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Enduring Issues Essay Writing

10E Industrial Revolution

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Enduring issue

  • The correct enduring issue was impact of industrialization.

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What we need to to better….

  • This was a take home test.
  • Come prepared.

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What you were missing….

  • All the essay steps!
  • This is high school!

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Intro

  • Need all of the steps of the graphic organizer.
  • Define what the Industrialization was! (the change from farming to industry)
  • Thesis should have been ready to go night before.
    • Thesis ideas: impact of industrialization shown through Agricultural Revolution, Great Britain (or causes of the IR) and the effects of the Industrial Revolution (1600s-1700s)

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Sample Thesis

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    • The impact of industrialization from 1750 to 1900 started in Great Britain and spread throughout western Europe. The impact of industrialization was shown through the agricultural revolution, the Agrarian Revolution (all causes in GB here) and through the effects of the movement.

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Documents

  • NEVER EVER QUOTE!
  • Do not copy the documents, this gets you no points and it is not OSI.
  • Cite Doc #1 only only time and UNDERLINE

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Silly things…

  • I said do not to write about what you don’t know…
  • Doc #1 and #2 should have been used because you know the most.
  • Document #3 was probably easiest because it referenced the Industrial Revolution and Doc #5 = inventions
    • The docs on the regents will be modern.

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Essay format

  • Intro
  • Body #1, #2, #3 (1 doc per body)
  • Conclusion

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OSI

  • OUTSIDE INFORMATION
  • OSI = Agricultural/Industrial Revolution NOT THE SEED DRILL
  • Body #1 = Agrarian Revolution
  • Body #2 =Industrial Revolution - what happened
  • Body #3 = Industrial Revolution effects (new OSI from body 2)
  • Copying the docs is not OSI!

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OSI

  • Who?
  • What?
  • Where?
  • When?
  • Why?
  • How?
  • THEN REFERENCE THE DOCUMENT
  • SET THE STAGE

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WHERE WERE THESE 3 STEPS IN YOUR ESSAY

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General comments

  • fluff
  • generous
  • OSI
  • skip lines
  • don't assume