Assessing�Student Writing
To Assess
Origin - to sit beside
Current meaning – to determine value, quality
Rubrics – what’s your reaction?
Rubrics as Guides to Assessment
Types of Rubrics for Different Purposes
Practice Assessing
and descriptions
Responding to AI
AI Detectors: They’re exceptionally unreliable. Unlike traditional plagiarism detectors (like Turnitin) that compare the student’s submission to a bank of papers, AI-detectors work by judging the (1) burstiness and (2) the perplexity of the writing.
CWP Advice:
Vonnegut’s Writing Assignment
November 30, 1965
Beloved:
…As for your term papers, I should like them to be both cynical and religious. I want you to adore the Universe, to be easily delighted, but to be prompt as well with impatience with those artists who offend your own deep notions of what the Universe is or should be. …Do not do so as an academic critic, nor as a person drunk on art, nor as a barbarian in the literary market place. Do so as a sensitive person who has a few practical hunches about how stories can succeed or fail. Praise or damn as you please, but do so rather flatly, pragmatically, with cunning attention to annoying or gratifying details. Be yourself. Be unique. Be a good editor. The Universe needs more good editors, God knows.
Since there are eighty of you, and since I do not wish to go blind or kill somebody, about twenty pages from each of you should do neatly. Do not bubble. Do not spin your wheels. Use words I know.�
This assignment is reprinted from Kurt Vonnegut: Letters, edited by Dan Wakefield.
Responding to
Student Writing
Responding to student writing is an opportunity for a conversation between two writers where the more experienced writer supports and encourages the other writer through the process of composing effective communication.
What is the purpose of responding to student writing?
Sample Responses
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Read provided student papers �with three styles of commenting
Evaluate comments for effectiveness
Answer: Which commentator would you prefer?
It’s How You Say It
“The best kind of commentary enhances the writer’s feeling of dignity. The worst kind can be experienced as dehumanizing and insulting – often to the bewilderment of the teacher, whose intentions were kindly but whose techniques ignored the personal dimension of writing.”
Bean and Melzer 2021, Engaging Ideas, p. 298
Grading Efficiently
Write less
Limit issues to be addressed
Have students create a revision plan
Use minimal marking protocol
WHAT THEY THINK
WHAT WE SAY
“You haven’t really thought this through.”
“Try harder!”
WHAT THEY THINK
WHAT WE SAY
“Needs to be more concise.”
“Be more specific.”
Ending: How to Survive the Grading Load?