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Introduction to film- 2022 9 Extension English

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Year 9 Extension English MTBHS Film Study

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Why film?

  • Films encourage ideas and social commentary within communities. They have the power to express a culture's ideals and shape them. Art, especially film, is important because it gives us the ability to form lasting human connections by letting us share our experiences with each other.
  • Films expose us to other perspectives, some which we may never have in our own lives and allow us to empathise with other people.
  • Films can offer an escape from our own lives and entertain us.
  • Films create jobs for thousands of people in Australia and contributes more than $3 billion to the Australian economy each year.

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Assessment Tasks

A range of tasks including individual work, partner and group work. Class discussions. Formative Tasks.

Write an 800 word essay in response to the question:

“So happy we found you buddy. Sorry it took so long.” How are cinematic/film techniques used to explore the film’s themes and engage the audience?

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Learning Intentions

  • The ability to recognise different film techniques and analyse their effect.
  • The ability to identify key themes in texts and discuss how these are explored.
  • The ability to recognise why filmmakers make certain creative decisions and how these decisions contribute to the overall product.
  • The ability to write a critical and analytical essay that has a clear purpose/perspective on a text.
  • The ability to integrate quotes and examples effectively to support an idea.

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Task Checklist

  • Watch and analyse Taika Waititi’s ’Hunt for the Wilderpeople’ (2016)
  • Take notes on the use of film techniques and conventions to communicate meaning in a film genre.
  • Participate in small group class discussion and analysis tasks based on production elements, genre, mood, mise-en-scene and theme.
  • Use the PowerPoint to assist in the development of your understanding of film analysis
  • Use scaffolds and word banks to draft an essay
  • Complete Self Assessment Task
  • Make improvements based on teacher feedback
  • Submit a final, polished copy on the due date

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Lesson 1

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Think. Pair. Share: What do you know about New Zealand?

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Lesson 1: Film and Film Techniques

  • Students watch the trailer and list all of the film techniques noticed. (Next slide)

  • Explicit teaching- Read through all Film Techniques and Film Editing definitions/analysis and examples
  • Re-watch the trailer and list all of the cinematic techniques noticed.

  • Imaginary Cameras (See below)

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Trailer

PRETEST: Watch the trailer and list all film techniques you noticed:

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MISE EN SCÈNE

“Everything in the frame can carry meaning.”

Mise en scène – means “placing on stage” in French 

To explain it simply, mise en scène refers to what we see onscreen in a film. It’s the film’s visuals; meaning, all of the elements that appear on camera and their arrangement.

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Camera Angles�

Camera angles are used so that the viewer can understand the relationships between the characters.

Bird's eye angle

Looks directly down upon a scene. This angle is often used as an establishing angle, along with an extreme long shot, to establish setting.

High angle 

Looks down upon a subject. A character shot with a high angle will look vulnerable or small. These angles are often used to demonstrate to the audience a perspective of a particular character.

Eye-level angle

Puts the audience on an equal level with the character/s. This is the most commonly used angle in most films as it allows the viewers to feel comfortable with the characters.

Low angle 

Looks up at a character. This is the opposite of a high angle and makes a character look more powerful. This can make the audience feel vulnerable and small by looking up at the character. This can help the responder feel empathy if they are viewing the frame from another character's point of view.

Dutch angle

Is used to demonstrate the confusion of a character. The example above should disorientate you.

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Camera Shots

Extreme long shot (establishing shot) 

A large amount of landscape (Whole city/ town). Often used at the beginning of a scene or a film to establish general location (setting). 

Long shot 

Contains landscape but gives the viewer a more specific idea of setting. Could show the buildings/ house where the action will take place.

Full shot  

Contains a complete view of the characters. Viewers can see costumes of characters and may also help to show the relationships between characters.

Mid shot 

Characters or a character from the waist up. Can see the characters' faces more clearly as well as their interaction with other characters. 

Close-up

Contains just one character's face. Can understand the actor's emotions and feel empathy for the character.

 

Extreme close-up 

Contains one part of a character's face or other object. Creates an intense mood. Can highlight importance to the audience

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Camera Movement

Zoom: Probably the most well-known camera move, zooming gives the impression of moving closer or further away from the subject. It can be used effectively to magnify a certain focus point in the frame, but other moves such as a dolly, are a more natural way to show movement. While a quick zoom can help add a sense of drama and energy when used correctly, avoid over-using zoom as your default move.

Pan: Panning is when the camera is moved horizontally from one side to another on a central axis. This is a rotating movement in which the camera’s position remains in place, but the direction that it faces changes. It can be used to follow a moving character or to fit more into a frame, for example, panning across a landscape to create a sense of place. your default move.

Tilt: Tilting is similar to panning in that the camera is kept in a stationary position, but unlike panning (which looks from side to side) tilting focuses on upwards & downwards movements. Using a tilting motion helps to fit more into a single frame. A slow upwards tilt can be very effective in making a subject appear bigger or more significant while a downwards tilt has the opposite effect.

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Sound

Music: 

Definition: A song playing that only the audience can hear (non-diegetic), a song that the characters can hear (diegetic). 

Why (Analyse): Music is used in films to create an atmosphere or mood. Moments of happiness, suspense, danger and conflict are often accompanied by music. Music can also be used to signal a flashback or to pass time. 

Sound Effects: 

Definition: Sound effects are used to make a film seem realistic ie car horns, dogs barking and people conversing in the background.

Why: Sound effects are used to make things seem realistic, allowing the scene/ story to become more believable. 

Diegetic sound - is any sound that emanates from the story world of the film e.g. dialogue, footsteps, background noise.

Non diegetic sound – is any sound that does not have a real life place in the world of the film e.g. soundtrack, narration.

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Lighting

Define: The director adds light to a scene in lots of ways; scenes can be back lit, side lit or front lit. Some director use natural lighting and other use artificial lighting.

Why (Analyse) In film; lighting creates the appropriate mood or atmosphere in a scene.

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Colour

Define: The colour used in the shot (can be natural or edited) 

Why (Analyse) The director uses colour to tell the audience the story. Colour. It can be used to influence the audience’s impression of a character/mood. In some films certain colours may be associated with certain characters.

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Costume and Makeup

Costume:

Define: Every person who appears on screen wears a costume and make-up. 

Why (Analyse): Symbolism/ Setting/ Status 

Makeup:

Define: A director uses different types of make-up in films; sometimes special effects make-up is used to give actors scars or bruises. 

Why (Analyse): Makeup helps the audience to understand the age, era and type of person each character is.

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Film Editing

Cut

A transition where one shot is instantly followed by another.

Jump Cut

An abrupt cut that creates a lack of continuity between shots by leaving out parts of the action.

Cross Cutting

Technique used to give the illusion that two story lines of action are happening at the same time by rapidly cutting back and forth between them.

Dissolve

When the end of one shot overlaps the start of the next one to create a gradual scene transition.

Fade

A visual effect used to indicate a change in place and time. This involves a gradual brightening as a shot opens or a gradual darkening as the shot goes black or to another color. Sound also fades in and out to convey the change.

Montage

A sequence of shots assembled in juxtaposition of one another to create an emotional impact, condense a story,  or convey an idea.

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Trailer

POST TEST: Watch the trailer again and list all film techniques you noticed:

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Lesson 1 Activity

  • In pairs, one person will be the camera person, one person will be the actor/ actress. 
  • The teacher will call out a camera angle or camera shot. 
  • The camera person makes a ‘camera’ with their hands. And must position themselves so that they are viewing their partner through the camera (ie low angle: get on floor with camera pointing up towards partner)
  • The actor/ actress must “act” in a freeze frame using hand gestures/ body language/ facials that appropriately match the camera angle/ shot. (ie low angle: act like a superhero, or someone who is to be feared!)
  • Once teacher has called out all options, swap roles!

Bird's eye angle

High angle 

Eye-level angle

Low angle 

Dutch angle

Extreme long shot (establishing shot) 

Long shot 

Full shot  

Mid shot 

Close-up

 

Extreme close-up 

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Lesson

2 & 3

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Lesson 2 and 3: �View Film

Link to Film

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Create a sentence using Maori Slang

Partner: Decode the sentence

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Snapshot of first half of film:

What key events has happened so far (plot)?

What characters have the audience (you) been introduced to?

What was your favourite scene? Why?

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Snapshot of second half of film:

What key events has happened so far (plot)?

What characters have the audience (you) been introduced to?

What was your favourite scene? Why?

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Lesson 4

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Two Dollar Summary

Each word is worth 10 cents, and you have $2 to spend!!! Write a summary of the whole film, what information MUST you include in order for someone to understand the film?

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Lesson 4:�Analysis of Film Techniques

  • In-depth analysis of the fight scene
  • Complete storyboard worksheet on next slide, (printable on Drive)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gu9dNDcAnmM

  • Exit question: What does the mid shot of Ricky suggest about his character?

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*Add text boxes and type answers

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Lesson 5

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Lesson 5: �Characterisation

Introduction:

Direct Characterisation

The audience is directly TOLD about the character. This can be through a narrator, other characters or the character themselves

Indirect Characterisation

The audience makes assumptions/ inferences/ predictions about the character based on other elements.

*Think of it like ‘Show don’t tell’

Direct= Telling Indirect= Showing

Body:

  • Complete ‘Characterisation’ worksheet for one character.
  • Complete ‘Character Arc’ worksheet for either Hec or Ricky .

Conclusion:

  • Play Celebrity Heads game with characters from the film.

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Characterisation

Task: Complete the characterisation table for Uncle Hec and Ricky Baker at the beginning of the film.

Characterisation device

Uncle Hector

Ricky Baker

Name (include nicknames)

Actions (what they do)

Speech (what they say or don’t say)

Appearance (what they look like)

Other character’s views of them

Internal monologue (how they view themselves)

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Characterisation

Task: Complete the characterisation table for Uncle Hec and Ricky Baker at the end of the film.

Characterisation device

Uncle Hector

Ricky Baker

Name (include nicknames)

Actions (what they do)

Speech (what they say or don’t say)

Appearance (what they look like)

Other character’s views of them

Internal monologue (how they view themselves)

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Examples of Indirect Characterisation

A characters actions

Bella giving Ricky a hot water bottle every night

A character’s dialogue

Psycho Sam’s introductory speech

A character’s appearance

Paula’s professional attire

A character’s thoughts/ feelings

Ricky’s Haiku poems

A characters motivation

Hec going after Ricky so he doesn’t get hurt

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Activity #1 �Characterisation

*Add text boxes and type answers

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Activity #2 Character Arc Graph

• Simple, clear and easy way to plot a character’s growth. Useful to pick out the key events that shape a character and to chart how these have effected them.

• Draw one based on either Hec or Ricky.

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Activity #2 Character Arc Graph

  • Draw one based on either Hec or Ricky. Use the previous slide to help you. Add text boxes and type answers

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Lesson 6

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Lesson 6 & 7: �Themes

Introduction:

The theme in a story is its underlying message, or 'big idea.' In other words, what critical belief about life is the author trying to convey in the writing of a novel, play, short story or poem? This belief, or idea, transcends cultural barriers. It is usually universal in nature. When a theme is universal, it touches on the human experience, regardless of race or language. It is what the story means. Often, a piece of writing will have more than one theme.

Body:

  • Class Discussion- What themes are seen in Hunt for the Wilderpeople? Record on slide below
  • Explicit Teaching of Themes

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THEMES IN HFTWP

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Theme #1: Family and Belonging

  • Complete family and Belonging activity on slide 25: Think/ Pair/ Share

Why might our peers have different answers?

We see a lot of different groups in the film that could be considered “families”. Paula tries to take Ricky away from Hec because he doesn’t reflect the ‘normal’ family unit, but Ricky rebels against that norm. He feels most at home and safe with Hec.

  1. Paula’s “no child left behind” motto is shown to be flawed. Answer how and why?

  1. Watch the birthday scene (next slide). Record Answer: Consider Ricky’s lack of family and difficult past experiences with foster families, examine how Ricky was feeling in this moment?

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Activity: Think Pair Share

Think: On your own, think and record what family and belonging means in relation to the above images/ scenes.

Pair: Talk to the person next to you to compare and record their thoughts/ ideas

Share: Whole class discussion, collate ideas.

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Family/ Belonging: Scene Analysis

Watch the scene and

answer Key questions:

Who is the ‘parent’ in this scene?

How does this scene relate to the greater

theme of family and belonging?

Which techniques did you notice

throughout, and what effect did they

have?

Ricky assumes parental role.

The director suggests that there may be role reversals in family dynamics.

-diegetic sound (cracking to emphasise the complication

-knuuckles cracking- predict that there may be violence

-close up of anger in Hec’s eyes

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Quotes for Family/ Belonging Theme

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Theme #2: Prejudice

Prejudice is “an unfavorable opinion or feeling formed beforehand or without knowledge, thought, or reason”

Can be due to a perceived membership of an undesirable group.

Ricky and Hec both suffer due to the prejudice of the authorities in the film. How?

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Clip #1 Film Intro

Clip #1 Film Intro

1. What are the editing techniques used and what is the effect of these?

2. There are a few extreme close-ups in the car. Why?

3. Listen to the music in the background. What does it tell you?

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Clip #2

Ricky’s Montage

  1. What does the montage of Ricky’s crimes leave out? Does this affect your perception of him?

  1. What do you notice about the lighting in the first shot of Ricky? What does this suggest?

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Lesson 7

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Theme #3: Maori Identity

Your Task:

Ricky is shown to be very proud of his Maori identity and he encounters other Maori people in the film that reassert this pride. Watch the Maori documentary (on the next slide) to gain a deeper understanding and appreciation of Maori culture.

The Facebook post made by TK alongside is an example of this.

You must:

1) Pretend you are a Maori person who has encountered Ricky on his journey, as he is a celebrity and icon of Maori perseverance, you’re very excited!

2) Create a Facebook/ Twitter or Instagram post about Ricky that is centered around this “#staymaori” hashtag.

3) From your knowledge of the film and of Maori culture (from the Maori documentary) discuss at least THREE aspects/actions of Ricky that reflect this hashtag.

4) Make sure you include why these are intrinsically Maori.

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Theme #3: Coming-Of-Age

What is ‘Coming of Age? (Bildungsroman)

Coming-of-age theme is about the personal growth of a character, usually as they progress from youth to adulthood.

The theme can be traced back to the early nineteenth-century, when the term ‘Bildungsroman’ was first used.

Watch clip

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Theme #3: Coming-Of-Age

2) Do the two main protagonists (Hec and Ricky) each experience a coming-of-age?

Hec also demonstrates a coming of age by learning to read and write and performing a Haiku to Ricky. He accepts Ricky, by letting him call him uncle. Both characters show they are willing to change and grow.

1) How does Ricky show personal growth and why does he experience it?

Initially Ricky is immature, kicking letterboxes, setting things on fire, graffiting… however at the end through his Haiku he is reflective and mature. Additionally Ricky takes on a parental role when Hec breaks his foot. He experiences a coming of age to find his sense of belonging.

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Lesson 8

  1. Read Essay Question
  2. Complete collaborative planner (whole class input)
  3. Start completing planning template

-Begin by choosing your three themes (delete the 4th option)

-Start with body paragraphs, and then intro and conclusion at the end

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Essay Question

“So happy we found you buddy. Sorry it took so long.” How are cinematic and film techniques used to explore the film’s themes and engage the audience?”

**What choices did the director make to help the audience understand the theme, or persuade them to think in a certain way?**

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Essay Structure

Introduction

Body Paragraph 1: Theme #1 Family and Belonging

Body Paragraph 2: Theme #2 Prejudice

Body Paragraph 3: Theme #3 Coming of Age

Conclusion

If you completed all of the activities, you will already have many of the answers. For example, on slide 39 you wrote about extreme close ups and why they were used, and how this links to prejudice. This is EXACTLY what you have to do in your paragraphs :)

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Camera Shot

Camera Angle

Camera Movement

Sound

Lighting

Colour

Costume/ Makeup

Editing

Family and Belonging

Mid shot of family at birthday- shows how close Ricky Feels to Hec and Bella

Shadows on Hec’s face insinuate that he is a ‘shady’ character who might be hiding secrets or have a sinister side

Prejudice

When introducing Ricky, scary, worrying music plays, making the audience cautious, and makes them think he is a bad/ naughty character

Coming of Age

Low angle is used when looking up at Ricky with the gun, this demonstrates his growth of confidence and sticking up for Hec, showing for the first time that he cares more about others than himself. .

In the beginning, when Ricky is acting out, he wears streetwear, at the end he is neat and presentable in a button down shirt.

Maori Identity

Maori music playing in the introduction - allows the audience to understand the cultural significance of Country.

Class Planning: Complete the table below (some squares might be blank, some might have lots of options… remember… you only need to choose TWO film techniques for each theme)

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To say something is similar (compare)

Similarly

Additionally

In the same way

As does

Both texts/authors

Likewise

To say something is different (contrast)

By contrast

In a different way

The opposite is seen in

Unlike

Dissimilar is

However

Although

Words to use instead of ‘the author uses’ (including nominalised forms)

employs- the employment of

utilises- the utilisation of

includes- the inclusion of

incorporates- the incorporation of

adds- the addition of

Tier 3 Film Specific Language

Mise en scène (Setting, lighting, costume)

Sound (Soundtrack, dialogue, sound effects)

Camera shots (close-up, extreme close-up, mid-shot, long shot / establishing shot, full shot, extreme long shot)

Camera angles (low angle, high angle, birds eye angle, dutch angle)

Camera movement (tracking, pan, tilt, zoom)

Words used to describe who wrote the text

Director

Last name of author (never first!)

Appropriate terminology to describe techniques

language

language features

devices

techniques

stylistic devices or techniques

Words to use when describing how a technique effects an audience

creates (emotion)

provokes (anger)

evokes (reaction)

manipulates (opinion)

positions (reader)

encourages

inspires

Remember:

Hunt for the Wilderpeople’ (in inverted commas)

Director, Taika Waititi

When quoting dialogue, put quote in italics and inverted commas

“He’s like a fully sick rapper”

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Body Paragraph 1

Theme #1: Family and Belonging - (Hec’s haiku, Uncle, birthday scene, flannies, bunk bed scene)

T: Topic Sentence

Taika Waititi, the director uses a range of cinematic techniques to communicate ideas about the theme of family and belonging.

E: Evidence #1

Throughout the film, a water hot water bottle is provided to Ricky, initially by Bella at the beginning and then by Ricky’s new family at the end. It is the colour of this element of mise-en-scene that represents his sense of belonging.

Analysis

The colour red may symbolise anger, danger and Ricky’s perceived wild behaviour. Paula refers to Ricky Baker as a, ‘“bad egg”’ and Ricky Baker refers to himself as a ‘“gangster’”. Bella provides Ricky with the red water bottle on his first night in his new home. Waititi may be suggesting that Ricky feels angry and resentment for his situation in comparison to the green water bottle provided by his new family at the end of the film. The colour green typically represents new growth or beginnings, a fresh start.

E: Effectiveness/ Audience

Through the subtle use of the simple item or prop, the director conveys to the audience that Ricky feels a sense of belonging to his new family, TK, his daughter and Hec.

Evidence #2

Additionally, it is evident that Ricky and Hec start to feel a strong sense of belonging when Hec allows Ricky to address him as a member of the family, ‘“One condition is that you’ve got to let me call you Uncle.”’ This establishes that they will live happily ever after together.

Another example of how Ricky’s newfound sense of belonging is communicated by the director is Ricky and Hec’s matching Flannel./ through the use of costume, more specifically Ricky and Hec’s matching Flannel jackets. Initially Ricky is dressed in…but eventually as they grow close we see the two protagonists dressed in similar flannel shirts…

Analysis

The matching flannels show that Hec and Ricky have…

Effectiveness/ Audience

Through the use of a flannel jacket, the audience can see/knows/understands that…

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Body Paragraph 2

Theme #2: Prejudice

T: Topic Sentence

Introduce the theme (slide 38)

E: Evidence #1

Analysis

(‘Unpack’ the film technique what does it mean/ why is it used to emphasise the theme?) Slide 8-16

E: Effectiveness/ Audience

(Through the use of this film technique how did it have an impact on the intended audience?) Slide 8-16

Evidence #2

Film Technique (costume, lighting, extreme close up, etc) Slide 8-16

Analysis

(‘Unpack’ the film technique what does it mean/ why is it used to emphasise the theme?) Slide 8-16

Effectiveness/ Audience

(Through the use of this film technique how did it have an impact on the intended audience?)

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Examples of prejudice

  • ‘Bad Egg’- dialogue, News (interview) /montage
  • ‘Raised by wolves…’ Ricky suggests Hec was raised by wolves- illiterate extreme close-up of the eyes, knuckles cracking (diegetic sound) close up of the fist demonstrates that Hec is angry
  • Paula doesn’t think Hec can raise Ricky (past/woman ‘running the show’)

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Body Paragraph 3

Theme #3: Coming of Age

T: Topic Sentence

Introduce the theme (use information on slide 41)

E: Evidence #1

Film Technique (costume, lighting, extreme close up, etc)

Analysis

(‘Unpack’ the film technique what does it mean/ why is it used to emphasise the theme?) Slide 8-16

E: Effectiveness/ Audience

(Through the use of this film technique how did it have an impact on the intended audience?)Slide 8-16

Evidence #2

Film Technique (costume, lighting, extreme close up, etc)

Analysis

(‘Unpack’ the film technique what does it mean/ why is it used to emphasise the theme?) Slide 8-16

Effectiveness/ Audience

(Through the use of this film technique how did it have an impact on the intended audience?) Slide 8-16

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Coming of age - Bildungsroman

  • Ricky has embraced the wilderness
  • Hec learns how to read and write (Haiku)
  • Hec finally allowing Ricky to call him Uncle
  • Ricky growing from immature to mature
  • growth is emphasised through the use of mise-en-scene (flannies)

Characters who don’t change- Bella, Paula,

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Body Paragraph 3

Theme #3: Maori Identity

T: Topic Sentence

Introduce the theme (use information on slide 41)

E: Evidence #1

Film Technique (costume, lighting, extreme close up, etc)

Analysis

(‘Unpack’ the film technique what does it mean/ why is it used to emphasise the theme?) Slide 8-16

E: Effectiveness/ Audience

(Through the use of this film technique how did it have an impact on the intended audience?)Slide 8-16

Evidence #2

Film Technique (costume, lighting, extreme close up, etc)

Analysis

(‘Unpack’ the film technique what does it mean/ why is it used to emphasise the theme?) Slide 8-16

Effectiveness/ Audience

(Through the use of this film technique how did it have an impact on the intended audience?) Slide 8-16

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Lesson 9

Complete planning template: intro and conclusion

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Introduction

Respond to question

Use words from the essay question to outline the topic of the essay

‘So happy we found you buddy. Sorry it took so long’

Context

Title of film / full name of director/ year film was made

Plot

Briefly summarise the plot (think back to your 2 dollar summary!)

Signpost main ideas

Briefly mention the three themes and film techniques that you’ll be discussing in your essay

Through the use of film techniques such as…… the themes…. are emphasised throughout the film

Audience/ impact

Concluding sentence about the impact this film has on the audience. A catchy phrase that will leave your reader wanting to read the rest of the essay

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Conclusion

Summarise and restate

Remind readers of what they’ve just read through a ‘punchy’ sentence

“While themes can be expressed through the plot, the intentional inclusion of film techniques allows the audience to experience the underlying messages set out by the director”

Sum up ideas you originally signposted

Grab the ideas you signposted in the introduction and sum them up.

Conclude with a strong snappy sentence

Go out with a BANG by creating an awesome finishing line.

You might praise the work of the director, and how they successfully impacted the audience

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Lesson 10-11

Use information from templates to write essay in full sentences

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Paste Essay Here

(Or link to Essay if you wrote on Google Doc

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Paste Essay Here

(Or link to Essay if you wrote on Google Doc

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Lesson 12

Self Edit / Peer Edit and Submit Task to DayMap

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Self + Peer + Teacher Drafting

  1. Once you have completed a FULL draft, print your work and complete the self assessment checklist.

  1. Refine your work by making changes based on your feedback.

  1. Re-print essay and peer assessment sheet, hand to a peer to draft.

  1. Refine your work by making changes based on peer feedback.

  1. Take it one step further and have a parent or adult read your work.

  1. Submit draft BEFORE the draft due date

7. Use teacher feedback to further refine your work

8. Submit final BEFORE the final due date