WALT:
create a narrative (based on an image)
THINK ABOUT….
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WALT:
create a narrative based on an image
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YOUR TURN!
Choose one of the images in this slideshow. ��Think about what could have happened before, during and after what you see in your chosen image.
Write a narrative using the following criteria:
Check your own writing � - read your writing in a quiet voice - try and find 3 spelling mistakes and correct them��Check your buddy’s writing
- read your writing to your buddy - have you included all the right information in each sentence?
CHECK YOUR WRITING!
REVISE your work - use A.R.M.S
Which words/phrases can I Add?
Which words/phrases can I Remove?
Which words/phrases can I Move?
Which words/phrases can I Substitute?
EDIT your work - use C.U.P.S
Check for words that need Capital letters?
Check you have Used the right tense (played? play? will play?)
Check you have used the correct Punctuation (full stops, commas, apostrophes)?
Check your Spelling is correct? �(Ask a friend, use a dictionary, check online)�
Read your writing to yourself in a QUIET VOICE...