Fish in a tree
Lessons to model routines, habits and higher level thinking of proficient readers through an engaging read aloud experience.
Designed by Lauren Bakian Aaker of
Resources: The Reading Strategies Book by Jennifer Serravallo and
50 Literacy Strategies by Gail E. Tompkins.
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Fish in a Tree by Lynda Mullaly Hunt
Reading Celebration Projects
Students engaged in an interactive read aloud to learn new strategies for independent reading and to deepen their thinking around characters, plot, and theme. Students learned to:
-Use plot profiles, double-entry journals, character motivation charts, character/event timelines and more.
-Listen and respond to one another during daily discussion around the big ideas and events of the chapters read aloud.
-Record daily goals to help them focus their thinking tracks and make sense of the text.
Key Ideas and Details:
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.5.1
Quote accurately from a text when explaining what the text says explicitly and when drawing inferences from the text.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.5.2
Determine a theme of a story, drama, or poem from details in the text, including how characters in a story or drama respond to challenges or how the speaker in a poem reflects upon a topic; summarize the text.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.5.3
Compare and contrast two or more characters, settings, or events in a story or drama, drawing on specific details in the text (e.g., how characters interact).
Craft and Structure:
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.5.4
Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative language such as metaphors and similes.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.5.5
Explain how a series of chapters, scenes, or stanzas fits together to provide the overall structure of a particular story, drama, or poem.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.5.6
Describe how a narrator's or speaker's point of view influences how events are described.
Note: This read aloud and the accompanying lessons are meant to support students in long-term independent reading goals throughout the course of the year. The read aloud unit will focus on higher-order thinking as well as routines and habits of readers such as goal-setting and more. Through explicit modeling, students will have a solid foundation of expectations as they align with the provided rubrics and assessments.
Standards:
Refer to details and examples in a text when explaining what the text says explicitly and when drawing inferences from the text.
Determine a theme of a story, drama, or poem from details in the text; summarize the text.
Describe in depth a character, setting, or event in a story or drama, drawing on specific details in the text (e.g., a character's thoughts, words, or actions).
Long-term goals:
Fish in a tree
Written by Lauren Bakian Aaker of
Resources: The Reading Strategies Book by Jennifer Serravallo and
50 Literacy Strategies by Gail E. Tompkins.
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Overview of read aloud “unit”
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How can I think deeply about the texts I’m reading to
better understand the characters or topic?
Focus levels: 3: Independent 2: Somewhat distracted 1: NOT on task
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#1 p. 55 Suki is rubbing one of her blocks with her thumb. I wonder if she is thinking about her grandfather. I see a mind movie of me walking through a forest of alphabet blocks stacked on top of each other. They sway like trees in the wind and I worry that they will come crashing down on me.
| #2 p. 83 “Can you help me?” “With that book stuff you’re doing?” He (Travis) points using the carton. “Yeah. I have to write something…” “Whoa, Ally. I can give you new spark plugs. Change your oil…” “Please? You have to be better at it than me.” “Look. You know I’d love to help you out, but the whole school thing... It’s like asking a blind man to drive a bus.” |
#3 p. 83 “Can you help me?” “With that book stuff you’re doing?” He (Travis) points using the carton. “Yeah. I have to write something…” “Whoa, Ally. I can give you new spark plugs. Change your oil…” “Please? You have to be better at it than me.” “Look. You know I’d love to help you out, but the whole school thing... It’s like asking a blind man to drive a bus. Besides,” he says, sipping again, “I’d rather eat a bag of hair.” | #4 p. 85 “Wait! That reminds me,” he (Albert) says. “During our class party, I hid a Halloween cookie somewhere in my desk.” “The Halloween party?” Keisha asks. “That was weeks ago.” “Yeah!” He starts digging for it, things falling to the floor as he searches. If it’s there, it’s probably as hard as concrete.
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#5 p. 105 Keisha’s voice is no longer soft. “I just don’t get it, Albert. What in the world would it take for you to fight back?” Albert looks upset. I know Keisha is trying to help him, but I think it’s like throwing him an anchor for a life jacket.
| #6 p. 213 After Mr. Daniels finishes with the boring morning stuff, he says, “One more thing. Our new class president, Ally Nickerson, has her first student government meeting today. So, if you have any suggestions for her, please let her know. If you have ideas of changes, she’s the one in charge.” I know that I shouldn’t smile, but keeping my mouth from smiling is like trying to keep Travis from loving cars. |
I can determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text.�Directions:
�p. 105 �Keisha’s voice is no longer soft. “I just don’t get it, Albert. What in the world would it take for you to fight back?”� Albert looks upset. I know Keisha is trying to help him, but I think it’s like throwing him an anchor for a life jacket.��
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I can determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text.�Directions:
p. 83 “Can you help me?”� “With that book stuff you’re doing?” He (Travis) points using the carton.� “Yeah. I have to write something…”� “Whoa, Ally. I can give you new spark plugs. Change your oil…”� “Please? You have to be better at it than me.”� “Look. You know I’d love to help you out, but the whole school thing... It’s like asking a blind man to drive a bus.”�����
#2
I can determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text.�Directions:
p. 83 “Can you help me?”� “With that book stuff you’re doing?” He (Travis) points using the carton.� “Yeah. I have to write something…”� “Whoa, Ally. I can give you new spark plugs. Change your oil…”� “Please? You have to be better at it than me.”� “Look. You know I’d love to help you out, but the whole school thing... It’s like asking a blind man to drive a bus. Besides,” he says, sipping again, “I’d rather eat a bag of hair.”������
#3
I can determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text.�Directions:
�p. 85 “Wait! That reminds me,” he (Albert) says. “During our class party, I hid a Halloween cookie somewhere in my desk.”� “The Halloween party?” Keisha asks. “That was weeks ago.”� “Yeah!” He starts digging for it, things falling to the floor as he searches. If it’s there, it’s probably as hard as concrete.���
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I can determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text.�Directions:
p. 55 Suki is rubbing one of her blocks with her thumb. I wonder if she is thinking about her grandfather.� I see a mind movie of me walking through a forest of alphabet blocks stacked on top of each other. They sway like trees in the wind and I worry that they will come crashing down on me.�������
#5
I can determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text.�Directions:
p. 213� After Mr. Daniels finishes with the boring morning stuff, he says, “One more thing. Our new class president, Ally Nickerson, has her first student government meeting today. So, if you have any suggestions for her, please let her know. If you have ideas of changes, she’s the one in charge.”� I know that I shouldn’t smile, but keeping my mouth from smiling is like trying to keep Travis from loving cars.��������
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I can determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text.�Directions:
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Resources you can find on tpt
Reading Comprehension Log: https://www.teacherspayteachers.com/Product/Monthly-Reading-Comprehension-Logs-Literature-3-5-3096082
Genre Flipmarks:
https://www.teacherspayteachers.com/Product/nofrillsFLIPMARK-Reading-Flipmarks-for-6-Genres-3324339
Goal Timeline: https://www.teacherspayteachers.com/Product/nofrillsclassroom-Goal-Timeline-for-Fictional-Texts-3355954
Independent Reading Rubric: https://www.teacherspayteachers.com/Product/nofrillsclassroom-Independent-Reading-Rubric-LINK-included-for-EDITS-3185984
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Discussion checklist & Tracker
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Friday Fish in a Tree Thinking
What big events happened in Fish in a Tree this week?
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What was surprising to you?
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What character revealed something about him/herself? What evidence do you have?
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What lingering questions do you have? What do you want to find out?
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Do you have any predictions? What makes you think that?
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ON BACK: Choose a character (that you haven’t picked before). Thinking back over all the chapters we’ve read, come up with three traits to describe that character. Provide as much evidence as you can remember.
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Read Aloud Lesson | Learning Target | Chapter Intro, Think aloud, Turn/talk and Convo | Materials | |
PREVIEW BOOK LESSON 1 (Do this the afternoon before starting the book) | Secondary goal: I can Identify the genre. Use this information to get my mind ready for what I should expect as a read. | Intro: First ask/discuss: Who are heroes? Read the dedication together (as a class or copy and give to small groups) OR First give out the two lines: “...the importance of standing out rather than fitting in.” “...find their grit to conquer life’s challenges.’’ Vocabulary Elaboration:
Dedication: grit, hero | Class conversation: Discussion: Based on the author’s dedication page, what can you infer about the book will be about? Has there been a time in your life you have faced a challenge? Who can be hero? What is the genre of this book based on the blurb? How do we know? What should we expect from reading this type of text? | Fish in a Tree Copies of dedication (optional) |
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Lesson 2 (Chapters 1, 2, and 3) 1. In Trouble Again 2. Yellow Card 3. Never Up to Me | I can: Get to know characters (Model filling out goal sheet) | Intro: Today as we’re reading, we want to get to know the main character, Ally, and notice her actions, feelings and thoughts. This story is told from Ally’s point of view, so we get the chance to know her inner thinking that she doesn’t tell anyone else. Read Aloud: Possible think alouds with embedded modeling of using sticky notes: P. 5 “Scrub off the dumb.” P. 6 second paragraph about yellow card P. 7 “I like Keisha. She isn’t afraid. And I’m afraid of so much.” P. 10 “...trying to make sense of a can of alphabet soup that’s been dumped on a plate.” P.12 “...craziest, strangest, most unbelievable thing I could ever draw is me doing something right.” P. 13 “How can you cure dumb?” Vocabulary Elaboration:
P. 27 humiliating | Turn/Talk or Class Convo: Discussion Questions: -Why does Ally think she deserves to walk and to be alone? -
Closing: Did we meet our goal? Focus level | Plot profile sheet Goal sheet |
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Lesson 3 (Chapters 4, 5, 6) 4. Bird in a Cage 5. SIlver Dollars and Wooden Nickels 6. Triple-Sided Coin | I can: Notice relationships between characters (Model filling out goal sheet) | Intro: Let’s set our goal for today as readers. We’re going to get to know her family a bit better as we read and also how she interacts with some kids from school. Pay attention to what Ally thinks about herself compared with others. Read Aloud: Possible think alouds with embedded modeling of using sticky notes: P. 17 “There is a tray full of glass sundae dishes…” shows she is creative P. 18 “You’re funny, you know that?”--shows she has a good sense of humor and her mother has affection for her P. 19 “I miss Grandpa...Dad got stationed...” P. 20 “Oh Ally...You’re too smart for this…”--Mom praises her, thinks of her as smart, but Ally doesn’t see herself in this way P. 28 “Third-grade teacher...I felt sad and embarrassed for her having to be my mom.” --how others view her, how she feels guilty or embarrassed for her mother, affection and family P. 33 “Look I wasn’t born yesterday.” Travis is smart with negotiations and coins P. 34 EXPECTATIONS PARAGRAPH (OR GOOD CONVERSATION STARTER) | Turn/Talk or Class Convo: Discussion Questions: -Why did the author choose to leave us thinking about having low expectations of yourself? -What does the following line mean from the text: p. 29 “I wish she could understand my world. But it would be like trying to explain to a whale what it’s like to live in the forest.”
Closing: Did we meet our goal? Focus level | Plot profile sheet Goal sheet |
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Lesson 4 (Chapters 7, 8, and 9) 7. No Grandpas Here 8. Real Trouble 9. Bag Full of Nothing | I can: Notice relationships between characters *Opportunity to show that you can have the same goal from one day to the next (Model filling out goal sheet) | Intro: As we read you’ll notice that all three chapters are set at school. Since we only know a little bit about Ally’s relationships with teachers and students from school, we want to find out more as she meets Mr. Daniels so our goal will be the same today. Read Aloud: Possible think alouds with embedded modeling of using sticky notes: P. 36 “I look over and my eyes are pulled to the bruises on his arms.” --infer, perspective P. 37 “I’m going to do better…” --wants to overcome her challenge, she thinks she can persevere if she just tries hard enough P. 37 “That isn’t cool.” --Mr. Daniels doesn’t stand for that kind of talk about others P.41-42 Mr. Daniels wants to help her-- two points of view: Ally can get out of school, but now is panicking, but Mr. Daniels might be trying to be supportive, helpful P. 45 “Shay has gotten even better at being mean.” P. 46 hint at theme: “Yes, it’s plain on the outside...but it’s the inside that matters.” P. 48 “....you can’t measure the stuff that makes us human…” big moment, possibly just use a symbol here to model that you know it’s important, and want to come back to this moment at some point. | Turn/Talk or Class Convo: Questions: -How does Mr. Daniels differ from other teachers Ally has had? -What are you noticing about the different characters: Shay, Jessica, Albert, Max, Keisha. What do we know about them from Ally’s perspective?
Closing: Did we meet our goal? Focus level | Plot profile sheet Goal sheet |
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Lesson 5 (Chapters 10, 11, and 12) 10. Promises, promises 11. Scrambled Egg 12. What’s your problem, Albert? | I can: Notice choices characters make and how they affect the story (Model filling out goal sheet) | Intro: Everyday we make choices. Some are good, some are bad, some are in between. Ally is faced with decisions everyday and as we are reading today, you’ll notice that each one reveals more about who she is and who she wants to be. Read Aloud: Possible think alouds with embedded modeling of using sticky notes: P.56 “It’s a picture of a dark room…” Ally is choosing to be honest with Mr. Daniels. P. 60 “But I’m tired of sitting alone...Shay is overly happy that I’ve said yes.” Doesn’t really like Shay, but would rather sit with her than be alone. P. 62 “They’re pretty dopey,” I say, “What a weirdo, huh?” Ally makes the choice to be mean to Albert even though she could stick up for him. P.65 “I am wondering how I can make things right with Albert.” Chooses to admit her wrongdoing (on p. 66) and leads to her having a realization about her wanting to break free Vocabulary Elaboration: P. 68 muck | Turn/Talk or Class Convo: Questions: -How did Ally’s choices in these chapters affect the story? -What does Ally mean when she thinks, “I’d like to help her break free from that?” -How is Ally like the woman on the train?
Closing: Did we meet our goal? Focus level | Plot profile sheet Goal sheet |
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Lesson 6 (Chapters 13, 14, and 15) 13. Trouble with Flowers 14. Boxed in and Boxed Out 15. Ungreased Gears Starting a double-journal entry instead of using sticky notes, could continue with turn and talks but could use the double journal entry as a way to have them stop and jot. Print out the left side of the column and invite students to fill in their reactions on the right side. | I can: Notice how characters change (Model filling out goal sheet) | Intro: Today we’re going to continue our reading and thinking tracks. As we’re reading, instead of using sticky notes, because we might have run out or we want to do something a bit different, we’re going to use a double-entry journal (this may have been previously taught during a mini-lesson for IR). We can use our reader’s response notebook to keep track of our thinking and today we’ll work on it together with Fish in a Tree. Read Aloud: Possible think alouds with embedded modeling using DOUBLE JOURNAL ENTRY. (P. 366 in Serravallo): | Turn/Talk or Class Convo: Questions: -How is Ally changing? What is causing these changes? What do you predict will happen? - p.74 “But we had bigger smiles than anyone else.” Why are they smiling? What does this mean?
Closing: Did we meet our goal? Focus level | Plot profile sheet Goal sheet *Optional: copies of double entry sheets for students (with blank right-side) |
Lesson 6
P. 72 “I wish I could be braver” QUOTE | Explanation: Ally wants to be different, but doesn’t know how--wants to fit in, but also wants to be herself. |
P. 73-74 Ally gives half of her flowers to Keisha and then they both get them taken away :) KEY EVENT | Theory: Keisha and Ally will become friends because Ally showed an act of kindness and they both had huge smiles at the end of the chapter. |
P.75 “Boxed In and Boxed Out” Interesting Language | Idea: This makes me think some people are outsiders and some are insiders |
P. 80-81 “Wow, Ally Nickerson...He comes over and does something a teacher has never done even once--He high fives me.” Key event | Reaction: THis feels really important because Ally always feels “dumb” compared to others, and now she is the only one to figure it out, and she is praised for it. |
P. 87 Ally and Keisha’s friendship grows, Mr. Daniels questions Ally about her homework and it worries her. MAIN IDEA | Ally is changing as a character--she is making a true friend who likes her for her and she is continuing to be more honest with her teacher. |
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Lesson 7 (Chapters 16, 17, and 19) 16. What I’ve Got 17. Misfit Lunch 18. Truths and Untruths | I can: Notice how characters change (or not changing) (Model filling out goal sheet) | Intro: Sometimes characters, just like real people, have the motivation to change. I always want to be healthy and I have the motivation to eat veggies and go to the gym. Some days are hard and I just want give up--but I know what to do. Sometimes people don’t know how to change--so they get people to help them. At the gym I could get a trainer or I could take a cooking class. Ally knows she wants to change, and sometimes she knows how to do--like with Keisha and Albert, and other times, she doesn’t know how--like with reading. Read Aloud: Possible think alouds with embedded modeling using DOUBLE JOURNAL ENTRY. (P. 366 in Serravallo). Support for students on following page. Goal is to get them independently creating but this can be a scaffold for some or for all. : | Turn/Talk or Class Convo: Questions: -p.95 “There’s lots of stuff about the soup inside that they can’t put on the label, like how it smells and tastes and makes you feel warm when you eat it.” What does this quote make you think? How does it connect to the characters or the big ideas of the other chapters?
Closing: Did we meet our goal? Focus level | Plot profile sheet Goal sheet *Optional: copies of double entry sheets for students (with blank right-side) |
P. 89 “I’m nervous and embarrassed.” | Reaction: Can’t believe Ally still feels this way about herself and that she continues to come up with a “plan” |
P. 90 “I even try to read some. I really do.” | Theory: Burdens on the inside are not seen on the surface. She wants to change, but can’t. |
P.94 Ally continues to have an inner conflict--doesn’t want to be jealous of Shay, but is | Explanation: Ally wants to fit in! She continues to see her differences as bad even though Keisha doesn’t care what others think--very confident. |
P. 95 “misfits” | Reaction: WOW! I’m rethinking how I look at things that are different--just because something that has a different name or brand, or something works in an abnormal way doesn’t make it bad! IT’S JUST DIFFERENT |
P. 100 “Retreat from the unpleasantness of Earth and company of people.” QUOTE | Theory: Because the way Albert has been treated by others,, he is a little “stand offish” about making new friends and he’d rather be alone, but slowly, like Ally, he is opening up. |
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From the text… (What’s happening?) | From my mind… (What does this make me think?” |
P. 89 “I’m nervous and embarrassed.” | |
P. 90 “I even try to read some. I really do.” | |
P.94 Ally continues to have an inner conflict--doesn’t want to be jealous of Shay, but is | |
P. 95 “misfits” | |
P. 100 “Retreat from the unpleasantness of Earth and company of people.” QUOTE | |
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P. 103 “I think this is like that. Those boys just think I’m a fighter, so they...well, fight me.” | Connection: Can’t judge a book by it’s cover just like Ally said you can’t judge a soup can just by it’s list of ingredients. |
P.105-107 We learn more about Shay from Keisha and Ally’s stories. | Theory--Shay isn’t always mean just to be mean--she is jealous of others (Keisha) or feels “wronged” by others--when Ally takes her cake. |
P.112 “You’re the losers. You. Not him.” P. 113 “I nod, but I have to admit that I’m getting awfully tired of walking away.” | Reaction: Wow! Ally is fed up! She’s finally realizing that just sitting back and taking Shay’s bullying is not the right thing to do. I predict that in the future she might begin accepting herself for who she is just like she accepts Travis and Albert for who they are. |
Lesson 8 (Chapters 19, 20, and 21) 19. Not-So- Sweet Secret 20. Is this a good thing? 21. Butterfly Wishes | I can: Notice how characters’ relationships change as characters reveal themselves (Model filling out goal sheet) | Intro: We’ve noticed that Ally is developing friendships with Albert and Keisha and little by little we learn more about these characters even though they are not the main character. Or how Shay is not friendly to Ally and it affects Ally’s choices. As we read today let’s take special note of these relationships and how they might help us understand something we already read or predict what might happen later. Read Aloud: Possible think alouds with embedded modeling using DOUBLE JOURNAL ENTRY. (P. 366 in Serravallo): Vocabulary Elaboration: P. | Turn/Talk or Class Convo: Questions: -At the end of p. 118. What are you thinking/feeling? *if necessary, read quote to guide conversation: “Sometimes a person will do just about anything for a wish to come true.” What does Ally want to happen? What is her deepest wish?
Closing: Did we meet our goal? Focus level | Plot profile sheet Goal sheet *Optional: copies of double entry sheets for students (with blank right-side) |
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P. 125 “The worst kind of lonely is when you’re in a room full of people…” | Idea: Ally is so lonely and has felt so alone that she can understand the differences in these two words. :( |
P.129 “It’s a good thing to be an out-of-the box thinker. People like that are world-changers.” | Meaning: Ally has a unique way of thinking--she doesn’t think it’s a good thing, but Mr. Daniels does. |
P. 132 Ally realizes she has been a “dope” and is really lucky | Explanation: She thought Shay had tons of friends who all wore the same bracelets. Now she is realizing that they are not true friends like the true friendship she has with Albert and Keisha. |
Lesson 9 (Chapters 22, 23, and 24) 22. No Way to Treat a Queen 23. Words That Breathe 24. Imaginary Hero | I can: Notice how characters’ relationships change as characters reveal themselves (Model filling out goal sheet) | Intro: Read Aloud: Possible think alouds with embedded modeling using DOUBLE JOURNAL ENTRY. (P. 366 in Serravallo): Vocabulary Elaboration: P. 131 Eavesdrop | Turn/Talk or Class Convo: Questions: -Let’s look back at our double journal entry and share what we’re noticing and thinking about the important events and ideas from these chapters. How are they connecting to other key events? What do you think will happen next?
Closing: Did we meet our goal? Focus level | Plot profile sheet Goal sheet *Optional: copies of double entry sheets for students (with blank right-side) |
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Lesson 10 (Chapters 25, 26, and 27) 25. Celebration or Devastation 26. Stalling 27. Half-Baked Afternoon | I can: Track key events and character reactions (Model filling out goal sheet) | Intro: Very often in life the same situation happens over and over again but you react in different ways. I know that if I went to bed late last night, I am going to have a hard time in the morning when my alarm goes off. But when my house is in order and I can get to bed on time, I know that the next morning is going to run a lot smoother. Sometimes as you are reading a book you read a part and say to yourself Oh no not again. But then you realize that something has changed with in the character and this time it is going to be different. Let’s see what happens to Ally today and how she reacts. Why is today so different? Read Aloud: Possible think alouds with embedded modeling using P. 136 (Stop after “They all know but figure I don’t). This entire chapter has been just one moment--one key moment in Ally’s life, especially with Mr. Daniels. What do they all know? T/T or jot and share. Do you agree with her or what do you predict will happen? P. 138 Hmm...this feels like a big moment for Ally. Why is she talking about riding a bike? T/T or jot (Also, what does that have to do with the title of the chapter, Stalling?) Serravallo - Pg. 370 – character connections web – Ally - Keisha We just had an important interaction between these characters. What ideas do you have about them? Keisha is supportive, friendly, doesn’t care about Shay; Ally is self conscious, feels dumb How does Keisha affect Ally? Keisha helps her feel better about herself How does Ally seem different with Keisha now? Ally is happy to have a friend who supports her and understands her. What new ideas do you have? Vocabulary Elaboration: p. 137 Embarrassed, humiliated | Turn/Talk or Class Convo: Discussion Questions: Open up the conversation to the students. Ask them to think about how Keisha and Shay might be alike, or how Keisha, Shay and Ally might be connected in similar or different ways. As students talk, create a character web to showcase after the discussion. Also, there may be some benefit to quickly highlighting the end of chapter 26, especially the discussion of fitting in and being different if it doesn’t come up in the web discussion
Closing: Did we meet our goal? Focus level | Plot profile sheet Goal sheet Pre-created character web with Shay, Ally and Keisha. |
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Lesson 11 (Chapters 28, 29 and 30) 28. Deal of a Lifetime 29. Fish in a Tree 30. Miserable King | I can: Track key events and characters responses. Think, “is this how I would expect this character to respond or is it unexpected?” Another goal might be: notice when character act/respond in unexpected ways? (Model filling out goal sheet) | Intro: We know that Ally is starting to open up to Keisha and is so happy to have a friend that she can relate to. As we read today, let’s continue noticing if Ally continues to change and become open to sharing with people she cares about, or if she continues to be fearful of what they think about her. We know Mr. Daniels seems to be particularly interested in her ideas and gives her compliments, which she rarely believes. I wonder if that will ever change. Let’s read and see what happens Read Aloud: Possible think alouds with embedded modeling using P. 149. This chapter was called “Deal of a Lifetime” Why do you think the author chose this title? (if more prompting is needed, ask “What else could make it a deal of a lifetime--besides no homework?”) P. 155 sticky note sketch of Ally against the fence with Mr. Daniels in front of him--where have we seen this before?? (Keisha and Ally in the bathroom stall) P. 159--we’ve seen a lot of what has happened in this chapter before--did Ally respond how you expected to Mr. Daniels? Why or why not? (The next chapter is short, but definitely come back to this idea!) Transition into character web after Vocabulary Elaboration: P. 149 unfortunate (un-not, fortune-luck) P. 151 bulging (swell or protrude) P. 153 scoundrel (a dishonest or unscrupulous person) p. 157 desperate | Turn/Talk or Class Convo: Discussion Questions: Today students will engage in an interactive character web discussion. On a large chart paper write the names Ally and Mr. Daniels. Students can do one of two things:
As students come up, they jot and explain what they plan to write, then call on the next person and jot quickly. Students can reference specific evidence from specific chapters or can discuss in general terms. As the web becomes more developed, push beyond the text to infer and synthesize what has been read so far.
Closing: Did we meet our goal? Focus level | Plot profile sheet Goal sheet Large chart paper with character web and chart markers. |
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Lesson 12 (Chapters 31, 32, and 33) 31. Lots of Ways Home 32. Screen Time 33. Possibilities | I can: Track key events and characters responses. Think, “is this how I would expect this character to respond or is it unexpected?” Another goal might be: notice when character act/respond in unexpected ways? (Model filling out goal sheet) | Intro: Sometimes, especially when you’re a kid, it feels like there is only one way to do things--especially when you want to fit in. I’m thinking of Bee-Wigged and how Jerry has to look like all the other kids for people to accept him. Just like in life, characters often realize that doing something only one way doesn’t always make sense. Let’s see how this idea affects Ally and her brother Travis. Read Aloud: P. 167 THINK ALOUD--this last line feels important. She’s finally filled with more hope than fear. This seems big for Ally. P. 173. I feel like we’ve uncovered more clues about Travis and the challenges he faces. Think back to what we know about Travis and what we’ve learned this chapter. What predictions or inferences could you make about him and how does it relate to Ally? Vocabulary Elaboration: p. 165 grateful p. 175 impossible | Turn/Talk or Class Convo: Discussion Questions: Today invite students to make their own character web in their notebook. On the doc cam, model using two or more characters, but they have the option of choosing whoever they like. To mix up partnerships, students can either meet at Table Talk groups OR can do hands up, stand up, pair up to find someone when they are finished.
- How are Travis and Ally fighting the same battle? Who is feeling hopeful now and who is feeling hopeless? Why? (p 173) -
Closing: Did we meet our goal? Focus level | IMPOSSIBLE to show students during chapter 33 Plot profile sheet Goal sheet Students need notebooks |
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Lesson 13 (Chapters 34, 35, and 36) Chapter 34 – Birth of a Star Chapter 35 – A Picture is Worth a Gazillion Years Chapter 36 – In the Game of Life… | I can: Compare how a character’s actions, feelings and thoughts change over time. | Pre-Reading: Yesterday we were once again noticing how far Ally has come since the start of the book. It got me thinking that sometimes we need to get all the information we know out in the open to really understand the changes that have occurred. One way to do this is to create a “character timeline” that lets us track characters actions and mistakes, their feelings and thoughts and key events. Since each student doesn’t have a book to read, we’ll have to work together to think about key moments from Ally’s journey so far. Good thing we’ve been leaving our thinking tracks! Let’s go back and look at some.
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Action: sympathy card | Thought: “can full of dirt or a bag full of nothing” | Action: giving half her flowers to keisha |
Feeling: pride in her hero presentation, Roy G. Biv | Thoughts: Mr. D giving her a pity award for her poem | Action: explaining the difference btw alone and lonely |
Thought: IM/POSSIBLE | Action: writing “why” over and over | Action: drawing her mind-movies (shows creativity) |
Action: grabbing Shay’s cake, reveals more about their history | Key event: new teacher, not going to send her to principal | Feeling: desperation, wanting to whisper her secret to the butterfly |
Feeling/ action: scared to tell the truth about reading, lies about being hurt so she doesn’t have to do her work | thought: low self-esteem | |
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Lesson 13 (Chapters 34, 35, and 36) Chapter 34 – Birth of a Star Chapter 35 – A Picture is Worth a Gazillion Years Chapter 36 – In the Game of Life… | I can: Compare how a character’s actions, feelings and thoughts change over time. | Intro: There are times in our lives when we feel really good about something but then deep down are not really sure about it. Like when I started my new diet, I was all excited that I was going to eat healthy and make only good choices. Deep down, though, I know that I still like to snack on chocolate and cookies, so I wonder if it will really work this time. Ally is starting to feel better about herself, but she still is not completely sure that everything is going to go the way she hopes. Read Aloud: During this read aloud, invite student to meet the goal for today’s reading: -leaving thinking tracks on sticky notes during reading (or provided “sticky note paper” -using a double-entry journal or character web to guide thinking during reading -quick jots at the end of each chapter Scaffolding/support if needed: p. 183 – Double Entry Journal Homework extension? – bottom p. 184 – what is author saying here? Vocabulary Elaboration: P.190 relieved: no longer feeling distressed or anxious; reassured. p. 192 - invincible: too powerful to be defeated or overcome. | Turn/Talk or Class Convo: Discussion Questions: - p 184 (Show quote) “And I think of words. The power they have. How they can be waved around like a wand--sometimes for good, like how Mr. Daniels uses them. How he makes kids like me and Oliver feel better about ourselves. And how words can also be used for bad. To hurt. My grandpa used to say to be careful with eggs and words, because neither can ever be fixed. The older I get, the more I realize how smart my grandpa was.” -p.192 Explain/discuss this line: “And isn’t it funny--I’ve gone from invisible to invincible.” Mini-lesson (next page from Jennifer Seravallo)
Closing: Did we meet our goal? Focus level | Plot profile sheet Goal sheet |
p. 183 –Quote - “You say that you’ll grow up to be a nobody. But logically…if nobody’s perfect, then you must be perfect.” | Connection: Hmmm...this seems like a play on words in a way. Like we’re all the same because we’re all unique. |
p. 189 – Interesting Language – “I want to think that Mr. Daniels doing something mean to anyone is like a fish swimming upside down and backward.” | Sketch? Meaning: very unlikely for a fish to do that. Very unlikely for Mr. Daniels to do something mean |
P. 192 – Quote - “I’ve gone from invisible to invincible.” | Theory: She’s always had the potential within her, but now she’s realizing it’s possible with the help of Mr. Daniels |
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Mistakes lesson From Jennifer Serravallo’s The Reading Strategies Book | It’s good to reflect, just like in our own lives, on the past. Why might we do that? Mistakes are lessons. Even when Ally seems to know what to do or what she needs, sometimes she still makes mistakes. Sentence starters:
Questions: What mistake did the character make? Look for a place where the character feels badly about what he or she did--that might clue you to a mistake. Let’s think about how the character acted right after. Do you think the character learned? Try to say it like a lesson. Try to say it like a lesson that is not just about this book | |||
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Lesson 14 (Chapters 37,38, 39 ) Chapter 37 A Chicken, a wolf and a problem Chapter 38 Loser for President Chapter 39 To-shay | I can: Compare how a character’s actions, feelings and thoughts change over time. | Pre-Reading: Give students the puzzle that Mr. Daniels gives his students. A river with a chicken, a wolf, and a bag of grain on one side of the water with a boat. You need to get all the items across but can only take one at a time. You can’t leave the wolf with the chicken and you can’t leave the chicken with the grain. Only one item across at a time. Intro: Sometimes you are told something over and over and over. So many times that you begin to believe it even when it’s not true. People might feel dumb, fat, stupid, nerdy, goofy only because others use those words to describe them so often that it feels true. Ally seems to be seeing things aren’t always true just because someone says it. She’s seeing more and more than she needs to believe in herself. Let’s continue to see if her actions, feelings and thoughts are changing from the beginning of the story. Read Aloud: During this read aloud, invite student to meet the goal for today’s reading: -leaving thinking tracks on sticky notes during reading (or provided “sticky note paper” -using a double-entry journal or character web to guide thinking during reading -quick jots at the end of each chapter Scaffolding/support if needed: Double Entry Journal Vocabulary Elaboration: P.202: to-shay, play on words--touche- used as an acknowledgment during a discussion of a good or clever point made at one's expense by another person. P. 202 ally: side with or support (someone or something). | Turn/Talk or Class Convo: Discussion Questions: -
Closing: Did we meet our goal? Focus level | Plot profile sheet Goal sheet |
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Character | Motivations | Actions/ Mistakes |
Ally | Wants to read Wants to be normal | Begins working with Mr. D. Makes friends with K and A |
Shay | Wants to be liked Wants to feel better than everyone *new today: mom treats her how she treats others | Puts people down Sells friendship bracelets **Plays a mean joke on Ally |
Lesson 15 (Chapters 40, 41, 42 ) Chapter 40 Tears of different kinds Chapter 41 Not-So-Secret Letter Chapter 42 The Gifts of No Excuses, Scotch Tape and Antibiotics | I can: Track characters motivations, decisions and actions. | Intro: Really smart authors do not just have a character act without reason or thought. As readers we might not know all the information about a character, but little by little we begin to see what motivates a character to make decisions and pursue certain actions. This is true for Ally, Keisha, Albert and even Shay. As we read today, you’ll continue to learn new information as Ally learns it--since this story is from her perspective. Read Aloud: Today invite students to create a character tracking chart. During this read aloud, invite student to meet the goal for today’s reading: -leaving thinking tracks on sticky notes during reading (or provided “sticky note paper” -using a double-entry journal or character web to guide thinking during reading -quick jots at the end of each chapter Vocabulary Elaboration: P.216 “stumbling over her words” visual of this would be great --make a mistake or repeated mistakes in speaking. | Turn/Talk or Class Convo: Discussion Questions: - It seems like the author keeps leaving us little crumbs at the end of each chapter to help us see the bigger point of this book. This line made me stop and think: “We are all different. You care about some things and Oliver cares about others. We have to work to accept each other. Even though we may not agree.” Is this the first time we’ve heard something like this? Can you find evidence or other “crumbs” the author left that support this idea?
Closing: Did we meet our goal? Focus level | Plot profile sheet Goal sheet |
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Lesson 16 (Chapters 43, 44, 45 ) Chapter 43 Set the World on Fire Chapter 44 Tales of a Sixth Grade Nothing Chapter 45 My Brother’s Question | I can: Track characters motivations, decisions and actions. | Intro: Before we start today I want to talk to you about a literary device many authors use. It’s called an allusion and it is a brief and indirect reference to a person, place, thing or idea of historical, cultural, literary or political significance. It does not describe in detail the person or thing to which it refers. (show chart with common allusions).
There aren’t an abundance of allusions in these chapters. But one chapter does allude to another book called “Tales of a Fourth Grade Nothing” that many of you have read. It’s about a fourth grader named Peter who has trouble with his little brother fudge. Read Aloud: Today invite students to create a character tracking chart. During this read aloud, invite student to meet the goal for today’s reading: -leaving thinking tracks on sticky notes during reading (or provided “sticky note paper” -using a double-entry journal or character web to guide thinking during reading -quick jots at the end of each chapter Vocabulary Elaboration: P. | Turn/Talk or Class Convo: Discussion Questions: - at the end of these three chapters I’m trying to figure out what’s going on with Travis. Let’s discuss and theorize.
Closing: Did we meet our goal? Focus level | Plot profile sheet Goal sheet |
Character | Motivations | Actions/ Mistakes |
Ally | Wants to read Wants to be normal Wants to be kind, have friends | Begins working with Mr. D. Makes friends with K and A Makes a shirt to match Albert |
Shay | Wants to be liked Wants to feel better than everyone mom treats her how she treats others | Puts people down Sells friendship bracelets Plays a mean joke on Ally |
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Lesson 17 (Chapters 46, 47, 48 ) Lesson 18 (Chapters 49, 50, 51) | I can: (reflect on the events, characters theme, etc.) | Intro: We’ve been learning a lot of strategies for reading as well as habits like setting goals to help us monitor our progress. As an adult you might not sit down everyday and write out a goal, but you will surely be thinking about each of these different goals throughout a text. For the rest of the book I want to invite you to bring your reader’s notebook or other reading tools to the rug to jot or leave your thinking tracks when you feel you need to. This is what you’ll do as you independently read using your flipmark and notebook or sticky notes. I can’t wait to see what you notice and track as we finish the rest of the book! | Turn/Talk or Class Convo: Discussion Questions: Open up the conversation to the class. Invite students to lead and ask questions. If needed, prompt them. | Students should bring appropriate materials or teacher should provide graphic organizers as needed to promote independence with some support. |
Reading Celebration Ideas | Intro: Sometimes when we are finished reading a text that has touched us and taught us something that will help us in our own lives, it’s fun to take time at the conclusion of the book to stop, think and reflect. Today, I’m going to invite you to do just that. Ideas for reflection:
Include a checklist for each project and invite students to complete in partnerships or independently. Present the work in a Gallery Showcase or presentations as appropriate. | |||
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Reading celebration Projects
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Comic imagining a new chapter OR the MOST IMPORTANT moment of the book
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Directions: Select a project to celebrate our reading of Fish in a Tree. Then, use the checklist on the back to guide your work time and set your goals.
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Open- Mind Portrait | I can:
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Write your own Scene/ Chapter | I can:
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Visual Timeline | I can:
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Comic | I can:
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Poem or Theme Song | I can:
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Directions: Select an option to think deeper about the characters, ideas and key events of Fish in a Tree.
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