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Unit 1: Day 1

Discourse Communities

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Monday, Feb. 14th

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Check In

Have you:

  • Read“Understanding Discourse Communities” by Dan Melzer and written a response on OpenLab?
  • Commented on at LEAST one of your classmate’s posts?

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Overview

  1. Review our diagnostic writing essay
  2. Introduction to Module 1: Discourse Communities
  3. Review and discuss “Understanding Discourse Communities” by Dan Melzer
  4. Brainstorm lists of our own discourse communities
  5. Introduce Project 1
  6. Choose a DC!

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Melzer- Reading Questions

  • What did you think of the piece? Be honest! Really! I want to know! Was it hard to understand? Interesting? Boring?
  • According to John Swale (and Dan Melzer) what features do all discourse communities have? (List all 6!)
  • What were the shared goals of Melzer’s guitar jam group? Explain! Provide an example!
  • What is a mechanism for intercommunication? What example does Melzer provide? Explain!
  • How does Melzer explain the idea of discourse communities having genres that further the goals of a discourse community? What genres did Melzer’s guitar jam group use to further their goals?
  • What does it mean for a discourse community to have a specific lexis? What is an example of the specific lexis (language) that Melzer’s guitar jam group used? Explain! Provide an example!
  • How do the beginners and experts in Melzer’s guitar jam group work together? Explain!
  • Can you think of a Discourse Community you might belong to?

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Melzer - Key Ideas!

Overview of what is described in Dan Melzer’s text:

What is a Discourse Community?

How do genres operate in a Discourse Community?

Why do Discourse Communities share different expectations for writing?

How can we better understand what qualifies as a Discourse Community?

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Key Ideas!

First, let’s talk about community! What is a community?

A community is group of people who share something in common.

What communities do you belong to? Jot down some notes.

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Key Idea!

What is discourse?

Discourse is written or spoken communication or debate. (dictionary.com)

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Key Ideas!

So WHAT IS a Discourse Community?

The concept of a “discourse community”was first coined (described) by linguistics scholar John Swales (102)

Discourse Communities have (102):

  1. A broadly agreed upon set of common public goals
  2. Mechanism of intercommunication among its members
  3. Use of these communication mechanisms to provide information and feedback
  4. One or more genres that help further the goals of the discourse community
  5. A specific lexis (specialized language)
  6. A threshold level of expert members

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What DOES this Mean?

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Melzer - Key Ideas!

A broadly agreed upon set of common public goals

A discourse community must have a set of common, shared, public goals.

“People who like music is too broad” a group--they don’t all interact with each other or strive to meet the same goals.

But Meltzer’s guitar jam group that met up monthly for gatherings had a specific goal: “monthly gatherings were for having fun, enjoying music, and learning new songs.”

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Melzer - Key Ideas!

Mechanism of intercommunication among its members

A mechanism of intercommunication among its members means a way for members to connect with each other (to recruit new members, share information about how to get together, and communicate outside of the regular scheduled meetings).

For example, “people who use meetup.com” is too broad” a group (there are mommy bloggers and tattoo aficionados and drag racers and e-gamers and dog walkers).

But, a specific meetup.com group like Meltzer’s “guitar jam focused on a specific topic with shared goals and a community of members who frequently interact can be considered a DC.”

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Melzer - Key Ideas!

Use of these communication mechanisms to provide information and feedback

Discourse communities must use these mechanisms of communication to provide information and feedback to its members.

For example, Melzer got handouts of music lyrics and chords at his meetings and text messages and social media posts with crucial information.

Some groups use Reddit or Discord or Instagram or text messages Twitter to communicate.

Important to note that Swales used the term “discourse” not writing because he wanted to cover “any type of communication, from talking to writing to music to images to multimedia.”

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Melzer - Key Ideas!

One or more genres that help further the goals of the discourse community

DCs most commonly share information through genres. DCs use genres to recruit new members, to reach their goals, and much more. The example that Melzer shared for his DC was the meetup.com site and the song chords and lyrics.

What is a genre? Genres are different types of music (hip hop, country, reggae, pop, etc), different types of texts (mystery, fiction, nonfiction, adventure, humor, poetry, etc), different types types of tv shows (dramas, soap operas, talk shows, sports, etc).

Melzer also defines genres as tools for social action. What he means by this is that if you look at a specific genre like Hip Hop, there are common features to the genre (bass beat, spoken word, specific lexis), but there is also a form of social action (break dancing, street art) and a social purpose (resisting social oppression, spreading awareness of social oppression that isn't reported on traditional news outlets). That being said, the music is more than just a way of making music.

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Melzer - Key Ideas!

A specific lexis (specialized language)

A specific lexis really just means a specialized language or way of speaking.

DCs have specific terms, words, ways of speaking that members of the group must know in order to communicate effectively.

For example, in Melzer’s guitar jam group, “We talked about the root note of scale, a 1/4/5 chord progression…” He explains, “”We didn’t use this language to show of or try to discourage outsiders from joining our group. We needed these specialized terms--this musician’s lexis- to make sure we were all playing together effectively.”

Think back to Wardle and Downs— there are unique ways of speaking or writing that you might need to know in order to fit into this group.

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Melzer - Key Ideas!

A threshold level of expert members

A DC must have a certain number of experts in the group. People who “train/ educate the novices or beginners.”

There have to people people who are experts in the group and people who are novices or beginners.

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Melzer - Key Idea!

Why is it important to learn about and understand DCs?

Different majors are unique DCs and have specific expectations and genre requirements

Different careers are unique DCs and have specific expectations and genre requirements

Students/ new employees have to learn the writing conventions and discourse community of the major/ jobs

Understanding how DCs work, the expectations and rules of DCs and questions to ask about membership and entry help students both in school and outside of school.

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Melzer - Key Idea

How can DCs be problematic?

There are power structures in our country built around DCs that make entry hard. Let’s discuss more!

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Great Questions to Consider about DCs

  1. What are the goals of the DC? What is its purpose? What does the DC value?
  2. What are the most important genres community members use to achieve the goals?
  3. Who are the most experienced communicators in the DC?
  4. Who are the different audiences the DC communicates with? Does the DC adjust its way of speaking / writing for different audiences?
  5. What conventions of format, organization and style does the DC value?
  6. What specialized lexis (vocab) do they DC insiders use?
  7. Do the conventions of the DC silence any members of force any members to conform to the community in ways that make them uncomfortable?
  8. What do individual members (like you) add to the DC?

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Welcome to Project 1!

Let’s Review Project 1: Discourse Communities! You can find it here.

The project has FIVE STEPS! Each step is crucial to the project as a whole.

It is VERY important that you do not fall behind and that you complete each of the required tasks. We will do the steps together and work on them in class!

This project is worth 15% of your final grade. You will revise it and add it to you final portfolio!

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Task 1: Choose a Discourse Community

Investigate a Discourse Community. Choose a Discourse Community that you are a member of. When choosing a Discourse Community, consider that you will have to conduct research on it, so there must be a certain amount of information available on the Discourse Community for you to access, research, and observe.

Due Feb. 16: Choose your Discourse Community (Prof. Coleman must Approve)

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Task Two: Prove It!

What makes the community you chose a DISCOURSE community? According to Dan Melzer, Discourse Communities share:

  1. A Broadly agreed upon set of common public goals
  2. Mechanism of intercommunication among its members
  3. Use of these communication mechanisms to provide information and feedback
  4. One or more genres that help further the goals of the discourse community
  5. A specific lexis (specialized language)
  6. A threshold level of expert members

Describe for an outsider the rules of the Discourse Community, how you gain entry (if you can!), the group’s values and beliefs. Is there a unique “identity kit”? Do they have a unique way of communicating?

Due Feb. 23: Write a one-page introduction to your discourse community. It should be about 250 words.

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Task 3: Find and Analyze an Artifact

Find one artifact from your Discourse Community. The artifact might provide information about their mode (way) of communication, their values, their beliefs, their “identity kit” etc. It is preferable if the artifact is a primary source. The artifact should provide information about the Discourse Community or be meaningful to the community.

Examples of artifacts: an interview with a member of the community, a song, a speech, an example of the Discourse Community’s publications (brochure, newsletter), letters, a poem, a book, biography/ autobiography, a tattoo, memes)

Fill out the Discourse Community Artifact Analysis worksheet about your artifact. The worksheet will help you look at the artifact from a number of angles that will help you prepare for your final task of the project.

Due Feb. 28: Discourse Community Artifact Analysis Worksheet

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Task 4: Write About It!

Now it is time to write about your Discourse Community! You are going to write an essay that analyzes your Discourse Community for an outsider.

Determine your audience and the purpose. Think about how to write your essay in a way that will match your intended audience and purpose. Write your essay, using the research you have compiled from Tasks 2 and 3.

The essay must be at least 1000 words

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Task 5: Revise and Edit!

This task is often forgotten and glossed over. It is actually one of the most important parts of the writing process. We are going to separate the revision and editing process and really focus on what it means to make meaningful changes to our writing. We will also discuss the process of peer revision to allow our classmates to help us become stronger and more effective writers.

Draft Due: March 2nd Final Project Due: March 9th

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Format!

Each component of the essay must be typed. Your essay must be double- spaced and have one-inch margins. Please add the word count at the top of the project. Please spell-check and grammar-check the project. You may choose to use the template provided to submit the final version.

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Grading Criteria!

  1. Required Elements. Have you completed each of the 5 tasks? Does your Discourse Community essay contain all of the required elements?
  2. Genre awareness. Do you know the “rules” of the genre (essay!) you’re working in? Do you include the common elements of the genre? Does the style generally reflect the genre?
  3. Audience awareness. Who is the audience? Does the genre match the audience?
  4. Research. Did you dig deep in your research and find a relevant artifact? Did you learn key information about your Discourse Community? Did you present the information clearly and in a well-organized manner?
  5. Presentation and Formatting. Is your essay at least 1000 words? Have you revised and edited for clarity, spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Is each element properly formatted? If relevant, is your bibliography properly cited? Do you cite all your sources? Title your project! Come up with a title of the project that engages the audience and draws in readers. Edit, revise, and take the time to present your project with the love, care, and respect it deserves!
  6. Effectiveness of Message. This one is simple to explain, but not always simple to do. Does your point get across to your intended audience? For example, did you use appropriate rhetorical appeals?

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Some Examples of Discourse Communities!

Runners

Yogis

Skateboarders

Golfers

Bowlers

Bikers

Hippies

Rastafarians

Surfers

City Tech Students

Anime

Subgroups w/in LGBTQ

Followers of certain sports teams

E-Gamers

Fantasy Sports

Computer programmers

Goth

Grunge

Cheerleaders

Hip Hop

Emo

NRA Members

Sneakerheads

YouTube Influencer

E-Boy/ E-Girl

Twitch Streamer

Punk Rock

Fraternity Members (specific fraternity)

Sorority Members (specific sororities)

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Let’s Brainstorm!

What DC’s are you members of?

ADD the discourse community you think you might be most interested in writing about to the Class List.

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Homework!

  1. Make sure you choose a Discourse Community! Begin to think about how/ why it meets the criteria of a Discourse Community!
  2. Make sure to add your Discourse Community to the class list here. Check back and make sure that Prof. Coleman approved the DC!
  3. ReadDon’t Eat Before Reading This” by Anthony Bourdain and write a response to the questions about the reading on OpenLab here. Be prepared to discuss the reading in class on Wednesday.

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Reading Questions

  1. What did you think of the piece? Be honest! Did you like it? Explain!
  2. Who do you think might be the intended audience of this piece? What is the purpose of the piece? What is the Genre?
  3. What is the tone of the piece (formal, informal, humorous, serious, academic, etc.) Why do you think the author chose this tone?
  4. What Discourse Community does the author describe? What discourse community is he a member of? Explain!
  5. What do you learn about Bourdain's discourse community?