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AO1: Develop ideas through investigations, demonstrating critical understanding of sources.18/30
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AO2: Refine work by exploring ideas, selecting and experimenting with appropriate media, materials, techniques and processes.20/30
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AO3: Record ideas, observations and insights relevant to intentions as work progresses.23/30
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AO4: Present a personal and meaningful response that realises intentions and demonstrates understanding of visual language.18/30
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WWW
Appropriate photos for your theme. Well taken.
There are also some careful images taken for the Beauty in Decay strand. 		EBI
You need to take more images for each set and MORE sets of observations.
Annotation overall needs to be more in-depth.
Analysis of other photographers needs to be in more depth.
Final piece isn't really resolved. Needs more work.
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Keep up with tasks set. Come to Photography catch up.
Screengrab editing techniques.
When you write about your own work (www and ebi) you need to look more closely and determine exactly what you do well and what needs improvement. At the moment you are too brief.
When you take photographs, try different compositions, distances and points of focus so you have a breadth to choose from.
Analyse in more depth- use the sentences starters to help you.
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