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Craft a Comment

WALT write smart blog comments that are positive, thoughtful and helpful.

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Challenge

How many can you get in the hoop?

Re-word the failed feedback comments to get them to meet our criteria for a great comment.

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Taranaki Class Edublogs

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Will take you to the active class edublogs in Taranaki

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Craft your Comment

Greeting…

Positive

Thoughtful

Helpful

Sign off!

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Feedback Sentence Starters

Positive

  • I enjoyed the part when...
  • I liked the way you...
  • I loved this because...
  • My favourite part is when...
  • The part that stood out was...
  • The interesting part was...
  • I admire when...
  • I love your... because...
  • You are good at...
  • This is amazing because...
  • This shined because…

Thoughtful

  • Did you think about...
  • You brought me back to when...
  • This reminded me of when...
  • You taught me...
  • Did you know…
  • The facts you have used are really good. I like …
  • When I read your post I learnt...

Helpful

  • Why did...
  • How did you do it because...
  • Next time, you could...
  • Look back and try to...
  • To improve, you could...
  • Make sure you...
  • Try and... because...
  • I want to know why...
  • Maybe you could...
  • Why do you…
  • Great! I like how you...it really helps you story

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Level up

Ask a friend to critique your Comment

What was the greeting?

Positive:

Thoughtful:

Helpful:

How did the commenter sign off?

STAR RATING

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Learning Reflections

We have been learning about...

We…

It was quite challenging to…

If we did this again, some of the things we would do differently are...

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