Creative Writing
Last writing of the semester!
New Year’s Celebrations Around the World
By: Mr. R
What do people normally do on New Year’s Eve?
SCARECROW BURNING (ECUADOR)�
BROKEN PLATES (DENMARK)�
108 RINGS (JAPAN)�
WEARING COLOURED UNDERWEAR (SOUTH AMERICA)�
THROWING FURNITURE OUT OF THE WINDOW (ITALY)�
TOSSING PAPER OUT OF THE WINDOW (ARGENTINA)�
Pouring Lead (Germany)
First Footing (Scotland)
Animal Spirits (Romania)
Potato Drop (Idaho, USA)
the people of downtown Boise = drop a big potato from sky.
40,000+ spectators watch 400-pound “GlowTato.”
Covered with 10, 000 LED lights
Why? Idaho is famous for its potato
The event includes live music, food trucks, ski and snowboard competitions, and fireworks, making it a big celebration for the whole community.
Ecuador
Scotland
South America
Germany
Italy
Romania
Denmark
Argentina
Idaho, the USA
Title: New Year’s Celebrations Around the World
P1:Introduction
P2 Body Paragraph: One tradition from the list
P3: Conclusion
First Paragraph: Introduction
Title: New Year’s Celebrations Around the World
Hook
Explain the hook/general information
You can explain how Taiwanese people celebrate New Years in two sentences.
Thesis statement
Around the world, people welcome the New Year in various and interesting ways. One country, in particular, has a special way to bring in the new year: (country).
Paragraph 2 - Body
In Germany, when New Year's Eve arrives, some families have a unique and exciting tradition called "Bleigießen." It's a special way of trying to predict what might happen in the coming year. They melt small pieces of lead, and when it's all gooey and hot, they pour it into cold water. The metal hardens into different shapes, and then the fun part begins! Families look at the shapes and try to figure out what they look like—it could be a heart, a key, or even an animal. Each shape is like a little clue about what might happen in the future. For example, a ball means luck, a crown means wealth, a cross means death and a star means happiness. It's like telling the future in a playful and creative way, and everyone enjoys making guesses and sharing their wishes for the brand new year!
Conclusion
Restate thesis
In conclusion, celebrating the New Year in (country) is a really fun and special way for friends and family to think about the future.
Summary of body in one or two sentences
Concluding sentence (How will this change the world? What should the reader learn? What should the reader do now that they read your essay? What will the future be like? What do you recommend?)
A Class
Conclusion
Restate thesis
In conclusion, celebrating the New Year in (country) is a really fun and special way for friends and family to think about the future.
Summary of body in one or two sentences
Concluding sentence (I wish or I hope)
B Class
Conclusion Example
Restate thesis
In conclusion, celebrating the New Year in (country) is a really fun and special way for friends and family to think about the future.
Summary of key points
Melting metal in shapes and wearing different colored underwear is like creating secret messages that tell us what might happen in the future.
Concluding sentence (How will this change the world? What should the reader learn? What should the reader do now that they read your essay? What will the future be like? What do you recommend?)
It is a cool tradition that makes saying goodbye to the old year and hello to the new year exciting!
In Germany, when New Year's Eve arrives, some families have a unique and exciting tradition called "Bleigießen." It's a special way of trying to predict what might happen in the coming year. They melt small pieces of lead, and when it's all gooey and hot, they pour it into cold water. The metal hardens into different shapes, and then the fun part begins! Families look at the shapes and try to figure out what they look like—it could be a heart, a key, or even an animal. Each shape is like a little clue about what might happen in the future. For example, a ball means luck, a crown means wealth, a cross means death and a star means happiness. It's like telling the future in a playful and creative way, and everyone enjoys making guesses and sharing their wishes for the brand new year!
In Germany, when New Year's Eve arrives, some families have a unique and exciting tradition called "Bleigießen." It's a special way of trying to predict what might happen in the coming year. They melt small pieces of lead, and when it's all gooey and hot, they pour it into cold water. The metal hardens into different shapes, and then the fun part begins! Families look at the shapes and try to figure out what they look like—it could be a heart, a key, or even an animal. Each shape is like a little clue about what might happen in the future. For example, a ball means luck, a crown means wealth, a cross means death and a star means happiness. It's like telling the future in a playful and creative way, and everyone enjoys making guesses and sharing their wishes for the brand new year!
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First Paragraph: Introduction
Hook
“3,2,1 Happy New Year!” That is the sound of what a traditional New Year sounds like in Taiwan.
Explain the hook/general information
People gather with friends and wait for the countdown at midnight. Then, they watch the fireworks in person or on TV. However, not every country does the same things.
Thesis statement
Around the world, people welcome the New Year in various and interesting ways. One country, in particular, has a special way to bring in the new year: Germany.
Paragraph 3 - Body (South America)
In some South American countries, people have a special tradition for New Year's Eve—they wear different colored underwear to bring good luck for the upcoming year! Imagine picking out your underwear based on the color that might bring you the best things in life. For example, yellow is chosen for wealth and good fortune, red for love and passion, and white for peace. It's like a secret wish you wear! Thus, when the clock strikes midnight, and the fireworks light up the sky, everyone is hoping that their colorful underwear will bring lots of good things in the brand new year. It's a fun and exciting way to celebrate!