“Kia Ora John. What an awesome zombie story. Your choice of descriptive words really helped me to imagine them wandering around the school. Also, this story totally reminds me of a story I wrote once about vampires. You should watch the zombie movies on Netflix if you haven’t already, might have some more ideas you could use for your next story.”
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Kia ora Hone, your burger looks fabulous! The way you explained your layering choices made your post really interesting. It reminded me of when I tried to make a double-layered burger and didn’t think about how the ingredients would hold together.
Have you thought about toasting the bun slightly first to stop it going soggy? That might help your final product look even better. Keep up the great work in the kitchen!
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Kia ora Manaia,
Your write-up about making pasta from scratch was awesome! I liked how you described each step clearly – it made me want to give it a go myself. It reminded me of when I made gnocchi last term, and how tricky it was to get the dough just right. Have you thought about adding a reflection at the end about what you’d change next time? That could help you (and others) improve even more. Ka pai on such a detailed and inspiring post!
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Talofa Lava John. I love the way you drew this picture with loads of detail in the hair and face. I also like drawing pictures of NRL players, my favourite player is Brian To’o. Have you ever tried using Google Drawings? I think you would be really good at it.
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