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Week 4 PowerPoint

Module 1: Discourse Communities

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Tuesday, Feb. 23rd

Module 1: Day 3

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Check In

  • Did you prepare for submission Project 1: Task 2-Prove It!? Write an introduction to your Discourse Community and prove that your DC is in fact a DC! Submit on OpenLab! Submit here.

  • Did you read ‘Navigating Genres’ by Kerry Dirk and write a response to the question on OpenLab? Here is the link for where you were supposed to post your response.

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Overview

  • Review Navigating Genres by Kerry Dirk in Small Groups!
  • Project 1: Task 3: Analyze an Artifact
  • Choose and artifact and analyze it!

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Let’s Review: What is GENRE?

Genre is a category of artistic composition, as in music or literature, characterized by similarities in form, style, or subject matter.

What does this mean?? Genres are a specific type of music or literature (texts) that share common elements (characteristics).

Examples of genres in music: HipHop, Country, Pop, Classical, Jazz, Bluegrass, etc!

Examples of genres in movies/ t.v.: Drama, comedy, action, sci-fi, romance, etc.

Examples of genres in literature: poetry, drama (plays), mysteries, romance, biographies, historical fiction, textbooks, essays, academic journals

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Genres Share Similar Elements/ Characteristics

Science Fiction Genre (ex. Fahrenheit 451, the Giver, the Uglies):

  • stories often about science and technology of the future
  • Involve partially true fictions laws or theories of science
  • Settings: in the future, in space, on a different world, in a different universe or dimension

Fantasy Genre (ex. Harry Potter, Percy Jackson):

  • Contain elements that are not realistic: talking animals, magical powers, often set in a medieval universe, possibly involving mythical beings

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Example: Genre of Country Music

Kerry Dirk uses country music as an example of a genre.

The common elements that she says country songs share are:

  • Country songs tend to tell stories. They often have characters who are developed throughout the song.
  • Country songs often have choruses that are broad enough to apply to a variety of verses
  • Country songs are often depressing; people lose jobs, lovers, and friends.
  • Country songs express pride for the country style and way of life.
  • Country songs are often political, responding to wars and economic crises, for example.

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Let’s Listen to an Example

Well, I tumble outta bed and stumble to the kitchen

Pour myself a cup of ambition

Yawn and stretch and try to come to life

Jump in the shower and the blood starts pumping

Out on the street, the traffic starts jumping

With folks like me on the job from 9 to 5

Working 9 to 5, what a way to make a living

Barely getting by, it's all taking and no giving

They just use your mind, and they never give you credit

It's enough to drive you crazy if you let it

Working 5 to 9, you've got passion and a vision

'Cause it's hustlin' time, a whole new way to make a livin'

Gonna change your life, do somethin' that gives it meanin'

With a website that is worthy of your dreamin'

Well you got dreams and you know they matter

Be your own boss, climb your own ladder

That moment's getting closer by the day

And you're in the same boat with a lotta your friends

Launching ideas you all believe in

The tide's gonna turn, and it's all gonna roll your way

Working 5 to 9, making something of your own now

And it feels so fine to build a business from your know-how

Gonna move ahead, and there's nothing that you can't do

When you listen to that little voice inside you

Yeah, 5 to 9 you've got passion and a vision

'Cause it's hustlin' time, a whole new way to make a livin'

Gonna change your life, do somethin' that gives it meanin'

With a website that is worthy of your dreaming

5 to 9, you keep working, working, working

Working 5 to 9, 'til your dreams, come true

Working 5 to 9, you keep dreaming, dreaming, dreaming

5 to 9, 5 to 9, you can do it

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“Navigating Genres” by Kerry Dirk

  • What is the genre of this text? How do you know?
  • Who do you think is the intended audience? What is the author’s purpose?
  • How does the author try to accomplish her purpose and reach her audience? Is she successful? Explain.
  • What are some genres you have enjoyed in the past (writing AND reading)?
  • Do you prefer having a structure or form to follow (like a specific genre) or do you find that to be limiting? Explain.

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Key Takeaways

Think about the audience--how can you best reach them or get them to listen?

What features should go in the piece to reach the audience?

How personal should you get?

What rhetorical strategies should you use?

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Genre Elements of an Essay Written for Students

Warm, personal style

The tone was primarily conversational

The writer did not talk as an authoritative figure but as a coach

Some writers admitted that they did not know everything (we don’t), and others even went so far as to admit ignorance

Personal anecdotes (personal stories or examples)

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What Is Dirk Talking about Here?

“In other words, Bitzer is saying that when something new happens that requires a response, someone must create that first response. Then when that situation happens again, another person uses the first response as a basis for the second, and eventually everyone who encounters this situation is basing his/her response on the previous ones, resulting in the creation of a new genre. Think about George Washington giving the first State of the Union Address. Because this genre was completely new, he had complete freedom to pick its form and content. All presidents following him now have these former addresses to help guide their response because the situation is now a reoccurring one.” (252)

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Matching Genre to Rhetorical Situation

“By this point you might realize that you have been participating in many different genres—whether you are telling a joke, writing an email, or uploading a witty status on Facebook. Because you know how these genres function as social actions, you can quite accurately predict how they function rhetorically; your joke should generate a laugh, your email should elicit a response, and your updated Facebook status should generate comments from your online friends. But you have done more than simply filled in the blanks. Possibly without even thinking about it, you were recognizing the rhetorical situation of your action and choosing to act in a manner that would result in the outcome you desired. I imagine that you would probably not share a risqué joke with your mom, send a “Hey Buddy” email to your professor, or update your Facebook status as “X has a huge wart on his foot.” We can see that more than form matters here, as knowing what is appropriate in these situations obviously requires more rhetorical knowledge than does filling out a credit card form.” (253)

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Genres are Important!

“In other words, knowing what a genre is used for can help people to accomplish goals, whether that goal be getting a job by knowing how to write a stellar resume, winning a person’s heart by writing a romantic love letter, or getting into college by writing an effective personal statement.” (253)

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Back to Our Project!

How is it going? How did proving your DC is a DC go?

Did anyone have to change their DC?

What did you learn about your DC that maybe you didn’t know before?

Share out!

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Let’s Look at Another Example of a DC!

What DC does this look at? How do you know?

What is the genre of this piece? How do you know?

What do we learn about the DC (common goals, specific lexis, etc)?

What would be an artifact you might use to talk about this DC?

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Project 1: Step 3-Find and Analyze and Artifact

Find one artifact from your Discourse Community. The artifact might provide information about the DC’s mode of communication, values or goals, specific lexis, etc.

It is preferable if the artifact is a primary source. The artifact should provide information about the Discourse Community or be meaningful to the community.

Examples of artifacts: an interview with a member of the community, a song, a speech, an example of the DCs publications (brochure, newsletter), letters, a poem, a book, biography/ autobiography, a tattoo, memes)

Fill out the Discourse Community Artifact Analysis worksheet about your artifact.

Due Thursday 2/25

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Primary Source vs. Secondary Source

PRIMARY SOURCES

A document, physical object or a first hand account of a topic from people who had a connection to event/ topic

Examples:

  • News reports by reporters who witnessed an event or who quote people who did
  • Speeches, diaries, letters and interviews - what the people involved said or wrote
  • Original research
  • Photographs, video, or audio that capture an event
  • Clothing
  • Artwork (graffiti)

SECONDARY SOURCES

Sources that interpret and analyze primary sources. They are one step removed from primary sources though they often quote or otherwise use primary sources. They can cover the same topic, but add a layer of interpretation and analysis.

Examples:

Most books about a topic, textbooks, Wikipedia

Scholarly or other articles about a topic, especially by people not directly involved.

Documentaries (though they often include photos or video portions that can be considered primary sources).

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What Is an Artifact?

Artifacts are items or objects that tell you something important about the Discourse Community

The artifact should provide information about the DC or be meaningful to the DC

The artifact should be a primary source document

Examples of Artifacts

An interview with member of DC

A song

A speech

An example of the DC’s publications (brochure, newsletter)

Letters

A poem

A book

Biography/ autobiography

A tattoo

A meme

Social media page/ twitter feed

A uniform

An important document

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Choose YOUR Artifact!

What artifact might you choose? Why are you going to use the artifact?

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Describe the artifact and its importance

What does the artifact look like? Where is it?

Why is this artifact important to your DC? How does your DC use the artifact? Describe the artifact and how it is used!

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Genre/ Audience / Purpose

What is the genre of the artifact?

Who is the intended audience of the artifact?

What is the purpose of the artifact?

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Rhetorical Appeals

Does the artifact contain examples of ethos, pathos or logos? Find it and describe it!

How does the artifact develop credibility?

How does the artifact appeal to the emotions of the members of the DC?

How does the artifact appeal to the logic of the DCs members?

How effective is the message?

What is the voice/ tone of the artifact? (formal, informal, etc)

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Homework (Project 1, Step 3) DUE 2/ 25

Find one artifact from your Discourse Community. The artifact might provide information about the DC’s mode of communication, values or goals, specific lexis, etc.

It is preferable if the artifact is a primary source. The artifact should provide information about the Discourse Community or be meaningful to the community.

Examples of artifacts: an interview with a member of the community, a song, a speech, an example of the DCs publications (brochure, newsletter), letters, a poem, a book, biography/ autobiography, a tattoo, memes)

Fill out the Discourse Community Artifact Analysis worksheet about your artifact. Post on OpenLab. Here is the link.

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Thursday, Feb. 25th

Module 1: Day 4

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Check In

  • Have you chosen your Discourse Community and Proven that it is in fact a DC? (Step 1 and Step 2)
  • Have you chosen your artifact? Have you analyzed and written about our artifact on OpenLab using the questions as a guide? Here is where to post your response! (Step 3)

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Overview

  • In small groups, we will review each of your Artifact Analysis sheets
  • Project 1: Task 4: Write about It!
  • Dig into the Elements of an Analysis (as a genre)
  • Strategies for getting started!

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Strategies for Getting Started

Facing a blank page and a blinking cursor can feel terrifying, especially as the hours, minutes and seconds until the assignment is due loom closer and closer.

There is no one way to get started or right way to get going, however, there are a lot of great strategies to try when you are feeling stuck.

These strategies can also work when you are feeling writer’s block as you write!

We will list them all here, but they focus on each of these different strategies over the course of the semester!

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Tip 1 - Just Put Your Ideas Down!

Don’t worry about what you are saying or how you are saying it! Just start writing. You can write a bullet point list of brainstormed ideas, write a paragraph, or just put words down on sticky notes. Just getting words on paper helps.

Remember, NO ONE, has to see your first draft, your notes, your thinking pages. These can be the pages you toss away, your thinking pages!

Just get ideas on paper!

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Tip 2 - Don’t Edit or Look for Perfection

At the early stages don’t worry about editing or how your sentences sound. Leave that for your second or third read through. Just worry about getting your ideas out there!

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Tip 3 - Talk It Out

Find a mirror, a friend, a classmate, a pet and brainstorm out loud. Sometimes, talking through ideas helps you figure out what you really want to say.

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Tip 4: Make a List!

Make a list of ideas!

  • Brainstorm list: Simply make a list of all the ideas related to your topic. Do not censor your ideas; write everything down, knowing you can cross some off later.
  • What I know/don’t know lists: If you know that your topic will require research, you can make two lists. The first will be a list of what you already know about your topic; the second will be a list of what you don’t know and will have to research.

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Try One!

Which of these strategies will you try?

Let me know how it goes!!

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Artifacts!

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What Artifacts Did You Choose?

Description of Artifact

  • What does the artifact look like? Where is it?
  • Why is this artifact important to your DC?
  • How does your DC use the artifact? Describe the artifact and how it is used!

Genre/ Audience/ Purpose

  • What is the genre of the artifact?
  • Who is the intended audience of the artifact?
  • What is the purpose of the artifact?

Rhetorical Appeals

  • Does the artifact contain examples of ethos, pathos or logos? Find it and describe it!
  • How does the artifact develop credibility?
  • How does the artifact appeal to the emotions of the members of the DC?
  • How does the artifact appeal to the logic of the DCs members?
  • How effective is the message?
  • What is the voice/ tone of the artifact? (formal, informal, etc)

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Project 1: Step 4: Write About It!

  • You are going to write an analysis of your Discourse Community for an outsider.
  • Determine your audience and the purpose. Think about how to write your piece in a way that will match your intended audience and purpose.
  • Write your piece, using the research you have compiled from Tasks 2 and 3 to write about your Discourse Community.
  • The analysis must be at least 1000 words.

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Let’s Look at an Example!

Here is an example of an analysis of a DC! Let’s read it together and notice what is included!

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What Do YOU Need to Include?

  • Introduction that explains what a Discourse Community is using Dan Melzer article (cite using MLA citation) **look back at your Reading Response**

Melzer, Dan. "Understanding Discourse Communities." Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing, Volume 3, 2020.

  • Analysis of your Discourse Community that proves that your DC is in fact a DC. Does it meet the 6 criteria of a DC that Swales explained?
  • Analysis of an artifact that is important to your DC and an explanation of why the artifact is important.
  • Conclusion that summarizes key information.
  • COVER PAGE with Your Name, Title, Word Count, Intended Audience, DC

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Audience

Who is your audience? Who do you want to hear this message? Remember, you are writing this for an OUTSIDER of your DC.

How can you best reach this audience? What tone might they respond to best? Formal, informal, casual, academic, humorous, Do you need visuals? How can you best organize the information to reach the audience?

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Purpose

What is your purpose in writing this piece? Be specific.

How do you hope your audience with respond/ think/ act/ feel after reading this piece?

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Genre: Analysis

You are writing an ANALYSIS. What are the elements of an analysis?

In this analysis you must:

  • You must provide context, explaining what a discourse community is.
  • You must also examine and evaluate what makes the discourse community a discourse community (meaning prove it!) and provide a clear argument that your discourse community is in fact a DC.
  • Examine and analyze an artifact that is important to your DC and explain why it's important to the DC.

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Let’s Make Figure Out What We Have / Need

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Your Discourse Community!

What you ALREADY KNOW about your DC

What you WANT to LEARN about your DC

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Activity!

CREATE A T- CHART

CREATE A TWO COLUMN CHART

COLUMN 1: WHAT I KNOW

COLUMN 2: WHAT I WANT TO LEARN

JOT DOWN NOTES ON THE CHART!

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Additional Questions to Consider!

*Values? Goals? What brings the group together/ unites the DC? Think about the 6 key criteria!

*Does the Discourse Community have a specific way of speaking, lexicon, dialect, language, etc.?

*How does one join the Discourse Community? Are there barriers to entry?

*What is your relationship with the Discourse Community? Has it changed over time? Or do you know other members of the community?

*What is your perception of the community? How does the community view you?

Does DC have a specific way of dressing or presenting itself? (ie tattoos, uniforms)

What is the history of your Discourse Community?

What are the most important genres community members use to achieve the goals of the DC?

Who are the different audiences the DC communicates with and do you adjust your writing for the different audiences?

What conventions of format, organization and style does the DC value?

What specialized lexis (vocab) do I need to know to communicate effectively with DC insiders?

Do the conventions of the DC silence any members of force any members to conform to the community in ways that make them uncomfortable?

What can I add to the DC?

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Homework: TASK 4: WRITE ABOUT IT!

DUE March 2nd! Cannot be late if you want me to comment/ review your draft!

  • Now it is time to write about your Discourse Community! You are going to write an analysis of your Discourse Community for an outsider.
  • Determine your audience and the purpose. Think about how to write your piece in a way that will match your intended audience and purpose. Write your piece, using the research you have compiled from Tasks 2 and 3 to write about your Discourse Community.
  • The analysis must be at least 1000 words.
  • Upload YOUR DRAFT to DROPBOX. HERE is the LINK: Dropbox Link