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4 | Ideas and Organization | *Just beginning to figure out what I want to say. *I haven’t shared much information. I don’t seem to know much about this topic. *My details are so vague it’s hard to picture anything. *There really isn’t a beginning or introduction to my paper. It just takes off. *My ideas seem scrambled, jumbled and disconnected. *Conclusion! Oops, I forgot. | *Some really good parts, some not there yet! *Details are general (nice, fun, some, good.) *I have a beginning but it doesn’t really grab you or give clues about what is coming. *Sometimes it is not clear how some of the details connect to the story or main idea. *My story basically follow a good order, a few things might be out of sequence. *I have a conclusion, but it is just ok. | *I know a lot about this topic and added interesting tidbits. *I showed what was happening instead of telling. *My beginning grabs the reader’s attention and gives clues about what is coming. *My details are in the right place. *My story follows a good sequence. *I ended at a good spot. I have a strong conclusion or ending. | ||
5 | Conventions and Word Choice | *Spelling errors are common, even simple words. *Capital letters are scattered all over or not at all. *Punctuation is very limited and makes reading this paper difficult. *Frequent grammatical errors, I haven’t spent much time editing this paper. *My words don’t make pictures yet. *Some of my words are misused. *Over and over I used the same words over and over, until my paper was over. | *Spelling is correct on simple words. It may not be right on harder words. *Most sentences and proper nouns begin with capitals, but a few have been over looked. *Problems in punctuation make the reader stumble and pause now and then. *I used everyday words pretty well but I did not stretch for a new and better way to say things. *Most of the time the reader will figure out what I mean even if a few words are messed up. *My words aren’t real specific. Better, juicy details. | *My spelling is accurate. *I have used capitals correctly. *Every paragraph is indented to show where a new idea begins. *Periods, commas, exclamation marks, and quotation marks are in the right places. *My grammar is consistent and shows control. *My words are colorful, snappy, vital, brisk and fresh. *Look at all my energetic verbs! | ||
6 | Sentence Fluency and Voice | *As I read my paper I have to go back and read over, just to figure out the sentence. *The sentence patterns are repetitive. *I’m having a hard time telling where one sentence stops and another begins. *If you didn’t already know, you might not know who wrote this paper. *I sound like a robot. *My paper makes the reader yawn. *My paper is all telling and no showing. | *Some of my sentences are smooth and natural, but others are halting. *When I read my paper, most of the sentences have the same patterns. *Many sentences begin the same way. *I have used more words than necessary. *My writing is right on the edge of being funny, excited, scary, or honest—but it is not there yet. *My personality pokes through here and there. *I’ve done more telling than showing. | *Some are long and stretchy. Some are short and snappy. *Sentence beginnings vary. *Good sentence sense. My sentence flows. *I have put my personal stamp on this. It’s me! *Readers can tell I’m talking right to them. *My paper is full of feelings and the reader will know how I feel. *Nobody else sounds like this. | ||
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