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Voice Lesson #5

Tone

The emotion expressed by the narrator.

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  • It’s true. If you want to buy a spring suit, the choice selection occurs in February: a bathing suit, March: back to school clothes, July: a fur coat, August. Did I tell you about the week I gave in to a mad-Mitty desire to buy a bathing suit in August?

  • The clerk, swathed in a long sleeved woolen dress which made her look for the world like Teddy Snowcrop, was aghast. “Surely, you are putting me on,” she said. “a bathing suit! In August!”

  • “That’s right,” I said firmly, “and I’m not leaving this store until you show me one.”

  • She shrugged helplessly. “But surely you are aware of the fact that we haven’t had a bathing suit in stock since the first of June. Our – no offense – White Elephant sale was June third, and we unload – rather, disposed of all our suits at that time.” -Erma Bombeck, At Wit’s End

1) What is the attitude of the writer toward the subject matter?

2) What diction and details create the tone of the passage?

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Apply

  • Make two columns, one for the narrator and one for Teddy Snowcrop. Write down two words that describe the tone of the narrator and Teddy Snowcrop.

  • Continue making a list of tone descriptors. Feel free to use your Tone Bank to find the most appropriate list of terms. Don’t put a word on your list unless you have mastered what it truly means and the connotations associated with it.

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Tone Bank

  • Narrator
  • Satirical
  • Mocking
  • Mock-Serious
  • Comical
  • Humorous
  • Taunting
  • Critical
  • Wry
  • Irritated
  • Teddy Snowcrop
  • Snarky
  • Condescending
  • Patronizing
  • Haughty
  • Pretentious
  • Jeering
  • Patronizing
  • Pompous
  • Snooty