How can we improve these sentences?
When the storm escalated I was scared.
Quietly the Level 2 students entered the classroom.
My Mum is a wonderfully caring woman; she looks after friends, neighbours, and stray dogs!
The Corona Virus Covid-19 has affected many countries in the world.
Underneath that hard shell uncle Joe was soft.
What does a true friend display loyalty to those who care trust to those who have shared love to those who have shown their hearts.
Wanting to show how much I cared I you a letter.