Copy of Guns on Campus 2014 Chicago1

	A	B	C	D	E	F	G	H	I	J	K	L	M
1	Last, First	Period	10 footnotes/endnotes citations	Superscripts	Footnote/Endnote	Writing Errors	Writing	Sources	Bibliography - errors	Readability	Misc. Comments	Grade	Timestamp

2	AhirPriyank	Period 4	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper., Incomplete Essay	Superscript error - not in order, you cannot repeat numbers in Chicago	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, Missing information - incomplete references	Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	Missing information - incomplete Essay
3	AjasbiK	Period 2	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing
4	AlvarezMarissa	Period 4	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, Footnote/Endnote error - Author - not First Last, There was at least one discussion footnote., Do not use hanging indents.	Parts not written well.	The essay fails to account for the opposing arguments, The voice of the college is NOT obvious., The essay does NOT make sense and is NOT well argued.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing, Parts not worded well	??? "Universally guns have created a serious issue throughout the United States." Is it universal or just in the US? = choose your words carefully. First paragraph needs SERIOUS work. Not well written. You contradicted yourself. "It boils down to this: the only thing that stops a bad guy with a gun is a good guy with a gun." If this were true, then students and teachers SHOULD CARRY ARMS. - Do you see the contradiction in your argument? You need serious rewriting.
5	ArcosA	Period 1	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess, There was at least one discussion footnote.	minimal or no writing errors	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	Parker and Davis' two essays were NOT sources for the paper., Three other sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	Well written
6	AvinaBeltranM	Period 2	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	minimal or no writing errors	The essay is well argued	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - entries not alphabetized	average writing	Incomplete essay. The introduction needs to follow the prompt.
7	AzcunaCallahan	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations were superscripted but on 5 were listed in the Endnotes = incomplete	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors, Never use first name to refer to authors = Kate also in her article	The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., Authors mentioned in the text were NOT introduced.	All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	Capitalization errors.	Parts not worded well	Many issues - SUCH AS: "There is much ambiguity whether it is safer to have them on or off and whether other school who do not allow are restricting peoples second amendment." ON OR OFF WHAT? whether other school??? PEOPLES = ERROR SECOND AMENDMENT IS A PROPER NOUN. Missing 7 endnotes.
8	BakerL	Period 1	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	Bibliography - entries not alphabetized	average writing	Watch the spelling and grammar.
9	BeltranJacqueline	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess, Capitalization errors.	minimal or no writing errors	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, The voice of the college is NOT obvious., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	Well written	Error: 2. Linda M. hesselstrom Do not use multiple fonts and sizes.
10	BenitezCristian	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The voice of the essay is NOT appropriate to that of a college and does NOT address the issue of guns on campus well., The essay does NOT make sense and is NOT well argued.	All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing	Your intro says one thing. Your conclusion says another. I'm not sure what you are arguing. Formatting is good.
11	BergrenNoah	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used., Kessler, Do concealed-weapon laws result in less crime? = need caps and quotation marks	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	in crime rates.3, 4 - wrong way to do multiple source citation in Chicago (what you hat is ok in CSE but NOT in Chicago.	minimal or no writing errors	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay., Very nice use of discussion footnote.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	Bibliography - Hanging indent errors, minimal or no errors in bibliography	Well written	Do concealed-weapon laws result in less crime = caps error in both Endnotes and Bibliogrpahy.
12	BibasP	Period 1	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no url for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - poor grammar	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	Bibliography - Not Last, First , Bibliography - incomplete information in bibliography, Bibliography - error - included access date	average writing	The conclusion needs to refer back to the idea in the introduction that it is impossible for it to be universal.
13	BobbsJ	Period 2	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively , 2 superscripts	Footnote/Endnote error - Author - not First Last, Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, 4 endnotes	minimal or no writing errors	incomplete essay	The sources were credible and reliable.	No Bibliography	average writing
14	BrookerS	Period 1	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - Author - not First Last, Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued	All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	Bibliography - incomplete information in bibliography	average writing	The conclusion needs to refer back to the idea in the introduction about innocent people protecting themselves more than school shootings and murderers.
15	BrownC	Period 2	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued.	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - Not Last, First	average writing	Ballantine is not in the bibliography.
16	BurnerKatherine	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, There was at least one discussion footnote., Missing information - incomplete references., Misused parentheses. Dates wrong.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - singular antecedent... plural pronoun - a student should do their best	The voice of the essay is NOT appropriate to that of a college and does NOT address the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., Introduction needs development., The last two sentences of the intro contradict each other - don't they???	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - Hanging indent errors	average writing, Parts not worded well	Error: "If a person who is unknown walks into a classroom, and the teacher of that class has a gun, will they "
17	CassidyErin	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively , Superscript Punctuation error ....end of sentence." superscript - Periods go inside the quotation mark." Superscript goes outside of the quotation mark., do not superscript the punctuation.	No discussion footnote was used - ERROR., Missing information - incomplete references.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - singular antecedent... plural pronoun - a student should do their best, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors, Capitalization errors like: The columbine massacre	The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., Introduction needs development., Conclusion needs development.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - Hanging indent errors	average writing, Parts not worded well	Many, many mechanical errors like: sandy hook shooting, The Gaurdian,
18	Castellanosl	Period 2	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing
19	CastilloAlejandro	Period 4	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively , Superscript error - used (in-text), 1,2,3 are not superscripted.	No discussion footnote was used - ERROR., Missing quotation marks for article titles.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay fails to account for the opposing arguments, The essay does NOT make sense and is NOT well argued., No discussion footnote.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - Hanging indent errors	average writing, Parts not worded well	Your intro needs to be rewritten. Poor writing.
20	CastillonB	Period 1	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	minimal or no writing errors	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued	All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing
21	CervantesBrenda	Period 4	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess	minimal or no writing errors	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The voice of the college is obvious., The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	Well written	excellent work.
22	ChangSarah	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, Footnote/Endnote error - (Publisher) not in parentheses for print sources, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - singular antecedent... plural pronoun - a student should do their best, Parts not written well.	The essay is well argued, The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - Hanging indent errors	average writing, Parts not worded well	Choose your words carefully. Your use of the word "cease" is not optimal. Error: "an individual who has a gun in their possession"
23	CharmelloDominic	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Do not indent 2nd and subsequent uses of sources = ERROR. ALSO 3. Hasselstorm, A Peaceful Women, 300. = needs quotation marks. Error: 8. Peg McEntee, Utah Teacher Shoots Herself - no first name in shorten form	Writing Error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., No discussion footnote.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing	YOu quoted authors but neglected to use quotation marks - WHY? = Error. E.G. = Missouri lawmakers expanded the potential for teachers to bring guns to schools...1 AND I am a peace loving woman. But several events in the past ten years have convinced me I'm safer when I carry a pistol.2
24	ChavezJesse	Period 5	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	Parts not written well.	The voice of the essay is NOT appropriate to that of a college and does NOT address the issue of guns on campus well., The voice of the college is NOT obvious., Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	No Bibliography, Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	Incomplete
25	ChicaK	Period 1	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing
26	CoveyS	Period 2	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - (Publisher) not in parentheses for print sources, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - poor grammar	The essay is well argued, Conclusion needs development.	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - error - included access date	average writing	The essay seems to about the need to avoid being raped or murdered. Stick to the prompt and the law about concealed weapons on college campuses.
27	CovingtonKaitlin	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess, There was at least one discussion footnote.	minimal or no writing errors	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, The voice of the college is obvious., The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	Well written	Error: 13. "What we Actually Know about the Connection between Mental Illness, Mass Shootings, and Gun Violence" 14. "What we Actually Know about the Connection between Mental Illness, Mass Shootings, and Gun Violence" should be Author, "title"
28	CrewS	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - poor grammar	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	Well written	Good job.
29	DaCostaLima	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing	In the introduction, a transition is needed between the first 2 sentences. In the conclusion, the last sentence should talk about increasing...causing more deaths rather than reducing because the essay is about increasing.
30	DahlJames	Period 4	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively , Where is superscript 11?	There was at least one discussion footnote., Missing information - incomplete references., I do not see superscript 11 in the text - it's in your endnotes.	Parts not written well.	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced., Introduction needs development.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing, Parts not worded well	"Dr. David Roberts Grimes, a physicist and cancer researcher at Oxford University" - why is he qualified to speak on this topic? Do NOT employ different fonts and sizes in the same document.
31	DaSilvaJuliana	Period 4	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper., no citations used.	no superscripts	No discussion footnote was used - ERROR., Missing information - incomplete references.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors, Parts not written well.	The voice of the essay is NOT appropriate to that of a college and does NOT address the issue of guns on campus well., The voice of the college is NOT obvious., The essay does NOT make sense and is NOT well argued., Authors mentioned in the text were NOT introduced.	A minimum of sources were NOT in the paper.	No Bibliography	Poorly written	Your intro is filled with mechanical errors (spelling, grammar, punctuation).
32	DavisB	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - poor grammar	The essay makes sense and is well argued., Introduction needs development.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing	Introduction needs work. Incorporate the conclusion into your introduction.
33	DenmanK	Period 2	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - Author - not First Last, Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - poor grammar	Introduction needs development., Conclusion needs development.	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - Not Last, First , Bibliography - entries not alphabetized , Bibliography - incomplete information in bibliography, Error: numbered sources instead of alphabetizing., Repeated reference	average writing	Follow the prompt. The essay should not just be a lesson about the laws.
34	DoeringR	Period 1	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	only 2 superscripts	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	No Bibliography	average writing
35	DomnikoJrA	Period 2	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscript Punctuation error ....end of sentence." superscript - Periods go inside the quotation mark." Superscript goes outside of the quotation mark.	Footnote/Endnote error - no url for web site, Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - poor grammar	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - error - included access date	average writing
36	DraperEthan	Period 4	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, Do not use hanging indent in Endnotes (only in Bibliography).	Writing Error - singular antecedent... plural pronoun - a student should do their best, "anyone being able to get their hands on one"	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - Hanging indent errors	Well written	overall well done.
37	FanielMailani	Period 4	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	"Columbine High School Shootings Fast Facts," CNN = not in your Bibliography	Parts not written well., watch wording.	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - Hanging indent errors	average writing	"The purpose of a gun is to kill an object." = no - not objects - objects are not alive. Choose words carefully.
38	FiskR	Period 4	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - singular antecedent... plural pronoun - a student should do their best, " but if the carrier is careless or a mentally ill individual, they can bring harm" = error	The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	Not used in paper: NCSL. "Guns on Campus:	average writing, Poorly written	Much of your paper lacks commentary and argumentation. You pasted together many quotes - you need to make better arguments.
39	FleishmanN	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - Author - not First Last, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued.	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - error - included access date	average writing
40	FowlerA	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - poor grammar	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay., The disussion end note needs to be complete thought.	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - entries not alphabetized	average writing
41	FreemanJ	Period 1	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - Author - not First Last, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - poor grammar	The essay makes sense and is well argued., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	Bibliography - incomplete information in bibliography, Bibliography - error - included access date	average writing	Error: did not use authors' names in the endnotes or bibliography.
42	GertychP	Period 2	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - Author - not First Last, Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	minimal or no writing errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing
43	GiangrandeNatalie	Period 4	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, Missing information - incomplete references.	Parts not written well.	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	Ganderson's name is misspelled in Bibliography.	average writing	Error: "to the Sandy Hook shooting in 2014" Do not use different fonts and sizes in the same document! Deborah Gorman-Smith = not in Bibliography. Nor is Discover Policing, "Training/ Academy Life,"
44	GomezJessica	Period 4	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, There was at least one discussion footnote., use a space between each note.	Parts not written well.	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	Misspelled: Hesselstrom Linda	average writing	Incorrect: Jefferson City. “ Missouri Governor Vetoes Bill Allowing Overall - well done!
45	GonzalezMariela	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess	minimal or no writing errors	The essay is well argued	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	Well written	Good job. The conclusion and Intro could use further development.
46	GravesN	Period 2	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	minimal or no writing errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing
47	GrundmanJ	Period 1	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote seemed out of place to be outside the main essay.	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - misnamed, minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing
48	GutierrezIsabella	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, Footnote/Endnote error - Author - not First Last, Footnote/Endnote error - (Publisher) not in parentheses for print sources, There was at least one discussion footnote., do not have multiple fonts.	minimal or no writing errors	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	Bibliography - entries not alphabetized , Error: numberd sources instead of alphabetizing.	Well written	Check endnote and bibliography erros
49	HaleE	Period 2	no citations used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively , Some (#)'s	No discussion footnote was used - ERROR., No endnotes	Writing Error - poor grammar	The essay makes sense and is well argued., Conclusion needs development.	No sources listed	No Bibliography	average writing
50	HepworthDarcy	Period 4	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, Missing information - incomplete references.	Writing Error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - singular antecedent... plural pronoun - a student should do their best, "this teacher may have been able to save their students"	The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., Authors mentioned in the text were NOT introduced.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - Hanging indent errors	average writing, Parts not worded well	Is this logical: "Adam killed them, not the gun."??? It would have been much harder for him had he not had a gun...
51	HogoboomWyatt	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Watch awkward phrases	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay., Awkward writing: "displays his study in an article that "	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing	delete your second Bibliography.
52	HongoS	Period 2	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	minimal or no writing errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced., Conclusion needs development.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing	The campus scenario from the introduction should be referred to in the conclusion.
53	HoustonA	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., Conclusion needs development.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing	The conclusion should refer back to the classroom scenario in the introduction.
54	JacobsonK	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - entries not alphabetized	average writing	The conclusion should refer to the school scenario in the introduction.
55	JavenC	Period 2	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing
56	JermanD	Period 5	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	Superscripts not consecutive	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, Footnote/Endnote error - references not in order 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. etc, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR., 4 endnotes	Writing Error - poor grammar	Introduction needs development., Your thesis is not clear.	The sources were credible and reliable.	only 1 source	average writing	The conclusion should refer to the history of weapons in the introduction. The argument changes from defending to challenging the law.
57	JimenezChristian	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess	minimal or no writing errors	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	Beem is in your Bibliography but NOT in your Endnotes. Remove.	Well written	good overall.
58	JohnsonDante	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc)	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - Hanging indent errors	Well written	I think you used direct citations but did not use quotation marks = ERROR
59	JohnsonJason	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess, There was at least one discussion footnote.	minimal or no writing errors	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing	The essay could use a much more developed conclusion.
60	JuliusA	Period 1	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing
61	KarsseboomRamirezN	Period 1	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	no superscripts	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	minimal or no writing errors	The essay does NOT make sense and is NOT well argued., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	The sources were credible and reliable.	No Bibliography	average writing	Follow the prompt and include a thesis statement.
62	KayL	Period 2	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Parts not written well.	The essay makes sense and is well argued., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing
63	KramerK	Period 2	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscript Punctuation error ....end of sentence." superscript - Periods go inside the quotation mark." Superscript goes outside of the quotation mark.	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay is well argued	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	Parts not worded well	Watch the spelling, grammar, run-on sentences and sentences that need capital letters.
64	LaoJ	Period 1	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - poor grammar	stick to the prompt	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - entries not alphabetized , Bibliography - incomplete information in bibliography	average writing	Incomplete essay. No conclusion
65	LavoieE	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing Error - poor grammar	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing	The conclusion needs to refer back to the classroom scenario in the introduction.
66	LayanaJenna	Period 4	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, You nave multiple repeated numbers like #1 and #3	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors, Parts not written well., UC Santa Barbra = misspelled.	Incomplete essay	A minimum of sources were used in the paper.	No Bibliography	Parts not worded well	Error: "be armed to the tee" Do not use multiple fonts and sizes in the same document. Inconsistent - you used IBID BUT then you used the shortened from - be consistent.
67	LeeK	Period 2	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	No endnotes	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay is well argued	4 sources	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing
68	LeeS	Period 2	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	5 in-text, not all superscripts	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR., 2 endnotes	Writing Error - poor grammar	Conclusion needs development., incomplete essay	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - Not Last, First , only 1 source	average writing	In college, there is no purpose of a gun. The body and conclusion of the essay need to refer back to this idea and not dwell on the opposite view point.
69	lemusK	Period 1	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR., incomplete information	minimal or no writing errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing
70	LeonB	Period 1	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	minimal or no writing errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	Well written
71	LeonD	Period 2	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., Conclusion needs development.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing
72	LewisHunter	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors, SP: 7. Kate Murphey,	The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	Well written	This doesn't make sense: " In conclusion, our children are at risk. At risk not from a gun but from a deranged person in possession of a gun. "
73	LiangLauren	Period 3	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., A minimum of sources were used in the paper.	Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay
74	LopezH	Period 2	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	Superscript Punctuation error ....end of sentence." superscript - Periods go inside the quotation mark." Superscript goes outside of the quotation mark., 6 #'s	No discussion footnote was used - ERROR., No endnotes	Writing Error - poor grammar	The essay makes sense and is well argued.	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - entries not alphabetized	average writing
75	ManouchehryShawn	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The voice of the essay is NOT appropriate to that of a college and does NOT address the issue of guns on campus well., The voice of the college is NOT obvious.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	No Bibliography	Parts not worded well, Poorly written	ERROR: The right to bear arms, as stated in the first Amendment of the constitution,
76	MarksC	Period 1	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	minimal or no writing errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - incomplete information in bibliography	Well written	The strong classroom scenario in the introduction should be revisited in the conclusion.
77	MartinezA	Period 2	The superscripts did not match the endnotes/footnotes.	no superscripts	No endnotes	Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	Authors mentioned in the text were introduced., Conclusion needs development.	No sources listed	No Bibliography	average writing
78	MartinezDanielle	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR., - penalty	Writing Error - singular antecedent... plural pronoun - a student should do their best	The voice of the essay is NOT appropriate to that of a college and does NOT address the issue of guns on campus well., The essay fails to account for the opposing arguments, The voice of the college is NOT obvious., The essay does NOT make sense and is NOT well argued.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - entries not alphabetized , minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing	Why is this person qualified to speak about guns? "Kevin Bradford, specialist in marketing at the University of Notre Dame's" REally??? "Citizens should only be allowed to carry a concealed weapon when traveling alone in foreign places for their own protection." You want foreigners carrying guns in the US to feel safe? That doesn't make me feel safer. Your essay isn't well thought out.
79	McCleanMegan	Period 4	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess	minimal or no writing errors, choose words carefully	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - Hanging indent errors, minimal or no errors in bibliography	Well written	So what's a positive gun and what's a negative gun? "Guns, both positive and negative, can either save or destroy a life." = choose your words carefully.
80	McCleanMorgan	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess	minimal or no writing errors	Authors mentioned in the text were NOT introduced., = ERROR	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., A minimum of sources were used in the paper., The sources were credible and reliable.	Missing item	average writing	Kate Murphy and Jordan Rubio reveal in their article ... = missing in Bibliography and also in Endnotes = ERROR
81	MedfordBrett	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscript error - used (in-text), Superscript go AFTER the quotation, not before the source.	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR., Format WRONG = 1.Sara Gates,"Sean McCutcheon, Armed Highland School Officer, Accidentally Discharges Gun; District Puts Program on Hold"(Huffington Post: Politics, 2013).	Writing Error - poor grammar, Parts poorly worded and phrased.	The voice of the essay is NOT appropriate to that of a college and does NOT address the issue of guns on campus well., The voice of the college is NOT obvious., The essay does NOT make sense and is NOT well argued.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	Parts not worded well, Poorly written	Intro is poorly worded.
82	MonroyE	Period 5	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	no superscripts	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay is well argued, Conclusion needs development.	A minimum of 5 sources were NOT in the paper.	No Bibliography	average writing
83	MontalvoMelisa	Period 4	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess	minimal or no writing errors	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay is well argued, The voice of the college is obvious., The essay makes sense and is well argued., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic., The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	Excellent - College Level	good work
84	MontaniC	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no url for web site, Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - incomplete information in bibliography	average writing
85	MooreB	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - Author - not First Last, Footnote/Endnote error - no url for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc)	The essay is well argued, The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	The sources were credible and reliable.	No Bibliography	Well written, did not follow prompt	The prompt was: Write an argumentative essay in which you defend, challenge or qualify this practice. A side was was not chosen or argued.
86	MostertW	Period 1	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote., endnotes found in draft 1	Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	Well written
87	NarumiM	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - poor grammar	The essay makes sense and is well argued., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing
88	NebelGrant	Period 3	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - did not indent first line, There was at least one discussion footnote., Do not indent further the second and subsequent use of a sources like you did for footnotes: 3,5,6,8,11	Writing Error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Having a gun on you at all time is just asking for trouble.	The essay is well argued, The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	A minimum of sources were used in the paper., All the sources in this paper are credible and academic.	Bibliography - Hanging indent errors	Well written	Mostly well done
89	NegreteRory	Period 3	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively , Essay incomplete	Essay incomplete	Essay incomplete	Essay incomplete	Essay incomplete	No Bibliography	Essay incomplete	Essay incomplete
90	NolanM	Period 2	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	minimal or no writing errors	The voice of the essay is appropriate to that of a college and addresses the issue of guns on campus well., The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	Excellent - College Level	Good job.
91	NootbaarLarsTaylor	Period 3	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	A minimum of sources were NOT in the paper.	No Bibliography	Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay
92	NowparvarArmon	Period 4	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	no superscripts	No discussion footnote was used - ERROR., Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	Incomplete essay	No Bibliography	Incomplete essay	incomplete
93	OstlerN	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - Author - not First Last, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued.	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - error - included access date	average writing
94	PalleyN	Period 2	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	minimal or no errors in Endnotes/Footnotess, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - poor grammar	The essay makes sense and is well argued., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced., Conclusion needs development.	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - entries not alphabetized , Bibliography - error - included access date	average writing	The conclusion needs to refer back to the introduction and the idea that there is a rift between proponents and opponents of college campus safety. The conclusion currently is about one portion of the law.
95	PanesA	Period 1	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	minimal or no writing errors	Authors mentioned in the text were NOT introduced., Introduction and conclusion need work.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing	The introduction and conclusion need to reflect the prompt more and have a stronger hook.
96	PeoplesA	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote.	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors, Parts not written well.	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay.	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - entries not alphabetized	average writing, Parts not worded well	In the conclusion, refer back to the professor image from the introduction.
97	PierceR	Period 1	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, No discussion footnote was used - ERROR.	Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued.	The sources were credible and reliable.	minimal or no errors in bibliography	average writing
98	PordesC	Period 5	no citations used.	no superscripts	No endnotes	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay is well argued, incomplete essay	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - incomplete information in bibliography	average writing
99	RableN	Period 5	Yes - at least 10 citations are used.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	Footnote/Endnote error - no access date for web site, There was at least one discussion footnote., The discussion note needs to be a complete thought.	Writing Error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., The discussion footnote made sense to be outside the main essay., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - entries not alphabetized	average writing	In the introduction, what are the 2 polar opposite solutions?
100	ReppucciN	Period 5	No - there aren't 10 citations in the paper.	Superscripts used consecutively and effectively	No discussion footnote was used - ERROR., Missing information - incomplete references., 5 endnotes	Writing Error - poor grammar, Writing Error - punctuation/spelling errors	The essay makes sense and is well argued., Authors mentioned in the text were introduced.	The sources were credible and reliable.	Bibliography - Not Last, First , Bibliography - incomplete information in bibliography, Bibliography - error - included access date	average writing