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TimestampLast, First10 in-text citationsVariety of in-text citationsCommon in-text citation errors SourcesQuality of sourcesWriting ErrorsReference List - errorsReadabilityContentMiscellanyGrade
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Abramson, DerekYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error-incomplete referenceAverage high school writingconclusion needs to reflect the intro
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Aguayo, JonathanYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error-Used first names., Reference List error-Date does not follow nameAverage high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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AlbawardiAbdulahYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error -entries not alphabetized , Reference List error-incomplete reference, Incomplete: Jonathan, A. (2006, August 28) Plugging Holes in the Skies. 8/9, 50-51.Parts not worded wellThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.Errors: With in the past,fifty years the world, and especially the United States didn’t have what we have today technology wise. In 1950’s the united states;
In the novel 50 years from today = not a novel.
Poor grammar and word choice, but you will improve this year by writing more essay. Keep on writing.
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Alfaro, ChristineNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error -entries not alphabetized , Reference List error-incomplete reference, double space between entries.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Alvarez, DonaldYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error- misnamedAverage high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Arcos, CrystalYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc)Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingneeds a conclusion
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Ashworth, YoungJoonNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23)In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.No - NOT all the sources are academically reliable (encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error -entries not alphabetized , Reference List error-incomplete referenceAverage high school writingneeds a conclusion
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BakerJessicaYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citations error- did not use commas (Smith 2009 p. 23), (2008, Pg 119) = error - use p. or pp.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Reference List error-Used first names., Reference List error-used capitals in title, September 25,2011 = errorAverage high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader. Bellamy, C. (2008). The Age of the Global Citizen. Mike Wallace. The Way we will be 50 Year from Today. (pp.189-191). Nashville, Tennessee: Thomas
Nelson. = Error - you forgot the subtitle.
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BalbalosaRossMarian Yes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., Error: (Williams, 2008, pp. 55) pp = more than one pageThere are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Well writtenThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.good job
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BarbeeTessaNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Standard - (Smith, 2009, p. 23)The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List., humanity” (130). = incompleteThere are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors., Newtons laws;Reference List error - Hanging indent errors, Reference List error -entries not alphabetized , Reference List error-used capitals in title, YOu did not use all the sources in the Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.You cited Wallace's forward in your intro, but you did not cite him in the Reference List. = Error.

A VERY creative approach. Good job!
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Barbosa, JosephNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar.Reference List error -entries not alphabetized , double space between entries.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Barnard, KristenNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Bauer, ColeYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Berblinger, WilliamNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List., double space between entries.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Bonam, Kyle No - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingchanged from future point of view to present
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Brooker, ErinYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingchanged from future point of view to present
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Brown KendallNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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BrownDarcyYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citations error- did not use year (Smith, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use commas (Smith 2009 p. 23), Errors: (Hooft 2008, p. 38) also (Evangelista); (Fenche, 2004); (Torrey, 23)There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Reference List error-incomplete reference, Your newspaper and magazine references did not list pagesAverage high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.Evangelista, B. (2010, July 3). A friendlier future due to facebook. San Francisco Chronicle.

Fenech, S. (2004, July 14) The eyes and ears of Big Brother - The technology that makes the show a reality - Big Brother is tracking you - Revealed: the technology watching the housemates. Daily Telegraph. P. T11.
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Butze, Alec No - 10 citations are not used in the paperUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citations error- misplaced punctuation - ... the holiday." (Smith, 2009, p. 23) - PERIODS SHOULD BE PLACE AT THE END OF THE PARENTHESIS, The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - used Schafferisms - "this means that" "this shows that" "for example" etc. to introduce CD, Writing error - poor grammar.Reference List error- misnamedAverage high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Chance, BrennanYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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CharmelloTonyYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), Error: (Sagan, 1979)There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Reference List error-used capitals in title, Error: Sagan, C. (1979). Broca's Brain: Reflections on the Romance of Science.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.Error: I agree with Richard Clarke though, when he says “Political, economic and social issues of the day will not be terrorism and war, or abortion and stem cell research” (Clarke, 2008, p. 68) - since you mentioned his name in the text, it is an error to use the name in the citation.
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ChavezChristianYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citations error- misplaced punctuation - ... the holiday." (Smith, 2009, p. 23) - PERIODS SHOULD BE PLACE AT THE END OF THE PARENTHESIS, the year 2030." (p. 120). Error - used first initials in citation. There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar.Reference List error-used capitals in titleParts not worded wellThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.The very first sentence is in error.
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Chen, OscarYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingchanged from present to future point of view
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Chernick, AlexanderNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.No - NOT all the sources are academically reliable (encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Don't mention EBSCOHost. These are print sources.Average high school writingneeds a conclusion
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Chu, AlexanderYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Well writtenThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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CirincioneAlexandraYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc)Reference List error -entries not alphabetized , double space between entries.Average high school writingneeds a conclusion
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Colquhoun, RayYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Well writtenThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Dean, RobertNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citations error- misplaced punctuation - ... the holiday." (Smith, 2009, p. 23) - PERIODS SHOULD BE PLACE AT THE END OF THE PARENTHESIS, The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingconclusion needs to reflect the intro
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DeLaRosa ChristianNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperUsed a good variety of In-text citations..The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List., Did not follow (yr, pg) format.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.No - NOT all the sources are academically reliable (encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error -entries not alphabetized , Reference List error-incomplete referenceAverage high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Devlin, CiraYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Reference List error- misnamedAverage high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Doty, KatherineYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Reference List error- misnamed, Reference List error-incomplete referenceAverage high school writingconclusion needs to reflect the intro
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Duran, DesiYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingconclusion needs to reflect the intro
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Ehlers, KallynYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error-incomplete referenceAverage high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Espinosa, MarizzaYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error -entries not alphabetized , Reference List error-incomplete referenceAverage high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Eusufzai, TanziaYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Euyoque, BrandonNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Standard - (Smith, 2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citations error- did not use year (Smith, p. 23), In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.No - NOT all the sources are academically reliable (encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error- misnamed, Reference List error -entries not alphabetized Average high school writingconclusion needs to reflect the intro
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Fahmie, LeoYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citations error- did not use year (Smith, p. 23), In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc)Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Flanagan, SeanYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc)Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Fochs, AliciaYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Gamboa, AnthonyYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citations error- did not use year (Smith, p. 23), In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), In-text citations error- misplaced punctuation - ... the holiday." (Smith, 2009, p. 23) - PERIODS SHOULD BE PLACE AT THE END OF THE PARENTHESIS, The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Reference List error -entries not alphabetized , Don't mention EBSCOHost. These are print sources.Average high school writingconclusion needs to reflect the intro
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GarciaChristopherYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citations error- did not use year (Smith, p. 23), In-text citations error- misplaced punctuation - ... the holiday." (Smith, 2009, p. 23) - PERIODS SHOULD BE PLACE AT THE END OF THE PARENTHESIS, The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List., Error: (Brinker, 2008 pp.136). - only one page use p. There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc)Error: Banerjee, N. (2011, June 11 ). In 'tea party' era, gop's 'red fred' - capitalize proper nouns.Well writtenThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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GilbertsJoshNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Standard - (Smith, 2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)YOu are using MLA format, not APAThere are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Reference List error- misnamed, WRONG FORMAT in REference List.YOu only have half the required citations.incomplete
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Gladstone, RobertYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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GomezMeganYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List., (Youso, 2009) and (Jones, 2011) no page numberThere are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper., YOu did not find proper sources with page numbers.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.)Minimal or no writing errors.Reference List error-incomplete reference, error: Jones, A. (2011, January). It. The northwoods magazine: serving truckee and north lake tahoe, Average high school writingmany of your quotes are unexplained. There's no commentary to interpret them.I don't understand - "Humanoids are shown walking down the street to shop and clean the house with a vacuum cleaner"(Hirose, 2008, p 86). How are you using this???
need to capitalize the title of Magazines - Jones, A. (2011, January). It. The northwoods magazine: serving truckee and north lake tahoe,
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Gonzalez, JacquelineNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citations error- did not use year (Smith, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use commas (Smith 2009 p. 23), In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar.Reference List error-Used first names., Reference List error-Date does not follow name, Reference List error -entries not alphabetized Average high school writingconclusion needs to reflect the intro
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GonzalezMauricioNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use any citationsWrong formatThere are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), incompleteWriting error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error-incomplete reference, Reference List error-used capitals in titleAverage high school writingThe essay was NOT well argued and did NOT make sense for the reader.incomplete. only 1 draft and not finished
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Gutierrez, AndreaYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citations error- misplaced punctuation - ... the holiday." (Smith, 2009, p. 23) - PERIODS SHOULD BE PLACE AT THE END OF THE PARENTHESIS, The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingneeds a conclusion
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Haaker, CoryNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23)The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Hamilton, NatashaYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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HarknessCaitlinNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Reference List error -entries not alphabetized , Aviation week and space technology and U.S. news & world report. - should be capitalizedAverage high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Hedayat, AntonNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citations error- did not use year (Smith, p. 23), In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Heradstveit, JennyYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citationserror - Used first name (Smith, Robin, 2009, p. 23), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error- misnamed, Reference List error -entries not alphabetized , Reference List error-incomplete referenceAverage high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Hild, GraysonYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.No - NOT all the sources are academically reliable (encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Minimal or no writing errors.Reference List error- misnamedWell writtenThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Hoffer, NoahNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citations error- misplaced punctuation - ... the holiday." (Smith, 2009, p. 23) - PERIODS SHOULD BE PLACE AT THE END OF THE PARENTHESIS, The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error -entries not alphabetized Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Hogoboom, GrantYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing error - poor grammar.double space between entries.Average high school writingconclusion needs to reflect the intro
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Honsowetz, StevenYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Hudson, KennethYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.double space between entries.Well writtenThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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James, GarrettNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Johnson, RaymondNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citationserror - Used first name (Smith, Robin, 2009, p. 23), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error- misnamedAverage high school writingchanged from present to future point of view
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Kabbani, OmarYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Karapetian, AsiyaYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingconclusion needs to reflect the intro
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KasparElenaYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citations error- did not use commas (Smith 2009 p. 23), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List., Error: (Dae-jung 2008, p. 56). There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Italics not used = Error.Well writtenThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.Not allowed for this assignment: Bombourg, N. (2010, July 7). The future of electric vehicles: technology, infrastructure developments and the future outlook. M2PressWire. - no page numbers.
Pope 2008, Becker 2008, - no page numbers.
Allison 2008, p.173) - not in Reference List
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KheraJasonNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Reference List error- misnamed, Reference List error-used capitals in titleExcellent - College LevelThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.Error: "mankind" is not inclusive. YOu want humankind or humanity
Excellent work - there just wasn't enough of it.
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Kigawa, RyanYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingchanged from future point of view to present
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Kim, AndrewYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error-incomplete referenceAverage high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Kirschbaum, BlakeNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Standard - (Smith, 2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingneeds a conclusion
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Koran, AdamNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error- misnamedAverage high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Krejcik, LaneYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Labayen, MirandaYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar.double space between entries.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Lavoie, EvieYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error-incomplete reference, double space between entries.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Lee, JessieNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citations error- did not use commas (Smith 2009 p. 23), In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingconclusion needs to reflect the intro
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LeGardye, QuinciYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors., Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Well writtenThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Lewis, ErinYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Parts not worded wellThe essay was NOT well argued and did NOT make sense for the reader.
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Lozano ChristianYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citations error- misplaced punctuation - ... the holiday." (Smith, 2009, p. 23) - PERIODS SHOULD BE PLACE AT THE END OF THE PARENTHESIS, The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error-incomplete referenceAverage high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Madhav, ShakeelNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Reference List error -entries not alphabetized Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Maples, CharlesYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingneeds a conclusion
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Marcia, JosselineNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citations error- did not use year (Smith, p. 23), In-text citations error- misplaced punctuation - ... the holiday." (Smith, 2009, p. 23) - PERIODS SHOULD BE PLACE AT THE END OF THE PARENTHESIS, The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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MarquezCamberosNatalieNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List., Errors: (2008). and (Torrey, 2008) and (Naqvi, 2009) = no page numbersThere are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Reference List error-incomplete reference, Reference List error-used capitals in titleWell writtenThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Martin, LaurenYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citations error- did not use commas (Smith 2009 p. 23), In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - used 2nd person (you, your, yourself, etc), Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.double space between entries.Average high school writingconclusion needs to reflect the intro
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McAlister, DakotaYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error- misnamedParts not worded wellThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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McDonough, AislingYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error -entries not alphabetized Well writtenThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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McElroy, CourtneyYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar.Reference List error-incomplete referenceParts not worded wellThe essay was NOT well argued and did NOT make sense for the reader.
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McEntee, MarkYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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McManus, AshleyNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was NOT well argued and did NOT make sense for the reader.
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Mendoza, LucasYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingconclusion needs to reflect the intro
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Mercado, LesleyNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error -entries not alphabetized Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Morales, IlianaYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citations error- did not use commas (Smith 2009 p. 23), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors., switched from present to past tense in the introdouble space between entries.Average high school writingconclusion needs to reflect the intro
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Moses, HarryYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Muraida, JoshuaNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Reference List error- misnamed, Reference List error -entries not alphabetized Average high school writingneeds a conclusion
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Nieto, JulianYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Well writtenconclusion needs to reflect the intro
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Oceguera, BrittanyYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.Reference List error- misnamed, double space between entries.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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OffleeTaylorNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), Errors: (2008); (Gillis, 2011); (2011); (Meadows, 2008); (Kluger, Lemonick, 2001) There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - singular antecedent... plural pronoun - a student should do their best, When one is asked what they think = error. Minimal or no errors in Reference List., Error: jetsons; Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Oh, MatthewYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar., Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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OronaEmilyYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23)The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation DOES NOT match the Reference List., Spacing errors = (Survival,2009,p. 1); There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors., lye ; Reference List error-incomplete referenceAverage high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.Error: national geograpgic. (n.d.). Retrieved from http://environment.nationalgeographic.com/environment/global-warming/pollution-overview/

(Survival,2009,p. 1); (Better Diets,2006,p. 8) = not in Reference List

web sites not allowed for this assignment.
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Orozco, LuceroNo - 10 citations are not used in the paperIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors.double space between entries.Well writtenconclusion needs to reflect the intro
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Padilla, CodyYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)In-text citations error- did not use year (Smith, p. 23), In-text citations error- did not use commas (Smith 2009 p. 23), In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Minimal or no writing errors., punctuation errorsMinimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Padlipsky, JacquelineYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Split - Smith (2009) indicated that.... (p. 23)Minimal or no in-text citation errors., The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar.double space between entries.Average high school writingThe essay was well argued and made sense for the reader.
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Paez, JessicaYes - used at least 10 citationsIn-text citations error- did not use Author in text - According to Smith.... (2009, p. 23)In-text citationserror - Used first name (Smith, Robin, 2009, p. 23), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are NOT a minimum of 5 sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), Yes - all the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - punctuation/spelling errors.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingconclusion needs to reflect the intro
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Pang, AtalieYes - used at least 10 citationsUsed a good variety of In-text citations..In-text citationserror - did not use (p.), The SIGNAL WORDS in the in-text citation matches the Reference List.There are a minimum of five sources used from the book, 50 Years and one magazine and one newspaper.Yes - all the sources are academically reliable (no encyclopedias, dictionaries, howto sites, etc.), No - NOTall the sources have authors (Corporate authorship is acceptable eg. The American Red Cross)Writing error - poor grammar.Minimal or no errors in Reference List.Average high school writingconclusion needs to reflect introduction