Y4 Feedback to Feedforward

In the accompanying lesson students shared their writing with a friend, used a checklist to help peer/self assess and then responded to that feedback by editing their work.

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The Y4 student edited writing samples below are in response to the above lesson setting goals collaboratively with peers.

In the recording the student explains that they improved their writing by adding paragraphs, changing some words to past tense and adding capital letters.