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What do you notice about this sentence?

Why, it seemed but yesterday that Désirée was little more than a baby herself; when Monsieur in riding through the gateway of Valmondé had found her lying asleep in the shadow of the big stone pillar.

List at least three grammar findings:

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2.

3.

What’s the connection to the parts/types of sentences?

Do Now: Invitation to Notice

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English II

Désirée’s Baby

By Kate Chopin

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GRAMMAR

INSTRUCTION

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Do Now: Invitation to Notice

What do you notice about this sentence?

“Why, it seemed but yesterday that Désirée was little more than a baby herself; when Monsieur in riding through the gateway of Valmondé had found her lying asleep in the shadow of the big stone pillar.”

List at least three grammar findings:

1.

2.

3.

What’s the connection to the parts/types of sentences?

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Learning Goal

I am learning how to edit sentences and drafts using standard English conventions including semicolons.

A/B Day 2: Grammar

Focus TEKS: 9Dv

Success Criteria

  • I can use mentor sentences as a guide or reference to understand the rules for using a semicolon.
  • I can use mentor sentences to see how to use the “P” in CUPS or COPS, which means punctuation and apply it to multiple choice questions.

A/B Day 1

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Grammar Instruction

Mini-Lesson for 10.9Dv

Etymology

Latin

Greek

Semi-half

Colon-part of a verse

Hemi-half

Colon-part of a verse or a clause of a sentence

Structural Analysis

Semi-part

Colon-a punctuation mark that indicates a clause of a sentence.

Purpose of a Semicolon

  • Joins two related independent clauses of equal emphasis
  • Joins two independent clauses in which the second clause begins with an adverb or short parenthetical
  • Separates items that commas in a series

Sometimes, when we have several compound sentences, we can improve sentence variety by omitting the conjunction in a two-clause sentence and replacing it with a semicolon.

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Grammar Instruction

Mini-Lesson

  • Both sides of the sentences are of equal parts; they are independent clauses—both clauses contains a subject and predicate.
  • Chopin could have chosen to create two separate sentences; her use of the semicolon show that the second idea results from the first.

I DO

1.

“Why, it seemed but yesterday that Désirée was little more than a baby herself; when Monsieur in riding through the gateway of Valmondé had found her lying asleep in the shadow of the big stone pillar.”

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Grammar Instruction

Mini-Lesson

  • Both sides of the sentences are of equal parts; they are independent clauses—both clauses contains a subject and predicate.
  • Chopin could have chosen to create two separate sentences; her use of the semicolon show that the second idea results from the first.

WE DO

2.

“The wonder was that he had not loved her before; for he had known her since his father brought him home from Paris, a boy of eight, after his mother died there.”

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READING & WRITING

INSTRUCTION

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Désirée’s Baby

by Kate Chopin

A/B Day 1

Kate Chopin wrote the short story, ''Désirée's Baby,'' in 1892, 27 years after slavery in America was abolished. This story is set during the time of slavery on a Louisiana plantation.

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BACKGROUND KNOWLEDGE

What does it mean to be French Creole?

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Learning Goal

I am learning how to segment text, monitor my comprehension and make adjustments; to learn how authors develop characters through historical and cultural settings.

I will explain how character develops, interact, and change and I will support my explanation with textual evidence.

A/B Day 2

Demonstration of Learning

Success Criteria

I can:

  • Reread, use background knowledge, ask questions, and annotate to show self-monitoring of my comprehension or make adjustments.
  • Track characters and their development, relationships, and explain what makes them complex yet believable.

FOCUS BUNDLED TEKS: 4F &I, 6A-D

BUNDLED TEKS: 2A, 2B, 4A, 5B-I

A/B Day 1

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Anchor Charts & Graphic Organizers

Character Catcher

Character’s Name

Character Analysis

Conclusion

Monsieur Valmondé

Désirée’s father…

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IFL TASK SHEET

Purpose (10.4A)

Today you will read the short story “Désirée’s Baby” by Kate Chopin. The purposes of this task are for you to get the gist of what’s happening in this story and who the characters are. This work will provide the foundation for you to engage in exploring the themes in Chopin’s story during the next task.

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Step 1: Please read “Désirée’s Baby.” Read like this:

• Read the short story section by section. Please use the line numbers for each section. While you read, please annotate the text using the questions listed for each section above. You’ll also want to mark, underline, or circle sentences or ideas that seem important to understanding the characters.

Student-Centered Routine: Please be prepared to share your responses to the above questions for each section with a partner.

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Step 2: Take some time to share your responses to the text questions with a partner. As you share, notice where you agree and where you disagree with each other what’s happening in the story.

Work together to compose a shared quick write in response to the following prompts:

  • In “Désirée’s Baby,” Kate Chopin tells the story of Désirée and her experiences after having a baby with her husband, Armand. Working from your responses to the section questions, please develop a quick write that summarizes what’s happening in this story.
    • Who are the characters in this story and what do you learn about them?
  • Keep your annotated text next to you when you write so that you can use evidence from your annotations when you compose your quick write.

Student-Centered Routine: Please post your responses on a piece of chart paper in preparation for a gallery walk.

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Tips

Quick writes are times for you to use writing to think on the page. Most people write them quickly, in 3 to 5 minutes, and they don’t need to have correct sentences or even be complete sentences. They don’t need to have correct spellings. They are your thinking on the page in writing to get your ideas down as quickly as you can. Before you do the quick write, glance back at the passages you marked when you read. Refer to those as much as you can when you compose your quick write. When you write this quick write, try it this way: When you’re ready to write, put your pen or pencil to the paper and write out your thoughts without stopping until you feel like you’ve said everything that’s on your mind. The idea here is to push yourself to keep the writing flowing. Think about filling a page.

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Step 3: After our whole group discussion, please complete a quick write to reflect on your thinking using the following question:

How has your thinking about Chopin’s story been changed or confirmed after our discussion? What did you hear from your peers that confirmed or changed your thinking?

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Step 4: Metacognitive Stepback

Finally, please create a list of what you did as a reader to understand Chopin’s story when you read this text. This list will make visible what you did as a reader to understand the story, and it will help your peers to see how others work to understand ideas in a text.

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A/B Day 1: DOL