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Rhetorical Analysis

What is rhetorical analysis? How do you do it?

Here are some resources to help clarify it for you. These are resources to revisit again and again throughout the class. We will return to these slides again and again. We won’t tackle these slides all at once.

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IMPORTANT DEFINITIONS

RHETORIC = the art of using language to persuade people’s attitudes and influence their behavior; rhetoric includes ethos (writer’s/speaker’s credibility and/or shared values/beliefs), logos (appeal to logic/reason/facts), and pathos (emotional appeals).

ANALYSIS = taking something complex and breaking it down into meaningful parts

RHETORICAL ANALYSIS = identifying and breaking down the persuasive strategies used by a writer/speaker about a topic AND determining their impact

RHETORICAL SITUATION = analyzing the impact of the context, audience, speaker, purpose, exigence, etc. on the text

STRONG ANALYTICAL VERBS= Bland verbs, such as uses, says, and shows, lead the writer into summary. Specific, powerful verbs and verb phrases make your writing more analytical and sophisticated.

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https://youtu.be/z9YcCVlMeGg

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Rhetorical Analysis Essay

READ the prompt and footnotes carefully to help consider the CONTEXT. Texts do NOT exist in a vacuum -- the speaker, time period, audience, etc. all need to be considered.

Try to CHUNK the essay -- how does it build or shift from the beginning, middle, and end?

What CHOICES does the author make? What APPEALS and DEVICES are used?

Use STRONG VERBS CLICK HERE!!!

Memorize and use ACRONYMS like SPACE CAT to help you. (The next slide will explain that more.)

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CLICK HERE

for AWESOME VIDEO giving an overview of what rhetorical analysis is and how to do it. This instructor has several other good videos on the AP exam. CHECK them out on You Tube!

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A Quick Review of Rhetorical Appeals:

LOGOS, PATHOS, ETHOS

CLICK HERE for a video explaining these appeals.

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Space Cat is an acronym which helps remind you WHAT to consider when doing analysis. NOT all of these devices will be significant in every text.

CLICK HERE for a SPACE CAT SLIDES

ALSO CLICK HERE for a SPACE CATS HANDOUT

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CLICK HERE for a check for understanding assignment on the article above titled “How to Read Like a Writer”

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One of the MAIN things emphasised in AP training is that students need to focus on a beginning, middle, and end of a text. Break it up in sections where you notice SHIFTS in tone or strategies used. This is VERY important but often overlooked. Ask yourself how does the text build? Where does the tone or purpose shift?

Get in the habit of WRITING about this EVERY time. Do NOT organize paragraphs by literary devices.

This is an organizational style different than what you are used to. There are other ways to organize it but do NOT focus on one device per paragraph.

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BIG HINT to help with CONTEXT and EXIGENCE /�AKA the Rhetorical Situation:

ALWAYS CAREFULLY read any FOOTNOTES or information IN THE PROMPT that provide information about the time period, place, speaker, audience, etc. Consider and address how those things influence the text. Texts do NOT exist in a vacuum. The setting, purpose, context, etc. impact it. The next slide has an embedded slideshow on EXIGENCE.

CLICK HERE for WE CAMP SLIDES to help with this.

Go BEYOND the words on the page and consider the SPEAKER, SETTING, PURPOSE, and CONTEXT.

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NOTE: ALL of the things besides the text itself to consider. This is different than much of the essays you’ve written.

CLICK HERE for Slides on EXIGENCE!!!!

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Reminder:

Some of the information about the RHETORICAL SITUATION is often provided in the prompt or a footnote.

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Here is advice from a student who got a PERFECT score on the rhetorical exam question using an ACTUAL sample prompt.

She gives GREAT step by step advice

CLICK HERE!!!!!!

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Here is a TREASURE TROVE of RESOURCES

The more prepared you are, the more comfortable you will feel. There are TONS of resources online for you to review these concepts and get test tips. �CLICK HERE & SCROLL DOWN the site for LOTS of GREAT resources on commentary, organization, academic words to use, transitions, introducing quotes, developing commentary, etc.

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AVOID SAYS OR WRITES OR SHOWS

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RHETORICAL ANALYSIS: SUMMARIZING rather than analyzing, is one of the chief pitfalls of AP rhetorical analysis. Bland verbs, such as uses, says, and shows, lead the writer into summary. Specific, powerful verbs and verb phrases make your writing more analytical and sophisticated.

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to look closely at something in order to show likenesses and differences

  • PERSONIFIES
  • CONCEDES (admits something is valid after first rejecting it)
  • COMPARES
  • CONTRASTS
  • JUXTAPOSES (back to back distinct contrasting ideas or images)
  • DRAWS A PARALLEL (analogize)

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  • CLAIMS
  • SUPPORTS
  • CORROBORATES (confirm / supports)
  • DEMONSTRATES
  • PORTRAYS
  • PERSUADES (convinces)
  • ACKNOWLEDGES

(used to Show complexity of an issue and reveals �Common ground on an otherwise disputed issue)

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  • PRAISES
  • CLARIFIES
  • OBSERVES
  • SUMMARIZES
  • ILLUSTRATES
  • DEPICTS
  • AFFIRMS

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  • APPLIFIES
  • BOLSTERS
  • HIGHLIGHTS
  • PERMEATES
  • INSISTS
  • EMPHASIZES
  • UNDERSCORES
  • REVERBERATES

give special importance or prominence to (something) - emphasize

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Looking at the structure of a text (beginning, middle, end, and subtle cues)

  • OPENS with
  • BEGINS with
  • SHIFTS
  • HINTS
  • ALLUDES to (subtly reveals or suggests)
  • FORESHADOWS (hints about future)
  • CONCLUDES

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Deemphasize or Disagree with something:

  • REFUTES
  • QUESTIONS
  • REJECTS
  • DISPUTES
  • CHALLENGES
  • CONTRADICTS
  • DENIES
  • CONTESTS

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Deemphasize or Disagree with something:

  • DOWN PLAYS
  • MOCKS
  • DISPELS
  • CRITICIZES
  • ACKNOWLEDGES
  • ADMONISHES
  • VACILLATES (alternate or waver between different opinions or actions)

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Need Help Embedding Quotes w Strong Verbs?

AVOID words like says or shows - CLICK HERE FOR MORE Examples

►As X states, _____. (acknowledges, supports, reaffirms, validates)

►As the prominent philosopher X agrees, _____. (corroborate, reveals)

►In her article, X maintains that _____. �

►In X’s view, _____. VERBS EXPRESSING DISAGREEMENT ; however, X refutes that, arguing _____. (questions, denounces, denies, rejects, contradicts)

►X advocates _____. ( insists, observes, indicates, states)�� ►X celebrated the fact that _____. (expresses, articulates, explains )�

CLICK HERE FOR MORE EXAMPLES - GREAT RESOURCE

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Pulling it All Together

And Using COMMENTARY in Rhetorical Analysis

CLICK HERE!!

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In Class Practice Activity: Check for Understanding

Use sentence templates with strong verbs embedded in this slide show to help you with the rhetorical analysis assignment below using Biden’s speech.

CLICK HERE!

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CLICK HERE for more info on HOW it is Graded

While essays were previously graded on a holistic scale of 0 to 9, reflecting overall quality, the College Board has switched to an analytic rubric, which evaluates student success out of 6 possible points across three scoring categories. The three scoring categories are:

A) Thesis (1 point possible) Easiest point, don’t miss it.

B) Evidence and Commentary (4 points possible)

C) Sophistication (1 point possible)

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FINAL TAKEAWAYS:

  1. Always have a CLEAR claim/thesis. (That’s the easiest point on the exam.)�
  2. A DEEPER analysis using FEWER rhetorical devices that has developed commentary is BETTER than a list of lots of devices. It is better to explain the IMPACT of those choices with thorough commentary than simply listing lots of devices. Avoid going on a scavenger hunt for tons of devices.�
  3. Ideally CHUNK the passage into the BEGINNING, MIDDLE, and END and show how various devices impact the text. Organize your essay that way. (Ex. How does the tone shift from the beginning to the middle to the end? How do various literary and rhetorical devices cause that shift? Do NOT have a different device for each paragraph.) We will practice this together. �
  4. Go beyond the text to look at the time period, speaker, place, purpose, audience, and genre. Carefully read the PROMPT or FOOTNOTES to get some of this information.
  5. Do NOT use lots of fancy TERMS by name. (Ex: It may be better to say logic than logos.)�
  6. Use quotes BUT do NOT over use them. Let your OWN WORDS and voice drive the essay. Have MORE commentary than quotes.

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Small Reminders

  1. CITE quotes consistently. We will discuss various formats accepted.�
  2. IDEAS matter more than mechanics on the AP test. It’s good to proof because you don’t want distracting errors / missing words. HOWEVER, mechanics are NOT graded UNLESS it detracts from the message. �
  3. Be ORIGINAL if possible. Readers get tired of reading the same thing over and over but strong evidence and commentary is the most important thing.�
  4. Do NOT define literary or rhetorical terms. Assume your reader knows literary and rhetorical jargon.�
  5. AVOID saying YOU in your essay.

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Check for Understanding

  • What does SPACE CAT stand for?
  • What is logos, pathos, and ethos?
  • What is exigence?
  • Should you define the terms in your essay?
  • Is it better to use longer or shorter quotes? Explain
  • What is evidence? Commentary?
  • What does it mean to layer evidence?
  • List 10 strong verbs you can use instead of says or writes?
  • What are rhetorical devices?
  • What does it mean that texts don’t exist in a vacuum?

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You CAN Do it and Review Can Help!

The AP Exam is tough and only about 1/2 of people pass it.

Even if you don’t pass, it WILL help you in college by making you more prepared.

It’s worth it to REVIEW because most people who fail, miss a passing score by ONE point.

There are TONS of GREAT RESOURCES online (helpful videos, sample test questions, etc.). Explore what is on Youtube and other sites especially in areas you find challenging.

Use the RESOURCES posted on GOOGLE CLASSROOM!

TUNE in to classroom activities to get the most out of them.

Don’t be frustrated if it seems difficult at the beginning, with practice you will master the content.

The THESIS is the EASIEST point to get on the essays. Be sure to have a CLEAR thesis at the end of your intro.