3/04 Indep Reading Reading Comprehension Check | 3/05 NWEA Testing Indep Reading Reflective Writing | 3/06 Mini-lesson: What’s my RRB Kevin Carrol Video Exit Ticket | 3/07 Review of RRB Online Career Reflection Survey Writing Reflection | 03/08 Complete Career Reflection and writing reflection. |
03/11 Begin Research: Online Template #1 | 03/12 Work Day Online Template #1 | 03/13 Work Day Online Template #1 | 03/14 Formative Assessment: Online Template #1 | 03/15 Begin: Online Template #2 |
03/18 Work Day Online Template #2 | 03/19 Work Day Online Template #2 | 03/20 HS Visit: Course Selection Sheets | 03/21 Work Day Online Template #2 | 03/22 Work Day Online Template #2 |
3/25 Spring Break | 3/26 Spring Break | 3/27 Spring Break | 3/28 Spring Break | 3/29 Spring Break |
4/01 Review Unit Objectives & ATLs Work Day Online Template #2 | 4/02 Work Day Online Templates #1 & #2 | 4/03 Formative Assessment: Online Templates #1 & #2 | 4/04 Mini-lesson: PSAT Testing Taking Strategies | 4/05 District Reading Assessment: Analyzing Non-fiction |
4/08 Review Non-fiction Writing Piece Rubric & Mentor Text Work day: Online Writing Project | 4/09 PSAT Work day: Online Writing Project | 4/10 MSTEP- I & S FORMATIVE ASSESSMENT: Online Writing Project Review Website Objectives and Directions | 4/11 MSTEP- I & S Work day: Online Writing Project & Website | 4/12 FORMATIVE ASSESSMENT: Online Writing Project Work day: Online Writing Project & Website |
4/15 Summative Assessment: Online Writing Project & Website | 4/16 Workday: Online Writing Project & Website | 4/17 Workday: Online Writing Project & Website | 4/18 Summative Assessment: Online Writing Project & Website FINAL DUE DATE! | 4/19 NO SCHOOL |
Wednesday
3/6
Learning Target:
Sweet!
It’s time for a new unit! Welcome to unit 5, Professional Writing!
During this unit, we will explore what the future might have in store for you, by researching different careers, making life goals, and working to set you up for the life of your dreams!
All of this work will eventually lead to you making a website, gathering letters of recommendation, writing a resume, and writing a cover letter for your professional portfolio!
They grow up so fast!
Think - Pair - Share
Today’s Agenda
* If there is time, we can read! Yay!
Kevin Carroll
Author of “What is your Red Rubber Ball”
As you watch, think about what what he means when he talks about “finding your red rubber ball.”
*Hint...
it’s a metaphor
Hold on a minute… Let’s discuss
Writing
Reflecting on our activity
Thursday
3/7
Learning Target:
Hola!
Welcome to day 2 of unit 5! It’s been about 24 hours since we started planning the rest of your lives!
Today, we’ll start with a bit of review from our conversation from yesterday, and then we are going to move right ahead and start thinking about how our skills, passions and interests line up with different careers.
Get set to take a survey, see your top matches, and make the decision that will determine your entire future? Holey Carp.
Today’s Agenda
* If there is time, we can read! Yay!
Review
Career Exploration
Today, you will be taking an online career exploration quiz. The questions it asks will prompt you to rate your interest in different things.
Don’t stress out about the answers too much.
Go with your gut.
It seems long, but once you get going, you’ll pick up the pace.
Taking the quiz
For each of the questions, you will answer:
Very Interested
Interested
Slightly Interested
Not Interested
The options never change.
The Results
The results are in the form of career fields, not careers.
After you’ve read each of the sections, it’s your job to research specific careers in that field.
Interpreting the results:
Using your handout, List the top three categories from the results.
Then, research what kinds of careers fall under each of those categories.
Then, choose your favorite from each category, and write it below.
Next:
Choose your top two careers, and use your resources (the internet) to find answers to the questions.
Can you inquiry?
The Quiz!
Click on the link for 8th grade on Thursday!
CAREER EXPLORATION QUIZ
When you’re done, fill out the handout!
Friday
3/8
Learning Target:
Happy Friday Ya’ll…
So we have successfully kicked off our 5th MYP unit of the year: Writing Non-fiction Text: A Career Search. There were so many great conversations yesterday. It was sooo cool! :)
Today we are going to continue with our career search by finishing our handouts, watching a video about keeping a positive and focused mindset, and finally answering some reflection questions.
It’s the end of the term. Are you ready for the rest of your life?
Keep a positive, Growth Mindset
Take a look and listen to this motivational video about keeping your goals in life at the forefront of what you do and keep “grinding.”
Do you know your “Why?”
Stop at 3 mins. 35 sec.
Think - Pair - Share
Do now:
EXIT TICKET QUESTIONS
Turn your career search handout over and answer these three questions:
When finished, grab this and your book.
Answer these questions on the back of your career search handout.
1.
2.
3.
Monday - Wednesday
3/11 - 3/13
Learning Target:
Happiest of Monday’s to you!
Did you know that the word “Monday” actually comes from old Norse Mythology? The word comes from Mani, the goddess of the moon! Fun Fact! Tell your friends, if you have any!
Now that we have completed our career search activity, it’s time to begin researching your first of two careers for your website.
The first step in that process is choosing a career, and then filling out the online graphic organizer. Don’t worry, we’ll walk you through the process.
Learning Target:
Happiest of Tuesday to you!
Did you know that the word “Tuesday” actually comes from old Norse Mythology? Named after Tīw, the god of single combat! In Olde English it was spelled Tiwes dæg. Cool!
Yesterday, we got a start with our online graphic organizers. Today, we will get right back to work filling those out!
Remember, the boxes with the * are the ones that you MUST DO. Once you’re done with that, make sure to complete at least 3 of the boxes from the rest of the document.
Learning Target:
Happiest of Wednesday’s to you!
Did you know that the word “Wednesday” actually comes from two different and distinct gods? It’s first named after the Germanic god, Woden, the god of learning, of poetry, and of magic. In Romance languages it was derived from the Roman god, Mercury, god of shopkeepers and merchants, travelers and transporters of goods. Cool!
Remember to stay focused on your graphic organizers. Today, we will get right back to work filling those out! You should be on box 3 or 4 by now. :)
Peer Assessment:
This is the first half of the peer assessment you will complete today.
Make sure to grab one when you get your computer.
Let’s break it down.
Graphic Org:
Wills: Google Classroom
Barrientes: Old school website.
Once you have your copy of the online graphic organizer, you simply follow what it prompts you to do.
Let’s discuss what parts you NEED to do, and what parts you can CHOOSE to do.
Requirements
You see these asterisks?
Those show you which boxes you need to do. Those ones will be specifically on the summative rubric.
There are 4 of them, plus the Works Cited box at the end.
Overview, Source(s) that support choosing this career, Source(s) that discourage choosing this career, Career specific language!
Overview:
This is a short introduction to your research. The goal for this part is to inform your reader about the profession.
You should respond to the prompts, as well as include any other information that you feel is necessary to understanding the rest of your research.
It should be around 5 complete sentences in length.
* Overview * |
Hints:
|
Delete this and write your text here... |
Two sources:
For these two boxes, you are going to outline two differing opinions on entering this profession.
You will find one source that encourages entering that career, and one source that discourages entering the same career.
Analyze a case in which two or more texts provide conflicting information on the same topic and identify where the texts disagree on matters of fact or interpretation.
In the end, you will have to show where the two opinions disagree with each other and why that might be
* Source(s) that supports choosing this career: * |
Hints:
|
Delete this and write your text here... |
Sources: (copy and paste or link below) Include the website name: |
* Source(s) that discourage choosing this career:* |
Hints:
|
Delete this and write your text here... |
Sources: (copy and paste or link below) Include the website name |
Career Specific Language:
For this box, you will have to identify some vocabulary (words and phrases) that are commonly used in that profession.
You will have to define what they mean in that profession, and whether or not the word is used in the same way on other fields
Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative, connotative, and technical meanings; analyze the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone, including analogies or allusions to other texts.
Next, you will need to use the terms in an example sentence, showing what it means in the context of your chosen career
* Career Specific Language: * |
Hints:
|
Delete this and write your text here... |
Works Cited
For this box, you will have to keep track of all of the resources that you used in your research.
Note:
This is not just for articles that you quote directly, this if for any website, or article that you took any information, quotes, statistics, or ideas.
So everytime you come across something that helps you with your research, copy and paste it here. THE ENTIRE URL
* Works Cited: * |
Hints:
|
Delete this and write your text here... |
Works Cited
How would you cite this source?
Works Cited
How would you cite this source?
* Works Cited: * |
Hints:
|
Delete this and write your text here... Command + V |
Do Now:
* Overview * |
Hints:
|
Delete this and write your text here... |
Thursday
3/14
Learning Target:
Happy Thursday!
Today, we are going to be putting a lid on the first career research project. We’ll take a look at the rubric, and then make sure our projects are all set to go, and then do some peer evaluation! Everyone’s favorite!
Once we’re done with that, we can move on to our second career research project!
Hint hint! It’s the same thing that you just did, only you are doing it on another career! Big fun!
I create money movements!
Peer Assessment:
This is the first half of the peer assessment you will complete today and tomorrow.
Make sure to grab one when you get your computer.
Let’s begin by breaking down the boxes with the *
Overview:
This is a short introduction to your research. The goal for this part is to inform your reader about the profession.
Article in Support:
You were to find evidence from articles that encourage entering this career. Rosie recommends having at least two sources to back up your research.
Vocab:
At least 3 terms
Article that discourages:
You were to find evidence from articles that discourage entering this career. Furthermore, you needed to show where the two articles differ on matters of fact and opinion
Education/ Starting your career | ___/1 |
|
Advancement | ___/1 |
|
Day on the job | ___/1 |
|
Work/Life Balance | __/1 |
|
The Rest
You can figure it out!
Just follow what the rubric says!
Each box is worth one additional point!
Use your time before evaluations wisely!
...One more thing
NOTE:
Make sure that you are keeping track of all of your sources correctly.
When using direct quotes, do this:
According to nbc.com, “direct quote.”
Then put the link in the works cited.
Work Cited Page | __/8 | 0 pts: The writer didn’t complete. 2 pts: The writer included 1 source for their data. 4 pts: The writer included 2 sources for their data. 6 pts: The writer included 3 sources for their data. 8 pts: The writer included multiple (4 or more) sources for their work. |
Works Cited:
Not just for articles that you quote directly, this if for any website, or article that you took any information, quotes, statistics, or ideas.
So everytime you come across something that helps you with your research, copy and paste it... THE ENTIRE URL
Friday
3/15
Learning Target:
TGIF!
It’s an end to a hard working week. This is the final day to take a look at the rubric, and make sure our research templates are all set to go, and get the peer evaluation done!
You know you like it!
Remember that once you’re done with your 1st researched career, you can move on to our second career research project! The second one should be easier as you have a better sense of how to look for your information.
Gotta’ make that money!
Thank God this isn’t Slauson.
^ Mr. Barrientes trying to be hip and cool.
Peer Assessment:
This all needs to be complete today.
Make sure to grab one when you get your technology.
Let’s get to it.
DUE AT THE END OF THE HOUR!!
Example text
Overview:
This is a short introduction to your research. The goal for this part is to inform your reader about the profession.
Article in Support:
You were to find evidence from articles that encourage entering this career. Rosie recommends having at least two sources to back up your research.
Vocab:
At least 3 terms
Article that discourages:
You were to find evidence from articles that discourage entering this career. Furthermore, you needed to show where the two articles differ on matters of fact and opinion
Education/ Starting your career | ___/1 |
|
Advancement | ___/1 |
|
Day on the job | ___/1 |
|
Work/Life Balance | __/1 |
|
The Rest
You can figure it out!
Just follow what the rubric says!
Each box is worth one additional point!
Use your time before evaluations wisely!
...One more thing
NOTE:
Make sure that you are keeping track of all of your sources correctly.
When using direct quotes, do this:
According to nbc.com, “direct quote.”
Then put the link in the works cited.
Work Cited Page | __/8 | 0 pts: The writer didn’t complete. 2 pts: The writer included 1 source for their data. 4 pts: The writer included 2 sources for their data. 6 pts: The writer included 3 sources for their data. 8 pts: The writer included multiple (4 or more) sources for their work. |
Works Cited:
Not just for articles that you quote directly, this if for any website, or article that you took any information, quotes, statistics, or ideas.
So everytime you come across something that helps you with your research, copy and paste it... THE ENTIRE URL
ENJOY YOUR WEEKEND!
Monday
3/18
Learning Target:
Welcome back!
We hope you had a nice weekend! This is it, the last week before spring break! With that in mind, let’s make sure that we understand the expectations for the week, and make sure that we go into the break ahead of our work.
Over the weekend, we took the time to look over some of your work, and we were surprised at how much still needs to be done. Let’s discuss what we saw, and prepare to make the changes and progress needed.
Gotta’ make that money!
Thank the Lord this isn’t Tappan.
^ Mr. Barrientes trying to be hip and cool.
Peer Assessment, SMH:
Let’s discuss:
Remember this?
A big part of this unit is to help us get closer to our goals, both in life, and in the future. Part of that future will be determined by your academic abilities, and your work ethic.
How have you used your work time so far in this project? Would you say that you’re getting closer to your goals?
TIME PERMITTING
For 15 mins...
WG Post Test Review
Hi Nation,
This week, each of you will take the WG post test. Let’s practice the words you have learned this year to make sure you will be successful on the test.
Now, please use your computer to go to:
Enter the codes
Tuesday
3/19
Learning Target:
Happy Tuesday!
Today is the day for your Word Generation post test. Yes- the day you all have been waiting for. Love it!
After you take your WG post test, you’ll go back to working on your Research Template #1. Remember that if you didn’t score well on your formative- finish it and have your teammate score your template AGAIN!
Make yo’ Money!!
WG Post Test: Wills-Begley
Time to take the WG post test!!!!
Step #1: Go to my website;
Step #2: Click on Word Generation Vocabulary Post Test link
Step #3: Input your username and password
Username: 2024hilljohnr@aaps.k12.mi.us
Password: Same as your email
Example: skiBop1
WG Post Test: Barrientes
Time to take the WG post test. You’ll need to do a few things in order to take the test….
Step #1: Go to my website; Reading Tests & Range Scores
Step #3: Click on WG Vocabulary Assessment “HERE” link
Step #3: Input your username and password
How to access the Word Generation Post-Test
2024hilljohnr
skiBop1
Your aaps email but stop after the letters in your name
Your password is the same as the password you got for your email at the beginning of the year.
How to review your post-test results
2) Click on VIEW ASSESSMENTS
3) Click on 2019 Word Generation Post Test when it appears at the bottom of the screen.
For the rest of the hour...
Wednesday
3/20
Learning Target:
Happy Wednesday!
Let me guess… it’s third hour, right? Or maybe 4th, 6th? We’ll you’re the only ones that have their ELA classes today.
That being said, you’re the lucky ones, you get the hour to catch up on your online graphic organizers.
Make sure that you’re following the peer evaluation rubric. Once you’re done with the first career research, it’s time to move on to your second career! Let’s go!
For the rest of the hour...
WG Post Test Review
Hey Nation,
For anyone who was absent yesterday...
It’s time for your WG vocabulary post test.
Please use your technology to go to:
Barrientess classes- Go to his website
Wills-Begley’s classes- Go to his website
WG Post Test: Wills-Begley
Time to take the WG post test!!!!
Step #1: Go to my website;
Step #2: Click on Word Generation Vocabulary Post Test link
Step #3: Input your username and password
Username: 2024hilljohnr@aaps.k12.mi.us
Password: Same as your email
Example: skiBop1
WG Post Test: Barrientes
Time to take the WG post test. You’ll need to do a few things in order to take the test….
Step #1: Go to my website; Reading Tests & Range Scores
Step #3: Click on WG Vocabulary Assessment “HERE” link
Step #3: Input your username and password
How to access the Word Generation Post-Test
2024hilljohnr
skiBop1
Your aaps email but stop after the letters in your name
Your password is the same as the password you got for your email at the beginning of the year.
How to review your post-test results
2) Click on VIEW ASSESSMENTS
3) Click on 2019 Word Generation Post Test when it appears at the bottom of the screen.
Barrientes’ Classes:
If you are done with Research Template’s #1 & #2...
IF YOUR DONE WITH EVERYTHING...You can chill, read, or listen to music and do the word search
Thursday
3/21
Learning Target:
Happy Thursday!
Only two days left before Spring Break.
Are you done with template #1? You should be. You actually should be at least 1/2 done with #2. Remember you’re making two so that you have options when we begin making our website after the break.
Finally, guess what? We’re having a formative assessment today- score yourself at the beginning of class along with a reflection.
Let’s get to work...
Who LOOKS cooler? Who IS cooler? It’s Mr. WB!
Progress Check (formative assessment)
Using your 3x5 card given to you by your teacher, please score yourself on where you are RIGHT now…
1 = I have a lot of work to do on #1
3 = Almost done with #1,; need to start #2
5 = Started on #2, but need a lot of work
7 = I’m just about done with #2
8 = I’m all done with BOTH
Name, hour, date
Beginning of class score:
Start of class reflection:
Reflection Prompt:
In no more than 2 sentences, explain what you plan to do TODAY to ensure that you are being productive and working towards completing BOTH online templates.
If you are done with Research Template’s #1 & #2...
IF YOU’RE DONE WITH EVERYTHING...You can chill, read, or listen to music and do the word search
Monday
4/1
Learning Target:
Just like that, spring break is over!
We hope you had some time to relax, connect with friends and family, and maybe even travel! Mr. Barrientes stayed home doing chores, and Mr. Wills drove all the way to New Orleans! Fun!
The plan is to use today to review what the expectations are for our project, and how it relates to the summative assessment.
After that, you’ll have time to finish up any remaining work in preparation for our Formative Assessment on Wednesday!
What are we doing?
Career Research: choose two careers to research, and fill out all of the boxes on both graphic organizers
Writing Piece: using your research about one of these careers, write an article about the career, explaining reasons for choosing that career, and reasons not to, and outlining those differing opinions
Website: Create a website, and post your writing piece there
Portfolio Day Materials: Cover Letter, Resume, Letters of recommendation, and work samples. Then post to website.
Just so you know
This Week:
Monday: Review and work time
Tuesday: Work time
Wednesday: Independent
Reading/Formative Assessment on career #2
Thursday: PSAT Prep
Friday: CERA part 2
Next Week:
Begin Writing Piece
TO WORK ON YOUR GRAPHIC ORGANIZERS
Review:
This is a short introduction to your research. The goal for this part is to inform your reader about the profession.
You should respond to the prompts, as well as include any other information that you feel is necessary to understanding the rest of your research.
It should be around 5 complete sentences in length.
* Overview * |
Hints:
|
Delete this and write your text here... |
Two sources:
For these two boxes, you are going to outline two differing opinions on entering this profession.
You will find one source that encourages entering that career, and one source that discourages entering the same career.
Analyze a case in which two or more texts provide conflicting information on the same topic and identify where the texts disagree on matters of fact or interpretation.
In the end, you will have to show where the two opinions disagree with each other and why that might be
* Source(s) that supports choosing this career: * |
Hints:
|
Delete this and write your text here... |
Sources: (copy and paste or link below) Include the website name: |
* Source(s) that discourage choosing this career:* |
Hints:
|
Delete this and write your text here... |
Sources: (copy and paste or link below) Include the website name |
First Source:
A lot of you are doing this wrong. Let’s fix that.
What you need:
* Source(s) that supports choosing this career: * |
Hints:
|
Delete this and write your text here... |
Sources: (copy and paste or link below) Include the website name: |
Second Source:
Most of you are doing this wrong. Let’s fix that.
What you need:
* Source(s) that discourage choosing this career:* |
Hints:
|
Delete this and write your text here... |
Sources: (copy and paste or link below) Include the website name |
Career Specific Language:
For this box, you will have to identify some vocabulary (words and phrases) that are commonly used in that profession.
You will have to define what they mean in that profession, and whether or not the word is used in the same way on other fields
Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative, connotative, and technical meanings; analyze the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone, including analogies or allusions to other texts.
Next, you will need to use the terms in an example sentence, showing what it means in the context of your chosen career
* Career Specific Language: * |
Hints:
|
Delete this and write your text here... |
Then you fill out the rest of the boxes:
Beginning a Career: |
Hints:
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Career Advancement: |
Hints:
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A day on the job: |
Hints:
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Benefits and work/life balance: |
Hints:
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*Works Cited: |
Hints:
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Preparing for the summative
Writing Sample:
Tips to make you look good
Quotes in your writing:
According to Dr. Mateen, a criminal defense lawyer in New York, one of the best parts about the job is, “you get to work with a lot of different people, and you know the work you do is really helping people.”
Links at the bottom:
For the rest of the hour...
Tuesday
4/2
Learning Target:
Hello! Look at you! You’re here! It’s a start!
Yesterday, we reviewed the expectations for your current project, cleared up some misunderstandings, and made sure that you have a solid understanding of what your graphic organizers should look like.
Looking at your recent work, it is clear that for many of you, your research skills have both improved and quickened on career number 2. That’s why we have two.
Today is your last work day on #2. Be smart.
^ A rare selfie of Mr. Barrientes back in 1994
What are we doing today?
Finishing our Career Research: choose two careers to research, and fill out all of the boxes on both graphic organizers
Starting our Writing Piece: using your research about one of these careers, write an article about the career, explaining reasons for choosing that career, and reasons not to, and outlining those differing opinions
Wednesday
4/3
Learning Target:
Hey, ya’ll….
We’ll, we’re now half way through our first week back. It’s time to start doing evaluations of our work, and then enjoy some peaceful reading.
Yes...that’s right, some reading time indeed! You should have your novel with you. If you don’t, well, don’t worry. We have a reading peace for you. :)
Remember, how it looks, feels, and sounds to be a respectful classmate when we’re in a reading environment.
Mr. Barrientes in 1985 in San Diego, CA
Peer Assessment:
This all needs to be complete today.
Make sure to grab one when you get your technology.
Let’s get to it.
DUE AT THE END OF THE HOUR!!
First things, first….
Assess your research progress:
Using the assessment card provided by your teacher, score your BEST Online Research Templates.
Barrientes’ Classes… (W.B.’s, go to the next slide)
Assess your Literature District Assessment
Steps…
Perspective: ____/4
Effect Created: ______/4
For the rest of the hour...
Thursday
4/4
Learning Target:
Hola!
Today we’re going to have a lesson about the PSAT test with Mr. Kabat.
Be respectful and kind. Pay attention.
O, yeah, take this handout with you to take notes. We’re telling your parents about it, sooooo…..
Make sure you’re taking notes.
Let’s do this with……
THE KABAT!
How these lesson plans were made.
Friday
4/5
Learning Target:
Bon Jour!
Today we’re going to finish the week with the district NON-FICTION reading assessment.
We know, we know….there have been a lot of assessments and evaluations this week, but that’s kinda how it is for bit… demonstrating what you know. Yeah, that’s school.
So IB World Learner, are you ready? Yeah.
Be confident. YOU GOOD!
Have a great Friday.
How these lesson plans were made.
But how will we be evaluated?
What does a 1 in Informational Text look like?
What does a 2 in Informational Text look like?
What does a 3 in Informational Text look like?
What does a 4 in Informational Text look like?
Let’s do this thang...
Assess your Literature District Assessment
Steps…
Monday
4/8
Learning Target:
Happy Monday, ya’ll!
Time to get back into our routine. Today we’re going to take some time to work on the research article and website. However, before we do that, we’ll look at a mentor text to give you an idea of what your article should look like.
Don’t forget, you’re taking your PSAT tomorrow. Scared? Don’t be. Once you’ve made some progress on your article, you can look at the practice questions. You got this. Breathe, focus and “leave it on the field.”
Let’s do these things.
Completing the CERA
Considering the authors claims and evidence, have they proved their thesis well enough? Are you persuaded?
Your To Do List:
Research Writing Piece (Research Article):
Using your research about one of these careers, write an article about the career, explaining reasons for choosing that career, and reasons not to, and outlining those differing opinions.
Website:
Create a website, and post your writing piece on your site.
Portfolio Day Materials:
Fill out your (L.O.R.) Letters of Recommendation request form.
Becoming an Astronomer
Article By: Some Kid
March 30th, 2019
Overview:
If you are reading this article, you are probably interested in studying our universe and how it works, and you want to broaden your knowledge of the career field even more. It’s probably also because it's possibly something you could see yourself pursuing in the future. The scientific definition of an Astronomer is, “an expert in astronomy or a scientific observer of celestial bodies,” according to Wikipedia. So the main job of an Astronomer is to study the movement and activity of our surrounding universe and all of the things that make it up.
Things the writer does well:
Things the writer could improve on:
As stated in an article by the University of Maryland, becoming an Astronomer means you get to, “study the births of stars and planets, the absorption of material by enormous black holes, and the evolution of galaxies across billions of years? In short, astronomers study the mysteries of the universe. We're a rare breed; there are only some 20,000 professional astronomers in the world.” This speaks to the importance of astronomers in the continuation, growth, and preservation of our universe and how minimized the career field actually is. The same article also informs us that becoming an astronomer will lead you to career paths, “as researchers, educators, or a combination of the two. Many others work for the government, industry, observatories, museums, newspapers, and so forth.” So you’ll have several different individualized fields to choose from that best fit how you want and like to study the field best. In an Article by current astronomer Marissa Rosenberg from Cornell University, she confirms that, “Astronomy and related fields are at the forefront of science and technology; answering fundamental questions and driving innovation.”
Things the writer does well:
Things the writer could improve on:
While becoming an Astronomer has several upsides, it also has its shares of disadvantages as well. In an article written by Career Trends, it goes on to talk about how, “most astronomers spend most of their time in laboratories, observatories, and offices.” This can be the cause of long and tedious work hours along with traveling to remote locations for research. The same article also stated that “Furthermore, although the U.S. Bureau of Labor Statistics projects growth of seven percent in the field for the period of 2014 through 2024, federal government spending related to physics and astronomy research is not likely to increase. This trend may result in a decrease of available positions at colleges, universities and at national laboratories.” These statistics are bad news for anyone aspiring to be an astronomer because national funding is required for astronomers to have the most advanced and elite technology to produce the most efficient and precise research and evidence. As you can see, the articles used to support each claim both properly present the reader with textual evidence on why their claim or perspective on the career is right. Although they differ in the point of view that one very obviously supports the career choice of becoming an astronomer, while the other article states some reasons of why that may not be the best choice.
Things the writer does well:
Things the writer could improve on:
Career Specific Language:
As found in any scientific career, there is a wide variety of astronomical vocabulary. Most of it is scientifically and mathematically inclined vocabulary. Take Libration for example. The meaning of Libration is ‘A slight tipping and tilting of the Moon from week to week that brings various features along the limb into better view. The main causes are two aspects of the Moon’s orbit: its elliptical shape and inclination to the ecliptic.’ Occultation means “When the Moon or a planet passes directly in front of a more distant planet or star. A grazing occultation occurs if the background body is never completely hidden from the observer.” While a Constellation “A distinctive pattern of stars used informally to organize a part of the sky. There are 88 official constellations, which technically define sections of the sky rather than collections of specific stars.” When using the terms in further context, they are most likely to be used when defining movement or changes in our solar system.
Things the writer does well:
Things the writer could improve on:
Beginning a Career + Career Advancement
To become an astronomer you need at least 6 years of college or a graduates degree. But most astronomers nowadays have a Ph.D. because of the better job offers and positions that can be presented to them. Being an Astronomer for a profession means you'll bring in a very reliable and sustainable income. The average starting salary for an astronomer is about $109,110. Although the average salary can range from about $95,000 to $101,000. $53,449 and go up to $165,468. Depending on what faculty choice an astronomer decides to go into, opportunities for promotions can vary vastly. Employers are looking for their incoming employees to have skills that include, solving complex problems, conducting relevant and valid research, analyzing data, and stellar mathematics and science skills. Becoming an Astronomer is not an easy thing to accomplish, there aren't very many job offerings in the field, although researchers expect that to change regarding the current state of our environment and the impact that it has on the universe and its future.
Things the writer does well:
Things the writer could improve on:
A day on the job:
A day in the job of an astronomer can vary from several different perspectives. In an article by Kimberly Cullen an astronomer, she takes us through what her life is like as an astronomer. In the article Kimberly states that “A lot of an astronomers time is spent in front of their computer analyzing the data that they’ve collected, either from telescope or computing time. The vast amounts of data that has been collected need to be analyzed.” This takes the light off the stereotype that astronomers spend time behind telescopes and magnifying glasses trying to identify stars and other celestial events. Although it's a big part of their career, it's not all they do. Each and every day, astronomers are expected to be diligent with their work. It is also important to be very open-minded in this career field, especially regarding all the scientific and religious biases spread around it. As stated previously, most work as an astronomer is done indoors in an office studying evidence, collecting data, and doing vigorous research. An astronomer keeps a healthy balance between working independently and working collaboratively with other coworkers/peers. Depending on what type of work has to complete, a supervisor or higher authority will usually direct and inform the employees on whether or not they’ll be working on a project together.
Things the writer does well:
Things the writer could improve on:
Benefits and Work/Life Balance:
Some benefits that come into place in this career field can include its sustainable income and wage, paid holidays and vacations, health insurance, and pension plans. The typical vacation time offered is 12-15 days. While Holiday time offered is 12 days. After four or so years, vacation time can reach up to 20 days. Working overtime can be common for most people in the astronomical field. Depending on what you are researching or studying, the amount that needs to be put into things can vary as well. Therefore determining whether or not you will need to work or put in any extra hours.
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Things the writer could improve on:
Things the writer does well:
Things the writer could improve on:
Do Now: Wills
Do Now: Barrientes
Tuesday
4/9
Learning Target:
It’s a terrific Tuesday, ya’ll!
How was that PSAT?
Told ya...you’d live. Now that we’re done with that, it’s time to make sure you know what you’re doing for your project.
Let’s take another brief look at the mentor text, and how you can make sure to make your article even better. After that, you’ll be fully focused on your article. We need to get that done.
Let’s be our best sleeves.
Becoming an Astronomer
Article By: Some Kid
March 30th, 2019
Overview:
If you are reading this article, you are probably interested in studying our universe and how it works, and you want to broaden your knowledge of the career field even more. It’s probably also because it's possibly something you could see yourself pursuing in the future. The scientific definition of an Astronomer is, “an expert in astronomy or a scientific observer of celestial bodies,” according to Wikipedia. So the main job of an Astronomer is to study the movement and activity of our surrounding universe and all of the things that make it up.
Things the writer does well:
Things the writer could improve on:
As stated in an article by the University of Maryland, becoming an Astronomer means you get to, “study the births of stars and planets, the absorption of material by enormous black holes, and the evolution of galaxies across billions of years? In short, astronomers study the mysteries of the universe. We're a rare breed; there are only some 20,000 professional astronomers in the world.” This speaks to the importance of astronomers in the continuation, growth, and preservation of our universe and how minimized the career field actually is. The same article also informs us that becoming an astronomer will lead you to career paths, “as researchers, educators, or a combination of the two. Many others work for the government, industry, observatories, museums, newspapers, and so forth.” So you’ll have several different individualized fields to choose from that best fit how you want and like to study the field best. In an Article by current astronomer Marissa Rosenberg from Cornell University, she confirms that, “Astronomy and related fields are at the forefront of science and technology; answering fundamental questions and driving innovation.”
Things the writer does well:
Things the writer could improve on:
While becoming an Astronomer has several upsides, it also has its shares of disadvantages as well. In an article written by Career Trends, it goes on to talk about how, “most astronomers spend most of their time in laboratories, observatories, and offices.” This can be the cause of long and tedious work hours along with traveling to remote locations for research. The same article also stated that, “furthermore, although the U.S. Bureau of Labor Statistics projects growth of seven percent in the field for the period of 2014 through 2024, federal government spending related to physics and astronomy research is not likely to increase. This trend may result in a decrease of available positions at colleges, universities and at national laboratories.” These statistics are bad news for anyone aspiring to be an astronomer because national funding is required for astronomers to have the most advanced and elite technology to produce the most efficient and precise research and evidence. As you can see, the articles used to support each claim both properly present the reader with textual evidence on why their claim or perspective on the career is right. Although they differ in the point of view that one very obviously supports the career choice of becoming an astronomer, while the other article states some reasons of why that may not be the best choice.
Things the writer does well:
Things the writer could improve on:
Career Specific Language:
As found in any scientific career, there is a wide variety of astronomical vocabulary. Most of it is scientifically and mathematically inclined vocabulary. Take Libration for example. The meaning of Libration is ‘A slight tipping and tilting of the Moon from week to week that brings various features along the limb into better view. The main causes are two aspects of the Moon’s orbit: its elliptical shape and inclination to the ecliptic.’ Occultation means “When the Moon or a planet passes directly in front of a more distant planet or star. A grazing occultation occurs if the background body is never completely hidden from the observer.” While a Constellation “A distinctive pattern of stars used informally to organize a part of the sky. There are 88 official constellations, which technically define sections of the sky rather than collections of specific stars.” When using the terms in further context, they are most likely to be used when defining movement or changes in our solar system.
Things the writer does well:
Things the writer could improve on:
Your To Do List:
FINISH YOUR
Research Writing Piece (Research Article):
Using your research about one of these careers, write an article about the career, explaining reasons for choosing that career, and reasons not to, and outlining those differing opinions.
ONCE YOUR DONE WITH THE ARTICLE, THEN…
Website:
Create a website, and post your writing piece on your site.
Portfolio Day Materials:
Fill out your (L.O.R.) Letters of Recommendation request form.
Wednesday
4/10
Learning Target:
This is a Scarlett News Alert from the local language and literature department:
A new report out from the school administration tells us that 8th graders at Scarlett have successfully completed the PSAT. One teacher we talked to at the scene said the did a “very fine job.”
According to our reporter, the students are relieved to put that accomplishment behind them, but are facing increasing pressure from teachers to make progress on their upcoming summative assessment.
Longtime Scarlett veteran teacher, Sneaky Sal, told us, “that’s just the way it is, if you can dig it.”
Becoming an Astronomer
Article By: Some Kid
March 30th, 2019
Overview:
If you are reading this article, you are probably interested in studying our universe and how it works, and you want to broaden your knowledge of the career field even more. It’s probably also because it's possibly something you could see yourself pursuing in the future. The scientific definition of an Astronomer is, “an expert in astronomy or a scientific observer of celestial bodies,” according to Wikipedia. So the main job of an Astronomer is to study the movement and activity of our surrounding universe and all of the things that make it up.
Things the writer does well:
Things the writer could improve on:
As stated in an article by the University of Maryland, becoming an Astronomer means you get to, “study the births of stars and planets, the absorption of material by enormous black holes, and the evolution of galaxies across billions of years? In short, astronomers study the mysteries of the universe. We're a rare breed; there are only some 20,000 professional astronomers in the world.” This speaks to the importance of astronomers in the continuation, growth, and preservation of our universe and how minimized the career field actually is. The same article also informs us that becoming an astronomer will lead you to career paths, “as researchers, educators, or a combination of the two. Many others work for the government, industry, observatories, museums, newspapers, and so forth.” So you’ll have several different individualized fields to choose from that best fit how you want and like to study the field best. In an Article by current astronomer Marissa Rosenberg from Cornell University, she confirms that, “Astronomy and related fields are at the forefront of science and technology; answering fundamental questions and driving innovation.”
Things the writer does well:
Things the writer could improve on:
While becoming an Astronomer has several upsides, it also has its shares of disadvantages as well. In an article written by Career Trends, it goes on to talk about how, “most astronomers spend most of their time in laboratories, observatories, and offices.” This can be the cause of long and tedious work hours along with traveling to remote locations for research. The same article also stated that, “furthermore, although the U.S. Bureau of Labor Statistics projects growth of seven percent in the field for the period of 2014 through 2024, federal government spending related to physics and astronomy research is not likely to increase. This trend may result in a decrease of available positions at colleges, universities and at national laboratories.” These statistics are bad news for anyone aspiring to be an astronomer because national funding is required for astronomers to have the most advanced and elite technology to produce the most efficient and precise research and evidence. As you can see, the articles used to support each claim both properly present the reader with textual evidence on why their claim or perspective on the career is right. Although they differ in the point of view that one very obviously supports the career choice of becoming an astronomer, while the other article states some reasons of why that may not be the best choice.
Things the writer does well:
Things the writer could improve on:
Career Specific Language:
As found in any scientific career, there is a wide variety of astronomical vocabulary. Most of it is scientifically and mathematically inclined vocabulary. Take Libration for example. The meaning of Libration is ‘A slight tipping and tilting of the Moon from week to week that brings various features along the limb into better view. The main causes are two aspects of the Moon’s orbit: its elliptical shape and inclination to the ecliptic.’ Occultation means “When the Moon or a planet passes directly in front of a more distant planet or star. A grazing occultation occurs if the background body is never completely hidden from the observer.” While a Constellation “A distinctive pattern of stars used informally to organize a part of the sky. There are 88 official constellations, which technically define sections of the sky rather than collections of specific stars.” When using the terms in further context, they are most likely to be used when defining movement or changes in our solar system.
Things the writer does well:
Things the writer could improve on:
Your To Do List:
Thursday
4/11
Learning Target:
Hey there 8th graders!
Today is work day along with a school survey! This will be the final day to work on your article before you are formatively assessed on it tomorrow.
We have a lot on our plates right now, so it is crucial that you stay focused and manage your work wisely. You need to put in some work on this at home, if you’re not at least 3/4 of the way done by today.
Quickly, head over to my website to take the survey about our school for the district.
Let’s gooooo...
Your To Do List:
Work productively until the end of the hour
Your formative assessment on your
Research Article is TOMORROW!
Friday
4/12
Learning Target:
Hello 8th graders!
Yesterday was your final day to work on your article before you do the formative peer evaluation today.
We’ll start with a bit of time to look back over our own work, and then you’ll be paired up with a partner to review their work.
Since we have computers today, and we are trying to save paper, the peer evaluation will be done online, using a Google Form. It’s basically the exact same thing, but just to be sure, we’ll preview what it will look like!
Be prepared, or be scared! ...
Your To Do List
Work productively until you are partnered up with a peer!
Your formative assessment on your
Research Article is only a few minutes away!!
What you’re used to:
Here is what the rubric looks like when printed out.
You are graded on 7 different things.
Each one receives a score between 1 and 8.
Here’s the e-version:
There are still 7 different things you’ll need to score.
You have to give a score for category A, one for B, and so on, All the way to G.
Each letter receives a score between 1 and 8.
Give them an overall score
Then answer the reflection questions:
Average out all of the scores you gave for each strand, A-G
Monday
4/15
Learning Target:
Howdy y’all!
We hope you had an amazing weekend! Now that we’re halfway through April, we’ve gotta shift into overdrive.
We looked at your peer evaluations from Friday, and it’s clear that a lot of us have a boatload of work to get done before we turn in our articles on Wednesday.
Keep in mind, since there is no school on Friday, we’ll start building our websites on Thursday.
Lots to do!
Your To Do List:
Your Summative Assessment on your Research Article is Wednesday!
BTW: Your website is about your professional writing, NOT JUST your research article
Tuesday
4/16
Learning Target:
Sup y’all!
We’ve shifted in overdrive and just like that your Summative Assessment on your article is tomorrow. That’s right, sports fans, you get your first “real” grade for Literature and Language tomorrow. Are you ready?
We hope so, you’ve had time in class and you’ve been able to work at home, too.
Keep in mind, since there is no school on Friday, you’ll need to start building your websites on Thursday (if you haven’t already started).
RUBRIC REVIEW!
7/8
Your To Do List:
Your Summative Assessment on your Research Article is TOMORROW!
Wednesday
4/17
Learning Target:
Today’s the day!
Now that we’ve spent the last few weeks researching a career, analyzing our research, and turning it into a writing piece, it’s time for your first Summative Assessment!
Today, you’ll be given a copy of the rubric, then you’ll look through your work, and give yourself an honest score.
Once you’re done with that, you’ll have some time to read your own novel. It will be a quiet day, assessing and reading.
Self Assessment:
Do Now:
When you’re done:
No matter what, it is quiet in here!
No phones, no games.
Thursday
4/18
Learning Target:
Yesterday was the day!
We did it! We wrote the career research articles and submitted them! Feels good, yeah? Well now, we’re moving on to our websites!
Before we cut you loose to do that, let’s make sure that we understand what the purpose of them is, how we can use the tools available to us, and lastly, how we are going to evaluate your work.
Once we understand that, we will give you time to work on your website, and continue our one on one conferences with your teachers.
Home Page:
Your home page should be simple.
It should include your name, and maybe a picture of you.
Feel free to add anything you think would be appropriate.
Career #1:
This is where you will post your career research article.
You should use the tools available to make this page as interesting and user-friendly as possible.
Cover Letter:
Eventually, this will be where you will post your cover letter.
We’ll start writing those soon.
Resume:
Eventually, this will be where you will post your cover letter.
We’ll start writing those soon.
Work Samples:
This will be a place for you to showcase your talents. Any pictures of artwork, team photos, videos of you doing cool things, photographs you’ve taken… that kind of stuff.
Monday
4/22
Learning Target:
Magical Monday, 8th Graders!
We did it! We wrote the career research articles and submitted them! Feels good, yeah? Well now, we’re moving on to our websites!
Before we cut you loose to do that, let’s make sure that we understand their purpose, how we can use the tools available to us, and lastly, how your work will be evaluated.
Once we understand that, we will give you time to work on your website. The Summative Assessment on your website is THIS Wednesday.
Think - Pair - Share
What are we doing?
Career Research: choose two careers to research, and fill out all of the boxes on both graphic organizers
Writing Piece: using your research about one of these careers, write an article about the career, explaining reasons for choosing that career, and reasons not to, and outlining those differing opinions
Portfolio Day Materials: Cover Letter, Resume, Letters of recommendation, and work samples. Then post to website.
Website: Create a website, and post your writing piece there (Contains everything above)
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Turns into
Website vs. Research Article vs. e-Portfolio
Research Article vs. e-Portfolio
Research Article:
You were graded on your research and writing.
e-Portfolio:
You will be graded on how you PRESENT your information, not the research and writing.
Example Website:
Be prepared to respond to the following:
Your summative assessment:
You will be assessed on:
graded on your website
graded on your written response
Tuesday
4/23
Learning Target:
Tragic Tuesday, 8th Graders!
As promised, today is going to be a much-needed work day for our summative assessment web design project.
Remember, your grade for this mini summative will come not from your writing, but from how you organize your web page. Of course, what you say has to be on topic, flow, and make sense, but you have already been graded on the writing portion.
As you work, be mindful of how your reader will experience your web-page. Now get out there and get it done!
Your summative assessment:
You will be assessed on:
graded on your website
graded on your written response
Reflection:
One third of your grade will come from your hand-written response to the following question:
evaluate the advantages and disadvantages of using different mediums to present a particular topic or idea.
medium:
In this context, a medium is a platform for getting a message from one person to another.
The question:
evaluate the advantages and disadvantages of using different mediums to present a particular topic or idea.
For your career research project, what are the advantages and disadvantages of using the medium of a website? What are the advantages and disadvantages of simply using a Google Doc?
What tools does a website have to attract and keep a reader’s attention?
In the end, which one is a better medium to present your research on this topic? Can you think of a medium that would be even better? Why?
Do Now: (Wills)
Do Now: (Barrientes)
Wednesday
4/24
Learning Target:
Hey! It’s Wednesday!
Today, you’ll have an opportunity to put the finishing touches on your website!
Remember, your grade is based off of how your website is organized, and how it looks. You have already been graded on the writing portion of your research article.
Now it’s time to use the tools available to us using the medium of a web page!!
Before you leave, you’ll use the rubric to give yourself a score, and then respond to the prompt on the back! Get going!
Your summative assessment:
You will be assessed on:
graded on your website
graded on your written response
Review!
In this context, a medium is a platform for getting a message from one person to another.
Review
evaluate the advantages and disadvantages of using different mediums to present a particular topic or idea.
For your career research project, what are the advantages and disadvantages of using the medium of a website? What are the advantages and disadvantages of simply using a Google Doc?
What tools does a website have to attract and keep a reader’s attention?
In the end, which one is a better medium to present your research on this topic? Can you think of a medium that would be even better? Why?
Self assessment
Using your copy of the rubric, give yourself an accurate score for your website.
After doing that, respond to the prompt on the back.
This is due at the end of the hour.
Responding to the prompt