great work tying in yor own solution focus on implementation

add more substance to your comment, add a solution you have prepared

good job add your own solutions! great job

let other people talk and finish their sentences

add more substance, add a solution to your comment so you can get maximum points

try to add more substance and fill your time, dont just say you agree

i noticed your solutions were good but please add more details so we can understand how you will make this plausiable

try not to read comments, try to add a solution of yours to the comment

reso question, basic

i like your solutions and would like to see more of them presented in unmods. try to incorporate statistics as well. focus on implementation

good implementation of your own ideas and filling most of your time

Good participation and bringing up new solutions

dont worry about funding questions

ur hook was bars. i really like your solutions EFP plan. needs more implementation, good statistics and fill your time all the way to 1:30

good job adding your own solution and relating it back to the previous speaker focus on more implementation

be more confident with your speaking, add on one of your solutions

actvely writing but not contributing to discussion

good question try to tie in specifics

Try making more eye contact when giving your speech and try to memorize it. try to focus on implementaiton in your solutions, also try not to focus on just your country focus globally

add more substance like a solution to your comment and fill all 30 seconds

add more substance and fill your time

partiipate more we would love to see you talking with other delegates instead of standing off to the siden

good question duing reso presentation

MEEP! you really stand on your country policy which is sooo important you have such a good presence so keep it up. good implementation on your solutions. 6/7 jokessss!

strong comments, adding your own solution ideas

reso question: good use of bringing in data but dont worry about funding

we recognize you being a leader but please let other people talk and get their ideas out as well

use more statistics, how iwll you implement daycares or your other solution ideas?

add more substance to your comments, add a solution you proposed

add more substance

look attentive but not contributing

love the 6/7 hook, your solutions are great focus on more implementation to add more detail to make your solutions plausable

good implementation of your own solution,

good use of statistics and implementing your own solution into the comment and using your full speaking time.

you had such great ideas please participate more in unmods!!

your hook took 20 seconds, i like the imagine scenario however i reccomend making it shorter so you can go right into your solutions and countries stance. focus on implementation, use statistics or examples. fill your time up

try to add more susbtance into your comments, add on oen fo your solutions into the commment, good job filling most of your time

try to add more susbtance into your comments, add on oen fo your solutions into the commment, fill your time up

LOVE THAT ENDING! add more substance like your solutions

use question time for askign questions do not appluad them on their reso

make sure you focus on women in the workforce not sports. make a more compelling hook, it was kinda vague

add more substance like a solution to fill your time

add more substance

participating by getting signatories, try to add solutions to your reso group

i would love to see a good hook. good solutions, focus on implementation, strong voice, why is STEAM important- answer that question in your speech

i really like your solution idea that you brought up, good comment overall

try to add a hook, good statisitcis, try to add how you will make these solutions possible

you had more time to add more about your solution so don't end your speech to early

your solutions are good but they need more implementation, how will daycares be placed, where, why and how?

try to add a bit more of your solution, most of the time you spent talking was agreeing with the previous speaker, make that more brief

add more substance to your comments instead of just agreeing

try to add a bit more of your solutions.

try to slow down, plan JOB, include more statistics, and be more confident

good comment and addition of your own solution

basic reso question

try to speak a littlle louder, be more confident and look at your audience while you speak not down at the ground, your solutions need more implementation, i like your ideas but they need more details to back them and make them plausable

try not to look down when you speak, adress the comment to the previous delegate fill your time up

basic reso question

good comment

great job adding your own solutions and recognizign the previous delegate and filling your time

i like your solutions but try to use other NGOS instead of the UN to back your ideas

good question, tie in specifics