decrease the point size to fit the text better in the layout.

Week 4:
General Feedback: Presentation for the first exercise can be adjusted to fit or arranged to allow for a better composition overall (if you have time).
For text formatting image should be related to topic. also in black and white.
Choose an appropriate typeface from the 10 typeface. Point size 8-12.
The leading should be 3 or 2.5 points larger than the point size.
55-65 character per line of text. Asure good page margins. 40-60 Space to content.
Specific Feedback: For the animation, adding a couple of dead frame where the letter are out of frame makes it so the gif doesn't repeat right away or too fast.
Begin additional reading. Read more books; only a page or two to get started.

Week 3:
General Feedback: Do not export the animation file at 300 PPI. It should be at 72 PPI. 1024 Pixel is ideal for the size (Do not exceed)
Minimum size is 800, no less.

Specific Feedback: Add the line jump line over the instruction in the e-portfolio. Sketches should be compiled all at once.
Adjust the R from roll in the Type Expression.
Adjust the rolling effect in the animation. Less forward momentum, more of a downward fall.
Add more frames for polish and submission.


Week 2:
General Feedback: This week after sketches begin the digitisation of 1 or 2 types of the selcted words.
No use of distortion (mininal at most) and minimal use of graphic as possible.
Command uses: Shift + Alt = Duplcates on the same axis
R + Drag = Rotates (select on the based at which it turns)
CTRL + 7 = Masking for the edge (letter cuts off of the box)
Don't delete when starting over during digitisation as to keep for progrgess.

Specific Feedback: Begin the rough sketches for the 4 selected words based (minimum 3-4). Update to the new e-portfolio.
Either begin reflection now or note at the reflection portion of the e-portfolio that it will be done at the end.
Try to find and read a book regarding the type of work for this week.

Week 1:
General Feedback: absent
Specific Feedback: absent

Week 6:
General Feedback: 300 PPI Greyscale. 2 JPEG of the design with one including grids. Same goes for the PDFs.
Specific Feedback: Consider the expression of the title. The code to build on and live by doesn't neccessarily
need to be the coding expression, but maybe create an emphasis on a single word or create different way of
expression.
Week 13:
General Feedback:
Poster should be bolder and stand out more than the image. Image should be
around the center. Submission both the text layout of the poster and one with the image.
Specific Feedback:
Edit photo taken in photoshop prior to illustrator. Change image to black
and white.

Week 12: Away

Week 11:
General Feedback:
Poster phrase can be generated from chatGPT using only the created letters.
Point size for the poster must be consisted and kept the same throughout.
Specific Feedback: Individual kerning are done to letters with curves and diagonal strokes. Use
the computer lab computers to generate the fonts, since the demo versions are licencesed.

Week 10:
General Feedback:
Understand the left and right bering chart for the space bearing section when
done with the few alphabet. For the bearing chart, the letter M is replaces the letter H, while the
letter G will replace the letter O for the chart. Such as the letter K where the right side has a slight
curve, we implement the letter G chart measures.
Spepcific Feedback: Make sure for there are not points in the compound that are not connected
when importing over to Fontlabs. The letter M had too many vector ponts in order to import over
to Fontlabs; try reducing some of the rough textures. Some words require eye-balling. For such
letters with minumum, it could be 0-10; these letters will also need to be personally kerned for
each letters it falls nexts to.

Week 9:
General Feedback:
Turn the brush strokes into outline strokes and create some imperfections
using the pencil tool.
Specific Feedback:
Reduce the amount of protrusions on some of the letters (P, R, M, E).
The letter "G" raised the height of the leg and opt for a minimal storke.

Week 8: -

Week 7:
General Feedback:
For the sketches, the pen stroke should be consistent. Do not to
be restricted by the sketches. Adapt and try things out things during digitization.
Specific Feedback: The details should not be complicated. Find a reference to go by.
W11 T2 Complete
W8 T1 Complete
Week 13:
Final Compilations included both jpeg and PDF. Add in the remaining jump links for task 3 and final compilaiton post. FInish both reflections.

Week 7:
Add a new post for task 3. Next week friday for task 2 deadline.

Week 6:
Try adding in a jump link for the task 1 post for ease of navigation.

Week 5:
Add in a new post for task 2. Finish up the reflection for the previous post.

Week 4:
Additional further reading. Maybe begin rerflection

Week 3:
Add the line jump line over the instruction in the e-portfolio. Sketches should be compiled all at once.
https://esmareza.blogspot.com/search/label/Typography reza.esma2001@gmail.com
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4HAMZAH AMMAR ALRAMLI0340957Week 5

General points: This task demonstrates a proactive approach to learning and a commitment to comprehensively understand text formatting. By watching all relevant YouTube videos and applying a 1:4 assignment completion ratio, it showcases efficiency and a diverse skill set. Additionally, the intention to incorporate new designs into a blog underscores creativity and innovation, while the focus on correct alignment reveals a strong attention to detail. Overall, this approach reflects a goal-oriented mindset towards mastering text formatting techniques.

Week 4


Positive Points:

Your typography exercise 1 is progressing well.
Keep up the good work in experimenting with different design elements.

Suggestions for Improvement:

Consider refining your typography skills further, paying attention to kerning, leading, and alignment for improved visual harmony.
Exploring different color schemes can add depth to your typography designs.

General Points:
Keep pushing your creative boundaries and continue to explore typography with enthusiasm. Your progress is commendable!


Week 3

During this week, you should fill in the content related to Week 3's lectures, instructions, exercises, and feedback here.

Pain Points: Identify and list the challenges you faced during Week 3.

General Points: Provide any general observations or comments related to Week 3.

Week 2


General Feedback: Consider choosing a better design for digitalization. This feedback is somewhat vague; it would be helpful to provide more specific guidance on what aspects of the design need improvement or what design principles to focus on.

Specific Feedback: When digitalizing your project, pay attention to selecting a suitable typeface. Typeface choice can significantly impact the visual appeal and readability of your project.

Week 1

General Feedback: Positive feedback on the setup of the blog, including proper division of sections and a link to the Typography page.
Week 7:

General Feedback:
Doning ilistration aphabitets to finilise the fontlab that will be upgoing for next week, as well as be prepired for task 2 and task 3.

Specific Feedback:
follow teams and the instuctions given for next class be prepaired to show work.
Week 6:

I received general feedback, which indicates that when submitting Text Formatting, it should be in PDF and JPEG format with high quality. Please note that screen captures will not be considered valid!!!

Specific feedback: My initial sketches and attempts at creating a title could use improvement. On a positive note, the body text appears to be well-formatted with appropriate line spacing and ragging. Additionally, the leading text is acceptable, although there is room for enhancement by utilizing the same font with a different weight. Lastly, the idea of incorporating Bauhaus design is commendable, and there is potential for further exploration by experimenting with the angle.
Week 12:
general feedback: out of the country , got scolded for not showing up but eh emergency is emergency :funerals and graduation getting mix feelings: 'shesh' ... note to self when there is so much happening its hard ro explain just accept and do better it takes time and hard work to get regognized time is all we have on this earth make the best of it even at its worse. smile its a beautifle day and focuse to do better you got this... task 1 is kinda finished final touches and i noticed i mixed task 1 and 2 need to seperate them keep that page as progress and show it and make it better...

Spesific Feedback: task 3 started should focuse on that to submit before week 13 reaches to show im still here....!!! can use week 13 to edit what is needed and get feedback if accepted

Week 11:
General Feedback: yep it worked fontlab 7 is active now having few days and counting. 22 days left for lincence . make sure to record the progress that im doing for final.. Sir Vinod gave good tips of how to copy and paste from ilistrator to font lab, keep those setteings and update on blog whenever ready, progress file created can just dump all files and photos as proof of progress.

Spesific Feedback: felt hungry and unwell had to wrap at 11 and get back home, indesign papers is easy to catch up to could easily create pdf files the most fun i had in a while haha, oh forgot to save before leaving had to start again at home, remember to SAVE hehe, oh got good news found the file name :zerodaydawn: & : 505.exe Family Font file: naming things is fun.

Week 10:
General Feedback: not being able to have enough sleep is taking away from what i could i have acomplished instend of sleeping... need to focuse more and be better take time to over come it.. note to self rewatch the insturctions something is missing, do as asked and instructed... oh forgot too update my link blog previouse blog is unfixable had to create new.

Spesific Feedback: to many lines im doing it using html, bugs keep popping make sure the code is orginized hate seeing equal lines. need to watch out time is running out... hope i can bounce back up

Week 9:
General Feedback: had to redesign the blog and resetch task 1 E1,E2. as far creating vibrent art but following resrectted rules given is hard but i did it, now for the animation had picked the word Glitch.

Spesific feedback: SIr didnt like the overcoplex work and it takes longer time for me to do all these tasks, i belive in myself i could finish before the semester ends.

Week 8:
Independent leaning week , Finillazing the Blog
W15 T1, 2, 3 submissions missing
W11 T2 no submission.
https://imgur.com/a/iFwzkdg
W8 T1 Incomplete-no submission.
https://imgur.com/a/ldK800d
Week 3's lectures, instructions, exercises, and feedback here.
https://g505dnbad.blogspot.com/search/label/Typographyalramli.hamzah@gmail.com
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5KEK HAN SHIN0352571
Week 5 General Feedback
- Avoid of tight leading and spacing, to test out we can use the one eye rule to see the overall "rivers" within the body text
- task 2 is the combination of exercises we did in task 1
- for headline, do not put expression in every word if not it will get messy
Specific Feedback
> Mr vinod stated the first attempt is ok, just the picture content has to be changed as helvetica is more of a modern typeface
> Picture should be in greyscale
Week 4 General feedback
By arranging four boxes of final word expression together, another thing to be considered is how to make them appear in a visually balance but impactful way
It's about the effectiveness of the design, it should not be too empty and hollow and losing contrast, the objective is to catch audience attention
Week 4 Personal feedback
Lectures should be watched till third if not it will effect overall progress
Week 3 General feedback
for designs, you cant have too much expression, like all over dancing "glitch" and glitching "H" is too much as it will confuse the viewers
thiner typeface size is bigger, thicker should be shorter, based on the intention and impact wanted
final animation will be only based on the perfect word
make sure when exporting, include white background, and it should not be 300ppi, it should be 72ppi, when compiling check in photoshop check file size 1024px → ideal, 800px too small, export in gif
Week 3 Personal feedback
> For the sketch "O" could add abit more motion linings
> "Sleep" sketch doesnt need to add extra eye if the letters are already leaning towards each other
W3 Where is your feedback? Mark deduction.
Week 2 General feedback
Blog title should be typography task one, when it comes to design simplicity is the key have one central main idea and extend it.
The images falling under research should be collaged into a canva if not you will have to describe them one by one
DONT DISTORT THE FONTS, Further eading is required for each week
Contrast is a good methodology to show
Week 1 General Feedback
Finish up the sketches draft, its important to follow laid weekly progress
Week 7
- second sketch and third sketch are both okay to proceed
format:
- JPEG, 300PPI, Grayscale
- PDF without guides and grids
- PDF with guides and grids
- Export JPEG guides and grids from PDF guides and Grids
Week 6:
- Avoid playing elements in the center of the spread to not effect readability when it is folded
- When trying to express the title it is not advised to make outline as we can't trace back what font we used, also we might distort the words
- It is important to come out with certain variations for him to give feedback and come out with the best version
- Keep my task on time
Week 12 feedback
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all letters designed should be included in the poster
- can add additional letters in the current designs

Week 11 feedback
- because my o has stroke that stand out hence i have to consider whenever letter with straight like y and k has to stay comparable with “n””o” too
- exclamation mark side bearing too narrow

Week 10 feedback
- the formation is very disproportionate
- when designing letters what consistency meant is not only certain features but the space between counterforms, of how the curvature shapes etc
- too much anchor points causes the curves are “crooked”
- if unsure of the x height median height always refer to current font letters examine how they design the strokes, ascender and arm
- provided me vertical stroke guidelines to better assist me in visualizing how my font structure will form

Week 9 feedback
- not only using shape, start to learn how can we utilize brush tool to create more versatile font family

Week 8 feedback
- always be explorative to figure out different font sketches using different tools
- gave examples like black letter font
- when holding the pen or tool to sketch, have to maintain the same palm angle
[done ammending] W11 T2 Your submission is not as instructed. Your work is not exported at 300ppi, you cant use your JPG and submit that as a PDF. REDO.
W8 T1 Complete
Week 4
horizontal line should be added, shift enter instead of enter
https://hanshindesigns.blogspot.com/search/label/Typographykek.hanshin@sd.taylors.edu.my
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6KHOR JIA WEN0354908Week 5
General Feedback
- watch the video and start with the task 2
- task 2 which is combination of task 1 type expression and formatting
- only pick one word from the headline to do the type expression


Specific Feedback
- change italic body text, italic is not suitable if put for whole body text, it is for the emphasis word
- tracking maximum 3 times


Week 4
General Feedback
Uploaded your design process is mandatary, as it's important to let everyone know how you reached the final work.

W3 Where is your feedback? Mark deduction.

Week 3
General Feedback
Pay attention to the placement of the content within the four cells of the final expression, aiming for visual balance that appeals to the viewer.
Specific Feedback
MELT: The water puddle below can be made to look more realistic; currently, it appears as a relatively perfect circle.
VIBRATE: The focus should be on "vibrate" itself rather than its falling sensation.
GLITCH: I'm not sure why the positions of its individual letters are arranged this way.

Week 2
General Feedback
- don't distort the word
- imagine the 10 font when do the sketches
- combine more small image in one big image


Specific Feedback
Melt: modify the corners of the font to look rounded, not too sharp. You can use a circle to place on the font, and adjust the circle, paying attention to the boundary that blends with the font to be rounded.
Roll: press 'r' and then set the center, and the font rotates around the center to create the atmosphere of roll.


Week 1 General Feedback
- Set up e-portfolio
- watch the lecturer v
ideo sequency.
Week 6
General Feedback
Focus on one word to express in headline

Specific Feedback
The formatting is engaging, but I need to express more on "BUILD". After I made the changes, Mr. Vinod said it's excellent and ready for export.
Week 12
General feedback
- Add our own images into the poster

Week 11
General feedback
- design A4 poster
- same point size for all words
- came out 4-5 sketches

Week 10
General Feedback
- Starting to use font studio 8, create our font
- Make sure change the font info in font studio 7

Specific Feedback
- Top of "#" is ascender

Week 9
General Feedback
Pathfinder - combine multiple shape or part in font to one

Specific Feedback
- Place font style Universe be the references of your font.

Week 7
General Feedback
- Start the sketches from the same angle, hold the pen with same angle when design.

Specific Feedback
- Choose one of your design and start to illustrate it.
W11 T2 Complete
W8 T1 Complete
Week 4
horizontal line should be added between each part
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7NUZHAT SUMAILA RASHID0350226Where is your feedback? W11 T2 no submission.https://nuzhatsrashidseblog.blogspot.com/p/typography_28.htmlNuzhatsumailarashid@gmail.com
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8PHANG JIA XI0351422Week 4
General feedback:
-Furnish the final artwork of task 1
-Put into practice of what you have learned in class
Specific feedback:
-Finish e-portfolio

Week 3
General feedback:
-Combine research pictures
-Export the artwork with JPEG (resolution 72ppi)
-Animation making artboard size (1024px*1024px)
Specific feedback:
-Average digitize

Week 2
General feedback:
-Feedbacks and reflections should be updated every week behind the weekly tasks
-Read futher reading everyweek
Specific feedback:
-The typefaces bring out the principle of contrast which is good. It emphasizes the expressions
W11 T2 no submission.
W8 T1 Complete
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9RUCHIRA NORWEEN0347111Week 1
Specific Feedback: Module not registered (Absent)
General Feedback: Module not registered (Absent)

Week 2
Specific Feedback: Module not registered (Absent)
General Feedback: Module not registered (Absent)

Week 3
Specific Feedback:
Set up the E-portfolio
Install Adobe Software: Illustrator, photoshop & inDesign
Watch all the lectures and start with task-1

General Feedback:
Follow the instructions properly and update the tasks on time to avoid work pile up.
Every week or regularly after reading, update "further readings." If you can, read the entire book or just a paragraph—either is acceptable.

Week 4
Specific Feedback:
Add dates with the picture captions
Update research and work process

General Feedback:
Add figure no before submission
Pay attention to the overall layout of the four boxes
The four components that make up your artwork should work together as a whole. It must provide careful thought to the composition, contrast, and balance. You want to give them a sense of community without giving them a unique vibe.
It might be advisable to change the font for your name and student ID to Univers regular.

Week 5
Specific Feedback:
Change the final outcome choice of the digitalised type expression: Melt & Roll
Glitch not too interesting, try improving
Gif looking more like falling and not sleeping, start from baseline and add the sleeping bubble instead
Try making the lines more evenly curved for exercise 2
Add a hyphen when its oddly necessary

General Feedback:
Download PDF and JPEG with both grids and without grids for proper verification of the work, failure to do so shall deduct marks.

Week 6
Specific Feedback:
Do not use graphics in type frames
Make the title more congested
Make the paragraphs aligned across

General Feedback:
Note down the work process as an evidence of your own work.
Week 7
Specific Feedback:
Go for the third sketch
Prioritize the progress of the e-portfolio for Task 2. Update the exercises.

General Feedback:
1. JPEG format with a resolution of 300PPI in Grayscale.
2. A PDF version without guides and grids.
3. Another PDF version with guides and grids.
4. Export the guides and grids from the PDF version and save them as a JPEG.
Ensure that all the required formats are prepared for submission as outlined above.

Week 9
Specific Feedback:
The usage of pen tool is not perfect, redraw using the method shown in class (pen + brush)

General Feedback:
Avoid inconsistency of angles and line thickness in the typeface
Two ways for digitised fonts: Shapes or Pen+Brush
To combine the shapes: Object > Path > Outline Stroke
Command y to see the outline
Keep the work process as a proof in Illustrator
Don't delete of manipulate the origin of the work

Week 10
Specific:
Correct a & t’s orientation
Elongate the middle line of m
The font seems to be okay, proceed with font lab as soon as possible

General:
Replace H with M in font lab for capital letter
Replace O with G in font lab for capital letter
Do not "Round", click on "Keep".
Ensure to set preferences ("keep strokes and colours... and Ai import original position...").

Week 11:
Specific:
‘a’ needs to be corrected for the first typeface
‘g’ and ‘#’ need to be rectified for the second typeface
Submit both, show the work process for both the type faces
The typefaces are quite interesting so both can be submitted

General:
Make a poster A4
Any sentence and at least 1 punctuation
Do not change the point size at any time
Goal is to make it impactful but just with the type, no other elements (interesting composition)
Type your name along with the typeface name in 12 pt using Univers

Week 12:
Specific:
Use 12 pt for the by line
Take picture and post on the poster
! Sign is good to go
Do not use Black background

General:
The larger the fonts the better
Proceed on your final compilation
Use Reza Abedini work as a reference for your poster

Week 13:
Specific:
Change your by line to either the top right or the middle bottom for the ‘!’ Poster
Stick to the ‘!’ Poster as its keeping more focus on the fonts than the other posters
The moment eyes are shown, the focus is driven to the picture not the font
The new typeface is good as well, can proceed with the work & be added in the e-portfolio

General:
2 submissions - 1 with the picture and the other without
Make the poster with the fonts first and then only place the image
Main focus should be the font not the image
W11 T2 Complete.
W8 T1 Complete
https://ruchiracreativedesign.blogspot.com/search/label/Typographyruchira.nitee14@gmail.com
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10CELINE LEE SHIN YEE0355022Week 5
General Feedback
-Export JPEG : file>export>resolution 300>colour space grey
-Export PDF without grid: file> adobe pdf asset > high quality print> save and export
-Export PDFwith grid:file> adobe pdf asset > high quality print> view pdf after exporting > visible guides and baseline grids > export


Week 4
General Feedback
-Your artwork is a collection of four pieces that should form a cohesive whole. It needs to have good consideration of composition, contrast, and balance. You should make them feel connected while avoiding an individualistic look.
-Change the font for your name and student id to Univers regular would be better.
Specific Feedback
-For the final type expression, you can try using different background colours like light grey or black, which can create a striking contrast and make the artwork more memorable.
-Consider altering the size of some of the artworks as needed. Try to increase or decrease their size .
-The idea for the animation is great. However, you can compress the ball or make it squeeze when it is dropped from above or else it will look a bit rigid.
- Consider adding elements like bouncing the ball out of the frame for 2 to 3 seconds. to inject energy and surprise.


Week 3
General Feedback
Update feedback and further readings every week or every time after reading. It is acceptable if you are just reading a paragraph or the whole book if you can.
Specific Feedback
-"Vibrate" word doesn't look "vibrate" enough. The other digitalise works are good. However, it is better to change the knife blade colour from black to dark grey and make it horizontal.
- Since the main element for ‘sleep’ is the clock, try to make the word look neat instead of rotating them. Do not have to show every hour on the clock , it will look messy so it is more visual appealing if it is only showing 12pm,3pm,6pm and 9pm.


Week 2
General Feedback
-Do not distort the letterform. Minimal distortion is acceptable. Put our sketches together in just one image. Don't delete the process when starting digitisation .
Specific Feedback
-The 'roll' word is good as it emphasises the expression. Don't have to make the P letter bigger for the 'sleep' word.

Week 6
General Feedback
- Remember to update the process work for Task 2 eportfolio.
Specific Feedback
- The design for the headline was good, it is still looks nice as long as it doesnt exceed the certain amount of graphic
- Remember to adjust your text alignment, preferably on the same line for the headline and the body text on the righ
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Week 12
General Feedback
Put all the letters you created in the poster. After that, you may move to the part which you can put your own photo inside.
Specific Feedback
The 2nd design of the poster looks more exciting but try to arrange the letter to balance the white space in the middle.

Week 11

General Feedback
Use A4 when creating poster. Create any sentence and make sure to include all letters you created. The point size must be the same and try to make the poster look impactful.

Week 10
General Feedback

The overall consistency structure and style are good.
Specific Feedback
Try to make the tittle of "i" and the exclamation mark bigger. The horizontal stroke on letter 't' can be shorter. Can make it look simpler for the hashtag '#'. The comma and fullstop are too small, should adjust to a bigger size. Letter 'm' was wrong structure. Mr Vinod suggest to combine the strokes so that it won't look like there is a mistake.

Week 9
General Feedback

Use brush strokes - outline strokes to create imperfections or convert strokes to shape in your letters
Specific Feedback
The structure are wrong as some of the thickness and thinness of the strokes are not always the same. You should evolve from your sketches not just simply creating one without a correct structure.

Week 8
Independent learning week

Week 7
General Feedback
Try not to make the design look complex, sometimes the more complex it looks like, the uglier it will be. Even a small changes on the strokes can look different. Do not have to be restricted by the sketches.
Specific Feedback
I was suggested to develop more on the simple design, try not to do complicated design, it looks excessive . Study more on wim crouwel font to get inspiration.
W8 T1 Complete
Week 4: Specific feedback:
Add dates with the picture captions
Update research and more information and work process by next week

General feedback:
Add fig no before submission
Pay attention to the overall layout of the four boxes
https://celineleedesigns.blogspot.com/search/label/Typographyceline838988@gmail.com
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11CHOW CHEN YI0356570Week 5:
General Feedback
-InDesign Layout and movement are important (user experience)
-Think how headline related to body text
-Alignment also important

Week 4:
General Feedback
-Feedback for E-portfolio put on task 4
-Suggest Shift + Enter in E-portfolio
-Can change the frame font to Univers Regular
-Process of Gif/Anything
-Pretend your E-portfolio like showing someone who don't know anything, so you can present better.

Week3:
General Feedback
-Submit Digitalization in JPEG&PDF
-Animate the word
-Make sure background white when do gif, gif no need 300 ppi, just need 72 ppi, check image size 1024 pixels.

Week 2:
General Feedback
-Combine all research picture in one image
-HTML view (Format HTML)
-Sketch minimum 3 design
-Watch Type Expression 1&2
-Rectangle tool>Select>Ctrl 7>Mask In
-Alt + Drag=Duplicate

Week 1:
General Feedback
-Download 10 font given.
-Set up portfolio
-Vote (Melt, Vibrate, Glitch, Sleep, Roll)
Week 6:
General Feedback
-Designing a letter forms on graph paper (O, N, G, B)
-Use 3 different tools (don't use thin nibs)
Specific Feedback
-Can refer to Wim Crouwel typefaces
Week 13:
General Feedback
-Two submission: Text poster only & Poster with self portrait
Specific Feedback
-Poster 1 better, Make the font size bigger and column colour similar with the photo.

Week 12:
General Feedback
-Put your own photo into poster and design together
-Refer to Reza Abedini

Week 11:
General Feedback
-Export font from font lab
-Design a poster in Adobe Illustrator (A4 size point millimeter)
-Use all designed alphabet and at least one punctuation mark to design the poster
-Poster must label with name (XXX by Cyrus, 12 point size, Univers)

Week 10:
Absent

Week 9:
General Feedback
-Pathfinder > merge all shape into one shape
- Make one more copy before merging all shapes into one shape, used to prove progression
Specific Feedback
- When designing fonts, pay attention to their coordination in the same series

Week 8:
Independent learning week

Week 7:
General Feedback
-Lock the guides then will not affected when we move other thing
-Use the pen tool to add additional strokes.
-Ctrl + Y (to see CPU outline)
W11 T2 Post not labeled. Complete.
W8 T1 Complete
Week 4:
-Express the word in different background colour/duplicate more word (create contrast)
-Scream change background colour
-Melt effect in same time

Week 3:
-Vibrate can increase the size
-Scream more bigger
https://chowchenyi.blogspot.com/search/label/Typographycyruss.cy0728@gmail.com
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12RAIDA ABDOUL KADER0353038Week 5:
General Feedback:
Specific Feedback:
- Overall the layout is ok but try to move the first paragraph a bit above.
- Add a caption to the picture
- Be careful with the kerning for the last paragraph, it is too tight and affects the readability of the text.

Week 4:
General Feedback:
- Update Task 4 E-portfolio in the Google sheet
- The way you present your work needs to be effective, you need to create contrast, good composition, balance and dynamism
- You can change the colour background (black, grey, white)
- Always reflect, analyse and evaluate your work
Specific Feedback:
- Roll Can be much larger, and add shadow
- Scream is too organized, try to get a crowded effect, use Italics, use different fonts, change the size
- Sleep: dark background with letters in grey
W3 Where is your feedback? Mark deduction.
Week 3
General Feedback:
- You can use light shade only (If you want to use colours)
- Update e-portfolio on a weekly basis
- Design need to be functional and land to the meaning
- Compose the artwork to balance it (the 4 artworks)
- export your work as a gift, gray scale, no color
Specific Feedback:
- Always put headline on the left
- Place the sketches in one image, and research in one image then label, describe and date
- For the digitalisation:
scream: add gradient, light grey to black, to incerease the intensity and repeat the word 3 or 4 times
roll: create a path using outline to create the roll effect

Week 2
General Feedback:
- For line break: Shift + enter
- Combine all research in one image, remember to put the date, label, describe and embed (for research)
- Skethes have to be based on the 10 fonts
- Only minimal distortion is acceptable
Week 6:
General Feedback:
Specific Feedback:
-The line length should always be the same for a text, otherwise, the reader would think that the paragraphs are not related.
- Do not exceed the grid, your design has to follow the grid
Week 12:
General Feedback: The more dramatic it looks, the better the poster is.
The poster has to showcase all the letters.
Week 11:
Specific Feedback: For the poster make sure to balance the white space.
Week 10:
General Feedback:
Specific Feedback: Create the letter o first, you can use it as a base for e and c.
Week 9:
General Feedback: You can use brush strokes - outline strokes to create small imperfections in your letters
- You can use object - Path - Outline Stroke to create shapes
Week 7:
General Feedback: Even the smallest change can make a big difference in your letter. Stay consistent and don't be restricted by your sketches.


W11 T2 Somewhat complete. Poor reflection. Ep looks rushed. Reflection updated sir.
W8 T1 Somewhat complete.
Updated sir.
Week 3:
General feedback:
- Update e-portfolio on a weekly basis
Specific feedback:

- Always put the headline on the left
- Place the sketches in one image, and research in one image then label, describe and date
https://raidaabk.blogspot.com/search/label/Typographyabk.raida@gmail.com
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13WANG PENGWEI0343830Week 5:
Specific Feedback:
For Exercise 2 Text Formatting:
Manage the leading.
Again, contrast in layout is important. Try leaving out spaces to draw contrast to the body text.


Week 4
Feedback:
Again, composition and arrangement.Mind the contrast between different artworks.
Try not to have two similarly composited work next to each other.


Week 3
Feedback:
Lacking impact - leaving spaces makes the work less impactful.
Filling out the blanks a bit more, like increasing the size of the text, or inverting the color of "Glitch" to use the black fill-the-blanks.

Week 2
General Feedback:
We were advised to lean more on the expressive sides of the word. To have an acceptable amount of distortion and maintain the characteristics of the original font.
Sometimes it means pick one of the specific letters to be the "Expressive one", through rotation, scales and placement.
Week 6:
Specific Feedback:
"It is okay to use a certain minimal amount of graphics, such as lines extending from text. Don't use graphics as the main body of your idea."
Week 13:
Poster design - text needs to be front and the center focus of the poster.
More impact is better.

Week 12:
Specific Feedback - maintain font size, focus on presenting the font and have less distraction.

Week 11:
Generate poster designs with simply letters - focus on the specific lettes in use.

Week 10:

General Feedback:
For designing letters with cut out shapes: increase the size of empty gaps/spaces,
especially for lower case letters.
So they are visible when zoomed out.
W11 T2 Somewhat complete. Reflection not as instructed.
W8 T1 Incomplete. Ex.1 PDF not submitted, Ex.2: files not visible.
https://imgur.com/a/Cp6wW9n
Week 8: Modified based on feedback.

Week 4:
"Think as if you're speaking to someone who don't know what you're saying."

Update the Lectures watched.
Add figure numbers for Uploaded pictures of works.
Add more traces of process as evidence of originality.
https://wangpengwei0343830.blogspot.com/search/label/Typographymercivalwilliams@gmail.com
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14WANG ZHIWEI0352751Week 5
The digital MELT cannot be stretched as a whole, and the ROLL also needs further improvement. The four letters look monotonous and similar when put together. The animated letters are well done.
Week 4
General feedback: Need to finish the previous practice by next week.

Where is your feedback for W3?
Week 3
General feedback: hopefully I can catch up with the course soon. The design of the font where the 'melt' is fused together because of the melting is okay, as is the design with the blood/water coming out from underneath the SCREAM.
W1 Absent; W2 Absent;
Week 6
The initial design looks good. If the text is large enough, it can be typed across the middle line. When typesetting, it needs to be aligned to make it look neat and fluid.
Week 13
Add name to the poster

Week12
General feedback: Can put your photo on it now.

Week11
Can use this font for kerning.

Week 10
The letters need to be restructured, the width of the letters should not be consistent and the creation of the letters needs to be done as quickly as possible.

Week 9
The Angle of the strokes is inconsistent and needs to be re-created.

Week 8
Independent learning week.

Week 7
For the creation of letters, you can choose between uppercase and lowercase letters, and just focus on one of them. For what I finished last week, one of them looked interesting enough to maybe delve into.
W11 T2 Somewhat complete. Reflection not as instructed.
W8 T1 complete. Reflections not as instructed.
Week 8

Week 7
All images need to be dated, further reading to complete
Week 6
General Feedback: Good
Week 5
Splice pictures together so that the e-portfolio doesn’t look too long
Week 4
Hope to finish it next week and do some more reading
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