Beginner track: How to request data and documents: FOI
Tisha Thompson, ESPN
Andrew Pantazi, independent journalist
Kate Martin, APM Reports
Today you will learn
ALWAYS TRY TO GET IT WITHOUT FOIA FIRST
THINK ABOUT HOW MANY RECORDS YOU MAY RECEIVE
“SNOW” and “ICE” = roughly 4,000 emails from one agency in a 24 HR period
Keyword search for “SEAT” = “Seatgeek”, “Superseats USA” & “Supreme Seats”
But “SEAT” is also part of the word “Seattle”
In Washington state, there 6,000+ businesses containing the word “Seattle”
YOU HAVE TO PROVE WHY IT SHOULD BE “EXPEDITED”
I request expedited processing of this request because it is for documents relating to a public controversy over the use of conservation land known as "Greenbury Point" that is under the control of the Department of the Navy. It is urgent to inform the public about the actual or alleged federal government activity with this land as it will have significant impact on residents who live near and around the property, as well as those connected to the U.S. Naval Academy, and has been the topic of public meetings and news coverage, a list of which includes, but is not limited to stories I am submitting as an attachment to this FOIA request.
“BONA FIDE” WITH EXPLANATION
I am requesting a fee waiver as I am a bona fide member of the media collecting this information as part of the newsgathering process and not for commercial use. The documents requested are of great concern to the public and our readers as they relate to the use and operation of land owned by the Navy and the disclosures are likely to contribute significantly to a better understanding of the government’s decision making in relation to the use of that land, which is mostly unknown despite significant news coverage of the topic.
If you determine, however, that fees must be assessed, I am willing to pay up to $300. If the cost should be more than that, please provide an estimate of fees.
YOU NEED TO RESEARCH THE LAW BEFORE YOU SEND!
WHAT I DO EVERY SINGLE TIME BEFORE I SEND A REQUEST
I google “Reporters Committee Open Government” for state requests
and “Reporters Committee FOIA” for federal requests
So let’s do that right now…
Which brings us to appealing a records denial
The HARDEST FOIA LESSON I’ve ever learned arrived in this letter…
I spent 5+ years fighting for this document from the State Department…
Only to have the local police departments then deny my speeding ticket FOIAs…
So I went to every courthouse in the DC region and pulled them manually…
And had to wait again because many were in the “archives”…
After I got the tickets (hundreds of tickets)…
I made myself a database…
Did some SQL queries (yeah baby, you heard that right, SQL)…
And found me some diplomats (and often the children of diplomats) …
AFTER 6+ YEARS
& 2 JOBS
IRE FOIA Award Finalist
BUT ALL MY INFO WAS SIX YEARS OLD!
The hardest lesson I ever learned when the ambassadors denied my appeal for current records…
I WILL NEVER AGAIN WRITE
“From January 1, 2003 until the present day.”
I NOW WRITE
“From January 1, 2003 until
this request is processed.”
What Your Editor Needs to Know (And How They Can Help You)
EDITOR CHECK:
WHAT YOUR EDITOR WANTS TO KNOW
B.E.S.T. – How Your Editor Can Back You Up
B – Boss Voice – Editors can call FOIA officers and demand answers.
E – Escalation – They can push agencies, PIOs, or officials when you're being ignored.
S – Strategic Planning – They can help figure out workarounds if records are denied.
T – Taking Legal Action – They can help persuade your org to sue when necessary.
If you're stuck, ask: "Can my editor step in and push for this?"
What to do if you don’t know what data the agency has
Request Broad Data to Narrow In
Example: Instead of requesting full emails (which the agency said would take years to redact), I asked for email metadata. I provided case law for why they would need to give these records, AND I even gave them the PowerShell commands for extracting the metadata.
What to do if you don’t know what data the agency has
Request System Manuals to Reveal Hidden Data
Example: Understanding a Crime Incident Database�"I am requesting any contracts, instruction manuals, data dictionaries, glossaries of terms, record layouts or handbooks related to the Sheriff’s Office’s crime incident database or case management system."
🔹 Why this works:�✅ Exposes what data is actually collected.�✅ Helps refine follow-up requests.�✅ Prevents agencies from denying data exists.
Sample records request form letter
Link: https://bit.ly/records-template
Includes tips for:
Track your requests with notiFOIA
How tracking your request and getting email notifications about them can help you succeed and save you time
Kate Martin, correspondent, APM Reports
What is notiFOIA?
It’s great if you…
A tour of notiFOIA: tabs
A tour of notiFOIA: Main interface
A tour of notiFOIA: Main interface
A tour of notiFOIA: Main interface
A tour of notiFOIA: Main interface
A tour of notiFOIA: State info tab
In some states, agencies must respond by a certain number of days. Others have no limit or the agency must respond “promptly,” whatever that means.
For states that don’t set a specific timeframe, default to respond is 10 days.
A tour of notiFOIA: emails
A tour of notiFOIA: emails
notiFOIA: Setup
Check HOW TO tab for instructions
Step 1: Click “file” then “Make a copy”
Step 2: Activate the app script as-is (see instructions in “How to” tab)
Step 3: Decide how often do you want alerts? (I pick Tuesday mornings)
Step 4: Happy FOIAing!
Helpful resources
Questions?
Beginner track: How to request data and documents: FOI
Tisha Thompson, ESPN
Andrew Pantazi, independent journalist
Kate Martin, APM Reports