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43 | 7/9/2013 23:37:49 | Madi | Hansen | Summer | In the first picture there is a lot of detail in the subjects in the picture. You can see the sunset and clouds very well and it is very textured. The bubbles are also outlined very nicely to make them pop. | Yes, the spark is the bubbles in the picture. | There are many different shapes and colors in this picture. There is also a lot of contrast in the sunset. | It does have an impact because the sun stands out so much and is so bold. | I would change that the sunset should be above the bubbles. | I think the image is very bold. It looks as if they enhanced the contrast on it to make the colors stand out more. | I think the concept can not be expanded. The concept is very developed already. | The concept could be communicated more clearly by putting more silhouettes to make me understand the picture more. | |||||||||
44 | 7/10/2013 7:45:28 | Maria | Salerno | Summer | The attention to detail in these photos are exquisite. There are different colors and small aspects of the photos that dramatize the photo. | Yes. Each photo sparks interest, curiosity, and wonder. | The contrast between the light background and the dark silhouette creates drama, as the shape and colors of the light behind the silhouette. | Yes. The image impacts the viewer through awe, curiosity, and mystery. | I would change the first picture. I would have composed the picture so the hand of the person is under the sun, so it looks like he or she is holding the sun. | The images are bold, yet they have a perfect amount of subtle mystery. | The concept is well developed. No. | I think that maybe a less cluttered photo could help the concept be communicated more clearly. | |||||||||
45 | 7/10/2013 7:48:42 | Abby | Trost | Summer | the attention is very much brought to the girl blwoing the bubbles. | yes because the bubbles are forming or the sun is peaking through the tree. | the shape of the person/bubbles with red/orange | yes because it inspires me | i would just want to change the color if it had no color to it | yes it is bold. | the concept is very developed | if the colors or images were more brought out | |||||||||
46 | 7/10/2013 8:49:05 | Ashleigh | Ackerman | 1 | It has many fine details a clarity to it and expresses more of a happy thought. | The bubbles in the first picture reminds me of a "good time" type of thing. | The person and the bubbles help to capture the persons eye to look around more. | The impact is the happy thought of a good and fun filled day. | Lighten the background. | It's pretty bold but could maybe use a brighter background. | Its pretty well put together, It could have the whole person to be expanded. | By showing the persons body. | |||||||||
47 | 7/10/2013 8:49:11 | Dakota | Peacock | Summer | The first picture has alot of space and many beautiful colors | The bubbles add a reflective quality to the picture | The first picture has spheres and a dramatic sunset | Yes, the dark figure is off to the side allowing for mystery and the sunset to show. | The hand underneath the bubbles | Bold | No it cannot be expanded, the image is lovely the way it is | It cant be. | |||||||||
48 | 7/10/2013 8:49:55 | Cullen | Black | Summer | I enjoy how your eyes are naturally drawn to the bubbles. | Yes | f cg are used and in makes the whole image more mysterious | Yes, It makes me wonder what he's doing in the forest | I would get rid of the bike | It's very subtle. He's just enjoying a bike through the forest. | It's not that devolped, he's just kidn of riding through the woods | I don't know have him do some cartwheels. | |||||||||
49 | 7/10/2013 8:50:55 | Savanna | Danoski | Summer | In the second photo it's mysterious. And makes me want to know more about what's happening | Yes | The trees and the man riding the bike. They make it a mysterious picture. | For some people the image might have impact depending I the situation they are in | I wouldn't change anything. I like what they did to this image | I think the image is both bold and subtle enough | I feel like it has a good concept. | I don't think the picture needs to be communicated any more clearly than it already is, | |||||||||
50 | 7/10/2013 8:51:18 | Zach | Sepanski | Summer | They made sure everything was perfect. | The spark is the photo is the human ridding the bike. | the visual elements are the people. | Yes, because they got their point across. | I would make the second one lighter. | Yes, it gets the point across great. | the concept is very well developed. | I believe that it is communicated perfectly. | |||||||||
51 | 7/10/2013 8:52:10 | Austin | Heiselmann | Summer | There is only background and small sharp details throughout. The picture has much meaning and was well taken. | yeah | Tree's, person, light, grass, and a bike. black blue and white contrast. | Yeah. It has meaning because there is the person on the bike riding in the forest. | The sharpness of the picture I would enhance. | The image is both bold and subtle. | The concept is developed and I feel it could possibly be expanded | make the person on the bike be doing something else like sitting down because in the picture you cant tell which way he is going. | |||||||||
52 | 7/10/2013 8:52:28 | Devin | Roenfanz | Summer | The detail in the bottom picture has a contrast of light and darkness. | The spark in the picture is is the mysterious boy riding his bike in the forest. | The drama is how the boy is a silhouette. | The picture has impact because of the light shining down at the boy. | I would change the boy from riding a bike to standing straight. | The image is bold from its mysteriousness | The concept cannot be expanded or else you will have to much of the picture. | The concept can be communicated more clearly by having more trees. | |||||||||
53 | 7/10/2013 8:52:40 | michael | kurzer | Summer | there is so much detail...they bubbles really show up and its cool | the sunset really gives the picture that special WOW. | the shapes of the bubbles ans\d thepopositn of the person. | yes..the picture does... the person really contrasts well with the backround. | mayb make the sunset a wee bit brighter. | i think the picture is bold enough because of the silhouette in the frint of the picture | it shows how carefree and how nice life can be and yeah | i think that maybe another person in the picture would really show the theme. | |||||||||
54 | 7/10/2013 8:54:30 | Carolyn | Brown | Summer | the sun brings the picture out and the guy and sime clouds are in black | the sun makes the picture pop out | the guy is blowing bubbles which has circles and the sun looks like a heart and a circle in side the heart | yes because they are getting there point across | i would make the bubbles a rainbow color around the edge of the ricle | there could been a little bit more on the picture like a little kid popping the bubbles | maybe a little bit more black and white | i would say add a little bit more detil on the bubbles | |||||||||
55 | 7/10/2013 8:54:44 | Carolyn | Brown | Summer | the sun brings the picture out and the guy and sime clouds are in black | the sun makes the picture pop out | the guy is blowing bubbles which has circles and the sun looks like a heart and a circle in side the heart | yes because they are getting there point across | i would make the bubbles a rainbow color around the edge of the ricle | there could been a little bit more on the picture like a little kid popping the bubbles | maybe a little bit more black and white | i would say add a little bit more detil on the bubbles | |||||||||
56 | 7/10/2013 8:55:11 | Katie | Boarini | Summer | the detail in the top photo shows originality because the bubbles show different lighting, but also shows the silhouette. | the bubbles are the spark in this picture. they are unexpected | he clouds are the shaps that add to the shawdowing in this picture. | i feel like this image does have impact because it resembles the spirit of a little kid | I would add more to the person blowing the bubbles | i believe it is bold enough, but to be subtle enough i feel the colors should be lighter, like the bubbles | i think the concept is very well covered, but it can be expanded by showing more of a landscape view. | I feel the concept could be communicated more clearly by adding another person into the picture, preferably a child playing in the bubbles. | |||||||||
57 | 7/10/2013 8:57:25 | Aidan | Brown | Summer | In the first picture there is a lot of detail. The bubbles are outlined which helps to make them pop, and you are able to see the clouds very well and they are nicely textured. | the spark in this picture is the bubbles | there is many shapes and colors in this picture. The sunset shows alot of the colors and the bubbles help to show some distinctive shape | it does have an impact because the bubbles really stand out and there is a lot of contrast in the photo | i would enhance the picture a little more to help the colors stand out more | i would have taken the picture with the sunset a little higher | i think it could be expanded | the concept could be communicated more clearly by adding more of the silhouette to help understand this picture even more | |||||||||
58 | 7/10/2013 9:00:58 | makala | buehn | Summer | It shows the bubbles with the colors to make them stick out more. | The bubbles | The sky in the background | Yes its showing you the drama there is when blowing bubbles | How the picture is taken | the colors all go together | Yes it could | you could showcase more colors ot make it more visible as to what the main point is | |||||||||
59 | 7/10/2013 9:04:33 | Timothy | Florek | Summer | The source of light is blocked, but by the frame, rather than the subject. You see rays of light that create partial silhouettes on some objects, and causes the biker's shadow to be cast on the road. The road itself has a gritty texture to it. There are trees behind the rays of light that create an out of focus background that still fits to the theme of the overall photograph. You see silhouettes of every object, from the plants on the ground and the bike, to the large trees and the biker. | You're interested in what direction the biker is heading on. Is he travelling away from you, or towards you? You also become curious about the environment as well. Some of the plants look like they are being blown back by the wind, and the background seems cloudy. | The large trees create a contrast of size between them and the subject, or the biker. The biker is small, and travelling on the road all alone. This creates drama, and creates thought. The picture has a story to it, but you're unaware of what that is. The contrast of the detail in the foreground to the detail of the background also creates drama, as well as the dark, more somber colors. Not only does it evoke mystery, but it also evokes hope. | Yes. If not for the lonely biker being dwarfed by the enormous trees and the grandeur of the sun, then for the large amount of contrast, and not just between dark and light colors. | On one of the large trees on the right side of the image, the left tree, near the middle of its growth, has a ray of light that shines in between one tree to the other. It adds a layer of depth, and might draw the eye, but it disrupts the silhouette. | The image is both bold and subtle. It depends on which layer you're giving attention to. The image quickly evokes the emotion that the photographer was focusing on. | It's very well developed, and I cannot think of anyway to expand it. It's very successful. | On the left side of the image, near the center, a part of a tree is highlighted. It would help if the rest of the tree was lit up in the same manner. | |||||||||
60 | 7/10/2013 9:05:49 | Arielle | Zamba | Summer | By having the most important things in the picture dark, it is drawing attention to thpse details. | Instead of having the bubbles be clear, they have a dark outline to them which makes them stand out. | The bubbles in the picture are some visual elements. | It has a positive impact because it reminds me of times when i blew bubbles with my friends and had a fun time. | The clouds in the background make some of the bubbles disappear and also it brings attention to them rather than the rest of the picture. | It is bold because it is using a lot of bright colors. | It is developed enough that i can tell that the person is blowing bubbles. | It could be more clear by having more bubbles. | |||||||||
61 | 7/10/2013 9:05:55 | Carli | Podella | Summer | The first photo has a lot of details. you see sunset with the clouds and the girl blowing bubbles. | The bubbles make the photo spark | The bright shapes in the background and the dark subject. | Yes, because the sunset makes the whole picture stand out. | Put the bubbles more apart. | Yes it bold. | The concept is well developed. Yes | The photo was more brought out. | |||||||||
62 | 7/11/2013 8:30:35 | Danielle | Bykowski | Summer | eyes are drawn to the bubbles | bubbles form and the sun peaking through the clouds | the sun adds drama to the picture | yeah it brings mystery | sunset could be above the bubbles | yes | concept is very well developed. no | no | |||||||||
63 | 7/18/2013 19:43:32 | austin | hedrick | Summer | clarity in both the bubbles and the biker | yes it creates the need to find out what happens next | the shape of the bubbles in the first picture | yes it creates a want to know what happesn next | none i absolutely love these pictures | yes the sun creates a bold picture | sharpness would create a more clear picture on the second one but otherwise its absolutely amazing | just a caption or other element that tells more of the story | |||||||||
64 | 7/22/2013 22:15:53 | Tevin | Pielhau | Summer | I like how the bubbles reflect the different colors of the sunset. | The bubbles are the spark. | It is cool the way that there is both warm and cool colors with the reds and the blues. | Yes. I love the dramatic color contrast. | I would move the camera to show less of the yellow sun. I find that too distracting. I would rather my focus be on the bubbles than the sun. | Yes it is bold enough. | I think the concept is well developed but the image could expanded to show more of the full image. | Zoom out on the image. | |||||||||
65 | 7/23/2013 7:57:20 | BRITTINY | CARLSON | Summer | THE COLORS | THE BUBBLES | THE BUBBLES ARE CIRCLES | YES RHE CONTRAST, THE COLORS ARE VERY VIBRANT | THE COLORS | YES IT IS BOLD | VERY DEVELOPED | SHOWING THE PERSON | |||||||||
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