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Anchor chart to use with students to explain the hand organizational structure

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Sample of student handout using the hand organizational structure

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This same basic organizational structure (and the accompanying Painted Essay coloring system) can be used to help students organize any type of writing:

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What could my husband say to convince his clients that Newton Parrish is a great school?

Think, Pair, Share

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INTRODUCTION (thumbs up!)

  • Why do we need an introduction?
  • What do you always need to include in an �introduction if you are writing an opinion �piece?
  • What’s a good introduction for an email about whether or not Newton Parrish is a good school?

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1st Point + Evidence (index finger)

We don’t have textual evidence for our Newton Parrish example, but we can still write our main points and go back later with evidence to support our opinion.

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2nd Point + Evidence (middle finger)

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3rd Point + Evidence (ring finger)

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Conclusion (pinky finger)

-What is a conclusion?

- What should be included in a conclusion?

- What’s a good conclusion for our example �about Newton Parrish?�

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Now, it’s your turn!�

Should Newton Parrish extend recess so that all students get 60 minutes of recess everyday?

  • Fill in the hand graphic organizer with your ideas. Be prepared to share with a partner when the timer goes off!

  • Remember, if we had a text to read�first, we’d need to include textual �evidence for each point! For now, just�fill in your intro, points, and conclusion.

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���Next time, we’ll practice including textual evidence with the HAND strategy.

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Now, we’re ready to practice the HAND strategy using textual evidence!

Here’s our prompt:

Which is better - outdoor play or video games?�

  • REMEMBER: You may already have an opinion on this issue, but this time, it’s all about using TEXTUAL EVIDENCE!

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Let’s look at our first text, which is an opinion article from Newsela.

As we’re reading, think about the prompt: �Which is better - outdoor play or video games? ��Highlight evidence in favor of outdoor play in yellow Mark evidence in favor of video games in blue.

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Now, let’s look at our second text, which is an opinion text from Storyworks (p. 28) called “Outdoor Play.”

As we’re reading, think about the prompt: Which is better - outdoor play or video games? ��Highlight evidence in favor of outdoor play in yellow Mark evidence in favor of video games in blue.

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Now, let’s look at our next text, which is an opinion text from Storyworks (p. 29) called “Video Games.”

As we’re reading, think about the prompt: Which is better - outdoor play or video games? ��Highlight evidence in favor of outdoor play in yellow Mark evidence in favor of video games in blue.

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Step 1: Write the PROMPT on the PALM of you hand graphic organizer.

Which is better - outdoor play or video games?

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Now, it’s time to review the evidence you highlighted, think about the prompt, and form an opinion. ��Remember, not everyone has to agree!�

Which is better - outdoor play or video games?

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Which is better - outdoor play or video games?

Step 2: Fill in the THUMB on your graphic organizer with your INTRODUCTION. ��Remember, your intro should include a hook and your claim (opinion statement).

(Turn & Talk)

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Wait … before I fill in my points, how do I cite my sources and show where my evidence came from?

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�Example:

Playing video games and staring at a screen for too long can be bad for your health. According to the Newsela article, “Too much screen time can damage your brain.” �

  1. What is my point #1?
  2. How did I cite my source?
  3. What is the evidence to support my point?

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�Example:

Playing video games and staring at a screen for too long can be bad for your health. According to the Newsela article, “Too much screen time can damage your brain.”

  • What is my point #1?
  • How did I cite my source?
  • What is the evidence to support my point?

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Step 3: Fill in the three FINGERS on your graphic organizer with your POINTS and EVIDENCE. �

  • POINT 1 + EVIDENCE (index finger)
  • POINT 2 + EVIDENCE (middle finger)
  • POINT 3 + EVIDENCE (ring finger)�

Make sure you cite the sources for your evidence!

Examples: � According to the first article

In the Newsela article, the author says

According to Malik’s letter

According to Camila’s letter

Malik states that� Camila said that

(Turn & Talk)

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Which is better - outdoor play or video games?

Step 4: Fill in the PINKY on your graphic organizer with your CONCLUSION.�

(Turn & Talk)

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Do you see anything on the �hand organizer that we �haven’t talked about yet?

What are some examples?

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Step 5: Add some TRANSITION WORDS on your organizer to connect your ideas.

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Step 6: Now, it’s time to use your hand organizer as a guide and TYPE YOUR FINAL ESSAY!��Make sure you:�

  • Use complete sentences.�
  • Use transition words to link your ideas.�
  • Read over your essay to correct any mistakes and make it the best it can be!