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1 | Discus | Shot put | Javelin | Crit C | Blog post 1 for throwing journal | Blog post 2 for throwing journal | Assessment Blog post 1 for throwing journal | Blog post 1 for throwing journal | Assessment Blog post 2 for throwing journal | Throwing Journals | Crit A Knowledge | Criteria D Goal Setting | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
2 | Teacher | HR | Family Name | First Name | Arm: release is 45 degrees | Legs: hips facing forward at release | Hand: discus spins off index finger (Clockwise) | Basic skill: standing throw; no linking of movements | Complex Skill: linking rotation/ release /follow through in one fluent motion | Fingers: shot in fingers, clean palm/ shot against neck | Arm: throwing elbow must be high (shoulder height or above) | Non-throw arm: hand pointing to the sky | Body: Weight transfer from back to front leg | Legs: hips rotate; reversal of feet to generate power | Basic skill: standing throw with no/little rotation or glide/rotation/follow through | Complex skill: rotational start/glide start/ throw and follow through (feet reversal) in fluent motion. | Arm: nose of javelin facing direction of the throw | Body: (some) rotation of hip/shoulder to generate power | Feet: cross over step | Feet: follow through step used | Release sequence: arm fully extended behind body; elbow leading; strong release. | Basic skills: standing throw, little rotation, no run up/follow through | Complex Skills: Run up/throw/follow through as one fluent motion | Grade | Comments | EVENT 1 | EVENT 1 | EVENT 1 | EVENT 2 | EVENT 2 | Work completed on time | Grade | Comment | Grade | Comment | |||||||
3 | Christine | N | N | Y | Y | N | N | N | N | N | N | Y | N | 5 | Both throws have the wrong sequence, grip and power. | good | done | done | 3 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 4 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | ||||||||||||||||||||
4 | Akira | Y | D, more required | N, no snap of wrist, release off little finger | Y | N | D - twists back jav nose at wrong time | Y | Y | Y | N/A | Y | 8 | Technique: Javelin was very good, discus was weak. | good | done | done | 6 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 5 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | |||||||||||||||||||||
5 | Ayushie | 2 | gone | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
6 | Chien Wen (Chelsea) | D, angle is good but hand incorrect | Y, but timing incorrect - hips should lead the shoulders | N, Grip good; but palm not facing down on release | Y | N | Y | Y | Y | Y, but a little late | Y | n/a | Y, release is a little low, timing is a out | 8 | done | done 11 May | done | 5 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 4 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | |||||||||||||||||||||
7 | Ji Won | D | N | N, not holding discus correctly which affects all other technique | Y | N | N | D | Y | N | N | N/A | D | 6 | Javelin: Arm is too straight, elbow not bent. Discus performance is very weak in technique. | done | done | 7 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 6 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | |||||||||||||||||||||
8 | Jord | Y | Y | N | n/a | Y, hand position - no snap on release, release off of little finger | Y | Y | y | Y | Y | N/A | y | 9 | Javelin technique very good. Good principles of rotation shown. | good | done | done | 6 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 5 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | ||||||||||||||||||||
9 | Mateusz | Y | Y, great job | D - good grip, but release from little finger not index | N | Y | Y | D | Y | D | Y | N/A | Y | 10 | Strong release in Javelin. Great job! | done | done | done | 5 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 6 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | ||||||||||||||||||||
10 | Minh Quan | Y | N, elbow too low | N | N throwing only from shoulders | N, upper body rotation only | Y | N | Y | D | N | D | Y, but not very strong. | N | Y | 8 | Javelin was much stronger than your Shot put technique. | done | done 12 May | 6 | Final blog post for assessment was not received. This grade is based on the second post. | 5 | Final blog post for assessment was not received. This grade is based on the second post. | |||||||||||||||||||
11 | Na Yeon | N | N, wrong timing - hips then shoulders | N - pulling not throwing | Y | N | Y, pulls away as you throw | D, drops elbow at last minute | Y | Y, but too late | Y | n/a | Y, good timing but no glide or rotational start | 7 | done | done | done | 7 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 7 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | |||||||||||||||||||||
12 | Nga (Hannah) | N | N, too low | N, too low | Y | Y | Y | N | Y | D | N | N | D, good leading w your elbow | n/a | Y | 7 | Need to lock up your wrist in shot put as you release. | very good | done | done | 7 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 6 | Goals were not listed in your final post, but improvement was clear. | ||||||||||||||||||
13 | Nozima | n | n | y | y | N grip was lost and the throw was incorrect for the release. Palm needs to be facing the ground at release point. | y pulls away a little | n | y | y | d | n/a | y | 7 | Shot was correct but you made a lot of errors with the discus. when you lost your grip you should have started again. | good | 7 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 7 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | ||||||||||||||||||||||
14 | Quynh Anh | Y, but missing the shot on the neck | Y | Y | Y | Y | n/a | Y, good timing but no glide or rotational start | Y | Y | N | N | D, pulls back well but not correct throw | N/A | Y | 9 | very good | done | done | done | 6 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 6 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | ||||||||||||||||||
15 | Saskia | D | Y | Y | na | Y | Y but pulled away from neck as put started. | Y | y | Y | D | na | Y | 9 | More energy needs to be generated. Your throws have most of the elements needed but you need to transfer weight and rotate with more speed. | good | very poor | done | 6 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 5 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | ||||||||||||||||||||
16 | Seung Kyu (Dean) | Y | N | Y | Y | Y | n/a | Y, good timing but no glide or rotational start | Y | N | N | Y | Y | Y | N | 8 | No pull back of the javelin. | good | done | 7 | As your submission was a OneNote, your comments are posted here. Excellent and detailed analysis. although you only needed to do one event. I have marked you on javelin which was the best one. You have compared yourself accurately with Mr. Hough and done a great job. | 5 | Goals were not listed in your final post, but improvement was clear. | |||||||||||||||||||
17 | Sorcha | N | N, don't rotate far enough; sequence of hips then shoulders is developing | Y, grip good but release is incorrect. | N | D | Y | Y | Y | D | D, doesn't pull jav far enough back, need to release a little later | n/a | Y | 8 | Javelin much stronger than the Discus. | good | done | 7 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 5 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | |||||||||||||||||||||
18 | Svea | Y | Y | N | Y, no rotation/snap and timing | N | Y | N, too low | D, drop too low | Y, but too slow | Y, good | N/a | Y, good timing but no glide or rotational start | 7 | done | done | done | 8 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 7 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | |||||||||||||||||||||
19 | Tobias | N | N, too low | N | D | N | Y | N | y | y | y | d | Y | N/a | Y | 9 | accurate technique, need more power on follow through | done | done | done | done | 7 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 7 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | |||||||||||||||||
20 | Wei Long | Y | D | Y | Y | N | n/a | Y | 9 | Well done. Some very pleasing improvement in your technique. You have worked hard to throw with the correct technique. | done | done | done | 6 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 5 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
21 | Zheng Yuan | Y | Y, but wrong timing | N, throwing off of wrong finger; grip good | Y | N, sequence/timing is incorrect | Y | Y | N | Y | Y, pull javelin back further | n/a | Y | 8 | Good javelin, weaker discus technique. | good | done | done 5 | done | 6 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 6 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | |||||||||||||||||||
22 | Le-Y-Mai, Emeline (Emeline) | N | N but incorrect sequence, no hip or weight transfer. | N, Grip, wind up and release incorrect. | Y | N | Y | Y | Y | Y | Y | Y, but no rotational glide/start | 7 | Great work in Shot put but your technique in Discus is poor. | excused | done | done | 7 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 7 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | |||||||||||||||||||||
23 | Hjalmar | D - wrong finger release. Grip good | D | N | Y | N | D - rotates wrist before throw twisting jav nose | D | N | N | N | Y | N | 6 | Javelin: Not leading with elbow, bowls like a cricket ball. Discus is weak. You are very powerful but do not throw with form. | poorly done | done | 5 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 6 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | |||||||||||||||||||||
24 | Li Zhang | Y | D - hips good but release of discus is very good. | N, holding discus | Y | N | Y | N | N | D | D, too late | Y, but rotating first then throwing, timing is out. | 8 | Well done. | very good | done 12 May | done | 6 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 6 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | |||||||||||||||||||||
25 | Jek | D | Y | y | Y | Y, some loss of balance but good energy. | NA | Y | D | Y | Y | Y | D | 9 | Javelin was slung from too low a position. Get your elbow up and bend the elbow before throwing. Discus was good but came away from your face. | done-too brief | done | done | 3 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | 3 | Please check your individual blog post entries for detailed comments, your final work will have a comment and your grades or futher comments are listed here. | ||||||||||||||||||||
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