Year 6
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Making meaning Writing basics
Building Knowledge: Code Breaking
Individual activities
Making meaning
Ideas: |
Making meaning
Ideas: I elaborate on my ideas with relevant details e.g. each idea has supporting detail.
Making meaning
Ideas: I add or change details to make my ideas clearer
Making meaning
Ideas: I include different ideas to do with my topic in my text
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Organisation : I organise related ideas into paragraphs and link them together. |
Making meaning
Purpose and audience- I can make connections between whether I am reading or being a writer myself.
Making meaning
Purpose and audience- I choose a voice to suit the purpose and audience
Samoan language is important!
Samoan culture is important for everyone especially in New Zealand. Samoan culture is exciting and it is important for everyone to know. Samoan language has a formal and an informal structure. Language is the way people communicate and without language we are lost. Everyday and in many ways language forms the connections we all need through our traditions, formal process and when we are going about our normal day. In this essay, I will be showing how the Samoan language is important to Samoan culture.
The loss of language affects your well being and eventually it could affect the community as a whole. Money is given at the end of events to the main parties of the events. The use of money is a tradition that is originally, commonly practised by the Chinese at funeral services. Many burials ceremonies have people attending in black clothing. Samoans have adapted to express thank you in many gatherings. The origin of wearing black clothing at funerals comes from the English monarchy. The Tatu is a symbol of a person who is in authority to speak on behalf of your people. The Tatu right is often handed down from one generation to another due to your family genealogy.
The Samoan language is important today and there are many different traditions and everyday activities where the Samoan language is spoken The language is the key to Samoan culture. I have provided examples of how other cultures have affected the Samoan culture. Although, some traditions have been adapted from other cultures the most important link is they are administered in the Samoan language The culture will continue to flourish if the language is used. The language is the lifeblood and symbol of our strength as a people. The language is our connection to our ancestors. Our language awakens our soul, learn it now!
Did you noticed I had to change some of my final published piece? I combined my lawyer paragraph in my introduction!
I changed the order of my Hammer paragraph ( fact 1 and the why that fact matters no.1 underneath) The templates are there to guide what you may say but in the end you have the final say.
Making meaning
Structure and language - I use the correct text structure for a specific purpose
- Persuasive texts have a series of arguments supported by evidence
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Structure and language - I use the correct text structure for a specific purpose
- Explanation
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Structure and language - I use the correct text structure for a specific purpose
- Instruction
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Structure and language - I use the correct text structure for a specific purpose
- Reporting
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Structure and language - I use the correct text structure for a specific purpose
- Scientific
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Structure and language - I use the correct text structure for a specific purpose
- Narrative
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Structure and language - I use written features to help audience engagement and understanding
Metaphorical language
Making meaning
Structure and language - I use written features to help audience engagement and understanding
Idioms - Kiwaha -
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Structure and language - I use written features to help audience engagement and understanding
Simile
Making meaning
Structure and language - I use written features to help audience engagement and understanding
Personification
Making meaning
Structure and language - I use written features to help audience engagement and understanding
hyperbole
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Structure and language - I use visual features to engage the audience to convey meaning
Making meaning
Vocabulary - I use vocabulary appropriate to the topic I am writing about
Making meaning
Vocabulary - I choose vocabulary that makes it clear for my audience.
Making meaning
Sentence structure - I begin my sentences in different ways for impact
Making meaning
Sentence structure - I use a variety of sentence lengths to make my writing more interesting to read
Making meaning
Sentence structure - I use correct sentences
Building Knowledge
Punctuation: I use punctuation to support the meaning of my writing for possession |
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Punctuation: I use commas for phrasing |
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Punctuation:I use the correct layout for speech in my writing |
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Punctuation:I use punctuation correctly when I use speech marks |
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Punctuation: I use quotation marks, brackets and dashes accurately |
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Spelling: I spell and use most words correctly including high frequency and topic related vocabulary |
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Spelling: I use my knowledge of spelling patterns, prefixes, suffixes and root words to spell unfamiliar words |
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Proofread and feedback I can proofread to correct most of my spelling, punctuation and grammar |
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Proofread and feedback I recraft my ideas for meaning and impact |
Building Knowledge
Proofread and feedback - I give feedback to others about how to recraft and improve their writing |
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Proofread and feedback - I use our editing checklist |
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Proofread and feedback - I use our editing checklist |
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Proofread and feedback - I use our editing checklist |
Proofread and feedback - I publish my writing in a variety of ways to best suit the purpose and audience using digital.
Samoan language is important!
Samoan culture is important for everyone especially in New Zealand. Samoan culture is exciting and it is important for everyone to know. Samoan language has a formal and an informal structure. Language is the way people communicate and without language we are lost. Everyday and in many ways language forms the connections we all need through our traditions, formal process and when we are going about our normal day. In this essay, I will be showing how the Samoan language is important to Samoan culture.
The loss of language affects your well being and eventually it could affect the community as a whole. Money is given at the end of events to the main parties of the events. The use of money is a tradition that is originally, commonly practised by the Chinese at funeral services. Many burials ceremonies have people attending in black clothing. Samoans have adapted to express thank you in many gatherings. The origin of wearing black clothing at funerals comes from the English monarchy. The Tatu is a symbol of a person who is in authority to speak on behalf of your people. The Tatu right is often handed down from one generation to another due to your family genealogy.
The Samoan language is important today and there are many different traditions and everyday activities where the Samoan language is spoken The language is the key to Samoan culture. I have provided examples of how other cultures have affected the Samoan culture. Although, some traditions have been adapted from other cultures the most important link is they are administered in the Samoan language The culture will continue to flourish if the language is used. The language is the lifeblood and symbol of our strength as a people. The language is our connection to our ancestors. Our language awakens our soul, learn it now!
Did you noticed I had to change some of my final published piece? I combined my lawyer paragraph in my introduction!
I changed the order of my Hammer paragraph ( fact 1 and the why that fact matters no.1 underneath) The templates are there to guide what you may say but in the end you have the final say.
Building Knowledge
Proofread and feedback - I publish my writing in a variety of ways to best suit the purpose and audience using digital |
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Building Knowledge
Proofread and feedback - I publish my writing in a variety of ways to best suit the purpose and audience using print. |
Applying Understanding - Me as a writer
I consider myself a writer |
Explain do you think you are a writer. If yes give an example and write a sentence to support your example.
Do not complete until you believe you are a writer.
Applying Understanding - Me as a writer
I am motivated to write in all school and personal situations |
Explain what motivates you to write . If yes give an example and write a sentence to support your example.
Applying Understanding - Me as a writer
I like the challenge of getting out of the pit when I write |
I failed
Let’s collaborate
I did it!
I’m stuck
I’m confused
I don’t know what to do?
Applying Understanding - Me as a writer
I like the challenge of getting out of the pit when I write |
What strategies do you use that helps you with writing?