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English AS Spring 2024 Sessions:

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  • Session 1: Unit 1 Drama and Prose- Section A
  • Session 2: Unit 1 Drama and Prose- Section B
  • Session 3: Unit 2 Poetry- Section A
  • Session 4: Unit 2 Poetry- Section B

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Unit 1: The examination paper

AS English Literature

Section A- 1 hour- Prose

Section B- 1 hour- Drama

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Objectives

  • approach literary texts in terms of genre;

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  • engage in close analysis of narrative and literary devices and apply technical analytical terms.

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Looking at different genres

  • We’ve established that different genres of literature rely on different techniques to create meaning and explore a text’s ideas. This also means that each genre has its own strengths and weaknesses.

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TASK

The following three extracts are all based on the same subject which is home.

Read the three extracts and consider the ways in which different genres of writing explore the same subject.

You may wish to make notes under the following headings:

  1. What techniques are unique to each genre? So, think about what is unique about the way each genre presents ideas about home?
  2. What is lost and what is gained? So have a think about what each genre allows us to understand, and what is maybe lost because of the unique way in which each one is written?

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Looking at prose

What is PROSE?

  • noun 1. the ordinary form of spoken or written language, without metrical structure, as distinguished from poetry or verse.

What kinds of prose are there?

  • NOVELS, short stories, essays, letters, editorials, articles, journals.

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What might we analyse in a prose text?

What might we analyse in a prose text?

  • Narrative structure
  • Chronology
  • Narrative voice/perspective
  • Use of speech
  • Prose style and language choices including sentence structure
  • Use of images, symbols and motifs
  • Themes, settings, characters…
  • Genre and generic conventions

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Narrative approaches: Match up activity

 1. Third person limited

a. First person, as though the narrator is verbalising their thoughts as they occur.

 2. Third person omniscient

b. A narrative style that imitates the qualities of thoughts and feelings, making the reader feel as it they’re inside someone’s head. The grammar and structure suggest the random and fragmentary nature of thought. In the third person it’s an extreme version of free indirect style. In the first person it’s an extreme version of interior monologue.

 3. Participant Narrator

c. Third person narration in which a character’s thoughts and feelings seem to be directly expressed, freely taking on the views and often the language of that character. Narratives often slide between conventional third person narration and this style, moving from a more detached voice to one that is more intimately connected to one character or another.

 4. Unreliable Narrator

d. In a third person narrative, the character from whose perspective the action is seen.

 5. Self-conscious Narrator

e. A narrative voice that directly addresses the reader as ‘you’. It’s rare for a whole text to do this, as it’s very hard to maintain

 6. Intrusive Narrator

f. A narrator who is assumed to know everything connected with the story narrated- all seeing, all knowing

 7. Multiple voices

g. A narrator who, telling the story in the third person, has a voice which adheres closely to one characters perspective.

 8. First person narrative

h. More than one narrative voice used in a single text. Can be first or third person or a mixture of the two.

 9. Focaliser

i. A narrator who plays a role in the story and is part of the narrative.

 10. Stream of consciousness

j. Reminds the reader that what they are reading is fiction, dispelling any illusion that the characters are real people etc.

 11. Second person address

k. A narrator who is perhaps self-deceiving, or who cannot be trusted to give a version of events that is to be believed.

 12. Interior Monologue

l. A narrator who speaks as ‘I’, often a character who plays a role in the story, although it may not be his or her own story.

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Narrative approaches: Match up answers

 1. Third person limited

a. A narrator who, telling the story in the third person, has a voice which adheres closely to one characters perspective.

 2. Third person omniscient

b. A narrator who is assumed to know everything connected with the story narrated- all seeing, all knowing.

 3. Participant Narrator

c. A narrator who speaks as ‘I’, often a character who plays a role in the story, although it may not be his or her own story.

 4. Unreliable Narrator

d. A narrator who plays a role in the story and is part of the narrative.

 5. Self-conscious Narrator

e. A narrative voice that directly addresses the reader as ‘you’. It’s rare for a whole text to do this, as it’s very hard to maintain

 6. Intrusive Narrator

 

f. A narrative style that imitates the qualities of thoughts and feelings, making the reader feel as it they’re inside someone’s head. The grammar and structure suggest the random and fragmentary nature of thought. In the third person it’s an extreme version of free indirect style. In the first person it’s an extreme version of interior monologue.

 7. Multiple voices

g. First person, as though the narrator is verbalising their thoughts as they occur.

 8. First person narrative

h. More than one narrative voice used in a single text. Can be first or third person or a mixture of the two.

 9. Focaliser

i. In a third person narrative, the character from whose perspective the action is seen.

 10. Stream of consciousness

j. Reminds the reader that what they are reading is fiction, dispelling any illusion that the characters are real people etc.

 11. Second person address

k. A narrator who is perhaps self-deceiving, or who cannot be trusted to give a version of events that is to be believed.

 12. Interior Monologue

 

l. Third person narration in which a character’s thoughts and feelings seem to be directly expressed, freely taking on the views and often the language of that character. Narratives often slide between conventional third person narration and this style, moving from a more detached voice to one that is more intimately connected to one character or another.

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How can we define narrative?�

  • stories involving a sequence of narrated events.
  • NARRATIVE CONTENT refers to events in a story and characters in a story and what happens to them.
  • NARRATIVE FORM refers to how narrative content is formed.
  • Stories can be told in two different ways:
    • CONTENT ORDER: the order in which the events in a story actually happened
    • FORM ORDER: the order of events the narrator/ author chooses to tell you the events in e.g. Flashbacks/ fragmented time
    • Mismatch between content order and form order is often an intentional strategy adopted by authors to create suspense and mystery, to organise understanding, to wilfully deceive the reader, to manipulate perception or to challenge narrative expectations.

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Why order/select events?��

  • The plot is the way the story unfolds. It is not the chronology of events.

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Chronology

  • The chronology is (unimaginatively) how events unfold in their chronological order. That is the way they would occur if they were real events.
  • The chronology is always linear. One event happens after another with a cause/effect relation.

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Plot

  • The plot is the fictional counterpart to the chronology of events.
  • Some stories can afford to use the linear plot, a plot that faithfully follows the chronological course of events. Most often, this doesn’t happen, mainly for two reasons:
  • The very nature of narration doesn’t allow to follow events chronologically. While events may occur at the same time in real life, there’s no way to replicate that in the narration. We will always need to choose which event to tell first, and by choosing, the chronological order of events will be altered.
  • We may choose to recount events not on the base of the chronological order, but because of their impact on the plot. So the most important event will be prominent, and all others will be accommodated around it, regardless of their real chronological order.

This manipulation of the timeline occurs more often than it may seem. It is, in fact, the very essence of storytelling. The narrative order of events gives them their narrative meaning.

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The nature of narrative...

  • Narrative pace
    • Slows e.g. By dwelling on minor events
    • Accelerates e.g. By condensing/compressing major events
  • Narrative coherence
    • Are we presented with a unified story? E.g. Could be summed up by title of text
  • Narrative point of view
    • Use of narrator/ narrative style

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  • You will find it quite easy to pick up on the tone of the narration when analysing a piece of first-person prose. In this manner we are being told the events of the novel through one person’s perspective, so it’s easy to get a sense of their voice as we read.
  • It’s a bit trickier when dealing with third-person narratives.
  • The first thing to be aware of is that the tone of third- person narratives, whether using an omniscient/limited viewpoint or free indirect discourse/speech is usually NOT neutral and is often biased.
  • There could be a number of reasons for this. For example, the author may be using the narrative to reflect their personal ideas, or perhaps the ideas which reflect the opinions of society when the text was written. The tone could be sardonic, used by the author to mock certain characters and their values/opinions or in an effort to enlighten.

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  1. Narrative viewpoint/voice is about how the writer is choosing to tell the reader their story. They are positioning the reader in a certain place (in the mind of the protagonist for example, if it’s first-person) so that we receive the information in a particular way.
  2. It’s not sufficient to simply state which narrative viewpoint the writer has chosen. We need to think about the effect of this choice and how it affects the way we read and interpret the story and the key ideas the writer wanted us to consider. For example, if we are reading the story from the point of view of a narrator who we know is unreliable, do we trust what they say about other characters?
  3. We need to remember that Narrative viewpoint can change as a narrative develops, especially if it’s written in third person. a piece of prose often switches between third-person omniscient and free indirect discourse/speech.

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How well do you know your literary terms?

Narration

Dialogue

Character and characterisation

Settings

Patterns

Handling of time

Control of information

Speech styles

Imagery

Diction

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The surroundings of the novel, including physical locations, cultures and communities, times of the day, night and year, historical periods, and the weather. Not simply picturesque, these are also used to convey ideas about characters, themes and mood.

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The surroundings of the novel, including physical locations, cultures and communities, times of the day, night and year, historical periods, and the weather. Not simply picturesque, these are also used to convey ideas about characters, themes and mood.

SETTING

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Repetitions, contrasts, and pairs. Also motifs – frequently repeated set of images, significant phrases or set descriptions. These serve to draw your attention to key ideas.

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Repetitions, contrasts, and pairs. Also motifs – frequently repeated set of images, significant phrases or set descriptions. These serve to draw your attention to key ideas.

Patterns

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Consider whether the writer presents information in a realistically chronological sequence, or uses devices such as flashbacks and time shifts. This is all part of the novel’s plot.

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Consider whether the writer presents information in a realistically chronological sequence, or uses devices such as flashbacks and time shifts. This is all part of the novel’s plot.

Handling of time

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Using literal or figurative language, and sensory appeal, this makes ideas come to life in our imagination. This can be through simple description, or involve the more complex techniques of metaphor, simile, symbolism and personification.

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Using literal or figurative language, and sensory appeal, this makes ideas come to life in our imagination. This can be through simple description, or involve the more complex techniques of metaphor, simile, symbolism and personification.

Imagery

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Consider whether the speaker’s style is formal or colloquial; if a specific register is used; whether it is in dialect or Standard English; whether it is direct Or indirect; emotional or rational.

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Consider whether the speaker’s style is formal or colloquial; if a specific register is used; whether it is in dialect or Standard English; whether it is direct or indirect; emotional or rational

Speech styles

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The characteristic selection of words used in a work. Can be characterised by referring to semantic fields, e.g. frequent use of religious words, or word classes, e.g. frequent use of active verbs of violence.

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The characteristic selection of words used in a work. Can be characterised by referring to semantic fields, e.g. frequent use of religious words, or word classes, e.g. frequent use of active verbs of violence.

Diction

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How authors tell their stories, including the narrative point of view – 1st person (I) or 3rd person (he/she), single or multiple, omniscient or involved. Also explore the effect of the narrator’s degrees of knowledge, perspective and reliability.

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How authors tell their stories, including the narrative point of view – 1st person (I) or 3rd person (he/she), single or multiple, omniscient or involved. Also explore the effect of the narrator’s degrees of knowledge, perspective and reliability.

Narration

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The first term seems too easy to bother with a definition, but you need to make sure you remember that these figures are fictional devices, not real people. The second term refers to the set of established literary techniques used to create these fictional figures.

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The first term seems too easy to bother with a definition, but you need to make sure you remember that these figures are fictional devices, not real people. The second term refers to the set of established literary techniques used to create these fictional figures.

Character and

Characterisation

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The part of novels written as conversation, as if it were really happening in front of us as readers. Bear in mind that this is a fictional representation of speech, and different novelists use differing degrees of verisimilitude.

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The part of novels written as conversation, as if it were really happening in front of us as readers. Bear in mind that this is a fictional representation of speech, and different novelists use differing degrees of verisimilitude.

Dialogue

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Consider the significance of beginnings and endings, and the way important information is sequenced, withheld and revealed. This is all part of the novel’s plot.

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Consider the significance of beginnings and endings, and the way important information is sequenced, withheld and revealed. This is all part of the novel’s plot.

Control of information

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Characterisation

In the table are some of the most commons features used by authors when creating characters.

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‘Enduring Love’�Ian McEwan

I’ve already marked my beginning, the explosion of consequences, with the touch of a wine bottle and a shout of distress. But this pinprick is as notional as a point in Euclidean geometry, as though it seems right, I could have proposed the moment Clarissa and I planned to picnic after I had collected her from the airport, or when we decided on our route, or the field in which to have lunch, and the time we chose to have it. There are always antecedent causes.

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‘The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time’ Mark Haddon

This is a murder mystery novel.

Siobhan said that I should write something I would want to read myself. Mostly I read books about science and maths. I do not like proper novels. In proper novels people say things like, ‘I am veined with iron, with silver and with streaks of common mud. I cannot contract into the firm fist which those clench who do not depend on stimulus.’ What does this mean? I do not know. Not does Father. Nor do Siobhan or Mr Jeavons. I have asked them.

Siobhan has long blonde hair and wears glasses which are made of green plastic. And Mr Jeavons smells of soap and wears brown shoes that have approximately 60 tiny circular holes in each of them.

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‘Jane Eyre’�Charlotte Bronte

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Do you think, because I am poor, obscure, plain and little, I am soulless and heartless? You think wrong! - I have as much soul as you, - and full as much heart! And if God had gifted me with some beauty and much wealth, I should have made it as hard for you to leave me, as it is now for me to leave you!

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  • A number of the techniques that we have looked at are also relevant when considering how dialogue creates character. There are a few things that you should bear in mind though:
  • The balance or weighting of dialogue between characters is another aspect to consider. Does one speaker dominate? Are there interruptions? What is the impact of this?
  • The writer’s use of tags. Usually adjectives or adverbs, tags in dialogue tell the reader the tone of the speech, e.g., ‘she said, with affection’ or ‘said Peter, his tone malevolent.’

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  • Characters in a prose text OFTEN have multiple purposes. Within the narrative they ARE SOMETIMES used to allow us to evaluate themes; to develop other characters by opposing or serving as their equal; or ARE used TO drive the plot forward.
  • Some texts have narratives which may have been written for a more SERIOUS purpose perhaps. we might consider that characters have a function outside of the narrative. Sometimes characters in a text ARE USED to draw attention to a key idea/issue that the writer wants to explore. THIS IS CONSIDERED AS AUTHORIAL INTENT.

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Some things to consider and revision tasks…

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Feedback from Principal Examiner

  • Section A (i): Extract (20 marks)

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  • Pupils must engage closely with the extract (no need to spend time positioning it in the text)

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  • A narrative re-telling of the plot is self-penalising

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  • No marks for A03 (context)

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  • The better responses commented on writer’s technique as well as the connotations of language

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  • Only 20 minutes to be spent on the extract response

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Unit 1

Extract Marking Assessment Grid

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Task: Read through the answer on the following slide.�

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  • Find three qualities under AO1 and AO2 which you would reward.
  • Find three problems with the response.

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  • Brontë makes clear that Jane’s longing is inspired by her attention to the” most remote objects” which can be seen from her window and to add emphasis to Jane’s desires the word “longed” is repeated at the end of the first paragraph. In contrast to the “remote blue peaks”, all of Jane’s immediate surroundings “seemed prison-ground” and it is this contrast which holds the key to the presentation of Jane’s state of mind.

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  • With her mind playing over memories of “the outer world” and the restrictions of her tiresome school routines, Jane’s frustration is so intense that she “uttered a prayer” for change and her desperation is such that change would be acceptable even if it were to be “ a new servitude.”

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  • The fragmented sentence structure of the opening lines suggests a rising panic and an effort to control the claustrophobia brought on by Jane’s restricted life at Lowood.

Possible Ideas:

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Feedback from Principal Examiner

  • Section A (ii): Essay (40 marks)

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  • Pupils must spend time planning the essay to ensure that there is a clear, relevant argument.

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  • 40 minutes to be spent on A(ii)

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  • The extract is a ‘springboard’ into the essay. Don’t re-visit it in detail.

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  • A narrative re-telling of the plot is self-penalising

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  • Although there are heavier weightings for AO3 and AO5, candidates should ensure that they weave context/different interpretations into their own analysis. AO2 is an anchor for AO3/AO5 (task-text-context)

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  • Pupils should avoid pre-rehearsed responses

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  • Written expression continues to be an issue

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Using Introductions

  • Comparative Judgement Task
  • Read through all 3 introductions.
  • Which one begins to engage best with the text/task?
  • Put them in rank order.

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Secrets play a large part in the novel of Sense and Sensibility and lie at the very heart of all relationships and friendships.

In Sense and Sensibility, Austen uses the lives and loves of her characters; the middle class genteel in order to provide a social commentary to her reader. A clear theme of friendship runs through the novel, however it may be considered that a secret lies at the very heart of each of these friendships.

Secrecy is a key theme in Sense and Sensibility and Austen uses her power of only revealing certain aspects to create suspense and tension in the novel. Her use of secrets also has and affect on the characters which the reader like and dislike.

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