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Revising Your Writing

Expanding an Important Detail

**Make sure you are in “Present” mode with your speaker on so that you can hear the directions on each slide.

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Learning from author, Ralph Fletcher:

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Where are some places in your book that you can expand your writing?

Think of an important detail that could use more explanation or description?

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Give it a try!

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