1. Watch this video to review:
http://screencast.com/t/kB0kchrZY2. Create a new document.
3. Copy and paste the content of this document into yours:
https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=1BgGw5mZrI0aOXrnka-VigLw1EJ1RKKS6wQxJWdkRnqQ4. Title the document: Multiparagraph Essay H - Commentary Practice Part 1
5. Share the document with your partner and add it to your collection.
6. Read the two paragraphs.
7. In the second paragraph, highlight the commentary that has been added.
8. Beneath the paragraphs, create and insert a Google Drawing that will help you to remember the ratio of concrete detail to commentary (chunk) .
Above: I watched the video, highlighted all of the commentary in the paragraph, and created a creative and accurate Google Drawing to illustrate a chunk. I wrote detailed and accurate sentences above.
At: I watched the video, highlighted most of the commentary in the paragraph, and created a Google Drawing to illustrate a chunk. I wrote accurate sentences above.
Below: I watched the video, highlighted some of the commentary in the paragraph, and created a simple Google Drawing to illustrate a chunk. I wrote simple sentences above.
Far Below: I watched the video, highlighted some of the commentary in the paragraph, and tried to create a Google Drawing to illustrate a chunk. I wrote incomplete sentences above.
