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Units of Study

Investigative Journalism

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Investigative Journalism-Day 1

Intro to Writer’s Workshop

Student expectations:

  • You’ll have classwork/homework on most days. The amount of homework you have will depend on how you and your partner use your class time.
  • When typing, never single space.
  • Parter 1 (left) Partner 2 (right)
  • Use the website for charts, tools, exemplars
  • Set your partner norms. What do you need from each other? Write this on page 15 of your Writer’s Notebook.

Teacher expectations:

  • Daily mini-lesson 10-15 minutes.
  • Availability at the small group table during work time.
  • Provide meaningful feedback

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Investigative Journalism-Day 1

  • Goals of Journalistic writing
    • Take notes that you’ll use in writing
    • Revise quickly and soon
  • Journalists see stories everywhere
  • Journalists track writing by using 5W’s
    • Who, what, when, where, why (and how)
  • Notebooks are necessary
    • Quick note-taking
    • Notes in phones (shared notes to ipads) can work too
    • Use notebooks to share ideas for newscasts
    • Document questions you have as you begin to investigate
    • Record interviews
    • Sketch scenes
    • Fast draft newscasts

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Day 1

  • Kroger:
    • Last evening, a Greenfield teenager hopped off his bicycle near Kroger. He darted, on foot, into an empty spot nearby.
  • Classwork/homework: Write a news event from today using the 5W’s (200 word count)

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Day 2

  • Make sure you turned in your homework to Google Classroom.
  • Create some partner norms
    • Fill out the paper with your partner
    • Share answers. Please take note of your partner’s answers.
  • Partner work:
    • Share with your partner your writing (last night’s homework)
    • What did you like about your partner’s work?

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Day 2

  • Don’t stretch out your writing. Journalists have limited word count. Goals are different than writing we are used to.
  • Abandon the beginning, middle, and end of a story. Newscasters aren’t looking to get the readers lost in a story.

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Day 2

Classwork:

  • Journalists track writing by using 5W’s. Are all of yours in the first sentence?
  • Leave your writing on your desk. Take notes about what other people did to make their writing great.
  • Go back to your seat and revise your own, using tips you learn from other writers.

Homework:

Make a list of 5-6 newsworthy stories that you can write over the next few weeks. We’ll begin writing a story a day on Monday.

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Day 3

Field Trip to the Gym

Look for potential news stories all around you. Be alert to moments of drama, look for out-of-the ordinary, heightened emotions. Use your observations as a basis for your newscast.

GOAL: Be objective, but get your reader interested in the facts **Cover your 5Ws in your notes**

Writing:

  • Write in past tense
  • Capture quotes when possible
  • No personal pronouns

HOMEWORK: 200 word article due tomorrow

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Day 3

Possible Notes:

Date: November 11th

Time: 12:35

Place: gym

  • Players struggling with ball
  • Disagreement over center, words, jumping, fighting
  • Smuggled-in cell phones

**Cover your 5Ws in your notes**

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Day 3

Gym Class Hero

Three girls were seen fighting in the gym at Greenfield Central Junior High School today over who would be chosen for center during a class basketball game. The three girls were from class 301, and each was a strong player. First they tried to make a decision by talking about it. Then they jumped for it. Then they shoved for it.

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Passage 1

Sean stood in the cool, black darkness of the third floor hallway. His palms were sweaty as he reached toward the tall glass case. Even in the utter blackness he could almost see the trophy glittering behind the glass. The golden warmth of it seemed to call him like a siren, whispering “Sean, I belong with you. You deserve me. Take me home.” Slowly, hands trembling, he brought out the hammer. He didn’t see the girl, who was watching from the dim shadows.

Day 3

Passage 2

Only one object was taken from the case at McKinley High School. It was the trophy for the State Wrestling Championship. A single eye-witness to the theft reports that she saw a lone figure standing in front of the case, wield a blunt object – it might have been a hammer – and smash the case. As this witness shielded herself from flying shards, the perpetrator dropped the hammer and fled with the four-foot-tall trophy. McKinley had lost its first-ever State Wrestling championship trophy.

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  • Turn in your gym article to Classroom
  • Share with your writing partner one area you believe you improved in your writing

Day 4

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8th graders outmatched 7th graders in Greenfield-Central Junior High’s dodgeball tournament last April. 600 students sat on bleachers chanting for their favorite dodgeball team while the tournament bracket moved closer to the championship game. We all roared as the each team struck out players on the opposing team.

Day 4

  • What is wrong with this?
  • Did I include 5W’s?

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September’s PTA vs. Teachers soccer match is something that no student will forget.

Parents outnumbered the teachers at the PTA vs. Teachers soccer match on the first Saturday of September. Here’s how it unfolded. The “team” of teachers milled about the field. Some were in jeans, others wore shorts with sandals. The students crowded the sidelines chanting for their homeroom teachers while they waited for the “parent team” to make their on-field appearance. My own heart beat with excitement.

Sample

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September’s PTA vs. Teachers soccer match is something that no student will forget.

Parents outnumbered the teachers at the PTA vs. Teachers soccer match on the first Saturday of September. Here’s how it unfolded. The “team” of teachers milled about the field. Some were in jeans, others wore shorts with sandals. The students crowded the sidelines chanting for their homeroom teachers while they waited for the “parent team” to make their on-field appearance. My own heart beat with excitement.

Music sounded. Led by an official-looking soccer referee, the parents filed onto the field. They wore matching soccer uniforms complete with matching cleats and socks. I thought to myself, “They probably had spent thousands of dollars on them.”

Sample

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  • Write a news article from using one of your content ideas
  • Word count: 300
  • Include eye-witnesses, interesting facts.
  • Get to the 5W’s right away.
  • Write like a journalist: don’t exaggerate or slip into personal narratives.
  • Stay in 3rd person, write in past tense.

Brainstorm with your partner about what you’ll write today and then go to work!

Day 4

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Make sure you turned in your homework (300 word article) to Google Classroom

Bell Ringer

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Read “Sissy Syndrome” with your partner and answer the following questions:

    • What does she address that matters?
    • What impact does that have?
    • How is this different than the news writing we’ve done so far?

“Sissy Syndrome”

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  • Answer the question on a piece of paper: What things matter that we don’t discuss openly?
  • Turn the paper into the basket on Mrs. Toney’s standing desk

What things matter that we don’t discuss openly?

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  • Middle-level academics not getting the right level of learning they need
  • Why can’t teenagers be open about what they like without getting judged?
  • How some women treat men.
  • Male dominated workplaces
  • Double standards about women saying that men shouldn’t expect anything looks-wise from women but then having a type
  • Racial slurs used too carelessly nowadays.
  • Young people making sexual jokes
  • Nobody is just born racist or homophobic or anything like that–how do people become that way?
  • Social media brainwashing people
  • When kids napping because they couldn’t sleep or something happened and teachers are mean about it
  • AI taking the jobs of hundreds of graphic designers, artists, and workers
  • Constant workload of school taking a serious toll on mental health
  • Large hate groups
  • Child abuse
  • Kids being forced to grow up
  • People don’t try to make new friends
  • Overusing the terms racist and sexist
  • Politics in unnecessary areas/times
  • Racism and bullying
  • Mental health
  • Teachers calling students out for being tired or making fun of them in front of class

Period 2

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  • The constant pressure of being strong men and how men are sometimes the more abused person in a relationship
  • Body image issues
  • Teachers not understanding if students have bad days
  • Why kids are focused on dating at such a young age
  • School hierarchy
  • Suicide rates
  • Stereotype that rainbows mean you’re gay
  • Peer pressure
  • Why people won’t follow their dreams or interests because they’re afraid of what others will say (or to appease parents or teachers)
  • Gender stereotypes placed on kids at such a young age that they will be virtually impossible to deconstruct
  • Teens are seen as children by the media, parents, teachers when we are sometimes just as mature as they are
  • Boys can’t cry

Period 2

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  • “Popular” people not treating others equally
  • Having trauma/anxiety and still told to get good grades
  • If there are sometimes “bad” kids the teachers automatically assume its them for everything
  • Why do kids dread going to school?
  • Ranking kids on how smart they are
  • Judging others they don’t even know
  • When parents “just said so”
  • Toxic people–why aren’t they just loyal?
  • Young individuals getting sexualized for certain things
  • Why do I rarely hear compliments and always hear insults?
  • Picking on others for not being on the same academic level
  • Being a “nerd” for liking books
  • The pressure to shop from trending brands to feel noticed
  • Verbal abuse
  • Hide their opinions because they are scared of judgement
  • Eating disorders being regulated

Period 5

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  • Insecurities
  • Body shaming
  • Sexual assault
  • When parents take your opinions the wrong way
  • When parents don’t respect privacy
  • People assuming I’m gay because I have gay friends
  • Being bullied for your body
  • Parents forcing their kids to do what parents what
  • Men and women treat each other differently
  • Women’s rights being taken away
  • Treating men differently when they show feeling

Period 5

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  • Deadlines for homework assignments
  • If students get food everyday or not
  • School dress code
  • Taboos with drawing people with dark skin in art community
  • Getting made fun of for being a nerd
  • Rainbows are only associate with being gay
  • Pressure to live up to my family’s expectations
  • Suicide in teens
  • Feeling part of a family
  • Thinking its okay to make fun of teachers
  • What it means to be popular
  • What it means to be “weird” when you’re just different
  • Beauty standards
  • Internalized sexism
  • Teachers picking on students
  • The sport you play impacts your social ranking
  • One mistake and you’re bullied to death
  • Men’s mental health

Period 6

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Read “Sissy Syndrome” with your partner and answer the following questions:

    • How does she string more than one scene together?
    • What effect does that have?

“Sissy Syndrome”

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  • When you compare unfamiliar concepts to familiar things that your reader is likely to understand.
  • Define unfamiliar terms
  • Word choice: crowded instead of stood, packed instead of sat

Today you’re going to write stronger. You’re also going to find the heart of the story and stretch it out.

Ways to Add Description to Your Writing

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  • Elaborate by adding description:
    • When you compare unfamiliar concepts to familiar things that your reader is likely to understand.
    • Define unfamiliar terms
    • Word choice: crowded instead of stood, packed instead of sat
  • Angle your piece to make sure your writing conveys meaning and what matters to the community
  • Write an article with 150 word count.

Writing Goals for Today

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  • Turn in 150 word article to Classroom
  • Discuss: How easy was it to write about a topic involving meaning?
  • Get your writer’s notebooks ready!

Bell Ringer

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  • Quotes capture the essence of the moment. It connects the reader to the experience you are creating.
  • We have to punctuate them correctly.

Intro

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    • Introduce the source, then give the quotation:

According to one witness, “The car came out of nowhere, and so did the brave bystander.”

    • Tucking a quote into narration/explanation:

A witness first claimed that “the car came out of nowhere,” before adding, “and so did the brave bystander.”

    • Leading with a quote, then adding narration/explanation:

“The man swept the dog right from under the car’s wheels” was how witnesses described the incident.

Quotes

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Incorporate each style of quotes into a final piece that you’ll work on: 100 word count OR go back and add these quotes to the articles you’ve previously written:

    • Introduce the source, then give the quotation:

According to one witness, “The car came out of nowhere, and so did the brave bystander.”

    • Tucking a quote into narration/explanation:

A witness first claimed that “the car came out of nowhere,” before adding, “and so did the brave bystander.”

    • Leading with a quote, then adding narration/explanation:

“The man swept the dog right from under the car’s wheels” was how witnesses described the incident.

OPTIONS:

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  • Pick a news article you wrote and turn it into a tweet in 120 characters.
  • Song Inspo: Respect by Aretha Franklin
    • Inspired other artists
  • Get your writer’s notebooks ready!

Bell Ringer

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  • Include specific, vivid physical details
  • Dare to use a single elegant word - a grace note - in otherwise straightforward prose
  • End the passage with a DELIGHTFUL JOLT - a clever ending
  • Keep it focused - it ALL has to be about what it’s REALLY about

Find a place in your writing to apply these techniques and revise it OR Write a new newspaper article using these techniques

Techniques for Making Short Writing Powerful: Grace Notes

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  • Look back on your Writing Partner Norms and review how your partner likes feedback.
  • Get your articles all in one doc.

Bell Ringer

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  • Spend 20 minutes revising your articles. Make sure they are in the best condition you can get them.
  • Spend 15 minutes giving your partner digital feedback. What are they doing well? What should they do to improve? Use the comment feature to provide feedback.
  • Spend the remaining time discussing each other’s work in person. Point out specific areas that you want to highlight.

Task

Homework: Begin getting all of your articles typed, put in the same doc, and organized in order from your best to worst article. Each article gets its own page.

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Let’s look at the IJ checklist. Soon we’ll hold it up against your own writing, but first we’ll use a sample piece of writing. For this to work, you have to:

    • Be really honest with yourself
    • Make sure you’ve included the 5W’s
    • Go to each item on the checklist and find it in your writing.

Final Stretch!

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    • Be really honest with yourself about your writing!
    • Go through the rubric to determine what you’re missing
    • Review “Last Minute Editing Checklist”

LAST WORK DAY!!

Need one-on-one time with Mrs. Toney?

  • Thursday, 8/31 7:35 am-8:00 am
  • Tuesday, 9/5 3:25 pm-4:15 pm
  • Wednesday, 9/6 3:25 pm-4:15 pm

Period

Time

1

8:35-9:15

2

9:19-9:58

3

10:02-10:42

4

10:46-11:31

5

11:35-12:59

C Lunch

11:56-12:26

D Lunch

12:29-12:59

6

1:03-1:43

7

1:47-2:27

Convocation

2:31-3:25

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  • You get to pick ONE article to submit to the Daily Quest that will be sent to your parents.

Daily Quest